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When getting feedback from someone, what do you look for in their feedback?  When giving feedback, what do you like to share with a partner?

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Objective: I can use the ASK Feedback Protocol to provide and receive feedback for the claim writing assignment.

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Directions: Follow each step of the ASK Protocol to provide peer feedback to your elbow partner.

Step 1: Switch papers with your elbow partner.

Name of elbow partner I am providing feedback to:__________________________________________

Step 2: Use the time allotted to read your partner’s writing. Use the graphic organizer on the back to take notes when reviewing your partner’s work and receiving feedback.

1. In the first read you simply read everything.

2. In the second read you look for spelling, grammar, punctuation.

3. In the third read you check for accuracy in information and connection back to claim/thesis.

Step 3: Review rubric and assign score to your elbow partner.

Score:__________

Step 4: Share feedback with your partner, round 1. Use the graphic organizer on the back to take notes when reviewing your partner’s work and receiving feedback.

The partner sharing feedback is the only one speaking.

Step 5: Ask questions to the partner that share feedback. Use the graphic organizer on the back to take notes when reviewing your partner’s work and receiving feedback.

The partner who just received feedback in the only one speaking.

Step 6: Partner who just shared feedback now responds to questions. Use the graphic organizer on the back to take notes when reviewing your partner’s work and receiving feedback.

The partner receiving feedback should be taking notes/making edits to work.

Step 7: Repeat Steps 4-6 now with the partner that just received feedback as the one giving feedback.

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Directions: Follow each step of the ASK Protocol to provide peer feedback to three (3) of your classmates.

Step 1: Type your paragraph into the Padlet.

Step 2: Pick three classmates to provide ASK Feedback to in the Padlet.

I am providing feedback to:__________________, __________________, __________________

***YOU MUST WRITE THE PERSON’S NAME YOU ARE GIVING FEEDBACK TO IN YOUR COMMENT AND YOU MUST SIGN YOUR NAME AT THE END***

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A C T I O N A B L E your feedback guides your partner to make the necessary changes to improving their work

S P E C I F I C your feedback is clear-cut/precise as to allow your partner to know exactly where and how to make improvements to their work

K I N D your feedback is respectful, honest, and comes from a place of support not hurt

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Many things led up to the Inca establishing the largest empire ever in the Americas such as the Neolithic Revolution and the invention of terrace farming. The events that led to them establishing their empire order as follows; The Migration of humans from Africa, Neolithic Revolution, Rise of civilizations in the Americas, Humans settling in the Cuzco Valley and the Andes valley/ the invention of terrace farming, which all led up to, The Inca establishing the largest empire ever in the Americas. I chose to order the events in this way because it made the most sense. You can’t have an empire without people so obviously, the chain of events begins with Human Migration. You can’t build a great empire if you can’t yet settle because you’re still hunting and gathering for food, so next is the. Neolithic Revolution. There were obviously other civilizations at the time of the Inca, so next is the rise of civilizations. The Inca would need a source of food that would be reliable in the unpredictable weather of the Andes mountains so the invention of  terrace farming is next. Finally, the Inca, using all of the resources given by the previous events rose to establish the largest empire in the Americas ever.

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First humans migrated from Africa, then the invention of farming made it possible for humans to stop migration, which led to the Inca’s establishment and improvements in farming, which from there led to other civilizations rising like the Mayan and Aztec empire, and it finally led to the Inca being the largest civilization.

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The Neolithic discovered farming (which was very useful for survival), then migrated from Africa and settled in the Cuzco valley and the Andes Valley Mountains but the Inca faced a problem when settled in Mountains because there was no soil in Mountains but the Incas soon advanced and created terrace farming, which led to the rise of civilizations especially the Inca, lastly led to the Inca establishing the largest empire ever in the Americas.

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The humans migrated from Africa , the Neolithic revolution started agriculture. Which led to civilizations rising in the America’s  . After that the innovation of terrace farming led to the Inca being the largest empire in the America’s . Where they made a large improvement , the Inca were able to become the largest empire in the America’s ever . The innovation of terrace farming Gave the Inca a stable food supply which benefited them . That is what helped the Inca rule over other civilizations , due to the fact the gained , maintained , and consolidated power . It helped the Inca make the largest empire in the America’s ever , which is also a big , great , smart accomplishment.

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First it all started when humans migrated from Africa, then spreading around the world by following herds of animals into areas with good source of food. Then they started the concept of farming and that helped them, further on they settled and invented a new way of farming called terrace farming. After this a lot of civilizations started to rise causing that a group of people called the Inca rose forming the largest empire in the America’s.

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Farming and innovation led to the Inca establishing the largest empire in the America’s. The Neolithic revolution is when people started farming and stopped moving around. Humans moved around the the world and settled in new places. A lot of civilizations started in the America’s. The Inca had a big civilization and they traded a lot. The Inca farmed with layers of land, called terrace farming. Farming led to the rise of civilizations.

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Many things led to the Inca becoming the largest empire ever in America such as Terrace Farming and the Neolithic revolution. For example, Terrace Farming allowed them to settle on mountains which means they had good protection and could settle and farm. This shows it made it easier for them not to get attacked and for them to rise faster. Another example is, the Neolithic revolution allowed them to settle down and grow so much more than other civilizations which led to their rise and growth. This shows they used the Neolithic revolution to begin their establishment of them becoming the largest empire in the Americas. As you can see, this is how Terrace Farming and the Neolithic revolution helped the Inca to become the largest empire in the Americas ever.

