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"Inside Volcanoes"
Gareth stevens publishing

page: table of contents

this book is about voacoanoes and their qualities.
This shows a picture of a volcanologist in a special fireproof suit.

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Storage

The magma pack was made to solve the lack of space to put tools and supplies while withstanding intense heat.

Reflective fabric and tough fire proof materials will take out the heat factor. The pack will have a safe oxygen storage so the person doesn't breathe in dangerous poisonous gas. The backpack will also have a large water storage to keep hydration. There is even a pull away shelter that stands up to high temperatures. But the bulk of the backpack is storage for tools. There is a big storage  area that is very strong in the top and a smaller space that will be hard to rip on the bottom for smaller tools. For longer tools there are snug sleeves on the unmeltable sides.

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this book says that gas masks are a need.

"inside volcanoes"
Gareth stevens publishing
Page 28-29
This book explains how volcanoes are dangerous, what we can do t notice before it is too late, how they erupt, and a small amount about volcanologists.

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Mark Anders
"Backpack basics"
told necessities of a backpack

backpack addressed 2 different kinds of backpacks, their strengths and their weaknesses were also told. What to look for was discussed.

the strengths and weaknesses were useful. the qualities to use/or look for.

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Revise your paragraph in the following ways:

Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab--not so repetative)

Clearer explanation on how your design improves or solves a specific problem.

More transitions, overall flow, and clarity