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Hi Moe,

I hope you’re doing well.I have some amazing news to tell you .Remember that my phone got wet and stopped working last week?

At first,l put my phone in a bag of rice,just like you said.But it doesn’t work,my phone still frozen.And then l decided to buy a new phone.Yesterday, l went to a phone shop and they having a lucky draw for customers. You won’t believe this , but l won the prize is (on) a trip to a tropical island!The trip sounds absolutely amazing. It’s 4 days (4 day) trip and includes flights and accommodation.

And what’s really exciting is that they have prepared some exciting activities like snorkeling and island tours. I (It) feels like a dream come true! I’m so excited to explore the beaches, enjoy the sunshine, and just relax for a bit.

But the best thing about getting there is that I’ll get to eat a lot of fresh seafood which I absolutely love! They mentioned the island is famous for its seafood dishes, especially grilled prawns, lobster, and fish cooked with tropical spices. I can’t wait to try everything. I imagine having a seafood with a sunset view, surrounded by the sound of waves and the fresh sea breeze. It’s going to be incredible! Maybe I’ll even bring back some souvenirs for you.

Let’s meet up before I go so I can tell you more about it and show you my new phone. Let me know when you’re free!

Yamin

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Very well done, dear Yamin. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. There are some errors in the highlighted areas.

Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 13/ 15 Marks

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Hi Myo Myo,

How have you been lately? It's been a while since we last caught up, and I've been thinking about you lately. I got some exciting updates and stories to share and can't wait to hear what's new with you too.

Last two weeks, I saw a promotional contest of (for) a trip to a tropical island. So, I and my friends did participate on (in) this through on (an) online agency. You won't believe that, but I've won that. I can have a trip to a tropical island!!

I know it'll be fascinating. You've already known how much I (am) keen on beaches. This trip will be on coming Friday. And what's more exciting is that we'll go there by plane. In addition to paying for (the) flight, they will also pay for a hotel. Thid (This) trip will be for 5 days.

The best thing is that we'll stay at a luxurious beachfront resort. How cool is it? There is a variety of activities such as snorkeling, scuba diving, paddleboarding and so on. Moreover, there (they) also have tour guides so I don't need to worry about losing my way. Besides daily breakfast, at hotel, there will be free dinner at (an) incredible restaurant.

I'm beyond excited and started planning all the things I want to do. I'm already imagining myself lounging on the beach, exploring the coral reefs, and indulging in the local cuisine. It's going to be an unforgettable experience. I can't wait to catch up with you and share all the excitement in person. Let's get together soon. Let me know if you have a free time. Take care and chat soon!

Aye Mya

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Great work, dear Aye Mya. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment.

Please check some errors in the highlighted area. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 11/ 15 Marks

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Hi Zin,

How are you? I’m beyond excited to share the biggest news. I’ve won a trip to Bali! You’ve probably heard about Bali, but let me tell you, this place is nothing short of paradise. Last month, I entered an online contest hosted by the AFAR organization. They asked participants to submit a creative photo that represented their “dream vacation,” so I decided to give it a try. Guess what? My entry won first place! I couldn’t believe my eyes when I read the email this morning. I can already imagine myself relaxing under palm trees and watching the stunning sunsets. The prize is incredible, a five-day trip with all expenses paid to Bali. It covers everything from flights and accommodations to some activities like snorkeling, hiking, and exploring famous beaches. And here’s the best part, I’ll be flying out next month before Christmas which is just in time to escape the chilly weather here and soak up the tropical sunshine. Have you been there before? If you have any travel tips or must-visit spots, I’d love to hear them.

Take care,

Chan Nyein Htoo

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Excellent, dear Chan Nyein. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment.

Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 13/ 15 Marks

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Hi Zin Zin,

I’m sorry I haven’t been in touch with you for a long time because I was very busy.

