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1. Your artwork about your school experience is very nice

2. I like the patterns you use to mark the drawing of your experience

3. I like the shading you use for the art

1. You could improve on doing more arrows and patterns

2. Put the different experience in a box so u don’t mix them together with the other experience

3. You could add colours to the art to make it more vibrant

1. I’m interested why there is a Mona Lisa

2. What clay sculpture u did

3. What did u use to make the clay and other artwork

Jerome

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1. beautiful.

2. tried to add in some colours

3. theres arrows to indicate the order

1. could be more colourful

2. background could hv more drawings

3. more details

1. love the drawings

2. the highlighter

3. organised

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HBL_Let's communicate. collaborate and learn together_Week 3

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Read the instructions in the following slides.  You are to give feedback to your classmate by register number.  By the end of the lesson, you are to submit p6 of your E-portfolio in Google Classroom

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Read the instructions in the following slides.  You are to give feedback to your classmate by register number.  By the end of the lesson, you are to submit p6 of your E-portfolio in Google Classroom