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Fact 1:

The soil was not rich or thick in the New England Colonies.

Fact 2:

Africans were forced to work as slaves in the New England Colonies.

Strength:

Had good facts.

Suggestion:

Needed a few more pictures.

Speak louder

Could of had a time zone

Rating:

8.2/10

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Fact 1:John had two wives.

Fact 2:The soil is not very good.

Fact 3: squash's scientific name is cucurbita.

Strength: She had a Video.

Suggestion:Misleading photos.

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Fact 1: John Winthrop was elected in 1629.
Fact 2: There is a small amount of  Tobacco.
Strength:Everything was PHENOMENAL
Suggestion:none

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Fact 1:
John had 6 kids

Fact 2 :
They had bad soil
Strength:
everything
Suggestion:
nothing

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Fact 1:John Winthrop is the leader and had two wives that died.

Fact 2: Everyone had to go to church.

Strength: Good job on details!!!!!!

Suggestion: maybe set a time zone, but great job!

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fact 1~ The soil is not thick or rich in the New England Colonies

Fact 2~ Everyone in the town had to go to church on Sundays

Strength ~ Good voice

Suggestion~ NONE

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fact:corn is called maize
fact:they did logging and shipbuilding
strength:everything
suggestion:none

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Fact1~ You can do many fun things there. there are many traditions and aquariums.
Fact2~On every sunday they *HAD* to go to church .
Suggestion~.+*Slow Down A Little*+.
Strength~.+*Loud Voice*+.   .+*Details Great*+. .+*Plenty of Photos*+.

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Fact 1:
One of the leaders were John Winthrop.

Fact 2:
The New England colonies are made up of Connecticut, Rhode Island, Massachusetts, and New Hampshire.

Strength:
Nice Information.

Suggestion:
Speak a little bit louder.

Rating:
8.3/10

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Fact 1: john Winthrop was elected in 1629.
Fact 2: during the 1600's and 1700's, hundreds of slaves worked there.
good: facts, waiting for people to talk.
bad: louder voice level and a little more pic's.
rating: 8/10

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The New England Colonies

fact 1  John was married twice but both wives died.

fact 2  Most people lived by farming during the 1600 and 1700.

strength Great info and voice also pictures.

suggestion  Stick to the time period and what is possible.

Overall: 3
Not moving

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Fact 1: Lots of slaves were held in The New England Colonies.

Fact 2: You can go on The Freedom Trail in the New England Colonies.

Suggestion:

Strength: Love the video

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Fact 1: People in the New England Colonies had to go to church every Sunday.

Fact 2: In the New England Colonies, they had a lot of jobs that people could have.

Fact 3: Both of John Winthrop's wives died. It was tragic!!!!!!!!!!!

Strength: You had some great pictures in your presentation. You also had a great video.

Suggestion: Next time please speak up a little bit.

Overall: *********/********** stars.                                                      (9/10)

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Fact 1- John W. had a son named Henry.
Fact 2- They have different places to visit there now.
Strength- She had great pictures and a great video.
Suggestion- I have no suggestion great presentation.

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Fact 1: John Winthrop was elected in 1629.
Fact 2: Both of John Winthrop's wives died.
Strength: Great Pictures.
Suggestion: Speak Up

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Fact 1: corn is known as maize
Fact 2: some family's built their own houses
Strength: good pictures/Cesar words
Suggestion: nothing
Rating: 9/10

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Facts-
-The soil was not very thick or rich
-Their religious beliefs to live, work, and spend their free time
-Corn is called maize
-If you didn't go to church you would be banished from the town or church

Strength-
-Good Pictures
-Good Video
-Nice Information

Suggestion-
-Speak louder
-Speak more in first person

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Fact 1:John Winthrop was elected in 1629

Fact 2:Both of John's wife's died

Strength:None

Suggestion: Put in lots of pictures and facts.

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Fact #1:
John had six children.
Fact #2:
John's second wife died a year later.
Suggestion:
Speak up
Strength:
everything else was great.

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The New England Colonies

Fact 1:Corn is known as Maize

Fact 2:Most New England family's lived in one room houses

Strength:Had lots of pics

Suggestion:Add more info

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Fact 1: John Winthrop was the leader of the Massachusetts bay colony.

Fact 2:  The New England colony was not a good farming colony.

Suggestion: Stick to the time period.

Strength: Good information and good job speaking loud.

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Fact 1: John Winthrop was a leader of the Massachusetts Bay Colony.

Fact 2: Every Sunday, everyone in town had to go to church.

Strength: Lots of pictures and info.

Suggestion: Speak up a little bit.

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Fact #1: John Winthrop is a leader
Fact #2: Farmed trees and livestock
Strength: Very nice facts
Weakness: Please speak up

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Fact 1: John Winthrop was a leader of the Massachusetts Bay Colony.

Fact 2: In New England, people grow squash, beans, pumpkins, & corn.

Extra Fun Fact: Jobs in New England Colonies were fishermen, dock workers, sailors, shipbuilders, merchants, & artisans.

Strength: Amazing information, and informational pictures!

Weakness: None!

Overall: I give this presentation a 10/10! It's amazing! Keep up the great work!

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Fact 1: Squash's scientific name is Cururbita. (She changed the slide so sorry if it's spelled wrong.

Fact 2: John Calvin created Puratainism..

Suggestion: I have no suggestions she did very well with her facts and everything.

Strength: She did well with her transitions and facts.

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Fact 1 a leader was John Winthrop.

Fact 2 they grew pumpkins

Strength  had good pictures

Suggestion speak up

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Fact 1
John Winthrop was the first Governor of the Massachusetts Bay Colony.

Fact 2
In New England people grow squash, beans, pumpkins, and corn.

Strength
Great information
Nice pace
Great pictures
Great colors
It is awesome that you had a vocabulary page, as well as vocabulary through out the presentation!!!!!!!!
Great creativity!!!!!!
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Suggestion
Nothing

Overall, perfect presentation, 10/10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D

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