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1. pram, sodden, muffler, Y’ARE, sacrilege, spectral, exultantly, wistfully, treacle, scythe.

2. The boss’ coping mechanism to his son’s death is pretty interesting. I find it fascinating that he distracts himself from uncomfortable and saddening thoughts by focusing on something else.
3. I didn’t like how half of the story was about the boss killing a fly with ink. I mean, I don’t mind having the fly in the story, but the fly didn’t really hold that much significance to me.

4. It wasn’t the best story I have ever read, but it certainly wasn’t the worst. I understood the plot clearly and what message the author was trying to convey, however, I don’t fancy short stories, as they are too short and conservative with the details, leaving a lot of questions unanswered.

5. Iwished the author would’ve at least gone into more detail about the boy and his relationship with his father and not about a fly. It would’ve been nicer for the author to be more specific about his son’s personality, his intentions for going to war when he was about to take over his father’s company, maybe more depth in the boss’ personality. Or perhaps the boss’ wife/his son’s mother and their relationship with her. Who knows, maybe she had something to do with the boss and his sudden forgetfulness.

6. I would like to discuss as to why he easily forgot about something that was supposed to be very important and heart-wrenching for him, like his son’s death, especially when the first few months or even years after his death he still mourned over it gravely. What made him suddenly forget about his son’s death? Was it his subconscious pushing away all of the thoughts to prevent him from relieving his grief? That to me is intriguing.

7. I actually kind of dislike it. As I have said before, I didn’t really like how the fly took a huge part of the ending. It felt unnecessary. I also didn’t feel like this book had gotten the closure it needed.

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1. exultantly, muffler, quiver, clamber, spectral, sacrilege, treacle, scythe, wistfully, francs

2.  To be frank, I liked how the author included the plot twist at the end of the story. It was unexpected because it was completely out of topic but it keeps the readers engaged.

3. Although I liked how the story had a plot twist, I didn't like the plot of the twist. The story would've been better if the author had come up with a better ending, instead of having a fly drowning divert the boss' thoughts.

4. I enjoyed reading the story. The story entertained me from the beginning till the end. I also found this story interesting because it had a sudden plot twist and a tragic ending.

5. See my answer to question number 3. (I would like to change the ending)

6. I would like to discuss more about the lives of Mr Woodifield and the boss before this meeting occurred. I'd feel much more connected to characters if I had known about their backstories.

7. See my answer to question number 3.

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1.  - Pram

- Muffler

- Treacle

- Exultant

- Sodden

- Scythe

2. I liked the implication of the story and was pleased by the purpose the author had inserted at the ending--that the boss had killed the fly as a revenge to alleviate the grief caused by his son’s death.

3. Frankly, I thought the fly was irrelevant to the story & if I were the author, I would've thought of a better,  a more fitting ending. (without affecting the message of the story of course)

4. Yes, I enjoyed reading it. As I mentioned before it was because of what the story signifies.

5. As mentioned above, the ending.

6. Apart from the odd fly scene, I thought the story was successful in making me feel what the story intended. It was a good read; I might have even cried a tear or two. Another thing I want to mention is that I don't fancy Mainsfield’s writing style, but that's entirely subjective.

7. No, I despised it & as said before, it was because I found it unrelated and maybe now that I have further contemplated it, violent.

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1. 10 words from the text that seemed difficult to you.
Y'ARE
Whistfully
Muffler
Tamper
Treacle
Pram
Francs
Immense
Spectral
Scythe
2. I like how the story just went unpredictable and the plot is different from other stories. I also liked how the writer can really brings out the emotions in the story.
3. I didn't like the language the writer use to tell the story, its too complex and the ending was a bit dissapointing as i was expecting a better and interesting one.
4. I don't really like this type of stories i'm more into a fantasy and adventurous genre but then it was ok i enjoyed it, i can relate about the part when he plays with the fly lol.
5. Like i said i was a bit dissapointed with the ending, and if i could change any part of the story i would change that part.
6. Sometimes i got confused because of how the story is written. However , i liked how detail it is.
7. No. It was too sudden and boring i prefer an unexpected ending.
8. Jocelyn 8D

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1. Muffler

Y’ARE

pram

Treacle

Sacrilege

Spectral

Exultantly

Wistfully

Cocked

Notion

2. I really like that the story is very well written and I like the plot even more. It shows how us as humans go through grief but might still not let go of it even after years. We can also take from this story of how scary humans are, as an example, the boss uses torturing the fly as a way to cope and forget about his grief.

3. I didn’t like how the story have no background, I would like some background information about the characters, and the war. The author seem to just barely give out enough background story.

4. I genuinely like the story. It’s short and simple but has so much layers and depth behind it. The way the characters was portrayed in the story was just used like an example, we don’t have any emotional connection to any of the characters, they are like 2 strangers to us, but I think that works.

5. I want to change the language used by the author. It seems too complicated for such a short story. It felt overly sophisticated and fancy. I also would like some emotional connection to the characters by giving them a background, so we can try to fathom what they felt at the time.

6. The words and the format the writer used. Some parts of the story were good and detailed, giving us an image of the scene that we want and need so that we can really be absorbed in the story and the events that occurred.

7. Yes, that was honestly the best part of the whole story, although lots of people don’t like the dark and twisted ending, it was just the right ending to this story, it made it so that the whole story was not boring and that the main character had a dark side.

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1. Muffler

Y’ARE

pram

Treacle

Sacrilege

Spectral

Exultantly

Wistfully

Cocked

Notion

2. I really like that the story is very well written and I like the plot even more. It shows how us as humans go through grief but might still not let go of it even after years. We can also take from this story of how scary humans are, as an example, the boss uses torturing the fly as a way to cope and forget about his grief.

3. I didn’t like how the story have no background, I would like some background information about the characters, and the war. The author seem to just barely give out enough background story.

4. I genuinely like the story. It’s short and simple but has so much layers and depth behind it. The way the characters was portrayed in the story was just used like an example, we don’t have any emotional connection to any of the characters, they are like 2 strangers to us, but I think that works.

5. I want to change the language used by the author. It seems too complicated for such a short story. It felt overly sophisticated and fancy. I also would like some emotional connection to the characters by giving them a background, so we can try to fathom what they felt at the time.

6. The words and the format the writer used. Some parts of the story were good and detailed, giving us an image of the scene that we want and need so that we can really be absorbed in the story and the events that occurred.

7. Yes, that was honestly the best part of the whole story, although lots of people don’t like the dark and twisted ending, it was just the right ending to this story, it made it so that the whole story was not boring and that the main character had a dark side.

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1. Muffler

Y’ARE

pram

Treacle

Sacrilege

Spectral

Exultantly

Wistfully

Cocked

Notion

2. I really like that the story is very well written and I like the plot even more. It shows how us as humans go through grief but might still not let go of it even after years. We can also take from this story of how scary humans are, as an example, the boss uses torturing the fly as a way to cope and forget about his grief.

