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While we waited and listened, one of his friends' names was called first for an award. Later, Ricky’s name was announced as having received the highest final ELA test scores.

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They listening were and waited for one of their friends' names to get called. The longer they waited, the more restless they grew.

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As the crowd waited anxiously to hear the awardees names, Ricky first heard his friend's name, his heart then started racing to hear if he has won or not, all of a sudden he heard his name, and he was ecstatic to hear that he won the award with the best ELA scores!

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As they listened and waited for one of his friends names to get called, they grew more and more impatient.

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Today was like any other day at Hollywood Elementary School, expect it was awards day. I saw Ricky sitting anxiously on the bleacher with his friends. Ricky was the one that usually got at least one award each year. Ricky’s anguish began to set in, because the awards ceremony was nearly over and his name has yet to be called. Ricky’s anxiousness was typical only on awards day.

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The story begins with the Hollywood Elementary School with our awards day today. Ricky and his friends sat anxiously in their bleachers. He normally gets one award each year, however he feels anxious in these settings

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The story begins at Hollywood Elementary, School and today just so happened to be awarded day. Ricky sat anxiously in the bleachers with his friends. He typically got more anxious but it was pretty usual for him in a setting

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Today was awards day at Hollywood Elementary. Ricky sat anxiously on the bleachers with his friends. he typically received one reward each year. He grew very anxious, which is usual for him in this setting.

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The story begins at Hollywood Elementary school,  and today happened to be awards day. Ricky sat  anxiously in the bleachers with his friends. He typically got one more award each year. He grew more anxious but it was pretty usual for him in this type of setting

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The story began at Hollywood Elementary, and today just so happened to be awards day. Ricky sat anxiously in the bleachers with his friends. He typically got one award each year. He grew more anxious but it was pretty usual for him in this type of setting.

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The story begins at Hollywood Elementary school, and today just happened to be award day. Ricky sat anxiously on the bleacher with his friends. He typically got at least one award each year. His anxiousness was just typical for him in a setting.