Last August,I had a job interview as a part time teacher in a language center.I have to send them my cv (CV) form and a video that includes information about me. And then the next day,they contacted me.You won’t believe this but they’ve offered me a job.

This is my first interview and also my first job.So I was so nervous at first.But I think I am better now.Actually I have no idea how I started working as a teacher and whom I have to teach.

And what really exciting is that I also have to teach kids.I think it’s really amazing to teach kids because they are so cute and funny at the same time.They can make me laugh a lot.(actually I am the one who is easy to laugh🤣)

During the class,the kids and I make (did) a lot of interesting activities together.But the best thing is that I got the reviews from my students like they love me the most .I am happy when they are happy.

What about you ?How are you and your family ?If we both are free ,let’s hangout together .I am looking forward to seeing you.

Yours lovingly,

Kyal Sin

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Good job, dear Kyal Sin. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. Please check some errors in the highlighted areas. Please double-check the essay. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 11/ 15 Marks

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Dear Azazel,

I've got some amazing news to share! I just found out that I won a trip to a tropical island! Bora Bora. I'm still in shock, to be honest.

It's located in French Polynesia, in the South Pacific Ocean. It's part of the Leeward Islands, which are a group of islands in the Society Islands. The trip will start in coming Saturday. I'll be there for a whole week. Apart from giving the cost of transportation, they'll also pay for my bungalow and meals. I really love to relax my mind among (with) the clarity of (the) water from that island. And I also found out that one of Bora Bora's iconic features is its overwater bungalows. These luxurious accommodations offer a unique and unforgettable experience, with private decks overlooking the lagoon. Imagine waking up to panoramic views of the turquoise water, (and) sipping your morning coffee while surrounded by tropical beauty.

And I also found that it's often considered one of the most romantic destinations in the world. Couples seeking a secluded and idyllic retreat can enjoy private dinners on the beach, sunset cruises, and spa treatments. The island's serene atmosphere and stunning scenery create the perfect backdrop for a memorable honeymoon or anniversary celebration. As you know that I'm a single, I'll go there alone and enjoy that romantic things by myself.

We must get together before I leave, so I can tell you all about the activities which I'll do in (on) that island. Would you like to meet up for dinner some time in this week? Let me know a day that suits you.

Lucifer

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Very well done, dear Ko Naing Oo Kyaw. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment.

Please check some errors in the highlighted area. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 13/ 15 Marks

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Hi Rosie,

I apologize for not being able to keep in touch with you recently but it's been a very hectic period for me lately.

I just want to share a fantastic update about my career with you.Last week, I had a job interview with Open Up, a construction company in Japan that I have been aiming to apply for a job position since my last year of study in university.This is my second attempt and I've prepared a lot unlike the previous try . You won't believe this but my relentless effort and hard work didn't betray me this time because the company just contacted (me) to offer me the job.

As you know ,I graduated with a degree in architecture,they offer(ed) me to design buildings and structures with updated and artistic ideas.Of course I will also incharge of considering factors like substainability, safety and compliance with building codes and regulations.And what's really exciting is that I've finally achieved my life goal of working as an architect in Japan.Unfortunately, the salary offer is below my expection. but they will cover my flight expenses and provide me with accommodation.

But, (the) best thing is that I am going to live in osaka (Osaka).I can't wait to try various japanese (Japanese) traditional foods and communicating (communicate) with native japanese (Japanese) speakers as I've also learn(ed) japanese (Japanese) to a fluent level.Visiting all of the exhibitions and amusement parks those (that) provide different experiences and thrills for Attack On Titan fans is prioritize(d) in(on) my bucket list when I am living there.

We must get together before I leave although I am busy planning for my relocating (relocation) these days.I know that you are (in) a very hectic business women but I would be very pleasure (pleased) if you could spare your time for a date with me so that I can hear detail(s) about marriage .Please ,let me know a day that suit(s) you so that I can book a dinner reservation at your favorite restaurant.