3. I didn’t like how the story have no background, I would like some background information about the characters, and the war. The author seem to just barely give out enough background story.

4. I genuinely like the story. It’s short and simple but has so much layers and depth behind it. The way the characters was portrayed in the story was just used like an example, we don’t have any emotional connection to any of the characters, they are like 2 strangers to us, but I think that works.

5. I want to change the language used by the author. It seems too complicated for such a short story. It felt overly sophisticated and fancy. I also would like some emotional connection to the characters by giving them a background, so we can try to fathom what they felt at the time.

6. The words and the format the writer used. Some parts of the story were good and detailed, giving us an image of the scene that we want and need so that we can really be absorbed in the story and the events that occurred.

7. Yes, that was honestly the best part of the whole story, although lots of people don’t like the dark and twisted ending, it was just the right ending to this story, it made it so that the whole story was not boring and that the main character had a dark side.

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1. Nuisance, Pram, Spectral, Cellars, Snug, Wistfully, Sodden, Francs, Exultantly, Muffler, Sacrilege, Tamper

2. I liked the way the author inserted this plot twist. Also, I like how the writer talks in such detail about the plot, and how the boss expresses his emotions as he thinks about his dead son.

3. I feel like they should've scripted the ending differently, as it made the boss seem to suspicious and naive. I hates how descriptive they wrote the section where the manager tortured the fly, so reading it was sort of disgusting and revolting.

4. I like the story as it's such an interesting story and it wasn't dull at all. Reading it was really fun and entertaining.

5. I just wish to change to story's conclusion. I think there are some alternates that acted as a great conclusion and might appeal even more to the readers.

6. Something i really just don't get, after killing a single fly, how did his emotion flee? i just want to discuss that part of the story.

7. Yes, i think readers got angry and irritated. That's why i like the story.. also it makes makes us curious about how his emotion disappear after killing a fly.

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1. nuisance ,muffler, treacle, pram, sacrilege ,tamper,  exultantly , clamber, wistfully, scythe.
2. I like how the writer express the feeling of each character and how the plot of this story is different from others. It's very detailed but short.
3. What I dislike about this story is the ending. The man shouldn't have do that to the fly as it didn't do anything wrong
4. I read this story 4 times trying to understand it fully. The words that i don't know make me so confused, but once i understood, i found it quite interesting.
5. I would like to change the ending and I might want to make the reading level lower so that younger readers would understand
6. I would like to discuss the meaning of the words and I would like to know more about the son and the relationship with the father before.
7.No, I think the writer should've written more about the background of the boy and maybe the writer should've explain more about the plot.

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1. sacrilege , exultant , clamber , draggled , treacle , helm
2. i liked that the plot of the story was different from anything I have read and I also like the way they expressed the man's grief and emotions because it was so detailed yet brief
3. i didn't like the ending because the man had no reason to torture the fly like that . He should have taken it anger out on something else instead of a living creature.
4. I quite liked the story because it is different from other stories but it wasn't as interesting as I expected it to be
5. I think i would change the ending to make it more interesting and not as depressing as it is . Also i would make the language easier to understand for the younger audience.
6. I think that this story spreads awareness about families that have lost a loved one in the war . I think this story shows why wars are should not avoided .
7. no i did not like the ending because it was quite gruesome and weird. The ending was also very abrupt and ended very early into the story . I think it would be better if the story explained more about the plot and the ending .

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1. I had difficulties with these 10 words: y’are, snug, draggled, wistfully, plucky, wretchedness, pram, nuisance, spectral, muffler and more. I have never heard those words. So ya, i had difficulties with those words.
2. What i like about this story is that the story is extraordinary. The story is also abit emotional
3. I dislike the part of the story when the characters talk too much.
4. I dont really like the story. It’s boring and the words are hard to understand. They could have just use simpler words. So it’s better to be read
5. I would change the language so the reader can enjoy their time reading this and be more relaxed
6. No, im not interested in this topic
7. No, i was confused in reading it. So at the end i don’t understamd anything.

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1.wistfully, treacle, exultantly, spectral, sacrilege, muffler, clamber, laborious, cowed, plucky.
2.I liked an aspect of the story which is the part where he just saved the fly and instead of drying it from ink he decided to plunge the fly back into the pot of ink. Like the fly just thought it was saved then it started celebrating then the boss dropped him back in there. I find this part funny.
3.I disliked the part where it is the start of the story when it had nothing to do with the fly but instead and old retired employee that could only go out on tuesdays.
4. I don't really like or dislike the story I just found it very confusing, and boring. But there were some aspect where i liked it. I only liked a part of the story but not the story.
5.I would like to change the ending where he killed the fly by dropping the fly back into the pot of ink. instead of dropping it back into the, he saves the fly.
6.Yes I would love to discuss definition on some word because if you don't understand some words you might not understand the story and the ending was too short and boring.
7.I did not like the ending of the story because I found it too short and boring, such as, he drops the fly into a pot of ink, stirs it and asks for some fresh blotting papers.

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1. The words that I found difficult were wistfully, treacle, exultantly, spectral, sacrilege, muffler, clamber, scythe, cowed, plucky
2. I liked the way the writer expressed death in unique way, it was overall quite an interesting for a short story and it shows us how the boss and Woodifield have went through a huge loss.
3. I think that even though the fly showed us the whole point of death in this story, it was irrelevant to continue letting it suffer though it never did anything.
4. Yes, it is an interesting story, the plot made it interesting to read and the words used really lets you get immersed in the story. It was also detailed and it tells us that death is inevitable
5. The words used in this story were quite complicated for me to understand and at some parts it was confusing as it wasn't necessarily explained in detail
6. I think that I would want to know more about their sons and maybe a little bit of a backstory. It would at least give us a hint of how they were like before their sons died.
7. I do find it a bit disturbing because of the fly but the central idea of the story was clearly portrayed in the ending and it was quite a unique ending for me

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1. Feebly, Sacrilege. Clamber, Sodden, Laborious, Vain, Tamper, Spectral, Peering, Exultantly

2. I loved how the story talked also about an animal and I loved how the man really expressed his feeling and emotion towards the story and further when you read deeply to the story.

3. I enjoyed the story but I dislike the ending. The ending was confusing and disappointing from my perspective of view and how I understand it.

4. I really liked the story I enjoyed every moment reading the story despite the fact that the story may use some troublesome words I really liked and enjoyed the story.

5. I would probably change how they use troublesome words so people would understand the story a bit more simple and I would also probably change the ending of the story.

6.  Yes I would love to discuss definition on some word because it’s really troublesome and most likely the ending of the story because the ending was just honestly confusing.

