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ms weber had a moral and more detail

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Mrs.Weber's story uses more dialogue which makes it more detailed

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mrs. weber had much more detail one example is that she showed how they made the float.

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I think that Mrs. Weber's story was more descriptive like when it talks about the sun light shinning through the curtains it gave me a picture to put in my head.

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I noticed that Ms.Weber's story has a title and Ms.DuVall's does not.

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The weber version is more explicit my evidence is she told us like they got markers and wrote titles on the books   but in the other version they just said they got boxes

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Mrs. Weber's story had more detail
Like when she wrote about how the float melted away

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I noticed that mrs.weber's story showed action of the characters and showed a picture in your head. for example when there were mascara dripping down there eyes.

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I noticed that mrs. Weber put how syd really felt deeply and how at the end she did not care if she did not win.

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One thing I noticed that Mrs. Weber did was that she had detail in it. Like when it said she looked at her phone and it said July 4th 2018.

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I noticed that it had more detail because you could image the thing Sydney and lexi where doing.

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Ms. Weber's story had a lot of attention to detail and i could tell the over all theme which is never give up. The more detail part, the dialogue and the actions really painted a picture in my head about the events and what happened to the characters

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The thing I noticed about Mrs.Weber's story was that how she described how the character felt really helped show the theme of the story.

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One thing I noticed is that Mrs. Weber's story had an ending that helped me realize the theme. It also had words like high-strung and phrases such as wailing like a wet cat.

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ms.weber story had  more lilttle deatil like  when in it said the year

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i thought Mrs.Weber's was more detailed with fancier words and sayings.