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The man walked to the store to buy his usual groceries.

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Try being more specific in how the man walked, using a grace note. "Strolled" or "jauntered" could be more precise. Or describe precisely what groceries he bought: milk? Cheese? Guacamole?

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The start of the dance, all of the students were scattered in groups.

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(Don,t know the exact date) December 3, 2016, 12:34 am,  beatdown  between two students at stem during a game of flyers, from taunting each other and insults.

Two students were have a intense altercation. These middle schoolers were taunting and insulting each other. Some of those taunts were sport-like and some of those taunts got personal. After one very personal insult a fight got out between these two students. This took about 5 kids and 1 reccess monitor to stop it. This fight ended with bruises. One of these children gained a in-school suspension.

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On November 16 Several small children were seen playing outside, when all or a sudden one of them gets hit in the face with a ball, and falls on to the asphalt. The other children gasp as he lays their on the ground in a puddle. The child slowly gets up and walks away. Where does he walk to? No one knows.

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Last year in 2017 around April, Ms. Perkins and Nathan Russom got into it in the Math classroom. Perkins was a bit of a tease and laughed at Nathan as he was mad and upset. Nathan asked for a pencil and Perkins had a smart mouth and didn’t want to give him a pencil to do his work. About 10 minutes go by and Perkins starts yelling at Nathan for not getting his work done. Nathan starts to explain how she wouldn’t give him a pencil even though she had a whole bucket of pencils, and for that reason he couldn’t do his work. They start going back and fourth arguing about how his work wasn’t done. She then calls Nathan’s mother and while on the phone with her Perkins starts talking extra loud so the whole class can hear the whole entire conversation and then the class starts to yell at Perkins saying “that’s his personal business why do you have to tell the whole class?” And soon Nathan is sent to the office and as he walks out of the class he yells “you’re not a god, you’re Satan!”

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I think it doesn't make sense to say "scattered in groups" since those kinda contradict eachother. Maybe something like, "clumped together in groups"

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I like how you said scattered in groups if you made it more vivid like “groups of students were scattered across the gym” also you could include what they where doing. were they talking? Dancing?

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A change you should make is changing try's to tries. Around here could be changed to at this school. Ran should be changed because completely stop trying and they fundamentally ran the show mixes past and present tense with stop trying and ran being current and past respectively. It could be changed to "So I stopped trying. In essence, the parents ran the show at this school"

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As the new classes were announced it caused an outbreak of talking consisting of complaining, sighs, and people grateful for having their friends in the same class.

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Bill Gates' newest mission: Curing Alzheimer's disease

Bill Gates has invested 50 million (50,000,000) dollars of his own money into a corporation called

Dementia discovery fund finding a cure for Alzheimer's would affect people all around the world

This is taking place in the here and now I believe that he is doing this because he personally has been effected as he knows some of his friends and family have it and because ""anything where my mind would deteriorate" is he said one of his greatest fears. He's seen the hardship it has caused in his own family."

Thank you for taking time to read this bye!

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Around 4:20 on November 7 sirens could be heard at a house on Delridge near STEM K-8. No one knew what the sirens were about so 2 eighth grade students went to investigate. The students came back later saying there was a man so high on marijuana that the cops had to be called.

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Maybe instead of saying “when all of sudden one of them gets hit in the face with a ball”  maybe you could say “when all of sudden one of them gets smacked in the face with a lightning speed ball” to make it seem more dramatic? Idkk

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insted of saying just small say somthing more descripdev like tiny or small in stacher or somthing like that.
re: by Quinn

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Within about 30 minutes of the 3-and-a-half-hour meet, a 9-year-old girl runs off the stage crying.

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I like your title
"Taunting out of hand!"

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It was probably pm, not am.

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Maybe show/explain what the other people's reactions were to the girl running off the stage was.

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I understand that you didn’t know the right date but what year was it? People could be confused about if it was last year or or other previous years.

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Mysteriously KitKat bars disappear. A young girl reported dozens of missing KitKat’s from her home only 2 days after Halloween.

On November 2nd ,2017 in Seattle, Washington at 8:30pm Kathryn Soria had entered her house and eaten her dinner. After she had walked over to her room and had begun to look for KitKat bars. She had looked through 3 bags of candy but could not find not one of her 42 KitKat bars. She asked her parents if they had eaten any and had asked her sisters.

Her family all had the same answers, ''No''

She did not believe them so she searched all around her house for KitKat wrappers. She had found nothing however the following morning she had entered her father's car to drive to school and found many KitKat candy wrappers in her father's car. Kathryn had ignored her father but he repeatedly said'' I am sorry but I will not buy anymore KitKat’s because these are unhealthy'' On the way to school. Kathryn leaves her father's car to go to school. As she leaves, her father laughs and pulls a KitKat bar from his pocket and eats it in front of her.

So that’s the mystery. Remember always protect your candy especially your KitKat's from the ones around you. Keep your most valuable possessions safe.

