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The Children of Willesden Lane

Everything started one day Lisa when(when Lisa)  went to her Piano Lesson. She found out something that change her life. Miss.Jura ,( Lisa's last name ) find out that the professor couldn't continue giving her piano lesson. Lisa got very surprised, and ask why because you are Jewish, Lisa feel  (felt)l so sad. Days pass by then Lisa parents decided to send one of their children to England and they decided to send Lisa, since she could play the piano very well.
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Nice job all. reread and correct any mistakes. I'll check it too. They're all good!!!

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THE CHILDREN OF WILLESDEN LANE
Lisa Jura lived a happy life in Vienna.
Lisa escaped from Nazi-controlled Austria during World War II to England on the famed Kindertransport (Children Train.) She was separated from her beloved family.
The family decides to send Lisa to England, so that se may persue her dream of a career as a concert pianist. She is sent to London for safety to new home 243 Willesden Lane. Which is a house of refugees for Jewish Children.
There began the story of survival, courage, love of music

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By:  ELSA
Everything began when Lisa was going on the bus to do her normal piano practices. Something unusual was happening, first the driver was calling the name of the streets by Nazi names,. When Lisa arrived at the place where she has had her usual piano practices, she saw a guard in front of the house of her professor. When she ended her practice the professor told her that he couldn't teach her anymore because it has been prohibited;  it was so hard for Lisa.
Lisa's dad had to show  people that his business was Jewish , with it, came many problems to the family.  Sometime after that Lisa traveled to England and she was living with the children of Willesden Lane. The first thing that Lisa did was to search for a sponsor for Sonya her sister. Finally she founded it and Sonya went to live with a family in Northern England.
During this time many terrible things happened between this countries they were bombed, so Lisa couldn't visit her sister Sonia because it was too dangerous for everyone in Englamd..
MRS. Okeke Nice job !

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Life began to change for Lisa when the German troops took over Austria, her homeland.  This was a major change that affected her music. Lisa's parents decided to send Lisa on a kindertransport for a better life Lisas as the family's prodigy.

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Life began to change for Lisa when the German troops took over Austria, her homeland.  This was a major change that affected her music. Lisa's parents decided to send Lisa on a kindertransport for a better life Lisas as the family's prodigy.

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{Good diction} Mrs. Okeke Demetrious Morris

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The Lisa's life changed when the German troops came and they change the street names also. The soldiers pull out the Jews from their homes. They were affected, because the family was separated and Lisa was not going to be able to anymore of her piano lessons. Every one talked about the train with the name kindertransport.The parents of Lisa decided send Lisa to England with some relatives of her father. They had only one opportunity because they had only one ticket. Later Lisa talked with Mrs. Cohen about her sister.  Their neighbor,  helped Lisa because she found sponsors for Sonia. One day Mrs. Cohen call Lisa,"Miss Jura, will you come with me to my room?"  She gave a good notice to Lisa that Sonia, her sister, was due to arrive on the 3: 22 train at the Liverpool station. Lisa was very gratefully for her.
Lisa located the volunteers from Bloomsbury House. They helped her to find Mr. And Mrs. Bates from Norwich, the sponsors of Sonia. The waiting was an agony for Lisa.but finally children began to emerge from the kindertransport. For long moment they held each other, and it almost seemed she was home in Vienna again.Lisa was desperate to make good use of every second of the thirty minutes they had together.they went to the First Class Cafe of the station.for a private reunion. Sonia brought a letter from her mother,she read: "Your father and I are so comforted to know that you and Sonia are both at last safe in England.  After thirty minutes passed,  Mr and Mrs Bates returned for Sonia who clung to her older sister,too frightened and emotional to respond in words. "I promise! Sonia, "Lisa cried, "You'll come to London with me.

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Lisa's life was very nice. She had a musical life, and her father had a business too,  Her life changed when the war started, and the troops Germans, arrived in Vienna (Austria) The saddest for her, was the loss of her  Piano classes, she was very sad and disappointed.
It was very difficult, for her Lisa's  family, but they decided to let her go, om the Kinder Transport to  England.
Good Try!!!!
Mrs. Okeke

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When Lisa saw that the she was going to play music for the last time she was shocked.
Good, write more
Mrs.Okeke

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Lisa's life changed when the Germans came . They were beating them up and throwing them out their houses and were not being able to do things they had too much restrictions and people were afraid to work with them because it was a crime to teach a Jewish child. She was a music prodigy very good at her craft she was having a good life until the invasion.
Wonderful!!!
Mrs. Okeke