7.  No because the ending of the story was really disappointing and confusing I would just love a simple and uncomplicated story ending

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1. Y'ARE, pram sodden nuisance stout muffler treacle exulantly feebly scythe snug
2. i like the part where they talked about the ww1 memories about their sons and also the part about the description of the office just imagining it makes the scene very nice
3. i dont hate any part of the story because it has a mysterious presence and that is what makes it quite thrilling for a story
4. like what i said previouslymi like the stroy of the mysterious presence the plot twist and also the fact that he did not remember what he wanted to say
5.i would not want to change the ending, in fact i would like to have a continuation on the story
6. i am kind of interested in this topic and i completely agree with cherish so that we could know more about their sons
7. i enjoyed the story but the ending part was a little brutal

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Q1 : pram, tamper, sodden, nuisance, stout, muffler, treacle, exultantly, feebly, scythe

Q2 : i like how the story has an interesting plot & the story is described in detail. the story is also really different from other stories and it is written down nicely.

Q3 :  i dont like the part when the boss was torturing the fly. it was pretty disturbing for me and it felt sickening.

Q4 : i like the story because the story is quite fascinating and the story wasnt boring at all. it was very interesting and entertaining to read.

Q5 : since i like a story that ends with a happy ending, i would like to change the end of the story because the end of the story is quite sad.

Q6 : for this story, i like to discuss the words i dont understand. other than the words, i dont have anything to discuss as i understood the story well.

Q7 : No, i dont like the ending because it was a sad ending. i love stories that ends with a happy ending so i was pretty disappointed that the story ends with a sad ending.

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1)muffler,treacle,pram,sacrilege,y'are,notion,

scythe,exultantly,francs,spectral

2)i like how the story started with the conversation between two mens,i also like how detailed and unique this story is rather  than any other stories and also this story has a very amazing plot.

3)i really enjoyed reading it,but what i don't like from this story is that they put up words that is not really understandable

4)yes,i think the story is pretty interesting because of the plot and how it changes topic,and how he didn't remember what he was thinkinv about.

5)i would like to change the ending of the story,because it's just confusing and little messed up.

6)some part of the story are confusing and it wasn't that easy to understand,i think they should also elaborated more about the son the what happened about war.

7)no,the ending was really confusing,and it's not a goof way to end a story,since the character didn't do anything,it's also sad to end the ending with the "murder of a fly"

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1.  Y’ARE, Snug, Nuisance, Wistfully, Muffler, Pram, Exultantly, Tamper, Sacrilege, Cocked.
2. The plot is nice and unique.
3. I don't really like the story because the words that is used in the story is a bit hard.
4. No, because the words are too hard.
5. I would like to change the ending when the fly was tortured.
6. I'm confused in some parts of the story.
7. No, it was wierd because the boss killed the fly for no reason.

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1. pram, stout, muffler, treacle, exultantly, sacrilege, feebly, scythe, plucky, wistfully.
2. I really like the characters. The characters' personality really show when they were mourning for their sons. How they interacted with each other is also very amusing.
3. I dislike the plot. There's not much about it aside from the characters grieving for their dead sons. It'll be better if they can add some more elements into the story.
4. Overall, I like the story. It was decent but unusual, there's not really much stories out there who focused more on death and mourning, which is nice because I really like stories which are different and not cliched.
5. I really want to change the ending of the story. I think there's some alternate ones who served as a better ending and can appeal to the readers way more.
6. I think they can put a lot more depth into the writing. For some reason, the story felt really bland. There's not much about the relationship between the boss and Mr Woodfield, his son etc.
7. I kind of dislike the ending. I think it's too violent when the boss was torturing the fly. Despite the title, it was kind of irrelevant when the fly really did absolute nothing and wasn't involve in his son's death.

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1. nuisance, muffler, pram, wistfully, exultantly, tamper, sacrilege, snug, francs
2. i like how the guy remember about his son during the conversation.
3. i don't like that the end of the story it described a lot about how he torturing a fly, it doesn't make a good ending.
4. not really it was quite boring. like it wasn't interesting. it was unique though from other stories.
5.I would like to change the ending of the story because the plot seems out of place and i didn't really enjoy reading it and he could talk more about his son's dead instead of torturing a fly.
6. no , i think i understand
7.I did not like the ending of the story, because the boss person killed a fly for no absolute reason and that he killed the fly slowly and drowned it in ink.

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1. Write 10 words from the text that seemed difficult to you.
Y'ARE
Wistfully
exultantly
spectral
sacrilege
cellars
D'you
oozed
timid
blotting

2. Which aspect of the story did you like? Why ?
I liked that the story felt very immersive and felt like such a vivid memory

3. Which aspect of the story did you dislike? why ?
I disliked the part where they were talking about their dead sons. I get that it's an integral part of the story, but if the cause was changed, i think it would be much better.

4. Did you like the story? Why ?
Yes, it was a good read, because the whole story could have been dragged out longer, but it was just the right amount

5. What would you want to change about the story ?
I think that he should't have tortured the fly, but instead killed it in one hit. Even for a tiny little animal, the imagery is disturbing.

6. Is there anything specific in the story that you would want to discuss ? please elaborate
I think that the writer wanted to seem sophisticated. The reason is that they used words that can be easily replaced with more basic words, yes it's the writers style, but in my opinion, i didnt like it only for that reason.

7. Did you like the ending of the story? why ?
no, like i said, I would prefer that the scene be very quick, since for me, unsettling images pop into mind when those things happen, even for little animals

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1. pram, y'are, snug, stout, tamper, sodden
2. I liked how the story is very different from other short stories, I think its very unique how the story is about an insect.
3. what I don't about this short story is that the story is a little bit long for a short story and part of the story I don't like is it contains violence towards the small insect.
4. I don't like but I also don't hate it. I think its fun to read and for some people who likes to kill flys I think its good for them, the story is also long and I don't like reading.
5. I would like to change the ending, its quite sad and also add easier words to understand, also make the story shorter.
6. I dont have anything to discuss, I understand this story quite well.
7. I dont like the ending, I think its sad to end a story with a murder of a fly

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1. Nuisance, pram, helm, chaps, scythe, sacrilege, tamper, francs, wistfully,  exultantly
2. I liked how he couldn't remember what he had been thinking about before after killing the fly because it was very interesting and unusual.
3. I didn't quite like how the fly died because I wanted it to live and show the boss a lesson of there's always a way to solve problems, even if it might be difficult.
4. Yes, because I love the plot of the story and how he didn't remember what he was thinking about.
5. The ending, because I wanted him to realize about all of his regrets of not doing with his son, and I wanted the boss to finally feel how he wanted to feel before.
6. How did the boss just forget what he had been thinking about before, after killing the fly?
7. The ending is good so I quite like it because it's very interesting of how he could immediately forget what he was thinking about before.

