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Hi Allura, this is a great topic to do you showcase about. Some things I liked about your showcase was how you made your inphographic short and sharp, I also liked how your photoessay was clear, however for your photo essays, maybe you could have some photos about animals choking on plastic from plastic bags and other things.

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Hello Allura, l found your presentation interesting and informative, it was good. 👍
Also the photo on your home page is blurry and l liked your infographic.
Beside Good Effort. : )

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Hello Allura,
I think your website was great! I like how the picture at the top of each page was consistent. I think maybe you could add more research or add something else to your call to action, such as an email or a petition. But besides that it was good!

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Hi allura, I absolutely loved your topic and the website, it was fun to read and got be more informed about the topic. I think that what you could do is maybe write why your passionate and say why this is an important issue instead of just the facts. Maybe what you could also do is explain your call to action and expand on your thinking about why this topic needs too be called to action. Good job!

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Hi Allura. Good website! I really enjoyed learning about pollution is Australia. I liked how you added lots of pictures to your website — it made it more engaging and broke up the text. I also like how you had hearing pictures at the top of most of your pages. This gave us information on what the page would be about through a format that wasn’t text. Some feedback for you for next time is to expand on your points. Give us some examples and reasoning for your research question answers as well as reasoning for why you are passionate about it. Also in your call to action, give us a brief caption/description of what exactly you did and what your goal was by doing this. Overall, good website! Well done!

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I love it but it is quite short, i thing that you should insert some more information and give more statistic i like that you have some personal information but i think that you have some more things to talk about. Sorry i can;t give you to much feedback because it it quite short. But overall i love it!

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Do you have any more information?
Do you have any more personal experience? ( if you don’t want to recall then it is ok)
Is there anything else interesting?

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Hi, Allura. My name is Roma! I can’t wait to read yours and give you some feedback and yes there is a big amount of junk in Australia and i am happy you are bringing it into view!

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Your Call to action is great but I think also need more information and how you’re going to help this problem get people in Australia to pick up litter or anything that can help decrease the amount of waste.

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I have a question why did you choose to do the amount of litter in Australia?  I too feel litter is a big problem and also causes global warming this is something that we can solve but this is also a big problem and I think it’s great that you are focusing on this topic. Why were you inspired to do this topic in the first place? And how does this affect others on my questions?

I think these questions will help you add more information into showcase I think your topic is a great topic and continuing on with it Will help the problem.

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The feedback I have for you is that you need quite a lot more information and more pictures The amount of words needs to be more specific and easier to read because it is quite wordy.

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Nice Allura its good