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Life began began to change for Lisa when German troops took over Austria,her homeland. She became a refugee. When her professor had informed her that it was her last practice with him.Her dad, a tailor had to put a sign in the window saying he was a Jewish business and the people were not allowed to use the services of Jewish business. That's when the storm troopers came in and destroyed everything. Her parents decided to sign her up for the  Kinder Transport. Lisa was her family's piano prodigy.
Nice Job!!!!
Mrs. Okeke

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Life began to change for Lisa when German troops took over Austria , her homeland . A major change that affected her music , family and country . Lisa"s music was affected when her professor had told her it was her last practice with him , she was disappointed . Lisa’s dad was a tailor and could no longer work.  That’s when her country was affected . He had put a sign on the window saying he was a Jewish business and the people were not allowed to use the services of Jewish business. That’s when storm troopers came in and destroyed everything . After that happen her parents decided to sign her up for the  Kinder-Transport. A Kinder-Transport is a rescue effort,  that transported the children by train to England .

Evcellent  Writing
Mrs. Okeke

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Lisa’s life began to change when the German Troops took over Austria . It affected her Country, family and most definitely her music . Everything had changed in a blink of an eye . Lisa’s parents decided to send Lisa on  the  Kinder Transport for a better life with family members .
A Kindertransport is a train that takes under age children to England during World War Two . Lisa was the family’s prodigy piano player.
Short and Sweet
Mrs. Okeke
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Life began to change for Lisa when German troops took over Austria , her homeland . A major change that affected her music , family and country .When her professor had informed her that it was her last practice with him . She was devistated . 

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Life began to change for Lisa when German troops took over Austria , her homeland . A major change that affected her music , family and country .When her professor had informed her that it was her last practice with him . She was devistated . 

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Liza Jura and her daughter were best friends and and she knows that one day Mona wouldl tell stories about her  with her piano and that’s how Mona was motivated to tell her mother's story and write the book ; The Children of Willesden Lane.

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One day she walk about two miles and she saw 

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The Childern of Willesden love   Mts. Okeke's Summary Questions

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The Childern of Willesden love   Mts. Okeke's Summary Questions

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1:How did life began to change for Lisa in Vienna?
-Life began to change for Lisa when German troops took over Austria her homeland.she became a refugee

2:what was a major change that affected her music.Family and country?
-When her last practice with him.her dad,a tailor had to put a sign in the window saying he was a Jewish business and the people were not allowed to use the services of Jewish business. That’s when the storm troopsers camein & destryoed everything.

3.what did her parents decide to do for Lisa?
Her parents decided to sign her up for kinder transport

4.what is the kindertranspart?
A kindertranspart a rescue effect that transported the childern by train to England.

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The Lisa's life changed when the German troops came and  changed the street names, also the soldiers pulled out the Jews from their homes. The family was affected, because they were separated and Lisa was not going to be able to have more of her piano lessons..Her parents decide to  send Lisa on the Kinder Transport train with destination Liverpool street station in London.

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1. How did life began to change for Lisa in Vienna?
Life began to change for Lisa when German troops took over Austria, her homeland .

2. What was a major change that affected her music , family , and country ?
•When her professor had informed her that it was her last practice w him
•Her dad, a tailor had to put a sign in the window saying he was a Jewish business and the people were not allowed to use to Jewish services of Jewish business .Thats when the storm troopers came in and destroyed everything .

3. What did her parents decided to do for Lisa ?
Her parents decided to sign her up for kindertransport  .

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How did life begin to change for Lisa in Vienna?  What was a major change that affected  her music, family and country? What did her parents decide to do for Lisa? What is the kinderstransport?  Tell how Lisa was able to go to join the children of Willesden Lane. Was Lisa able to get her sister, Sonia, to come to London? Did she stay with Lisa?

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How did life begin to change for Lisa in Vienna?  What was a major change that affected  her music, family and country? What did her parents decide to do for Lisa? What is the kinderstransport?  Tell how Lisa was able to go to join the children of Willesden Lane. Was Lisa able to get her sister, Sonia, to come to London? Did she stay with Lisa?

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Directions: Write a paragraph or two answering these questions above. Be sure    to indent  when you begin a new paragraph. Click on the + sign to write. I wrote an example for you. Now write in your own words. It doesn't have to be perfect, just try.

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I left my errors in this book summary so you could feel free to write.

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I left my errors in this book summary so you could feel free to write.

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Mrs. Okeke

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The Kinderstransport for a better life , Lisa was asigned to a nice British family that took care of Lisa .