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1.  pram, nuisance,  wistfully,  treacale, sacrilege,  unblemished,  spoilt,  exultantly,  clamber,  notion
2.  The aspect of the story I like is when Mr Woodifield and his friend who is a boss trying to kill the annoying fly in Mr Woodifield's boss's room.
3.  The aspect of the story I dislike is  when  Mr Woodifield's son passed away six years ago because it doesn't match the other parts of the story which they fought against the fly.
4. Since I'm not a fan of these type of stories, I don't say that I hate the story. But it has unique features such as impressive words and the plot of the short story.
5. I would like to change the ending of the short story because it doesn't suit with other parts of this part of the short story such as when they talk about the death of Mr Woodifield's son.
6.  Overall, this story is different than other stories I read. But sometimes it might be boring. And I really like the part  when Mr Woodifield and his boss chatted before they noticed there is a fly.
7. I don't really like the ending of the story because since most stories have a happy ending, but this story has a sad ending because the boss killed the tiny fly.

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1. Nuisance, muffler, treacle, sacrilege, immense, pram , temper,draggled

2. I liked how the man remembered the boy's memories and how he presented the emotion and gave the tale its depth and color

3. I didn't really like how the story came to an end because the boss was worried about his son and didn't do anything about it or put an end to his death.

4.  Sure, I think the story is fascinating because of the plot and the charters in the story that they used insect

5. I want to change the ending and the overall flow of the story because I feel the theme of the story is fragmented and a little confusing at certain points.

6. Overall, the story was fantastic, but sometimes it was really complicated, I found that while reading I was still lost and it wasn't easy to understand. I think they should have focused more on the son and the war that happened.

7. No, it was frustrating and it wasn't exactly a nice way to end the story because the character didn't do anything about what made his life miserable

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1.  Pram, helm, chaps, scythe, sacrilege, tamper, recrossed, nuisance, francs, wistfully
2. I really liked the plot of the story because it was very interesting and I also liked how he couldn't remember that his son died, after he killed the fly, it's like his mind just went too focused to him killing the fly than focusing on his dead son.
3. I didn't quite like how the fly died because I wanted it to live, and before I read that the fly died, I thought the fly was going to teach the boss a lesson of there's always a way out of problems.
4. Yes.
5. I would want to change the ending because I wanted the boss to realize what he regretted of not doing with his son and for him to finally feel what he wanted to feel before.
6. How did he just forget about what he had been thinking about before, after killing a fly?
7. It was a pretty good ending, very interesting and unusual because I really thought that the ending was going to be him realizing something about his son.

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1.The words I have problem with are: nuisance, muffler, treacle, sacrilege, francs, Y'ARE, wistfully, exultantly, tamper and pram.

2.What I liked about the story is that it talks about a good yet sad story about the Boss since his son died. It reminded the Boss' loss and grief which is very interesting and plot was fascinating.

3. What I disliked about the story is that it doesn't talk based on the title "The Fly" since the fly only made its presence at the ending.

4.Yes. The story is very interesting since the character's personality along the plot made this story excellent so, I would rate this at least 7-8 out of 10.

5. I would at least add some extra scene for the Fly since the title stated the Fly.

6. None so far.

7. The ending is very confusing since the Boss at first saved the fly but then tried to kill the fly.

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1. Y'ARE, snug, pram,  wistfully,  sacriledge, exultantly, tamper, umblemis, spactrel, muffler
2. the plot is nice and unique and the concept is nicely done.
3. i don't really like the story because the words used in the story is a bit too hard and there are alot of words that i don't really understand.
4. no, 1st because the words are too hard and i also don't really like stories like this.
5. i would like to change the part where the fly was tortured because it was disgusting and the fly was tortured a couple of times.
6. sometimes im confused in some parts of the story, there are parts that doesn't make sense to me.
7. nah i don't really like the ending of the story because it was weird, kinda confusing and it's terrible and is quite boring.

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1.pram, muffler, nuisance, scythe
,quavered, quiver, stout, treacle, helm, sacrilege

2.I like how not only it is very detailed with every action and emotion written in deep words and sentences, I love how the story tells along a moral that talks about death and its inevitability .

3. Throughout this story I didn't like how complex, descriptive and long the story is for such a short story, it was a lot too detailed and hard to understand making me have to read the story twice to understand it better, but that was just in my perspective.

4. I liked the story, it is very interesting especially on how the boss overcome his sadness and put a end on his death by killing a fly, overall this short story is great but it is not something I would want to read again.

5.Even thought I liked the detailed writing in this story, i didn't like how complex and complicated it was written, in my opinion I don't mind changing the first and second paragraph of the story to make it more simple and less complex written.

6.After reading the story twice due to not understanding, I understand the story better but what I also still just don't understand how his emotions were gone after killing a single fly.

7.Some part of the story was confusing but I did like the ending knowing that after the passing of his son he could finally get a slight peace feeling and what he thought was "positively frightening".

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1. Snug, Pram, Muffler, Exultantly, Tamper, Scythe, treacle, sacrilege, wistfully, francs
2. I like that the boss when from becoming really proud of what he have to feeling really lost. He became depressed after Mr Woodfield told him that his son died in Belgium.
3. I didn't like the way he tried to save the fly and putting the fly back in the ink. He gave the fly hope then instantly made the fly gave up. He threw the fly to the trash bin like nothing happen.
4. I like the story because the story have new words that i do not know. The story only mentions 3 character so it doesn't make the reader confused. The words in the story is well used and very descriptive.
5. The part i would want to change is making the fly alive. The poor fly did nothing wrong. The boss irritates me because he helped the fly then dip the fly in the ink. If he couldn't help the fly then why should he kill the fly
6. Yes, I am confused why he tried to save the fly then immediately have an idea of killing the innocent fly. I am confused why he could become very mean to a fly just because he is sad that his son died.
7. No, I didn't like the way he killed the fly. It is not a good way of ending the story. I didn't like the way they ended the story by torturing the fly.

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1. pram, feebly , helm , stout , spectral, sacrilege, treacle, exultantly, scythe, sodden
2.I like how smoothly the story went from talking to a friend into the tragic topic of his loss and to him taking the life of a poor fly. I also liked the way the story told us how the boss felt and described his son and why it was so painful for him.
3. The story was quite long and descriptive but what I disliked most was how the story described the way the boss tortured the fly and watched it suffer again and again even though he knew how hard the fly was fighting for its life. I also hate how the boss couldn't remember what he was thinking of after killing that poor fly.
4. I didn't love the story but it didn't dislike it as well. I just found it interesting of how a normal day for a boss can turn into such story of grief, anger and violence to that innocent fly.
5. I wouldn't change the ending but maybe add a moral lesson for the boss or closure. The ending made it seem useless of killing the fly and I kinda hoped that after killing the fly it would at least make him realise  something or taught him something.
6. Maybe how the story was normally weird as he was having a normal day with his friend until the topic was brought up.
7. The ending was unique, it couldn't be change because it already for the fly couldn't be saved and the boss was still grieving and that I had nothing to do with either their lives but I felt this frustrating feeling in me throughout reasid

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1. well nothing is hard to write a summary because I can just pick the first or second sentence from each paragraph and nothing is hard. except some words which are pram, feebly, helm, stout, spectral, sacrilege, treacle, exultant , scythe, sodden

2.`the part where the boss drops one drop of ink at the fly and the fly died and he remembers his dead son. because it's the best part

3.done have any.

