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Summary of ‘Collapse’ by Jared Diamond (2005)

In the article, ‘Collapse” Diamond (2005) lists environmental problems that the humankind is presently suffering by dividing them into four categories. In the first category, he refers to the destruction or loss of natural resources due to human activities such as turning natural habitats to cities, villages, farmlands, roads and so on. Diamond (2005) then draws the readers’ attention to the reserves left for energy. His main concern at this point is that there will still be oil and coal in the future but taking these out to the surface will be much costly, time-consuming and less qualified. The third category he mentions is the harmful and toxic chemicals as well as unnatural animal species and the emission of gases into the atmosphere. Diamond underlines the threat that both humans and the earth are facing such as insecticides, pesticides and herbicides we use to get better crops and other chemicals used in the industry to make our lives easier, faster and more economical but at the same time, causing many illnesses and millions of death every year. He also highlights the harmful gases released into the atmosphere due to human activities such as carbon dioxide from the cars which causes global warming. The last but not least another significant problem is the population growth. He accepts that population is growing and we need to provide more food, energy, water and other resources for them. However, his main concern is not the population but the effect of human beings on the environment due to the uneven distribution of wealth and income. The gap between the First World countries and the Third is becoming wider and wider, which inevitably causes the poor people to be jealous and even enemy of the people from those nations. Despite all these hardships and threats the world and humanity face presently, Diamond (2005) believes that they are soluble and hopes the future will be better due to the interconnectedness through which people living in the remote corners of the world can be informed about any event happening in some other places of the planet and learn much faster than our ancestors did in the past and learn from our ancestors’ mistakes.

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In the article entitled "Collapse" by Diamond (2005) discusses four major environmental problems and how can we solve them by getting information from nowadays technologies and from earlier  generations mistakes. The Author states that as we are the ones who are destroying the nature also we can solve these problems as well. Diamond criticizes destruction of natural habitat which we depend on in order to maintain our life.And why are they doing this is to build urban cities.Diamond also argues that people are constantly producing energy via using vast amount of fossil fuel which omit CO2 and this causes climate change. Moreover,Diamond claims that human activities like consumption and producing CO2 e affects nature in a bad way. To conclude,Diamond remains hopeful towards the things (thing is informal in academic writing and it is vague, you need to be specific and clear in academic writing so it is better to say "man-made problems) that he mentioned in the arcticle.

The supporting idea "overpopulation" is missing. Please see the other part of my feedback in your previous post.

Thank you,
MET

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The guy with a blue hoodie- Alp Erkal / The girl with a gray hoodie -Beril Dost 

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The guy with a blue hoodie- Alp Erkal / The girl with a gray hoodie -Beril Dost 

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In the article, (Collapse, (Diamond, (2005), Diamond mentions (use a stronger reporting verb here the collapse of the world, could be cause of the humanity. He strongly states that the acts of the humans on the environment, would be the key mistake of collapsing the environment (does he state that we are all going to die? or does he have a suggestion?). He first stresses on the destruction oying of the habitat, natural resources, and the habitats of the exotic plants around the world. He suggests that the human resources, such as; paper, timber, and all of the materials that are used in the production of many goods would be destroyed too (you have already stated these in the previous sentence in a concise manner so there is no need to repeat these points). Then he claims that in this case, fossil fuels and all of the production needs would be devastated, which would lead to aggressive digging search for the, future fossil fuels. This eventually, would be the worst issue of the future generations. The goal is going to be focusing on getting corruptions of the world to end, because of humans. Clearly, humans are going to end their on world by destroying what is giving to them to benefit the most . Moreover, humans work effects the environment highly dangerous, even from the smallest work to the largest (same idea is repeated three times, simply state why are fossil fuels dangerous?). The author also claims that humans are affecting and damaging the environment by even farming and growing cattle. they It produce toxic gases and more carbondixoide for the environment . He claims that (Thanks to is a positive linkers but your idea is negative so you need to use "due to" with negative ideas) growing population, we ("we" is informal, instead you can use "people, humanity, mankind") require more food, water, space to live and other needed resources for human nature. Therefore, countries which have highest number of population are facing major public health crises. Due to divergent predictions about stabilizing population, this population unfortunately continue to grow (be concise and state briefly what is the risk about population?).

