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Most importantly, does it make sense?

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Make the reader feel the story.

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Don't use text language!

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Put your ideas in a logical order, or in chronological order so you know the plot line.

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Take a step away from your first draft, then come back with clean eyes to revise.

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"You can't edit a blank page."

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Write cliches, and write some figurative language

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Look at every word while editing. Edit back to front, so you don't end up just reading the passage.

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Editing never ends until the book is published!

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Brainstorm what to include.

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Use an editor

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"If you fail to plan, you plan to fail."

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What do you want your readers to feel?

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Do the first few sentences make your readers want to keep reading?

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Sorry mrs edge

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Determine what they know
You cannot edit a blank page

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Engage your readers

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You need an editor

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First draft does not have to be perfect!

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Revise your work.

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Proofread it

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Define who is your target audience.
Capture audience's attention.
Write from your heart.
Connect with your reader.

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Decide what you'll say.
Decide how to say it.
Make the reader feel how you want them to.

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What do you want your audience to feel

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Make sure the first sentences hook the reader.

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Figure out what kind of writing is this

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NOAH E SMITH
Fix the freakin bones man.
DO IT

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First draft doesn't need to be perfect

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What is the tone?

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WHAT IS THE TONE?
-How does your audience feel?
-What do you want them to feel?

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How do they feel?
Brainstorm, Brainstorm and Brainstorm some More
Edit, and Edit some more
Put the plot in order
Beginning=Important

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The first sentences hook the reader.

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Don't be boring get the readers engaged!

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Think about your audience.

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Put yourself in the readers position

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Be to the point
Think before you write
Connect with readers

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What kind of writing is this?
What do they need to know?
How will you say it?
Does it make sense or is it confusing?