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the enlarging apple grew humongous over the course of a year

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Bottled water is inane because... The use of the word inane shows that the writer has a professional variety of words and really thought out your thesis statement and that others should believe you.

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Change a weak word to a strong word. For example, water bottles should stay, verses, water bottles are necessary.

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bottled water should be vanished because of it's chemical substances in the plastic and how it can have negative effects on the environment

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The use of plastic bags should be abolished because, the word abolished makes your argument stronger and more creditable.

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you can make stronger words by editing the worse word and improve them by stating a word with more meaning like change plastic water bottle use should be ban because... to plastic water bottles should be abolish because...

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Bottled water  should be abolished because....

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The use of plastic bags should be banned/abolished because blah blah blah..... The use of the words banned or abolished makes the writer sound professional and smart. It also makes their writing  sound more creditable.

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Using strong words in both the thesis statement and throughout your persuasive essay, strengthen your argument by intriguing the reader, or makes you sound like you mean it.

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Tap water is not as healthy and safe as fresh water, therefore it should be abolished. For example in my sentence there is the comparison to fresh water and tap water and the reason used is very important. So the stronger the words can persuade the reader. Also when I used abolished it shows the stance or opinion that I have on this topic.

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You can use more stronger words by changing words like worse to a word with a more specific meaning so words like should be banned, harmful, or unpleasant.

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Bottled water is superior in comparison to tap water because it tastes better

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Bottled water should be abolished because of the negative effects it can cause for the environment.

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healthy water is more beneficial then water bottles because... this sentence provides better feel for the reader because when i use the word beneficial it provides stronger stance

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tap water should be encouraged instead of bottled water because...

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Bottled water must be abolished because... abolished makes it stronger because it make t seem more credible

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Water bottles should be abolished in countries with hygienic tap water because...

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you can use more stronger words to sound like you are more professional

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Leaning Rocks! Writing Trait, Word Choice

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Word choice is one of the traits of quality writing. The lyrics for this song were pulled from a scoring rubric describing advanced proficiency in the writing trait of word choice. For lyrics and downloads, check out, www.learningrocks.bandcamp.com.

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How does using strong words in both the thesis statement and throughout your persuasive essay strengthen your argument?