Your beloved,Shwe Zin

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Good work, dear Shwe Zin. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. There are some errors in the highlighted areas.

Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 12/ 15 Marks

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Hi phyo (Phyo),

I'm sorry I haven't been in touch for the past few days. It's been such a busy time. I hope you're doing well. I have some great news to share with you. Last two weeks, I found one of (the) travel companies on facebook (Facebook). They annouced (announced) that they were offering a chance to travel to places like Thailand, Switzerland, Dubai and a local tropical Island. We had to fill in a registration form. You won't believe that I won a chance to go to the local tropical island called the Mergui Archipelago, located in the sourthern region of Myanmar on the Andaman Sea. I'm starting my trip this coming Friday and will be there for five days. I'm so excited. What's really exciting is that they're planning to fly us there by plane. Can you believe it? I've never flown before.

The best thing is that, apart from paying my flight, they're covering the cost of (my) hotel stay and providing all my meals. And you know what's more fascinating thing is the Mergui Archipelago is one of Myanmar's most famous tropical destinations, know (known) for its pristine white sand beaches and marine life. I can't wait to relax on the sandy beaches and swin (swim) in the clear blue water, though, as you know, I can't swin (swim). Visiting a place like this has always a dream of mine to help eliminate stress. It not just about relaxing mentally but also taking a physical break. It truly feels like a dream come true.

Right now, I'm busy packing. I feel so unsure about what to take. I want to bring so many things. When I arrive, I'll make sure to take lots of pictures and enjoy as much seafood as I can, you know how much I love seafood. I can't wait to share the details with you during my vacation. It would be amazing if you could come along too. I'll keep you posted about everything I do and can't wait to catch up soon.

We must get together before I leave. So can you help me packing and wound you like to meet up for dinner in my home on Wednesday? Let me know free time that suits you.

Stella

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Good job, dear Stella. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. Please check some errors in the highlighted areas. Please double-check the essay. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 9/ 15 Marks

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Hi, Sarah,

I am sorry I haven't been in touch for the past few days, but it's been a very busy time.

On Tuesday, I had a job interview with Tr Sanda, the international school in Yangon. Then I had to do a medical test. You won't believe this, but they've just rung to offer me the job!

I really like that school. It sounds really good- they want me to work as a junior assistant teacher. And what's really exciting is that they also want me to work in Primary 2 to understand how to handle the primary students.

But the best thing is that they are going to give me a good salary. And they're also will give us a training with local trainer and foreign trainer too. I am sure I will be able to do it with so many homework. And what about you? Would like to try like me? If so you can contact me whenever you want.

Yours,

Mee Mee

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Hi Rachel

I hope u are doing great there. I have some exciting things to share with u guys that I've just started working in a restaurant.

As u know, we certified from (in) kitchen class together and I was looking for a job in kitchen industry. Now I'm working as a kitchen helper and my role involves assisting the chefs,keeping the kitchen organized,preparing for meals and making sure everything runs smoothly in (the) kitchen. It's incredible that I got (have) lots of experience so far and knowledge like HAZARD,which is any biologically,chemically, or physically that may cause food to be unsafe for customers.

My life goal is to open a restaurant and I feel like I've already started my journey as a first step.I'm learning so much every single day like basic techniques of cooking and what is the right way to use kitchen equipment s. The energy and creativity I got in the kitchen are amazing.

Apart from having to work for 10 hrs, I think I'm in the right place. Every Sunday is the rest day. Our chefs are excellent and the best thing is that we can inspire them watching how they handle step by step.Beside(s) the food we prepare is absolutely delicious.

I would like to get together with you asap and I'll tell you about my job in detail. I'd like to hang out with you this week if you have some time or let me know when you're free.

PTK

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Well done, dear Phyo Thura. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment.

Please check some errors in the highlighted area. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 12/ 15 Marks

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Hi Amora,

I'm sorry I haven't been able to reply (to) your last email. My schedules are very tight these days. I can't even have enough time to spend on social media.