4.no because I don't like read books except comics. because comics are interesting

5. change the story into comic because I like to see cartoon pictures with word rather than just seeing words

6.i have nothing to discuss

7.yes because of the dead fly that the boss killed and then he remembers his dead son.

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2. I like that there was a sudden change of story , from talking with fellow  friend about an old incident ,to a torturing event of a animal . It was pretty amazing how the change of story was very simple and graceful.

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1. Wistfully, Still at the Helm, Swooping, Quavered, Unblemished, desperately,  scythe, draggled, exultantly and treacle.
2. I like the way how the story started with the conversation between two men and then ended with the death of that fly.
3. i disliked the fact that the story was called as a short story but ended being a long one and the fact that it was not mentioned in the story that the boss showed his pain by killing the fly.
4. yes, i liked because when one starts to read the story they get a feel that the story is going be about Mr. Woodifield but ends up highlighting the boss his grief and the fly.
5. nothing really the story is quite good and interesting but if there was a way to shorten the story i would do that .
6. no, i do not think there is a need to discuss about any thing because the story is long and elaborate and clear.
7. yes i did because for me i was satisfied with the ending and didn't wanna know anymore like anything mire that happened after that

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1. nuisance, snug, pram, muffler, exultantly, tamper, scythe, treacle, sacrilege, corpse
2. i like how the writer talks about the story in every detail and how the boss expresses his feelings roughly when he thought of his son.
3. i dislike the way the boss forgets so easily about all his pain after torturing a fly. i also think that the story should have been written shorter and that it should have followed the description when it said "short story".
4. i like the story but at the same time dislike it as well, because i don't think that many people would want to hear that torturing a living thing is a good way to forget the pain and suffering they are experiencing.
5. i would maybe change the ending by the boss having a talk with someone close to him about the memories he spent with his son and how much he misses him.
6. not really, but I would lke to know more about their characters...
7. not quite, because the boss had forgotten everything so quickly that i don't think is possible for someone experiencing what he was experiencing.

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1.NUisance ,pram,sacrelege,treacle,exulantly,Y'ARE

2I like the way the story is because it is different from other stories and it is quite detailed and has a nice plot

3 I didnt not like any parts of the story except the language cause it is very difficult for me to understand

4 I kinda liked it because of how the story doesnt make you feel bored and how therre are different emotions in the story such as joy and anger

5 If i was able to change the story i would change the language because it is hard to understand.

6  I would like to discuss the language of the story bcuz it is very hard to understand

7 KInda like the ending i guess because of all the details the author paid attention to

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1.nuisance,pram,scythe,piped,spectral,sodden,notion,exultantly,stout,and wistfully.
2. what i like from this story is the moral of the story, it has deep meaning/moral.
3.what i don't really like from this story is, that this story has so much words that i don't really understand, and how it ended.
4.i do like the story, it has interesting and unique plot. but i just don't really like the ending.
5. maybe it was when the fly was almost killed (tortured) because i feel bad for that fly.
6. the story should discuss more about the theme, cause it was based on real life.
7.i don't like the ending of the story because, its a bit confusing for me and it was not the best way to end the story.
-vishella a.h.-

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1.nuisance, muffler, pram, wistfully, exultantly, tamper, sacrilege, snug, francs
2. I like that the plot was different than other stories because the boss was torturing a fly and he remembers of his son's death which hits him.
3. I didn't really like how the story was ended because the boss was thinking about his son and didn't do anything about it or put a closure to his death and this has put a weight on his life.
4. yes, because it was meaningful and it was interesting how they compare a death of a fly by torturing it with the boss's son that died in a war.
5. I would like to change the part where the fly was tortured because it was a bit disturbing on how a animal is being tortured multiple times.
6.sometimes part of the story are confusing and it wasn't that easy to understand and the story should discuss more about the theme of the story because it was based on real life.
7.no, because it was a bit confusing and it was not a good way to end the story since the character didn't do anything about what was making his life
miserable .

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1.y'are, snug, nuisance, wistfully, muffler, sacrilege, tamper, piped, yer, francs
2. i like the plot of the story because its different from any other stories.
3.none of the aspect because i also kill flys :)
4.yes because the story is weird
5.the part where mr woodsfield had stroke
6.yes because flys are annoying kill more flys.

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1. Pram, stout, Wistfully, satisfaction, peering, quavered, notion, muffler, scythe and more
2. I like the part when he helps the fly out from the ink pot just to do like an experiment on it by adding too much ink to the fly, because it kinda weird because he helped the fly escape from death and for like about 20 seconds later he gives the fly overdoses of ink to it, i bet it must have been even worse than getting drown at a pool and when i was reading that part i was just imagining what the face of the fly must have looked like if it was a human.
3. I dont like the part when he forgot what he was thinking about, because he was just thinking about his own son's death and just forgets about it, to me i think its disturbing to see someone forgets about someone's death especially when its about his or her own child's death.
4. I dont really like the story, because its kinda boring and its boring because the story is not interesting because the story is like a day in a life based story.
5. Not much since i only read books and doesnt really like making one but i would change the drinking menu so rather than drinking whiskey, they will be drinking orange juice and change the fly to mosquito :D
6. No, not really just the fact that the boss saved the fly and then seconds later he killed and how the words were selected because i dont really understand some words written.
7. Not really, because its boring and because of how it ended with the boss forgetting what he just thought about and him ending with a dead fly

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1. I dont understand this words:nuisance, muffler, treacle, scythe, notion, pram , sacrilege
2.the plot is nice and unique and the concept is nicely done
3. The part where the fly is tortured im a Animal lover so i didnt like reading animals being tortured
4. It was ok, got a little bored in the middle and  i didnt really like the ending , its not a happy ending
5.Yes i wanted to change the part where the fly is tortured, with a happy ending
6. Im confused in some parts of the story, its hard to understand
7. Nah the ending is weird and kinda confusing and it is terrible and a little boring.
MORGAN8B

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1.nuisance, pram, scythe, sacrelege, treacle, immense, exultantly

2.i really like the plot because it's very different from other stories i've ever read. And also i like it that the story was very detailed it makes us easier to understand.

3.i didn't like it when he tortured the animal. I felt very very sorry and uncomfortable. And also th ending wasn't very good like i expected the ending would be not bad but it was not what i expected.

4.yes, the story was very interesting. Sometimes when i read stories i kind of have a feeling where i get really bored of the story but this one is not boring it was fun.

