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Working hard and succeeding in life knowing that making mistakes help you become a better person and in the end you will succeed.

I chose this pic because even professional people make mistakes. But by working hard and learning from mistakes make you better person and succeed in life.

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Hardworking, successful learner with 21st century skills who cares about other people.

I chose this picture because this person is trying  to push this rock out of a house so this shows hardworking and a person who cares about other people. It shows that there is something blocking his path. He is trying to help somebody get this boulder out of there house. This may represent humidity in his way.

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To persevere, be humble and recognize God.

I choose this picture because through God I can do all things and the man gets his perseverance and humbleness from God.

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A Christ guided leader that inspires younger generations.

I chose this picture because it looks like this man is on the hill praying to God and I need to strengthen my prayer so when I go out to the world I'll have Christ and the word of God in my heart so that I can be a leader and have younger generations to be inspired by me.

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Hardworking and productive life long learner to make others feel and be happy on the inside and out.

I chose this strong picture because it shows hard work and being productive trying to do something great, or maybe he could be clearing all of the negativity out of his mind from what is happening out in the world or any issues that he is having.

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Be responsible, never give up, and work very hard so you can be successful.

I choose this picture because he is trying to pull it to the place he needs to get it to.This shows that he is working hard and someone who is determined.

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Courageously use my spiritual gifts and talents to live Godʻs story.

I chose this strong image because one person has learned how to efficiently carry the bucket, while the other person is still learning. Parts of the struggle in learning, strengthening, and then sharing ʻike is communicated in this image.

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A successful person who perseveres by working hard to do something great.

I chose this strong image because this person is trying hard and persevering to accomplish the swimming competition.

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Work hard, be responsible, and never give up in life.

I chose this strong image because he is staying up very late to finish his work. And this is connected to my PVS because it shows him working hard and not giving up

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Alive and joyful with the power of Christ in my heart. To grow up to be a strong influencing leader, and independent woman.
I chose this photo because it shows all the men and woman fighting for us in the Navy. It also shows that God is always there to help you at the worst time, if you just believe in God.

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To love god as he loves me, to find a cure for hipatitis A, and to live life to the fullest

I chose this strong picture because it shows that god loves all of us no matter what we do wrong and to live life to the fullest and to help other people to cure dieases and to just help other people.

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To persevere, be humble,  and recognize God.

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To  go home knowing I made someone smile.

I chose this strong image because it seems like sheʻs walking home from where ever but sheʻs just smiling. Even though sheʻs by herself sheʻs smiling because she knows she did something good.

Revision:  I chose this strong image because it seems like sheʻs walking home from where ever but sheʻs just smiling. Even though sheʻs by herself sheʻs smiling because she knows she did something good.

Feedback:
The revision is the same as the original. I donʻt see any changes made.

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Teach people about our Hawaiian  culture and take care of others.

I chose this strong picture because it shows two people walking and taking the time that they still have together.And caring for each other.

Revision:  I chose this strong picture because it shows two people walking and taking the time that they still have together.And caring for each other.

Feedback:
The revision is the same as the original. I donʻt see any changes made.

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Succeed in everything I try with a strong spirit.

I choose this strong picture because it shows that he has succeed by climbing to the top of the mountain,  with a strong spirit because he feels successful.

Proofread carefully. Read your writing out loud. It helps you to hear some places that need to be revised. "succeed" should be succeeded.

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 Use the faith and love Christ has in me to assist me, to preserver in all I do.

I chose this strong image because it is showing how God is helping this mountain climber perserver in clibming a high mountain, it proves that with God's help I can do any thing.

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Living courageously and loving other people.