Let me tell you where I'd been during the last Thadingyut holidays. You won't believe this, but my parents surprised me and my sister.

Actually, I'd been thinking like it might not be ok to go anywhere during these holidays. And what's really exciting is that they gave us the air tickets to travel to Yangon. My heart were bouncing so fast as soon as I saw the tickets. Oh, I'm about to forget our main reason for this trip is to pay homage to our grandparents. My parents said that we're gonna stay at my uncle's house in North Dagon for three to four days and visit famous places in Yangon.

At first, we went (to) our maternal grandparent's house to pay homage. Then, we came back to (my) uncle's house and spend times by cooking, eating together, (and) visiting famous places like Shwe Dagon Pagoda, Times City, and many more. A day before we returned home, we paid homage to aunty and uncle. But, the best thing is that they gave us a lot of pocket money as well as our grandparents. I was thrilling (thrilled) to count them. Ha Ha, just kidding. They also brought us to Seafood City Hot Pot to treat lunch. The food was so delicious and I enjoyed lobster the best. We had a whale of (a) time in Yangon!

I wanna see you very soon. Let me know if you're free coming weekends. Let's make a video call and hang out together. Bye!

Sharon

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Such an interesting work, dear Yin Yin. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. There are some errors in the highlighted areas.

Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 13/ 15 Marks

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I'm sorry I haven't been in touch with you for (a) long time because in these days I've been very busy with my new job that's why I didn't call you.

I had finished my job interview. I've got a new job that's (a) page admin. It's about replying to customer(s) and explaining skincare and cosmetics products how to use, where did each product apply in and when to use them. In addition, it's also include maintaining and managing a page and responding to messages and comments and answering product inquiries and managing posts, events and jobs.

I applied (for) this job because I'm free at home and I also wanted to work. My home has wifi. In addition, I also have ooredoo bill. When (the) light (is) off, I use outside internet.

This job is really great and have (has) so many interesting things. I can learn about skincare and cosmetics products from that job. Also we can learn what kind of product people like and dislike.

The owner is kind and patient. Apart from giving me a great salary, she is also giving to pay me a bonus. The other admins also exist. They live in an apartment provided by the owner because they're came from village. This apartment is owner own. She gave her apartment to stay worker who came from far (away). Besides giving to stay (in) the apartment, she's also giving the food.

I want to meet you because I miss you dear. Would you like to come (to) my home in (the) coming weekend (?). Let me know a day that suits you.

May Hnin

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Greatly written assignment, dear May Hnin. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. Please check some errors in the highlighted areas. Please double-check the essay. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 11/ 15 Marks

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Hi Yati,

I'm sorry I haven't been in touch for the past few days. I've been busy on these days.

This Friday (Ta Sang Mone full moon day), my family will donate to nuns.The donation stuff are (is) rice, oil, salt and some money. We'll donate the most basic things for an ordinary person. There're 300 nuns in our donation list.

The founder of this donation is my Auntie Lay but not only her but also my mom, my mom's friends and our neighbours are included too. My mom gonna offer a thousand kyat to each nun. Her friends will provide some packs of detergent.

One of my neighbours ordered 30 pair of white slippers in order to give 30 nuns. I know there's 300 nuns. But she can't afford for all of them. And what's really exciting is that the 300 nuns have to draw lots for the slippers. Among them, only thirty lucky nuns will get theirs.

The others also prepare the nun uniforms. The nuns have to draw lots again. I think it's quite fun to draw lots.For me, drawing lots would be very exciting.

The ceremony will start at 6 a.m. The nuns will make a long queue and people will give their donation stuff to them one by one. And it will end at 8 a.m. Yes, it's only for two hours. But the best thing is that we will treat the nuns with Coconut milk noodles after the ceremony.

And then we've invited a monk to give us a great speech. After that(,) the time is almost noon. We also have many guests to have their lunch. There's a monetary right In front of our house. Yes, we'll treat our guests there.

