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Hi Luisa
I think your presentation was so good. You used the outline, you did not read, your pronunciation and fluency was good, also the timing. I just saw a little mistakes like: you used the connector "By the way" so much. You wanted to talk in the past but you said "He beginning" instead of "He began". And I am not sure but I did not listen so much the use of the grammar with past intentions and  perfect modals. However, I like so much your presentation and more for your attitude.

Thanks
Jorge

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Hi Luisa,

You have shown a great attitude throughout the course.  You actively participate in class and try to do your best.  However, you need to work on the following:
1. pronunciation: you need to pay more attention to final sounds especially with verbs in past. Action plan: you need to send me a different voice recording everyday in which you read a text. Pick a different text everyday and read it recording your voice and send it to me, pay attention to final sounds.
2. Structures: monitor yourself when speaking and pay more attention to verb forms and the way you organize your ideas to avoid Spanglish constructions.
3. We need to make sure to work on giving a better performance on the platform on on this padlet tool.  I'll be here to help you.
Task: Good
Platform: Good

Regards,
Anderson

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Hi Luisa, I'm Valentina,
This is your feedback about the newsclip