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Thesis statement
Racism is a world wide phenomena that has become like a virus that as plagued many countries, whereby people are being subjected to harsh treatment that seeks to lower their rights, value and  reduce their opportunity as a citizen or non- citizen within that country and create Furthermore, there is a set stigma surrounding those individuals.

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Sharon Hall
Thesis Statement
Digital forensics is not a violation of an individual rights but a very effective solution in fight against crime.It is invaluable in the fight against cyber-crime  such as identity theft and fraud, it is very helpful in cold and live cases by providing digital evidence,  and lastly , it is a legitimate defense practise that is protected by law.
There are two sentences here.

Digital forensics is not a violation of an individual rights because it is invaluable in the fight against cyber-crime such as identity theft and fraud, it is very helpful in cold and live cases by providing digital evidence  and  it is a legitimate defense practise  that is protected by law.

You now have the thesis statement  which you will use to create your sentence outline. The words that I have highlighted in green in this one should be left out of the thesis statement but you can use them in the body of the sentence outline.
The order in which you have written the claims in the thesis statement should be the same order that you present them in the  body of the outline.
You will need the word practice instead of the one you have in the thesis statement.

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The noun practice is needed as practise is the verb. Place a comma after the word self-confidence then ,and followed by the word materials.Remove also in that same line and replace toxic with toxins,

After doing that your thesis statement is ready to go.!

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Thesis Statement: The government should look towards the future and invest in the replacements for fossil fuel supply because the alternative energy supplies are more affordable, cause less damage to the environment and create economic development and job creation.

I have observed that you have changed the given topic.

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Thesis Statement: The government should look towards the future and invest in the replacements for fossil fuel supply because the alternative energy supplies sources which are more affordable, cause less damage to the environment and create economic development and job creation.

This version would be better. Omit the highlighted words

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Do not delete any of the posts that have been made either by you or your classmates.

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Thesis Statement: The negative impact of the use of digital forensic science on individual’s rights is an invasion on human’s privacy, increased in cyberbullying and cybercrime and wrongful convictions.

This is a good example of an expository thesis statement but not an argumentative one.

You have only a few hours to retry. After tomorrow evening I will not be marking anymore thesis statements. Revisit the support materials Selena  and  reshape your thesis statement. Remember it must show what position you have taken, must have three reasons/claims and must be one sentence.

B. Harris

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Thesis Statement: The use of digital forensic science is a violation to human’s right because it invades human’s privacy, increases cyberbullying and cybercrime and  causes wrongful convictions, therefore digital forensic science should be banned

You may complete your sentence outline now and upload.

B.Harris

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Sharon Hall
Thesis Statement: Digital forensics is a study that assist in enforcing not only laws but also the rights of countless individuals  who have made victims; it is invaluable  in the fight against cyber÷crimes, and it is especially needed to combat against  identity  theft and fraud which have become increasingly rampant, lastly it is a practice that is protected by the law and so it is not a violation of  right but a very effective solution in the fight against  crime.

N.B .Please note that this sentence is too lengthy and has not met the criteria .There is no position and the reasons or claims  for the side you will take.

You still do not have a thesis yet you uploaded a sentence outline. You must speak with me today.

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Kelia Richards
Thesis: Governments should invest in alternative energy sources because they are sustainable/ renewable sources of energy; they reverses global warming, and increase the reduction of air pollution.
Fix the highlighted word as you check on agreement of subject and verb .Kindly note you will now use they which I have inserted.

You may now complete your sentence outline and upload.

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All persons who wrote thesis statements on my example padlet will need to create a padlet page of their own by clicking on the plus sign at the bottom right hand corner of the page. When you have done that put your name on the page.
If any two students have the same thesis statement  both will be penalized.

B. Harris
Facilitator

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There is no conspiracy behind covid-19 as persons were misinformed by the media which led to them having no proof that it was created in a lab or generated from bats.
but the home, school and church have been severely impacted.
My suggestion to omit the words that are highlighted.
The words might be useful in laying out the introduction.
A focus on home, school, church should provide more content or more premises for your essay. What do you think?
You need a capital c for COVID-19 (name of the virus).
OR
There is no conspiracy behind COVID-19 but media has fueled a COVID-19 related theory, it has impacted educational institutions and the health sector in many countries.

If you are not happy with this suggestion ,you can think of another but ensure there are three clear claims which will allow you to argue adequately on the topic.

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Thesis Statement: The government should restrict the practice of illegal fashion braces implants because they can increase one's chance of developing infections, pose long-term deleterious oral issues and even result in grievous occurrences such as cancer development or even death.

Kindly note that your first two claims are close. Infections contribute to oral issues. Have you thought of the impact on the livelihood of trained orthodontists? That could be a strong claim.

B.Harris

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Thesis Statement: The Jamaican government should invest in alternative energy sources, which will cause the country to reap immense environmental and economic benefits since this would diversify energy supply and reduce dependence on imported fuels, produce cleaner energy that reduces the risk of air pollution and create career opportunities for skilled and or unemployed citizens.
Omit the highlighted words and you are good to go.

B.Harris
Facilitator

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Tajay Rodney (Check on the use of the highlighted word)

Theses statement:
Governments should invest in alternative energy sources because it differentiates their energy supply, creates more jobs in manufacturing and installation and will be the source of a cleaner, more sustainable energy supply.

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Hyacinth Reynolds Throughout the ages as a worldwide phenomenon racism has had a negative impact that has resulted in the ill treatment of the Jews by Nazism, the establishment of the slave trade that fueled the need to buy and sell black Africans and the social classification of Latinos in the United States of America.  

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Hyacinth Reynolds Throughout the ages as a worldwide phenomenon racism has had a negative impact that has resulted in the ill treatment of the Jews by Nazism, the establishment of the slave trade that fueled the need to buy and sell black Africans and the social classification of Latinos in the United States of America.  

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Throughout the ages racism as  is a worldwide phenomenon has had negative impacts/effects that that  has resulted in the ill treatment of the Jews by Nazism, the establishment of the slave trade that fueled the need to buy and sell black Africans and the social classification of Latinos in the United States of America.

Your position statement will not come until you remove throughout the ages. What is your stance or position as it relates to the topic? Do you agree  that  racism is a worldwide phenomenon? If you agree state your position, if you do not agree state your position  then follow up with the three claims.
Look at what your statement will become when you remove those highlighted words. Will you identify your stance and the three claims? If your answer is yes ,complete the outline and upload tonight.

B.Harris

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MY THESIS FOR TITLE: Alternative Medicine should be banned

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MY THESIS FOR TITLE: Alternative Medicine should be banned

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Thesis Statement:  Alternative medicine should not be banned as its effectiveness is comparable to mainstream medicine, it is cost effective and the negative impact on an individual is minimal.

B. Harris

Dear students to get started, click on the plus sign in the far bottom right hand corner to generate your padlet then set up your post as my example..

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Throughout the ages racism has been a worldwide phenomenon linked to the ill treatment of the Jews by Nazism, the establishment of the slave trade that fuelled the need to buy and sell black Africans and the social classification of Latinos in the United States of America

while this is a thesis statement it will not be useful for an argumentative essay as no stated position is evident.

B.Harris
Facilitator

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I note that you revised the thesis statement based on our discussion. You are good to go!

B.Harris
Facilitator