There'll be rice and various kinds of dishes. Some people don't eat pork and some don't eat beef either. That's why we have to prepare various main courses.

I'm writing this letter because I miss you. It's been a while that we didn't see each other. We must get together. Would you like to come to our donation party on Friday? Let me know if you can't come. I hope you can.

Htar

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Good work, dear Htar Htar. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment.

Please check some errors in the highlighted area. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 12/ 15 Marks

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I'm sorry for my absence to keep in touch with you these days. Now, I have to tell you a good news. I've won an air ticket to go a trip to a tropical island, called Naung Oo Phee. It's located in the coast of Myanmar. I won it when I bought gold at a jewelleshop last week. I am going to visit there for three days in March. I'm sure that it makes me interesting (interested) and happy because I have never been to any island yet. Now, I have a chance to get to the Naung Oo Phee Island and it's my first experience of visiting a tropical island. I hope that the trip makes me pleasant and it will be a good memory for me. If you have time , please tell me about you. How is your day going? I hope you are well and everything is OK for you.

Best wishes,

Hay Mahn

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Well-written assignment, dear Hay Mahn. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. There are some errors in the highlighted areas. Overall, well done.

Total: 11/ 15 Marks

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Hi, Linda

It's been such a busy time.I hope you're doing well with your studies. It's been a long time since I haven't been in touch with you.I'm sorry for that. I did a social media detox for a while due to some reason s. During that time, I spent time by trying new things that will be useful for the future.

At that time, I got contacted with one of my cousins who is currently study (studying) abroad while doing some freelancing jobs as well as volunteering ones. I got lots of interests about them and asked some advice s from my cousins. Long story short, I applied (for) some jobs. I have to notify some informations and tests. You won't believe this, but they're just rung (running) to offer me a job. And what's really exciting is that they're a local brand based from (in) our country. However, they want me to work on things like promoting their brands and marketing. They also want me to think of ideas for new products as well as busines (business) expansion.

But the best thing is that I can work wherever I want to through online. I'm looking forward to getting lots of experiences from there. Also, I can write my experiences to (in) my portfolios as well.

I got every Sunday as a rest day including public holidays. So, let's meet up in person when you got (have) free time. Let me know a day you can hang out with me. See you soon.

Pyae

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Great job, dear Pyae. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment.

Please check some errors in the highlighted area. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 12/ 15 Marks

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Hi Andrew,

I haven't been written an email to you for a month. I'm deeply sorry Andrew. Cause I 'm buried in studies. I hope you will understand my situation. Start from (Starting) today, I will write an email to you twice a month.

In December I have a trip to Maldive. It will be the wonderful trip that I'm (have) always dream(ed) about. It is the (a) free trip and I 'm not paying any extra charges. You won't believe that I got (a) Maldive ticket from (a) lucky draw.

One day,I bought Yum Yum noodle(s) from One stop mart (Stop Mart) which have (had) (a) lucky draw. In lucky draw it includes (a) car, phone, trip and so on. At first,I didn't know it has (had) (a) lucky draw. One night,I was a bit hungry and made a noodle soup by myself. When I opened Yum Yum noodle ,I found a paper .It was (a) lucky draw.I don't believe my eyes that I'm the winner for (of) (the) Maldive trip .I'm really shocked and surprised for (about) it. I think I'm the lucky one in the whole entire world.

Let's hang out after my trip.I bought some present(s) from Maldives for you.Have a good day Andrew.

From Khoon

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Well-written assignment, dear Khoon. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. Good job. Please check some errors in the highlighted areas. Please double-check the essay. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 10/ 15 Marks

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Dear Tsuki ,

I’m writing this letter cause we’ve not been kept (keeping) in touch since you’ve set off abroad. So, how’s your school life there? I see that you might be busy with your academic stuff, but I can always see your status updates on Instagram. I believe Hungary is a nice place. I wish I could be there with you. You know, I always have (had) a  desire to settle down in a European country, but guess what, I have some exciting news. I bet you’re going to love it.

