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1. INFORMAL

- A GREAT NUMBER OF/ NUMEROUS students find it hard to secure employment after graduation.

3. CHÚ Ý KHI SỬ DỤNG UNDOUBTEDLY/ CERTAINLY CHO NHỮNG CÂU CHỈ QUAN ĐIỂM

- In my view, starting school at the age of five is (undoubtedly) better for students.

4. IDIOMS NÊN SỬ DỤNG TRONG SPEAKING HƠN LÀ WRITING

- It would be better for children to learn how to BE INDEPENDENT stand on their own feet from a young age.

5. TRONG WRITING HẠN CHẾ DÙNG WILL → ARE MORE LIKELY

MAY/ MIGHT/ COULD/ CAN

- Certainly, diligent students ARE MORE LIKELY TO will succeed in their future careers.

6. HẠN CHẾ DÙNG NGÔI “YOU”

- It is important FOR EACH INDIVIDUAL to be diligent in THEIR work in order to achieve success in THEIR career.

7. PHÂN BIỆT TROUBLE (UNCOUNT) - DIFFICULTY - PROBLEM (COUNT) - ISSUE

-> Many students often FACE trouble / difficultIES in finding job opportunities after graduation.

8. CẤU TRÚC BE ASSOCIATED WITH

ASSOCIATE WITH (V)

-> Cultivating multiple artistic proficiency in school IS associateD with a host of rewarding advantages.

9. USE APPROPRIATE QUANTIFIERS

vast amount of students

10. FIND STH + ADJ

11. PHÂN BIỆT CAREER/ JOB

A LARGE NUMBER of students find it troubleSOME/ CHALLENGING to seek JOBS/ SECURE CAREER after graduation

12. CẤU TRÚC IT IS + ADJ + (FOR SB) TO DO STH

13. KHÔNG VIẾT TẮT TRONG WRITING

- Studying arts in schools offers some beneficial creativity. → BENEFITS

- It's various advantages to pursuing an artistic major. (RW)

--> IT IS BENEFICIAL/ ADVANTAGEOUS FOR STUDENTS TO PURSUE ART IN SCHOOL

14. DÙNG SAI SYNONYMS

CHĂM CHỈ : HARD-WORKING = ??? DILLIGENCE \

INDUSTRIOUSNESS

(N)HARD WORK

as·si·du·i·ty Assiduousness

PUPILS VÀ STUDENTS

15. USE NOUN PHRASE

- The role of harD work is vital for career success in one’s

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CHĂM CHỈ: DEDICATED & DILLIGENT

KHÓ KHĂN : STRUGGLES, ADVERSITY (ADVERSE IMPACTS), HURDLES

LỢI ÍCH : POSITIVES, REWARDS, GAINS, UPSIDES

THÀNH PHỐ LỚN URBAN HUB

THÀNH CÔNG TRONG SỰ NGHIỆP: CAREER/ VOCATIONAL/ OCCUPATIONAL/ PROFESSIONAL TRIUMPH

TỰ LẬP

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Chăm chỉ : hard working (a), diligent (a), industrious (a)

Khó khăn: difficulty (n), obstacle (a), trouble (n), HURDLE (N)

Lợi ích : benefit (n). upside (n), advantage (n)

Thành phố lớn: big city, large city, urban AREA center.

Thành công trong sự nghiệp : succeed in career, succesSful career.

Tự lập: independence, do sth on your own

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Chăm chỉ : Hard-working, Industrious

Khó khăn : Difficult, tough,

Lợi ích : Benefit, Advantage

Tp lớn : big city, urban AREA

Thành công trong sự nghiệp : Successful career,

Tự lập : Independence, self-reliant

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industriousness, diligence, hard work

difficult, challenging, troublesome, arduous

beneficial, advantageous, constructive COMMENT

mega city, metropolis, big city, urban area

professional success, career success, career achievement

independencE, self-reliance

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1. Cham chi: Diligence, industriousness, hard work.

2. Kho khan: Difficulty, obstacle, trouble, problem

3. benefit, advantage,

4. metropolis, big city, megalopolis

5. success, achievement, accomplishment

6. independence, , self-reliance

7. INDIVIDUALISTIC LIFESTYLE - individualism

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1. Chăm chỉ:

perseverance, dedication, hard work dedicated, Diligent, Industrious

put in effort

2. Khó khăn

Challenge, obstacle

Face challenges

3. Lợi ích

Benefit, advantages

be beneficial to

4. Thành phố lớn:

big city, metropolis, urban area

5. Thành công trong sự nghiệp:

Career success

Professional success

Success in one's career

Professional achievement

Career advancement

Occupational success

6. Tự lập:

Self-reliance

Autonomy SELF-DETERMINATION

Self-sufficiency

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1. CHĂM CHỈ

hard work, dilligence , labor

intensity, difficult

2. KHÓ KHĂN

difficulty, challenge (challenging),

3. LỢI ÍCH

benefit, advantage, profit

4. THÀNH PHỐ LỚN

big city, large town, large urban area

5. THÀNH CÔNG TRONG SỰ NGHIỆP

career success,

6. TỰ LẬP

independence, self-reliant

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Chăm chỉ:

hard-working

diligent

Khó khăn:

difficult

problematic

trouble some

denmanding

Lợi ích:

benefit

advantage

gain

Thành phố lớn:

big city

large cuty

Thành công trong sự nghiệp:

succes in career

happiness in career

Tự lập:

independence

ability

self-government

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chăm chỉ: Diligent, Hard-working, Industrious, Laborious

khó khăn: Difficulty, Challenge, Obstacle

Lợi ích: Benefit, Advantages, value

Thành phố lớn: urban city, metropolis, major city, large city.

