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Parker’s character was amazing. I love the part that the kid did not care if he messed up. I can not wait to hear more about his book.

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I like your story mason because your story has so much detail in it and I am excited to see what will happen next!😋😃😉

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Nolan a like your story because well you made it interesting and you explained  you story very well And your characters to.

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To Chloe,
I like that you took your time to tell your story.

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I liked how Reagen’s characters are sister and brother and the brother likes video game.

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I like how Hadley character because she can read minds and talk to animals .

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C J  I loved that you had so much description in your story for an example you said “ my heart was filled glee “. I thought that was really good .

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Stella I liked how you gave a lot of details about what your family is like and what you did once you found out your parents were gone.

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I like how in Regan’s main characters are opposites.

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To Hadley,
I love how instead of trying to do all of the years leading up to the time, you just said 10 years later.

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I like that Lilia had cool characters

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It was funny that in Carson Barry in his story he got chased by Russell the bully and he switch hem self with Mason

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I really like the subject that halston chose and I liked the words he chose. He talked fast when he needed to and slow when he needed to.

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I really liked Sean’s where The main characters friends are wanting to get him out of the video game not just leave him there.

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Wow Lucy I loved how in your story the beginning shows there is a routine of events caused by the characters, and I like how it all starts with a book and how they follow a map.

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I really liked how Peyton made the story exciting by a quick mystery when someone stole something.

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I Irene story is so detailed and it is interesting.

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I like how Sean did the action, and I like how Henry did the “years later.”

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I like how Brooklin added punctuation and didn’t put fragments or run-on sentences.

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I like how Kallie used detail in her story, and she put more then just I said she did like I shouted and I laugh and she Squeaked. I also like how she introduced her characters and not just said this is Aubrey the end she did not do that she showed detail.

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My partner was Harper P, and I loved how she made both of the sisters in her story forced to do something from the parents and realized that they really liked it at the end of your story. I also like how she used show don’t tell instead of just saying what they did. Her story seemed like it was made by an adult who has made several different books. I love everything about her story and I really liked it!

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I like your main event because it was creepy and I like creepy things. I also think that your character develops a little bit more than mine because he was afraid at the begging and afraid and a little bit use to the house and at the end I think he was afraid and use to the house a lot more I really like the story.

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My partner was Madeline, I like how she ended with story. And her characters had powers. And how the character could change into a cat. Madeline that ending was surprising and maybe you should make another novel, cause it was so good. And how they were super hero’s saving cats. Great job!

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I love Parker’s and Henry’s book Henry’s book’s have a lot of🙂there are a lot of😀😊🙂in his book’s and I really like the pictures

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I really like you plot for your Story and how they went into the graveyard.

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I like how Carson’s Gs continues the story🌯

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My partner was Brennan.
I loved her story because since she had multiple people in her story she kind of made me feel like I was in the story cause it was like EX: can you pass me the ketchup said Corinne, sure said Brennan.

your story was great!!!

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I like Bens characters. And the story line. 👍🏼

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I like your novel because it describes the characters and I also like your characters. I am going to get back on the Webex to see if mrs. rutter is there.

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This is what I like about Corinnes story.I like how they are explaining what there story is not about. I think that was a great idea!

Your story was amazing!

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I LOVED how your characters changed throughout your story. Personally, maybe you should make more novels more ofton! Great job!

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I LOVE your novel it was also so funny how you read it in a accent it was sooo funny and I liked how your characters developed it was very cool and creative how you wrote it.

Is down there how one of the dogs looked like?

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I like your novel it is the funnest thing I’ve ever heard .

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It was very mysterious and interesting.

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I liked the scary parts in your novel.

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I like how you developed your main character. Your novel was really intense and interesting. Also I like how you were really detailed on your novel.

Your NOVEL WAS AWESOME!!

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Good job benicio it was a great novel I I like how you told your story And your main event and your character named Chicken phill

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Good job benicio it was a great novel I I like how you told your story And your main event and your character named Chicken phill

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Loved It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kason

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You’r novel is okay😶😶😶😶😶

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I love 💕 the part in Aleyah’s story when Desi went to school

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Sailor, I love how you used cat-man because you love cats

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I love your story Mia! I like that you are doing a show don’t tell and how you are explaining the story!

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I liked how Finn used a evil doctor in his story

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I like Layla story because I wanted to read more of her story.So good story Layla.👍🏼

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I going to compliment. Peter it was very good 👍

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the novel was good because

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I like how Bennett talked about destroying stuff.

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D.J I liked how you used soda.Bennett I
like how you did a true story.

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I liked that Kelcey put that to save her family she had to answer riddles.

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I like how Dj used a soda as his main character nice job.And how he described his characters.

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I love how Ruby’s is so creative I love her story I love it

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I like how Sebastian borrowed dr. pepper man and used it as a bad guy

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Kaitlyn I REALLY liked your story and how there was a question when you left off I also like how it was like a fan fiction on the three little pigs!

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I like how Tyler tod us wut s.s.l wus👍🏼

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I liked how Noah C. gave me a description of his characters.

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I REALLY like how Maddie introduced her characters and how detailed she is.

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Delilah I love your story! I like how right at the begging you introduced all the main characters in your story! I also like how you said : “ oh no he already moved one of my pins!” It gives me interest and a idea of what’s happening when playing checkers!
Great job so far!

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I liked how Mason mentioned that recess saved him and that his math teacher was stricked

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i loved, loved, LOVED, how there is a lot of action in the begging, and i loved how she is doing a fan fiction of avengers. there is a lot of action, and it’s really cool!

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I love how Josie said” oh someone is called” me and thank took a break so that she could answer the phone! And your idea is terrific!!!

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I like how alyse has her story a fan fiction

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To fisher
I like that you said 7  8 9 one more 10 the game started. And I like it that you said sqeeing on the floor boards.

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I like how Brody introduced his carcters.

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