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Last Sunday at the Central Library in Seattle, a baby had a meltdown by the elevators on the tenth floor. The reason? The kid was crying because its parents where trying to save a book that the kid was ripping up, and the child didn’t like it.

I think it sounds repetetive in a bad way?

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Hungrybox is the winner of Smash Summit 5 in Los Angeles California as of november 5th, 2017. Today, it seems his tournament puff is unbeatable, as he has now won the last 6 major tournaments in a row with it. Hungrybox almost lost to Mango in the winners bracket, and caught up and won from a 2-0 score. Mango says “I’ve been coasting all year, but losing to hbox really pissed me off. Next time i’ll actually try.” Thank you to Mango for letting us interview you. You can now get back to your beer and twitch subs. Hungrybox won these winners finals over Armada, who was the previous champion of Smash Summit. Armada had won the last 4 Summits, which, as you may have guessed, is all of them. Summit 1 winners finals consisted of Armada and Mango, and the next 3 summits were Armada Vs Hungrybox. Although, this is the first time Hungrybox has won summit, and finally breaks the wall of victory that Armada has been building. After his win, Hungrybox gave a speech at the crowd mic by the commentators. He is not a very well liked player, to say the least, because of his slower and more patient playstyle. He says thank you for the support and curses at all of the people that hate him, crying all the while.

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Oh my gosh so hilarious, Nathan is such a rebel. Ha okay, i like your detail, you seem to remember this like it was yesterday😂

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If you know the “why” of the story it might be helpful to several readers.

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Looks nice

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wow what a good story about that tournament thank you for this wonderful religious awakening!

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At 10:35 in Louisa borne gymnasium 4th grades were hitting each other and kicking each other one student bit his tongue while playing volleyball set,spike and bump.Others kids were play with scouters

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The dog was barking and whining at the window until the other dog was gone, then stayed there for about 5 more minutes.

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A cat opened the door to a cupboard filled with pots and pans.

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Maybe change the sequence of events to explain what the child was doing first and then say they had a meltdown.

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maybe add an "at" at the start of the sentince

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Man in a Kia Soul is driving in the Alaska junction and he doesn’t turn on his car blinker and almost hits a black Toyota Tacoma TRD when turning. The car that almost got hit honked 7 times in a hate fueled rampage at the man who didn’t turn on his blinker. Is seattle filled with terrible drivers? Are people just over reacting to petty things?

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Cool that was a good story

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Maybe make longer for mor suspens

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the traffic on I-5 seemed to have passed by like a giant tidal wave just wept everyone away.

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Seattles wether has always been mysterious but this last week (16, November) it has been wild. On Monday at a residence house it was black a blowing wind up to 50 miles a hour. On Tuesday at Seattle public school; Stem many students commented on the on the stormy wether black as night. On Wednesday a resident was walking home from school and reported that the wind was light and the sky bright. How can we ever predict Seattle’s wether we may never know but it’s wether patterns are all over the place.

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Yesterday , in the Louisa Boren Stem K-8 Gym , the little kids  were having a great time testing their strength playing volleyball, riding scooters into things, bouncing off bouncy balls, and throwing flower sticks at each other.  Henry Geltz had observed was that most of these kids had a system they ran off of, if not playing a game. It went something like this; they slap someone ——> they run away ——> they faceplant ——> repeat. It was also quite entertaining watching them all dab so much. We spoke to one of these kids, named Dylan, who said “What” and then turned around and ran away. These kids also scared my colleagues multiple times. One, when a kid almost got clotheslined while running under the volleyball net, and when they rammed into each other while riding the scooters. It was obvious that these kids enjoyed hurting each other and making a fool of themselves.

(Work in progress)

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At 10:35 on November 8 at Louisa boren gymnasium 4th graders were hitting and kicking each other on student bit his tounge while playing volleyball the kids that played volleyball aren’t very good they don’t know how to spike,set and bump.Other kids were laying on the ground talking to friends on the sides and two kids ran into each other one pair got into a fight and one got a bloody nose at the end of class one kid was dabbing like crazy.

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Kewl m8

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She is Satan

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Blackout in Seattle

On November 13 2017 Seattle had a blackout due to violent rain and intense wind. Many electrical grids went out of power and that includes stop lights, on that night a stem student Ryanne Wiseman and her family where on their car ride home when the realized a huge intersection on Martin Luther king way was out. There cars coming from all ways driving freely and Ryanne’s mom had Ryanne’s 3 ½ month old brother in the car and Ryanne’s mother was very nervous to cross the intersection she wanted to turn soured but there was no going back now cautiously her mother drove across the intersection, they almost got hit 2 times! When they arrived safely across the intersection Ryanne explained her mother let out a huge breath of relief and continued to drive down the dark road. In case if any of you didn’t cross the West Seattle bridge on the 13th you would notice that the city usually bright and shining, was unusually dark.