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i would love to see different types of animals and their habitat and we can bring our family to take photographs if i were there i would like to see crocodile

Teacher's comments: Please type in up to 100 words at least, Ka Kee.

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One of the animal species i might get to see is otter because it look very cute.I wish my pet is otter because they are  smart easy to feed them. it is also quiet difficult to find them as it is small. I wish that everyone will come to Sungei Buloh Wetland with their family as you can have a family bonding.

Teacher's comments: The otter might be harder to keep than you think, Ihsan. Some wild animals can be cute but they are hardly tame. And some animals need a large space for a habitat, and they need to hunt to sharpen their instincts. Good effort though! Keep it up!

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I Would love to See Mudskippers as i Never seen one Before. I Would love to take Photo's Of the Scenery and See take Pictures of animals Like Crocodiles/ Alligator's. I have never been in a wetland reserve in my life So i wish to go there at some point. One of my favourite Animals is the Monitor Lizard I hope to see it there.

Teacher's comments: Even when working on online platforms, we need to be mindful of our punctuations. I see awkwardly capitalised letters. Try to have more organisation too, look at the questions that you have to respond to.

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We seen animals and we go to sungei buloh to take pretty and nice photo and at sungei buloh is a nice place to chill at.

Teacher's comments: We need to be more focused on our tasks and to put in a bit more effort to complete them, Sarah. Let's try do that.

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we can find many species of animal but my all time favourite
is the crocodile.Sungei Buloh Wetland Reserve is a good place to snap photographs.Its a good place to bring children there.I Would love to See Mudskippers as i Never seen one Before. I Would love to take Photo's Of the Scenery and See take Pictures of animals Like Crocodiles/ Alligator's. I have never been in a wetland reserve in my life So i wish to go there at some point.The wetlands of Sungei Buloh are a dream come true for keen nature lovers.You can catch birds escaping the cold on their way to the warmer climes of Australia.I would love to see the monitor lizards on the trees

Teacher's comments: You can definitely feel that you need to type in more worded response. Try to indulge less time in looking for the photographs that is of a lesser priority.

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Sungei Buloh Wetland Reserve is a good place to snap photographs.Its a good place to bring children there.If I got there I would like see animal species like mudskipper,tree climbing crab.Its also a good place to get freah air.

Teacher's comments: This is a good paragraph, Vinoo. Keep up the consistent good work you have put in. And keep on improving!

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rent types of animals like mudskippers and we can see different bisee ke photographs

Teacher's comments: This is not sufficient, Wanda. Do try to add on more in response.

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We can see different type of tree

Teacher's comments: You need to really work on staying on task, Cheryl.

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we can see different types of animals at sungei buloh wetland reserve such as snake mudskipper,birds .It is also a good place to snap photograph .

Teacher's comments: This response needs to be elaborated, Nicole. Please do that.

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we could see mudskippers in the mangrove swamp and different birds.there is a bird cage for us to look on birds and stay safe from other animals.there is a pathway for people to walk on.

Teacher's comments: This is a good start, but maybe the term "bird cage" used might be inappropriate. Since you have the benefit of the internet, try to find the proper name and term for it.

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Sungei Buloh Wetland Reserve is a good place to take photographs like take a photo of an animal and can learn more things about an animal.we can see what they will do in their places.

Teacher's comments: A good response to the question, though we can add some more points, if you agree, Maithuri. Do keep up the good work, like how you do in all other lessons too. Great job in class.

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we could see mudskippers in the mangrove swamp and different birds.there is a bird cage for us to look on birds and stay safe from other animals.there is a pathway for people to walk on and see animals there and stay safe.there is shelthers for people to stay in wet weathers.

Teacher's comments: Good contribution there, Dixon. You have always been putting in good responses and effort. Well done! It is much appreciated.

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in Sungei Buloh is a place where all kinds of animal live there and some times you can see them in their natural habit there is also a good place to take photo and enjoy the view

Teacher's comments: Does that mean that you are not interested in the other animals? Need to type more, please.

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we can see wildlife and  animals

Teacher's comments: You need to focus on your task, Vick.

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Sungei Buloh wetland reserve is the one of the place to take photographs of the animals and their habitat.I like the sea area has it is the best place for viewing the place

Teacher's comments: What you typed was more like the opening of an answer. Yet, the continuation is severely lacking.

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Sungei Buloh nature Wetland Reserve is the best place to snap some pictures and ehm

Teacher's comments: Let's try to think a little faster than this, Yusran.

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I would like to see mudskippers,tree climbing crab,monitor lizard it would be cool to get close to these animals and see their natural habitat. I would also like to walk at the broadwalk to look at some aquatic creature, especially the crocodile, would love to take awesome photograph at the broadwalk and around sungei buloh

teacher's comments: I would love to see how this continues, Cyrus. The start is actually a good one. But, if you agree with me, it's actually the start of a potentially good conversation.

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The wetlands of Sungei Buloh are a dream come true for keen nature lovers.You can catch birds escaping the cold on their way to the warmer climes of Australia.That one rare animal is the monitor lizard, I would love to watch the them climb on
the trees.

Teacher's comments: This is a good start, Enson. I hope the second part is your own written work though. It would be great if it was.

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One of the place that i like to go is the pathway where we can walk and see a better view of the place especially seeing rare animal. We can also take photograph of the landscape and the animal habitat. I would like to see monitor lizard because it is my favourite animal and i would like to take photo with it. I would also like to see animal species such as mudskippers,tree climbing crab. I love to see rare animal as it is very hard to find at Sungei Buloh. I wish that everyone will go to Sungei Buloh with their love ones. ;)

Teacher's comments: One of the best answers on-screen. Shows a lot of thought and effort. The response has originality and personal ideas. Thank you for the effort, Taufiq. Great job!

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One of the animal species I might get to see would be the local monitor lizard. They can grow up to a length of more than 2 metres from head to tail. I would be careful if I meet one but I would love to see it either swimming in the water or even crawling near me on the ground.

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Discussion Question (2) : Describe what you could see at a mangrove swamp nature reserve such as Sungei Buloh Wetland Reserve. Write a short paragraph of no less than 100 words.

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Discussion Question (2) : Describe what you could see at a mangrove swamp nature reserve such as Sungei Buloh Wetland Reserve. Write a short paragraph of no less than 100 words.

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Please write in a substantial response that shows some effort and thought.