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Lisa couldn’t play like she use to around people anymore , Lisa’s family couldn’t stay with her , instead Lisa’s parents sent her on a special train called , Th

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Continuation of children’s at 243 Wellesden Lane
At the time Lisa felt grateful about life because she brought Sonia with her, but she was thinking about her family over in Vienna. At the time the Nazis had getting mor countries invaded.
In al this bad news Aaron give her to Lisa a big surprise to bring her to a hall to see a concert of a great pianist at the time. As well she got an opportunity to get in the London Royal Academy to study music. At the time as well the headliners where scriming 1,000 dead in one Helish Night the retaliation RAF Flyboys Batter the Ruhr, destruction back and forth.
Aaron’s attitude got worse at the point that Mar. Cohen toll him to him don’t come back more to the hostal, Lisa start to practice in the basement in the cold at the point she got sick. One night was an exception, hour after hour the screaming of the bombers come over them. They where worried about Lisa’s health finally the doctor toll them she had a really bad bronchitis. Finally she had the audition to go to play in the hall in front of the judges, she impress the judge committee she did a great job with her talent and she was accepted in the scholarship program for the study of the pianoforte.
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The story began with Lisa on the bus, going to piano practice. She notices that the bus driver is not calling the streets by their Jewish names but by other names given by the Nazi (Germans who had recently marched in and taken over Austria).
Lisa went to the Professor for piano practice where he had a guard posted outside his home.After piano practice, she was informed that it was her last practice with the professor. She went home disappointed and her family tried to console her.
Not long after, her dad, a tailor had to put a sign in the window saying he was a Jewish business and the people were not allowed to use the services of Jewish businesses. They had the "Night of the Broken Glass" when the storm troopers came into the Jewish areas and broke all the windows and lamps in the villages. The men were forced to scrub the street in order to humiliate them. Her sister, Sonia was isolated at school because the other children were not allowed to be with the Jewish children. Lisa was a child prodigy in her neighborhood. Everyone loved her music and was proud. In fear for their children, her parents were able to get her signed up for the Kindertransport- a rescue effort that transported the children by train to England.
When Lisa arrived in England she was placed with the children of Willesden Lane. She then started to search for a  sponsor for Sonia her sister. Sonia received a sponsor and went to  live with a family in England. As the Germans were bombing England everyday in order to take it over, as they had done other countries, Sonia couldn't visit very often because of the danger it posed. After all this, she received a scholarship to the Royal Academy of Music. She received a new job at the Howard Hotel, after working at the factory. The music she played was entertaining to the soldiers.

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The children of Wilesden Lane.  Baltazar Duarte 

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The children of Wilesden Lane.  Baltazar Duarte 

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When Germans took over the  city of Vienna, they start to change street names and the soldiers pull out the Jews from their homes. Lisa was surprised  to notice this as she was on  her way to the piano lesson. When she arrived  she noticed that her teacher was sad. He was sad because he can’t teach Lisa piano lesson anymore, because she was Jewish and he was not. It was a crime to teach a Jewish child. It was also a crime to do business with the Jewish people. Jews could only go to the Jew business with sign that said Jewish only. So, Lisa’s father now has less business. They struggled and worried about the future. On the event was the Night of Broken Glass. This made Lisa’s parents decided to send Lisa to the Kindertransport to London. Her father gambled a ticket to the kindertransport to London, they where thinking if they send Rosie, Sonia or Lisa. They decide to send Lisa. Her family when to her room to help her to pack her things and one by one leave the room, Lisa was picturing everything before she leave, so she could have the same memories when the family got together again. The Jews were not allowed on the streets at night or in a movie theatres, concerts halls, or most other public places. Lisa got a sponsor from London and worked in a Captain's house. She left the house because she wasn’t happy there, and because she ask if they can sponsor her sister Sonia, the only thing she have in mind is to find an sponsor to bring her little sister from Vienna to London. they toll her they can’t. She want to be with people like her. When Lisa got back to London she was send to the hostal at 243 Wellesden Lane. She found a job at textile sawing company, she was thinking to save money to bring her little sister, Sonia to England with her. Sonia received a sponsor and went to live with a family in England. As the Germans where bombing England every day in order to take it over, as they had done other countries, Sonia couldn’t visit very often because of the danger it posed.

Mrs. Okeke
Baltazar, nice job! Remember to use periods(.) more often and write in the past tense because this story is in the past Ex. use "had" instead of "have",could instead of can.