To conclude, Diamond still hopes that the future of the world can be changed to be changed, because he thinks/believes that  humanity would have the ability to take act on these type of issues, and his attitude towards the conflict is highly hopeful. (still writing in the shuttle.. I can't look at the screen mss.)

Thank you for the summary. Please go over my comments. You  need to state the main idea clearly if he believes that we have the ability to solve this problem, what is his suggestion. And there are some details that are not necessary. Please check before you submit your summary if you repeat the same idea more than once.

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MET

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In the article entitled “ Collapse”, by Diamond(2005), the writer states the collapse of the earth which humanity has made closer the end of it. Diamond highlights the main argume ant by stating that people have created these problems but they have a chance to change the world’s deterioration. Diamond describes the natural resources that humans are destroying and losing rapidly. In addition, he claims we may not lose all of the resources but it would be very hard to extract them from underground because, the reserves will be in much more deeper levels so that will involve higher environmental costs.  Moreover, Diamond discusses that people destroy natural habitats in order to build cities, roads and social areas. Furthermore, he (recommends is a positive word but Diamond is critical here so it is better to use the reporting verb "warn") that people produce energy using fossil fuel such as oil, petrol and coal which emit carbon dioxide. Also he (praises is a positive word but Diamond is critical here so it is better to use the reporting verb "attack" or "criticize") that usage of fossil fuel leads to climate change.

Thank you for the summary. A well organized summary, but the supporting idea "overpopulation" is missing. Complete your summary before Skills Check and get feedback.

Best,
MET

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In "Collapse", Diamond (2005) E explores the four reasons of environmental problems facing past and present societies with his suggestions.
In this article although we created destruction ictiton to the not only  environment but also us,  we can solve them by using information, technologies and also by learning the past civiliz cations' mistakes.     First, the  author discuses destroyed natural habitats witch conve orted in to human made habitats. According to the do author humans and nature will be affected in terms because of losing necessary resources used by people and ecosystem with its balance.
Second, He stresses using harmful elements a lot and its conclusions.
Third, he points out toxic chemicals because the more unnatural and harmful products people use, the more damages will on us. Moreover, some gases lead to global warming thereby increasing average global temperatures.

Fourth, he uses examples to confirm, the more human, the more waste and consumption will be. He co ampares the First World (rich) countries to the Third World (poor) countries. He states that rich countries manufacture 32 times more wastes than the poor countries. Furthermore, the biggest problem is not the amount of people, rather, the size of human impact. All in all, the author concludes that if people want to put  everything right they did, they have quite enough opportunities. Along with author’s being co autious optimistic, he reminds that people can follow not only documentaries, radios, newspaper and all technological devices with internet, but also learn from mistakes of past society not to do any harm thing to our world.

Thank you! A well-organized summary.
Best,
MET

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In the article entitled "Collapse" by Diamond (2005), the author claims the problems how that people abuse the opportunities that environment presents them.  Diamond states remedy for the environment can be only taken by examining past civilizations' mistakes and benefiting from communication tools. Firstly, destroying natural habitats  to build cities and villages as a result of deforestation, people harm the future generations habitats and wild food resources. Then he warns that people are producing energy using fossil fuel oil which emit CO2 and this warms the earth and causes to climate change.   The other supporting ideas are missing. Please complete your summary and get feedback before skills check.

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MET

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In the article entitled "Collapse" by Diamond (2005) the author discusses four major environmental problems and how can we solve them. The Author states that as we are the ones who are destroying the nature, we can also people can solve these problems as well (be specific with what does he suggest?). Diamond criticizes the destruction of natural habitat which we depend on in order to maintain our life. build urban cities and other unnecessary facilities.

Please go over my comments here and go over your second post.
Best,
MET