5.i would like to change the parts that i dislike the most. It was when the fly was tortured like i felt really sorry for it and also i would like to change the ending because it wasn't a really great one because i wanted it to be so good.

6.i would like to discuss about the theme of the story because it was based on real life

7.no, because it wasn't really good and it was a bit confusing. It was a bad way to end a story i didn't like it

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backstory 1. Y'are, helm, treacle, spectral, half-crown, exultantly, sodden, scythe, notion, francs
2. I liked how the man recalled his memories of the boy and how he felt about it because it portrayed the emotion and gave depth and color to the story.
3. I didn't like how the man kept torturing the fly. It seemed to me that he only did it to free his mind from his regrets and forget about his deceased son.
4. I didn't like the story. In my opinion, it felt quite unsettling and didn't end on a good note. I really didn't like how he tortured the fly to deliberately forget about his son.
5. I would definitely like to change the fact that the boss forgot his son. The boss could have been portrayed as a loving father that mourns his deceased son, and yet what written in the story is the fact that he didn't pay much attention to the boy both before and after his death. The boss could have at least visited his son's grave.
6. I'd like to discuss the fact that certain parts of the story weren't elaborated very well, some parts had no backstory and that made certain parts confusing and the story became messy
7. I didn't like the ending of the story, this being because it made the boss seem like a terrible father towards his son before and after his death, and it shows that the dad is eager to find ways to distract himself from the thought of his son as shown in the story by diverting his attention to a fly.

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1.Piped,peered,exultantly
2.i like the story because it has a deep meaning but the story is short
3.i dislike how the story has some hard word to understand
4.i dislike the story plot because it doesn't show how the story started is just like telling the end of an story
5.i would like to add more character to the story rather than only 3 character which is the boss,mr woodifield and the boss son
6.no,I understand the story meaning
7.No,because it doesn't have any meaning to it. It's just a cliff hanger and we end up guessing the ending of the story

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1.Quavered,Unblemished,Blotting,Wistfull,Broad,Tamper,Stout,Pram,muffler

2. I like when the boss was torchering the fly , where he throw the ink wastefully to the fly till it die

3. the story has too much dialogues it makes the story less interesting ans too long to read maybe cutting some line will make it better

4.yes , just show how a man can easily change from a normal event that changes  his life forever

5.i would cut of some part form the story so it could be more short so that we can read it ti be more interesting

6. NO

7.well i don't like the ending because its not really it should atleast have a plot twist about his son

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1. exultantly, spectral, muffler, quiver, quavered, sacrilege, clamber, scythe, draggled, treacle
2. I liked how the story was written, i think the plot is very interesting and unique with an additional dark feel to it. I also liked how the author added that plot twist
3. I disliked how detailed they wrote the part where the boss was torturing the fly because it was kinda sickening to read. I also felt that they could've written the ending better because it made the boss seem so douchey and ignorant
4. I quite liked the story because there was that aspect of a plot twist you didnt see coming and I can tell that the story was well thought out and a lot of hard work was put into writing it
5. The only thing I would change about the story is the part when he tortured the fly, i felt that the author went in too much detail that sometimes it was like "woah, tmi"
6. the story overall was great but was at times kind of confusing, I found that I was often confused while reading and it wasnt really easy to digest. I think they should've also elaborated more about the son and about the war that happened.
7. not entirely because, as I have stated earlier, the boss seemed like such a douchey dad that he would forget about his son just like that and the ending felt unfinished so it didnt really fit the story.

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1. Broad,  Blot, Wistfully, admiringly, Quavered, peered, nuisance, stout, rosy, and helm.
2. I like that the story tells about the past of someone and how they lost someone they loved and how much time they spent together all lost in a short period of time and the story has a deep meaning.
3.I dislike the part where the boss person was torturing the fly and how at first he was freeing it and at the end he kills it. That was really dark.
4.I like the story cause it has a deep meaning of something that happened in the past and how they moved on in life and thinks of what they did in the past.
5.I would like to change the first part and the last part of the story. I would like to change the first part of the story to be more interesting and the last part to be not dark and gruesome.
6. No, I don't really need to discuss the story, because the story is really detailed and clear that we know what is going on in the story and everything that is happening.
7. I did not like the ending of the story, because the boss person killed a fly for no absolute reason and that he killed the fly slowly and drowned it in ink.

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1. Pram , Blot , Wistfully , Sacrilege ,   Muffler , Treacle , Exultantly , Tamper , Unblemished , Stout. I am unfamiliar of those words. I have never learnt or heard them before.

2. I liked the plot and the characters of the story since they have a tragic backstory of losing their only children to a war. They died from the injuries after the war had ended.

3. I disliked the part when he said his son had died because of injures from the war and when he killed the fly with a Blot of ink.

4. Yes, I did like the story. Since, it has a hidden meaning that most people wouldn't find after finishing the story once or twice. Unless , if you fully understand the entire story and what it is about.

5. The only part I would change is the part when he killed the fly. I would have wanted him to let the fly go and let him remember what he wanted to talk about.

6. I am not sure If I need to discuss anything further than the story itself. I don't really understand the whole plot of the story.

7. No, since it's pretty sad that he forgot what he wanted to remember about his only son and It doesn't have a second part of the story. So we don't really know what had happened during the war.

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1. feebly
2. sacrilege
3. notion
4. clamber
5. sodden
6. scythe
7. laborious
8. vain
9. draggled
10. wretchedness
2. I really like the way that they expressed the man's grief briefly because it really brings out the emotions and also lets us see through his perspective, i think that makes the story more interesting as well.
3. I think the ending was a bit disappointing cause it isn't explained in detail and it's a bit confusing although it does relate to the story, I just feel like the ending wasn't as great as I expected.
4. I do like the story in general because it expresses the sadism of warfare and I think that's a topic that is intriguing and it reminds us of the war reality that happened back then.
5. I would like to change the ending the the overall flow of the story because I feel like the theme of the story is scattered and at some points, a bit confusing.
6. I would like to discuss about the background/ theme of the story because it's based on an actual experience that might have happened to many people during the world war and post world war.
7. I didn't really like the ending, as I said earlier, I think it's a bit confusing and weird. Maybe the writer was trying to portray a situation that I just didn't get.

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1.spectral,sacrilege
2.i liked the plot of the story and that twist by the characters
3.i disliked the part when they talked too much
4.no because i didn't like the story
5 the length of the story
6 no
7.no

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1. Cowed, Chaps, plucky, Immense, Wistfully, Blotting, Tamper, Oozed, unblemished, quiver,

2. I liked the story, when he explained everything of why he was so sad about his dead son and also the ending, where the fly has courage and is able to try its best to survive, but I don’t like it how the boss explained in details about torturing the fly till it died.

3. It was quite boring in the first part of the story because, it’s just explaining and talking, no good or specific reasons to talk about their both Old Woodifield and the boss.

