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The author does not argue her perspective effectively by her lack of evidence and abundance of assumptions and contradictions. She is also not shy with her sarcasm towards Storm’s parents’ alternative lifestyle.

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She also suggests that their story perhaps makes more sense because the father of Storm is “a teacher at (natch) an alternative school” (Timson, 2011, para. 4)

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She states,  “Bravo” (Timson, 2011, para. 1) just to blatantly shut them down immediately by stating that the parents have made a bad decision

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The author also does not hesitate to support her arguments with assumptions.

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Timson’s writing resonates with unprofessionalism by muddling it with sarcasm and her very apparent negative bias against the parents.

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Timson also assumes when she states that children must know their gender in order to “build a secure sexual and gender identity” (Timson, 2011, para. 13).

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Primarily, the author makes some blatant assumptions about Storm's caregivers.

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Timson first berates the parents by saying that if she were Storm’s parent, she would be uncomfortable with the online poll about the child’s gender (Timson, 2011).

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She already sets the tone in the very beginning of her article where she sarcastically praises Storm’s parents

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Timson uses the entire article to reprimand Storm’s parents’ child upbringing method, yet their goal for what they want for their children is ultimately the same.

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At the end of the article, she claims that she, as a parent, wants her children to either ignore or embrace gender stereotypes (Timson, 2011).

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The most obvious flaw in Timson’s argument is the contradiction.

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Timson coincidentally talks about Jazz right after this sarcastic remark and describes his fondness for girly things (Timson, 2011).

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Timson continues her mockery by describing the family as “obviously loving and adventurous” (Timson, 2011, para. 8).

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Put this outline in order. You should have a thesis statement, topic sentences, supporting details, and evidence