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Caeman, the things you had in the actually slides were very good, there were plenty things to write and learn about to. However there were no actual photos of you and your family, there were only stock photos. I'm sure they would have loved to be in your slides and we would have loved to see all your pets! This slide show was still great and awesome to learn more about you. Best of luck to you and your writing carrier! I'd give you a B+

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Caeman, I saw your slide and I think its good. It was very good, but my improvement will go find pinchers of you on the internet, if you don't have a phone. I been seeing to many slides with the same pitchers and not enough detail towards a lot of your pinchers, but overall, its a good grade, a 94% A+.

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       CALEB HUTCHINGS                                                                               Caeman, I loved your video because it was so good. It was so well edited and you followed directions well. I shouldn't be critiquing someone else's work considering the fact that I didn't follow directions. Anyways, I liked the music and it was a very good fit for the video. The length was perfectly on time. My favorite part  was when you showed all your pets. Very cool. I'd give you an A

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       CALEB HUTCHINGS                                                                               Caeman, I loved your video because it was so good. It was so well edited and you followed directions well. I shouldn't be critiquing someone else's work considering the fact that I didn't follow directions. Anyways, I liked the music and it was a very good fit for the video. The length was perfectly on time. My favorite part  was when you showed all your pets. Very cool. I'd give you an A

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Jonah, I liked you're pitchers that you chose, however, I believe that you could have chose a different color with you're text slides, overall I believe if I were a teacher I would give you a b+

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Jonah, I really enjoyed your video. You had very good pictures you put on you video. But I think you could've changed your text color where you could read it. But overall it was pretty well I give you and A

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Jonah, I really liked your video, my favorite part was when you added the video of you falling down during the baseball game. I really think you could have changed the color of the text though because it blended in with the pictures so I could barely read what you wrote. Although I truly enjoyed watching your video. I would give you a 90% A!

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Caleb, after enjoying your slideshow, I think Mrs. Jeanne will take off on your project because it wasn't a video and it had no music. But enjoyed your creativity. My favorite part was your picture you put of Mrs. Hollie on there. Overall I would give you an B -By Wyatt

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Kasen, I really liked your video and the pictures you chose! However there were many spelling errors and poor use of punctuation. I think that you deserve a overall grade of 80

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Hey Kasen, I see you did a good job on your slide. You put good detail on your project, but the things that I see is not a lot of word capitalized, also the word "GLASS," is," GRASS." Overall, ill give it a 92% A.

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Kasen, I really enjoyed your video. My favorite part was the burnout even though you didn't do it. One thing you could have done was go back and see if they had any errors because you miss spelled grass. I would give you an A.

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Wyatt, I liked you're pictures that you chose as well, I did see some spelling errors but no one can spell every word correct so I still think you did good. overall I think you deserve to get a b-

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Dude Wyatt I loved your video because of the pictures and how well you followed directions and in comparison to others, yours really stood out to me. I'd give you an A as well.

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I think really enjoyed your video. I really like how you like to ride four-wheeler and do crazy things on them. But my overall review is a A because i think you did a good job on making your video in 3 hours.

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Cameron, I liked your video and pictures. I liked how you used all the pictures. I liked the pictures of me and you. One thing you could have done better on is not using the same pictures more than twice. I would give you a A.

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Kasen, your slide show video it self was great. There was plenty of photos or your friends and family. However there were also plenty of grammatical errors. Most the time it was very difficult or impossible to know what you were talking about. I'd assume Mrs.Jeanne would give you a C from all the grammar atrocity's you have committed. Best of luck to your glass carrier!

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I think you made a really good video. I like how you made your slide with your friend . But I think you did mess up on reusing all your picture again I give you a A-.