4. I don’t really like the story, because for my opinion nothing seemed to be interesting for me to read and also it seemed to be boring too.

5. I would like to change the first story to make the reader more interesting to read and make them more curiosity on reading it, because the first part got no interesting text.

6. I would wanna discuss, about the whole story because to be honest I don’t really understand about the story, and I mostly understand the ending and some middle parts of the story.

7. Well, I like the ending because the narrator has a creativity of making a fly in the ending, but I don’t like all the details been put about the boss killing the fly slowly.

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1.)Muffler, wistfully, exultantly, sacrilege, plucky.
2.)I like the smooth change of main characters in the story.
3.)Too much dialogues, i'd rather it have less, and it describes things too much
4.)Yes as it says that beings smaller than us can have more courage than us
5.)Probably the amount of dialogues and descriptions.
6.) No, I don't think I want to discuss anything, I already understand the story
7.)No, I'd rather the fly survive instead of dying, it could probably serve as inspiration for the boss.

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1.y'are, snug, nuisance, wistfully, muffler, sacrilege, tamper, spactrel, yer, francs
2.i liked it how it was about an animal that is usually rare in stories but this is a good one  and a good fit
3.i didnt like the language used in the story bcs its difficult to understand, i peefer the normal english one so its easier to understand
4. Not really bcs i dont find anything interesting from this type of stories
5. I would change the way it was written amd the way he showed the characters
6. Im sometimes very confused  when they are talking because they are not giving proper explanations
7. I hate the ending just because its abrupt i prefer if the ending would just go slow

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1.pram,quavered,stout,tamper,sacrilege,snug,muffler,wistfully,feebly,frail

2.I like the idea of making the protagonist's identity hidden,as this makes the readers theorize on how he look like ,what makes him called the boss etc.

3.I dislike the part where the boss saved the fly and then killed it as this method of killing is quite gruesome and gross at the same time.

4.No,because there is not much idea put into this story other than hiding the boss's identity.The story is mostly consisted of two old men talking about their lives.

5. I would like to change the ending,because it just looks like that the author ran out of endings and so she just let the fly die in a harsh way.

6. i would sometimes need to think on who is talking on what or who is  doing something as the author didn't really use that much quotation marks and kept changing the person's name at the end of the quote.

7.Not really,the author put to much words that describe the fly falling inside the ink,being picked by the man,being dropped again,tried to clean itself,and getting killed by drowning in the man's ink.

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1.snug, quavered, unblemished, blotting, whistfully, stout, pram, frail, treacle, dragled
2.i liked the plot of the story is extraordinary.
3.i dislike the part where the boss threw a ink to the fly
4.yes because, it is very extraordinary.
5.the category.
6.no
7.not really.

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1. stout,nuisance,snug,sacrilege, muffler,spectral,wistfully,plucky, wretchedness,pram
2 i liked the plot of the story which is based on flies and  not much use  of mr woodfield which makes the story seem more simple and not complex in a confusing twist
3 the part why they added mr woodfield to the plot smoking cigars drinking whiskey when its supposed to be about flies same goes for the punctuation
4 i liked the story in a way i dont like the plot is confusing yet simple and the punctuation are not really good so if i were to give it a rating it wouuld be 6/10

5 i would change mr woodfields role to be a more useful role as he doesnt really do much and i would make the grammar words more simple
6 i want to discuss the discussion as the characters talked i got confused on who was talking who i think we should put  dialogue instead
7 i would put it on a maybe list as i prefer a more easy and smooth way t end the story rather than being abrupt

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1. nuisance,  stout, wistfully, Unblemished, pram, quavered, treacle, blotting, draggled, sacrilege
2. I like the part where the writer took the time to do this as it was shown that it was hard work. He used difficult words because I think he thought of it carefully.
3. I dislike the part where he used too much difficult words that young age viewers could not understand the aspect of the story. Also the part where they included smoking, drinking whiskey made me felt uneasy. As I said, younger viewers won"t understand.
4. I don't really like it as I'm not really interested in reading these types of stories. But it is irregular that I read these stories because the story is way different than what we usually read.
5. I would want to change some words including the words I didn't understand to make others understand what the story is actually like. I also would want to change the smoking and whiskey to something more child-friendly.
6. Some parts of the story are confusing to me and it wasn't easy to understand. I would want some more simple words in the story rather than difficult words.
7. I didn't really like the ending because it was abit too confusing for me to understand. In my opinion it was too quick and I would like a rather smoother story.

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1.nuisance, muffler, pram, treacle, wistfully, exultantly, tamper, sacrilege, snug, francs
2. I like that the plot was different than other stories because the boss was torturing a fly and he remembers of his son's death which hits him.
3. I didn't really like how the story was ended because the boss was thinking about his son and didn't do anything about it or put a closure to his death and this has put a weight on his life.
4. yes, because it was meaningful and it was interesting how they compare a death of a fly by torturing it with the boss's son that died in a war.
5. I would like to change the part where the fly was tortured because it was a bit disturbing on how an animal is being tortured multiple times.
6.sometimes part of the story are confusing and it wasn't that easy to understand and the story should discuss more about the theme of the story because it was based on real life.
7.no, because it was a bit confusing and it was not a good way to end the story since the character didn't do anything about what was making his life miserable and it was putting such a weight on his life.

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1. Snug, Quavered, Unblemished,  Blotting, Wistfully, Nuisance, Treacle, Pram, Frail, Feebly
2. I like the way the story tells us how did the boss' son passed away, and also how the boss confessed how his son died and how show his not so grief to the fly.
3. I don't like the way the author delivers the story, with the difficult to understand language. I have to reread the story for about three times to understand the story entirely. I also don't like how to they twist the plot from the old man Woodifield to the Boss' life.
4. I do not like the story except for the final part where the boss, his son's state about to fly to freedom, then was drawn to the war and got him killed. The reason I don't like the story because it's just too dull and insipidly written as if The writer had no traces of inspiration, I also don't like how heartless the boss tried to be.
5. I would want the plot of the story to be changed like only tell the story of one of the characters, not tell one character's story, then change it to another character's story. I would also want the choice of words used to turned into something easier to understand.
6. No
7. I think the ending of the story should be fine, though it's a bit heartless to do that even though it's a fly. It also explains a bit of what happened to the son in the war.

