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Where and how will you evidence this activity?

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For this lesson I am going to be choosing and composing work for test shoot and final piece.
I am also going to be researching other significant artists to the 1920s.
By the end of this lesson I would like to have an idea of what I wish to emulate.

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For this lesson i am going to order and analyse artist research; 10 chosen images and the photographic processes behind the images. I have 6 artists to discuss and analyse , and this will be evidenced in my project sketch book.

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In today's lesson, I will be refining and gathering my research into one Powerpoint presentation, including research images, contact sheets  and analytical writing.
Afterward, I will be editing the images from the nude shoot which took place on Friday using the guide given by Drew. They will be saved onto the presentation as well.

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For the duriation of this class I shall focus my energy on refining the intentions and directions of my final major project. I intended on neatening and making sure that the narrative is clear and easily digestiable.

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For this lesson i am going to do further research on my chosen artist and the style of photography. I will don this by taking notes on the techniques used. I am also going to plan and attempt test shots in preparation for my final shoot. i will then put these images together into a contact sheet. i will be around and outside of college.

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For this lesson i'm going to finish my analyse artist research,  then put some evidenced about my project.

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I will be analysing other photographers such as Jo Spence
Gillian Wearing and Cindy Sherman. I will be researching their life and what inspired them to be  a photographer and doing further research on their techniques. This will inspire my photos im going to do for my final major project. This research will be written in my project.

Creating
I will be finishing my poem which im going to play over my film. I will be also doing direct qoutes of my interviews with other people and their expierance with how it feels to be "depressed" "manic" and "psychotic" I will be doing research also on websites such as mind, samaritains and other peoples expierances of being in a psychatic ward . This will also be written in my project book. I will be using images from the interent which states the symptoms of those episodes.

I will also be composing an essay which explains "Mental health" and using other peoples expierances and my own and writting facts and stats of suicide rates and giving an over view of my research that i have found. This will be in written in my project book or on a big piece of paper to show the suicide rates. In this essay i will also CRITISING the mental health system and how people do not get the help they need.

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I am going to edit my pictures and videos captured the last 2 weeks. I will evidence my activity on a padlet page.

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12:00 Working in the library

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12:06 Working in the library

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Michael Feedback: Having looked at your project today I am concerned that you have only 8 photographs. The priority has to be planning each day from now until the 5th June. Ensure your images are in focus, as a concerning amount are not. Also look at your POV. Ensure as much as possible it matches the original historical photographs. You must become more productive to succeed with this project. 

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Michael Feedback: Having looked at your project today I am concerned that you have only 8 photographs. The priority has to be planning each day from now until the 5th June. Ensure your images are in focus, as a concerning amount are not. Also look at your POV. Ensure as much as possible it matches the original historical photographs. You must become more productive to succeed with this project. 

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Michael Feedback: Having had trouble approaching people to pose for you I suggest using models you know. Perhaps more family members. Or if you require other people try arranging to attend a community/group event where people will be more inclined to pose for a photograph. Perhaps you can use real environments as a way to challenge ignorant perceptions of ethic minorities. Contrasting an ignorance with a reality. 

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Michael Feedback: Having had trouble approaching people to pose for you I suggest using models you know. Perhaps more family members. Or if you require other people try arranging to attend a community/group event where people will be more inclined to pose for a photograph. Perhaps you can use real environments as a way to challenge ignorant perceptions of ethic minorities. Contrasting an ignorance with a reality. 

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Michael Feedback: Having not seen the new shoot I am unable to offer feedback. However looking at your research I would suggest that you make the influences and references you have found inspiring explicit in your book. By doing this you will focus your intentions and show how your ideas are coherent. 

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Michael Feedback: Having not seen the new shoot I am unable to offer feedback. However looking at your research I would suggest that you make the influences and references you have found inspiring explicit in your book. By doing this you will focus your intentions and show how your ideas are coherent. 

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Michael Feedback: Focus on the qualities of the photograph as much as the subject and content. You have some good images where you clearly have a focal point and use depth of field to draw the viewer in. Ensure there is a consistency here. After shooting images you can work on the narration and animation of the images. But the images come first. If they are strong the other things will work. At the heart of this projects success is how good your images are. 