Do you remember the guy who has taken the photos of me for any of my photoshoots? I did get a job cause of him!God, I still can’t believe it. It’s kind of like a coincidence. We were talking about a photoshoot that would take place as of my birthday celebration. I showed him a sketch of the outfit I’m going to wear on that day. He praised me with the line, “That is pretty impressive, and  you should consider being a stylist or what?” And I said, “Maybe if you could help me,”and then in a sudden surprise, he mentioned, “ I know a stylist. She is very talented, and maybe you can work for her as an assistant.”Then I said, “Okay….”, in a sarcastic way as I thought he was kidding at first. But what is unexpected is that after the photoshoot ,he really introduced me to her. At that moment, I was really shocked. I can’t even believe my own senses. She gladly told me that she currently needs an assistant and I can work with her if I will. You know what! I said YES. She is so kind and smart. The experience working for her is definitely rewarding. I have learnt a lot of knowledge and tips about fashion from her. She also teaches me how to handle taking responsibility for anything. And I guess I should at least thank the universe because I got a job that I even didn’t apply for. I have done some manifestation to become a part of the fashion industry. It eventually worked out. I also have decided to do the very best to grab every opportunity coming towards me. So that I think I had the best photoshoot ever. Those photos could give me a feeling of satisfaction because of not only the unique outfit design of my personal stylist but also his talented skill in photography. And I still wonder how he could see the potential in me. And I badly missed you whenever I’m thinking about it cause you have always helped me with my makeup and I have to handle all that makeup stuff although I am not a professional in doing make-up.

By the way, I’m looking forward to hearing your wonderful story in Hungary. I’m also manifesting to be able to study abroad one day. I hope it’s going to work out. That’s all with my writing. See ya, maybe later.

Bestie forever,Dawn

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Excellent work, dear Lynn. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. Please check some errors in the highlighted areas. Please double-check the essay. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 11/ 15 Marks

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Hi Helix,

It's been a long time since I haven't been in touch. I'm sorry about that. I did a social detox for a month. During a social break, I read many newspapers and watched TV at home.

At that time, one of my friends informed me there was a job fair at AIA, an insurance company. So, I went there with my friends and got a job at AIA as an internship suddenly became my dream. So, I applied for an internship as an entry-level.

You won't believe this but I got my internship at the marketing department. And what's really exciting is that they offer me a paid internship.Apart from my salary, they are going to give me a scholarship to study abroad if I do well. But the best thing is that I can use everything I learned at university as a business student at work. I'm also looking forward to getting lots of work experience there.

I would like to get together before I work. Let me know a day that you can hang out with me.

Thin

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Excellent work, dear Thit Sar. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. Please check the punctuation rule in the highlighted area. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 12/ 15 Marks

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Hello Taki,

It’s been a long time since I’ve been in touch with you. I hope you are doing well with your studies. I have some good news to share with you.

You won’t believe this - I got high marks in the HSK 3 exam (Chinese Language Exam)! As I’m interested in the Chinese language, I really focused on my studies. Initially, I thought learning Chinese would be easy but it turned out that learning Chinese is like an endless journey because you have to practice writing Chinese characters endlessly.

As I realized that I’m really weak in writing and reading skills, I repeatedly practiced writing Chinese vocabulary so that I could remember and improve my reading. Moreover, I practiced pronunciation by watching some Chinese dramas to improve my listening and speaking skills. As a result, I was able to answer well in the exam and I passed with high marks.

Now, after the exam, I’ve planned to rest at home for a week without studying Chinese and then I’ll continue my studies. I’m planning to take the HSK 4 exam in December 2025.

That’s all about my good news. I’d love to hear some good news from you, too. Let’s hang out together when you have free time.