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1.snug,nuisance,wistfully,muffler
,sacriledge,tamper,pram,umblemished,frail,treacle
2.i like how it was about an animal that most of us dont like but  the story is actually good and people likes and its acually pretty intereresting for me to read
3.the thing that i didnt like is that there are many words that are confusing for me and for some people too.
4.no,not really because i do not like these types of story and im more to stories about animals in the wild and not fliesand i do not and never like flies because they are annoying
5.change the location of the story to somewhere more interesting for people to read and imagine and i would like to change the way they say the words
6.i would like to discuss about the background or theme of the story because its based on actual experience and that might have  actually happened to some people in the world war
7.no. because it was a bit confusing and it was not a good way to end the story since th charachter didnt do anythimg about what was making his life miserable and t was putting such a weight on his life

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1. Wistfully, Snug                         2. I like how the writer describes what the old man's life is really like. It really tells you almost everything about his life and his family.
3. I didn't like the fact that the boss just repeatedly threw ink at the fly. It just seems like wasting ink and messing up the whole floor and even the walls. And also the boss seemed so full of himself.
4. Yes, Because The story has a lot of detail and it is not easy to get bored reading all of this. This story is one of those short stories that I like to repeat reading.
5. I would like to change the writing. to make it a little more exciting. It was ok but I think it could be less boring if it was written better.
6. I was confused because the beginning and the ending does not even match. not even close.
7. I like the ending! I hate flies and this story is about killing flies, this unexpectingly taught me a new way on how to kill flies. but other than that, I am so disoriented from the ending

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1.Wretchedness, Plucky, Immense, Snug, Tamper, Sacrilege, Muffler, Wistfully, Draggled , Blotting-paper
2.I liked that the part of the story when the boss nearly cried because he remembered his son's death and shortly after playing with the fly, he forgot everything.
3.The part of the story that I disliked is that the story uses a high level of grammar and for some people is very hard to understand and read.
4.I didn't like the story partly because it takes a high level English to properly understand the meaning behind the story.
5.I would like to change the level of grammar he used in the story.
6. I would like to discuss more about the part when he tortured the fly because i don't really get why the author put that part in the story
7.I don't really like the ending of the story because it was to sudden and abrupt.

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1.Nuisance,muffler,treacle,
sacrilege,tamper,pram,immense
,francs,exultantly,spectral
2.I liked how the plot of the story seems so different then other stories and it is not too complex which makes it easier to understand.
3.I dislike that the end of the story it described a lot about how he tortured the fly and i felt that it was too much and the ending doesn't really go well with the story.
4.The story is different than most of the stories i read before but in my opinion its not too interesting compared to other stories i read before.
5.I would like to change the ending of the story because the plot seems out of place and i didn't really enjoy reading it and he could talk more about his son's dead instead of torturing a fly.
6.No, I think that I understand the story pretty well .
7.No the ending was a little out of the place and confusing as it doesn't go well with the plot of the story but overall this story is really different.

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1. pram , nuisance , muffler , exultantly ,wistfully , spectral , sacrilege
2. I like that there was a sudden change of story , from talking with fellow  friend about an old incident ,to a torturing event of a animal . It was pretty amazing how the change of story was very simple and graceful.
3. I enjoyed all the parts of the story , but the part i dislike and disagree the most , is the part when he started torturing the animal.I felt sorry and felt really disturbed by how he was treating the animal. I also wasn't  really pleased with the ending due to his actions and how he just brushed off the death of his son .
4.Yesss , i loved it . It was so interesting throughout the whole story . With the changes in topic , I never  felt bored . It showed a part of joy , greif , anger and many more
5. I would love to change the ending of the story .Maybe end it with a Cliff hanger or closure of the boss, but i truly wouldn't change anything.The ending was annoying , but it makes it a good story
6.Not really , i would have fun discussing the part where Mr.woodifield had one day of freedom a week . he would do things you could never imagine. i also would love to discuss about the relationship of the two men .their relationship is so unique and special
7.Yess , i like that it made people annoyed and aggravated .Thats the reason this was such a spectacular story.

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1. nuisance,muffler,peering, cocked
Y'ARE,pram,francs,sodden,scythe,notion
2. The story is written down very well and the concept of the story is nicely done and planned.The plot of the story is different and unique than any other stories that i read.
3, I didn't like the language that they used for this story because it took me time to understand  the story.
4.Yes i think that the story is interesting because of the plot and the characters that they portrayed.I also liked how they used insect in the story.
5. I would like to change how they write the story because its difficult for me to understand. I also want the boss to not forget why he killed the fly is because he is sad for his son"s dead.
6. I was sometimes confused in some part of the story and it didn't make sense to me, because of how the story is written
7.Yes i like the ending of the story because its twisted and different. For me it actually makes the story better.

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1.  Y'ARE, Snug, Nuisance, Wistfully, Muffler, Sacrilege, Tamper, Spectral, Yer, Francs
2. I liked how it was about an animal that usually is not in stories but yet is such a good fit for this story.
3. I didn't like the language used because it was pretty hard to understand, I would prefer if it used normal English language so everyone could understand.
4. Not really because I don't find these type of stories interesting. I also like it because it is showing a different way of talking and also a totally different type of story than were use to.
5. I would want to change the way it was written and the way he showed off the characters.
6. I'm sometimes very confused when they are talking because they are not giving proper explanations as to who is talking.
7. I don't really like the ending just because it was so abrupt, I would prefer if it were to go slowly and smooth way to end

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1.Some words that seem different to me include, nuisance ,muffler, treacle, pram, sacrilege ,tamper,  exultantly , francs, Y'ARE , wistfully
2. I could tell that the story was written down with hard work as it is a really good story, I liked how the plot of this story is really different from any other stories, I also really liked how detailed the story was even though the story isn't too long, this story also adds an animal which are usually not there in other stories which is a really great and unique fit. Overall, the concept of the story seems nicely planned.
3. The part of the story that I didn't like is that the animal was being tortured, it felt really sickening. I felt really guilty and bad for the animal as all animals have lives just like we humans do. I wasn't really pleased by how this story ended as he just brushed off his son's death. But other then that the story is pretty fascinating.
4. Yes, I actually genuinely liked this story a lot, I actually think that this was the best story that was assigned to us . The story was really interesting and adventurous , it made me want to read more and more and I really didn't get bored reading this story. It made my emotions go up and down as the story started from being happy and it suddenly turned sad and I started getting angry.
5. I would like to change the end of the story as it was really upsetting. I prefer happy ending stories to be honest. Everything else about the story is good though, just the end was really annoying and sickening.
6.Not really , i would have fun discussing the part where Mr. Woodifield had one day of freedom a week . he would do things you could never imagine. i also would love to discuss about the relationship of the two men .their relationship is so unique and special and different to other types of relationships I had read about in my life.
7. I didn't really like the ending, as I said earlier, I think it's a bit confusing and weird. Maybe the writer was trying to portray a situation that I just didn't get.But i think the writer did this to annoy the readers and to make it a more annoying story so that we feel aggravated.  That is what maked this storyy

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Every question (except question 1) has to be answered in at least 30 words.

1. Write 10 words from the text that seemed difficult to you.

2. Which aspect of the story did you like? Why ?

3. Which aspect of the story did you dislike? why ?

4. Did you like the story? Why ?

5. What would you want to change about the story ?

6. Is there anything specific in the story that you would want to discuss ? please elaborate

7. Did you like the ending of the story? why ?