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Farming and innovating helped the Inca create the largest empire ever in the Americas. The Neolithic revolution was able to create agriculture activity. That soon started human settlements in the Cuzco Valley and Andes Mountains. Once they were settled, this allowed the Inca to create a rise of civilization in the Americas. Soon after humans began migrating from Africa and when they began migrating it led to revolution in the Americas.

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Agriculture led to the Inca Empire to establish the largest empire in America. When humans migrated from Africa and found a place to settle, it led to the invention of agriculture. Due to this invention the Inca Empire began to form. As many other inventions were made over time the expansion of the Inca Empire went on.

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Farming and innovating led to the Inca establishing the largest empire ever in the Americas. Neolithic revolution created agricultural activity and because of that it led to human migrations from Africa which the modern-day humans did spread a lot around to new places to live. Which also led to the rise of civilization in the America’s then after that the humans settle in the Cuzco valley and Andes mountains. Which helped them make a stable food supply then that led to Inca establishing the largest empire ever in the America’s.

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Humans migrating from Africa lead to farming by having people adapt to their surroundings. Their skills in farming (terrace farming) from adapting to mountains, led to the rise of the Inca Empire which lead them into being the largest empire.

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Many things led to the Inca becoming the largest empire ever in America, such as migration, the rise of civilizations in the Americas, and terrace farming. Firstly, People from Africa migrated to the America’s by following animals herds. Then, the Neolithic Revolution happened and people learned how to farm. This led to the rise of civilizations in the America’s because people had free time to grow/expand their civilization because they weren’t hunting. For the Inca to keep up, they invented terrace farming which led them to make and grow their large civilizations because they had a stable food supply. With their large farming system, gigantic villages, and vast military forces, the Inca became one of the most populated, strongest, and the biggest empire in America ever.

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The Inca became the largest empire in the Americas. We begin when humans migrated from Africa, the Neolithic Revolution in the Americas started agriculture. This then led to civilizations rising in the Americas, starting the invention of terrace farming. Which in the end led to the rise of the Inca Empire, the largest Empire in the Americas.

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The Inca established the largest empire ever in the Americans. The Neolithic found out the way of farming which led humans to migrate which made them to create terrace farming which was the rise of the civilization which had led to the Incas to establish the largest empire ever.

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Agriculture led to the Inca establishing the largest empire ever in the Americas. Humans migrating from Africa led to the innovation of farming. Farming is the act of grow crops and taking care of animals. Farming led to the ride of the civilization in the Americas. When humans settled in the Cuzco Valley and Andes Mountains, they invented terrace farming. Terrace farming helped them grow different crops at different temperatures. Terrace farming led to the Inca establishing the largest empire ever in the Americas because with a stable food supply, they were able to focus more of their time could other things. Also since not everyone had to find their own. This gave people the chance to create new jobs such as craftsmen and traders. Agriculture led to the establishment of the largest empire in the Americas.

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Agricultural led to the Incas establishment. Human migrated from Africa by following the animals, which led to the innovation of farming. Farming started to develop over time, so this started the rise of civilization of America’s. Rise of civilizations made more accomplishments, where they learned the skill of terrace farming. Terrace farming allowed them to plant different kind of crops at different temperatures. All of these accomplishments led to the Incas’ establishment of the largest empire in the Americas.

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The Incas established the largest empire ever in the Americas. Humans migrated from Africa to the Americas. The Neolithic revolution in the Americas led to the rise of civilizations there. Humans settled in the Cuzco valley and Andes mountains to establish the largest empire in the Americas, the Inca empire. They were able to achieve this feat because of terrace farming that helped their agriculture. This shows how the Incas gained, maintained, and consolidated their power within their large empire.

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Agriculture lead to the Inca’s establishments. Humans migrated from Africa by following the animals, which led to them settling where the inventions of farming began. People would follow animals in hope of more food resources. But, Due to weather conditions around the area they had to face different temperatures which affected the crops. In the process, of migration they traveled to places such as Africa, North America, South America, Australia, and somewhat Europe. Due to the process, migration so became the process of agriculture. In the making of farming they used different temperatures for different crops. Agriculture made the Inca Empire rise and expand.

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The Inca established the largest empire ever in the Americas. The Neolithic found a way of farming which led humans to migrate which made them to create terriots farming which was rising the civilization which led to the Incas to establish the largest empire ever. The cause and effect between the rise of the Inca and the fall of the Inca is that

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Farming and innovating led to the Inca establishing the largest empire ever in the Americas. Well first the Inca learned how to farm then, they  migrated and innovated there way to farm in which was now terrace farming.But they had to give to the city so they made roads in the mountains that was very dangerous but had its advantages. The first problem is that they had to figure out how to make the big roads on the Side of the Andes mountain. But they had the gift of engineering so they can do anything with just a little of brain power. This is how farming and innovating helped the largest empire in the Americas

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The Neolithic Revolution created agriculture then migrated to the Americas . Then created Terrace farming on the mountains which lead to the rise of their empire. This is true because the Neolithic Revolution invented farming which they migrated so no one can find out or get near them so they settled in the Cuzco mountains and advanced their farming technique and told everyone there old farming technique which made them so smart everyone who found out praised them.