Thành công trong sự nghiệp: Achievement, Accomplishment, success

Tự lập: independent, autonomous, self-sufficient.

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chăm chỉ: studious( adj), laborious( adj)

khó khăn: Tough(adj), stiff (adj)

lợi ích : beneficial (adj) helpful(adj), profitable(adj), valuable(adj)

thành phố lớn: metropolis(n), urban(n)

thành công trong sự nghiệp:

tự lập: independent (adj), self-reliance(n),

It is not easy for young people to find a job in metropolitan. Because the lack of demand in the labour market and insufficient experience in the adolescent. In addition, the proliferation major in big cities has become the main reason which make job market become more competitive.

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Không dễ cho đa số các bạn trẻ khi tìm việc làm ở các thành phố lớn.

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It is not easy for the young TO secure jobs in urban hub because of the competitive market. Annually, a significant amount of people from all ages have proclivity for/ INCLINE TO/ TEND TO gathering in the big cities with a view to finding jobs/ WISHING TO FIND A STABLE AND FULFILLING EMPLOYMENT, as a result, this create an excess of staffs or positions.

LIMITED VACANCY/ POSITION

--> JOBLESS/

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With social becoming quickly/ RAPID DEVELOPMENT OF THE SOCIETY, competition and demand finding talent employees in companies would increase.

However, the lack of experiences and knowledge of young people can limit their job opportunities in urban bussiness.

Consequently, unemployed rates in metropolis would be more than before/ that creatE burden to the the society significantly

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The majority of young adults find it hard to seek jobs in large urban areas. (LINKING WORDS) The reason is that/ THIS CAN BE ATTRIBUTED TO THE FACT THAT there are a large number of employees living in big cities WHILE the opportunities are limited, so it could lead to FIERCE/ SEVERE (ADJ) competition between CANDIDATES individuals to seek the best jobs. In addition, the requirementS for employment in a large town is ARE quite high, so it is highly challenging for young people to afford a WELL-PAID/ DESIRABLE(ADJ) job.

AFFOR

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In big cities, EMPLOYERS TEND TO require people to have a lot of experience TO.... , so most young people are fresh out of school and don't have much experience, so finding a job is difficult.

CONSENQUENTLY

In big cities, EMPLOYERS TEND require NUMEROUS PRACTICAL experience AND KNOWLEDGE FROM PARCICIPANTS, so most young people WITHOUT FIRST-HAND SKILLS CAN NOT MEET ...... do not have much experience.

However, they can find another job but it may not be commensurate with their qualifications.

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With the labor market IS becoming increasingly competitive, it is difficult for most young people to find a job in the metropolises. More and more jobs are demanding a high level of education, in addition with essential soft skills such as fluency in a second language and proficiency in USING PROGRAMMES SUCH AS Word, Excel. (IMPACTS) => AS A RESULT. The lack of important job knowledge among young people, especially fresh graduates WHO LACK IMPORTANT JOB KNOWLEDGE AND PRACTICAL SKILLS FACE TEND TO FACE SEVER DIFFICULTIES IN searching employment when they cannot compete against with long-time employees.

Furthermore, life in big cities is marked by a high standard of living , which often results in young people giving up easily when searching for jobs.

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In urban hubs, many people are looking for jobs, making it difficult for young people to stand out AMONG...... .

In addition, the competitive job requires young individuals to display unique skills and qualifications to acquire a job.

Moreover, the high cost of living adds layer of challenge. Consequently, they may struggle to afford expenses while job hunting.

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Finding a job in urban cities can be challenging for young people due to the high level of competition, as numerous candidates often apply for the same positions. Additionally, the cost of living in these major cities can be significantly higher, making it difficult for young job seekers to afford housing and other necessities while they search for employment.

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It is challenging for the youth to secure career in urban hubs. The primary obstacle is that young people have to seek jobs in highly competitive labour market where they HAVE TO compete AGAINST other competentS and qualified candidates. This can lead to an increase in the youth unemployment rate. and ultimately, impose pressure on the government due to unemployment benefits.

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Large cities offer various jobs with higher earning potential which increases competition for available positions. Employers in big cities may prefer candidates with more experience, making it difficult for young people who are just starting their careers.............

Consequently, it is struggling to afford the cost of apartments and services in huge urban.

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It is not easy for the young to secure jobs in urban hub because of the competitive market. Annually, a significant number of people from all ages incline to gather in the big cities, wishing to find a stable and fulfilling employment. As a result, this create an excess of staffs WHILE THE JOB MARKET ONLY HAS A limited NUMBER OF vacancy. Therefore, young adults are likely to be at risk of jobless if they travel to urban area to find jobs.

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With rapid of the development ,competition and personal demand in companies would increase.

However, the lack of experiences and knowledge of young people can limit their job opportunities in THE JOB MARKET.

Consequently, unemployed rates in metropolis would INCREASE SIGNIFICANTLY, WHICH ULTIMATELY CREATE burden ON the the society

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In big city, many people are searching for jobs,

Furthermore, as the job market is BECOMING INCREASINGLY competitive, people WILL HAVE TO to show special skills and qualifications to get a job. THEREFORE, THIS CAN BE CHALLENGING FOR young people to stand out amidst the SKILLFUL/ EXPERIENCED CANDIDATES crowd.

Additionally, high living costs make job hunting even harder, as many young people struggle with expenses while looking for work.

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HAPPINESS

1 Are you a happy person?

maintain positive outlook

moments of sadness and dissatisfaction

content with ...

2 What usually makes you happy?

3 What makes you feel unhappy?

4 Do you think people in your country are generally happy people?

Economic stability, access to health care and education

remote area/ underprivileged are

5 Can money make people happy?