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Double checking is helpful.🧑
Eden.

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Make it entertaining. Conor

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Lots of expression

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Creative settings and characters.Mack

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Give your text expression.🧑
Eden.

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Make a clear middle and problem
Esther

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You need a problem and a solution mike

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Clear writing to make sure my buddy understands the writing so it makes sense to her
Imogen

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Use lots wow words to make the writing more exciting.Daniel

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The problem must be clear so they can understand it👍Miller

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Make a clear start middle problem and end, Jonah👍

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Make the story easy for younger people to read michael

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Very bold letters so that they can read it. Samuel (-:

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A good way to end speech. EG: "I WANT FOOD!" Screamed Max.
Eden✋

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Use adjectives, nouns, verbs and adverbs. Hayden

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Making sure you have one paragraph on every slide. Mikaela

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There should be a big area for your buddy to click the link.
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Use lots of wow (; words michael zzzzzzzzz

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I need to add more slides and a conclusion.
I need more adjectives and waw words. ROMAN

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Your'e writing for your BUDDY not an adult be ceative  fromfrancesco

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Don' forget to use your punctuation properly for it to make sence.Layla

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Lots of punctuation  Natasha

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lots of description in the setting e.g dark rocky quiet cave
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Honour and other emotions are great to make an engaging narrative

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Ther must be a boled title . Wes

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Spelling must be correct so when the buddy is in areyear they will know how to spell the word correctly Miller

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Don't make the story to short. Daniel

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As much adjectives and verbs for a paragraph possible.
Eden👍

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Don't try to make the story too long or it will go on forever and ever,Jonah

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Check your work for mistakes and put more exiting words in there

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Lots of adjectives and verbs and adverbs.Mack

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You must have a clear problem. Julia

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An exciting title so people actually want to read it-Alexandra

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Vocabulary. Conor

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Super WOW words

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Tittle is clear to the buddy and also very exiting. Samuel👨🏻‍💻

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The hyperlinking must be well done so it is a clear story Miller

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Put a capital letter after a full stop

Masoon

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A MASSIVE AMOUNT OF INFO IN THE INTRO.
Eden

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Include funny charecter like calleu Ben

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Make the writing more exciting since it is not for an adult.Daniel

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Make the writing more exciting since it is not for an adult.Daniel

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Make the story exiting for your buddy (;

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Make the story exiting for your buddy (;

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Adverbs are good for describe so your buddy know like how fast is he or how long is she. Cayden

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Dont forget to edit your work. Wes

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Make the writing big so the buddy can read it
Esther

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Make sure exiting things are hapening to keep my buddy entertaind
Imogen

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Change some writing in your powerpoint if you don't like your original writing. Hayden

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Don't make one part of the story to long because it could get boring.Layla

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4 - 5 sentences per paragraph Miller

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Let your mind be imaginative and add some things in to your story if you think it will make it better. Emma

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Make the font big enough and don't drag the story out, Jonah

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Write your name at the start or end so they know its you. Ben

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You need commas if there are lots of things. EG: I bought an apple, an orange, and and mango.
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You need at least a paragraph and make it easy to read

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You need at least a paragraph and make it easy to read

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ADJECTIVES ARE FUNDEMENTALFrancesco👌

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The font must be easy to read. Julia

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Make sure my writing is detailed to give my buddy has an idea of what is going on
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Describing character  and setting in introduction. Conor

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In powerpoint the font must be big enough so the younger buddy can read it Miller

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Editing and good expressions Natasha

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When your hyperlinking make sure you hyperlink it to the right slide. Mikaela

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Description is the key to make it what you want it to be

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You should use adverbs to back up your verbs.
Eden

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Not to do running writing so they can read it Ben

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Exciting wow words with lots of detail.Mack

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Focusing on puntuation so my writing makes sense
Imogen

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Do big enough writing so your buddy can read it easier.Daniel

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Make sure your words are big so it fills he page and so your buddy can read it. Hayden

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it need more  problem and it can be very diffrent to thengs mikayla

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Including the same topic for each paragraph Ben

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Lots of descrpitoin should make the story more intresting for your buddy. Cayden

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Good naratives include adjectives, nouns, and good editing from the author Miller

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This story should have lots of expression and gaps to breathe. Samuel (=

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Lots of adverbs and a good title to make your story exiting!Layla

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Lots of pictures and colour francesco

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A use of words that people can understand.
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Dont forget to edit your work. Wes

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Colourful pictures and clear writing for your buddy to see. Mikaela

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Put in lots of describing words to make the story interesting and lots of punctuation
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Lots of discribing words so the reader knows what every thing looks and smells like. Alexandra

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Lots of discribing words so the reader knows what every thing looks and smells like. Alexandra

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The introduction should be at least two paragraphs. Julia

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I need to include more slides and a conclusion.
I need more wow words and adjectives. ROMAN

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A font big enough for reader to read. Conor

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Put in alot of different words so you can expand your vocabulary, Jonah 

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Put in alot of different words so you can expand your vocabulary, Jonah 

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I think tha lots of picturs and coulers sutible for you buddy. Big fonts and langage easy or the slightes bit challenging for your buddy to read.
Sol

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Lots of wow words to make my writing exiting,imogen

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Paragraphs with 4-5 sentences with detailed description.Mack

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Vocabulary plays a very important part alongside punctuation each can tell a story of their own.emma

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Make sur you read your work befor you finish Hayden

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You need to add exiting sentences and conecters Ben

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A detailed narative should include lots of wow words Miller

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Checking your writing so nothing is wrong.Daniel

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You need verbs,nouns,adjectives and adverbs -Michael

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You need verbs,nouns,adjectives and adverbs -Michael

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Lots of adjectives to make my writing exciting. Mikaela

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Lots of adjectives to make my writing exciting. Mikaela

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Punctuation and editing your own work.  Sol

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Punctuation and editing your own work.  Sol

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It should include a detailed paragraph describing the setting. Emma