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Michael Feedback: Focus on the qualities of the photograph as much as the subject and content. You have some good images where you clearly have a focal point and use depth of field to draw the viewer in. Ensure there is a consistency here. After shooting images you can work on the narration and animation of the images. But the images come first. If they are strong the other things will work. At the heart of this projects success is how good your images are. 

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Michael Feedback: It sounds as though you have re-shot to improve your images. I look forward to seeing the completed films. At this stage you are editing time lapse. Ensure they are smooth. Consider how you will sequence stills and animations of frames. 

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Michael Feedback: It sounds as though you have re-shot to improve your images. I look forward to seeing the completed films. At this stage you are editing time lapse. Ensure they are smooth. Consider how you will sequence stills and animations of frames. 

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Michael Feedback: We have discussed your feedback from the crit where you have expressed a desire to act upon a suggestion to work with religious associations of mercy and forgiveness. We discussed perhaps using a curtain to create a private intimate space where the viewer can encounter the work. As we discussed consider how to engineer this experience. Everything in an installation is a language and becomes symbolic. Avoid clumsy symbolism. 

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Michael Feedback: We have discussed your feedback from the crit where you have expressed a desire to act upon a suggestion to work with religious associations of mercy and forgiveness. We discussed perhaps using a curtain to create a private intimate space where the viewer can encounter the work. As we discussed consider how to engineer this experience. Everything in an installation is a language and becomes symbolic. Avoid clumsy symbolism. 

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You have changed direction. Ensure that this development is clearly evidenced in your work. Make it clear why you have departed from your statement of intent and what those decisions were based on. Moving forward I feel you need to shoot TODAY! You cannot make and analyse at the same time. I think shoot today and then reflect. This will formulate what you want to achieve in your photography by cropping out what you do not. The challenge is to plan now for a contact sheet of images to be captured this afternoon.

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Michael Feedback: There are some quality skin-scapes here with perhaps 3-4 images that abstract the body parts and present textures and characters to the skin. When shooting other skin types be wary of the quality of light being used in domestic situations. Why not arrange to book to studio and get your models to come into college? Research should be organised onto a Padlet for ease of curation and bringing together the work so far. At a glance it is thinner than I would hope. 

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Michael Feedback: There are some quality skin-scapes here with perhaps 3-4 images that abstract the body parts and present textures and characters to the skin. When shooting other skin types be wary of the quality of light being used in domestic situations. Why not arrange to book to studio and get your models to come into college? Research should be organised onto a Padlet for ease of curation and bringing together the work so far. At a glance it is thinner than I would hope. 

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Continuing with padlet presentation, bulking up my research.

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create a contact sheet of test shoot 4, and select and edit 5 of the images from this shoot.

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What I hope to achieve in before 10:30 is to have two completed detailed and articulate exit slips

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I will edit my small videos and try to finish by the end of this session.

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In this lesson I am going to demonstrate how and why I am changing my projects. Last night I took some pictures in the style of Irving Penn, I was re-creating his picture of Picasso.

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Adding the final parts to my padlet page, including contact sheet and images from my latest shoot
Bye the end of the all my work, images, and exit slips will be submitted

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Aims for today;
- omplete

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My objectives this morning is to finish my last 2 videos for the final project and submit them by the end of this morning.

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Aims for today;
- complete exam crit 2
- make sure all work is uploaded and working when files are opened.
- ensure all previous exit slips are completed and uploaded
- ensure that sketchbook is complete and ready to hand in alongside final outcomes and exit slips/exams

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In this lesson I am going to be finishing the last touches of my padlet.  I also need to start writing my evalutation.

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Exam 2

Exam 3

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today i will be finalising my digital portfolio/website and helping Ava resize her images and helping Carla build her DIY projectors

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finishing off online portfolio, only have the "about me" section to complete.

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i will be writing an essay reviewing the artists that have inspired my work and reviewing their work that they have done. I will also include what my work is about.

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online portfolio and building projectors