Best wishes,

Nway Nway Aung

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Very well done, dear Nway. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. No minor or major errors are found. Overall, fantastic.

Total: 12/ 15 Marks

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Hi Thin,

I’m sorry I haven’t been in touch for the past few days, but it’s been a very busy time.

On Monday, I had a job interview with (a) part-time tutor. Then the next day I had to do a practical test. You won’t believe this, but they’ve just rung to offer me this job!

I’ve just finished my honors degree recently. I wanted to be a part-time tutor when I’m attending (pursing) master degree because I want to get practical experience and good in touch with professors. And what”s really exciting is that they also want to get (give) me this chance. The job offer is very generous. This job can get (give me the) opportunity to step (take) more steps for my future. Apart from giving me a really good opportunity, there has (is) also a chance to stay nearly with (near to) lectures and professors. I’ve good communication skills. In addition, I also have a positive attitude towards my work.

But the best thing is that I’m going to study abroad for my broader studying (studies). The country I really want to join for my broader studying (studies) is (the) USA. Besides the studying, I’m also want to know (the) traditional culture of this country and I also want to get high salary job in (the) USA. So, I’m trying to improve my English speaking skill(s).

We must get together before I work, so you can tell me your spare time. Would you like to meet up for lunch some time in coming Sunday? Let me know a day that suits you.

Myo

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Great work, dear Kay Khaing. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. There are a lot of errors in the highlighted areas.

Total: 9/ 15 Marks

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Hi Strong,

I am really sorry for not keeping in touch with you for a long time.Because I had an exam and I have been absolutely exhausted due to a lot of school work.

Two months ago,I bought something from jewellery shop so that I got a coupon which will be announced in next two months.Thus,they announce the winners who win car, motorcycle and so on in this month.You will never believe this but I won a ticket of (for) a trip.

It is very good for me and I am thrilled to go and to take a rest.But what is really exciting is that two people can go on a trip for one ticket.I was very happy after hearing that sound and I remembered you suddenly without any hesitation.I reckoned you will be delighted after knowing this like me.That is why I decided to send you an email after taking an exam.

The best thing is that a trip is to a tropical island.I want to try their local food when I go there.Besides the food,I also want to try swimming in there.By finding the tropical island over online,the place is very beautiful and good to take (for taking) photos.

By the way, please inform me before (the) deadline whether you can go or not with me.The deadline is on 27 June.So I will be waiting for your good reply.Have a sweet day.

Kyi Phyu Khin

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Well done, dear Kyi Phyu. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment.

Please check some errors in the highlighted area. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 11/ 15 Marks

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Hey chi (Chi),

First of all, you won't believe this, but I've got my first full-time job! Actually it have been almost a month now. I am sorry that I haven't been in touch with you for the past few months. I have been really busy.

As you know, I've got my barista certificate in this early year. After that, I even attended the Latte-art class and got another certificate. You might not know that actually I tried to get a student-visa for Singapore. Unfortunately, I got rejected and I am waiting for the cool-down time. Meanwhile, I have decided to try to get a full-time job as a barista. You know what, I got it on my first-ever interview! It was at Cafe-Amazon and I was so happy at that time.

But the sad thing is that I am not allow to do Latte-art T_T.

I have to follow their rules so, it can't be help. If you ask me "how is it", I would say "meh, not bad...I think". I did apply the job because I wanted the experience and I would like open up my own Cafe one day. It is a bit tiring everyday but I am still managing. Oh! by the way, I got this cup from being over a month employee.

I got rest days in every Sunday and also in (on) public holidays. So, let's catch up in person when you got (have) the (some) free time. I hope you are doing well too. Hit me up ahead though!

Best wishes,

Thaw Zin.

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Great work, dear Thaw Zin. You have covered all of the necessary information in your assignment. You have successfully finished the Unit 2 assignment. Please check some errors in the highlighted areas. Please double-check the essay. Overall, keep up the good work, dear!

Total: 10/ 15 Marks