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Year 8  zPresentation communication project

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WWW:I think they manage to do all the similarities and differences and dded alot of colour and information so I think they would deserve a mastering

EBI:If They has more drawing it would be better
Does Colombia have alot  of attractions?

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2. Developing because they gave information about traditions and festivals .
3. They did well giving festivals and traditions for each country
4. They could have added more information on their similarities because they only said that both countries have holiday and festivals.
5. What are the similarities of both country's holidays and festivals ?

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Developing
WWW: a good amount of information, with a good amount of basic information about the trading, customs and festivals celebrated in both countries. The illustrations you had put for the basic profile of the countries look good and relate really well to the countries.
EBI: It would be even better if you had made the information more detailed and explain the reasons of the similarities of the two countries.
Question: Would you be interested in visiting Spain after the research you did? Would you consider the chance of going to the various festivals there?

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I think you should get a mastering. Your group has added, custom, traditions and festivals plus you added some other information. WWW- your group added lots of details and your words was all organised. EBI -your group should doodle a bit more and don’t leave any empty space on the paper, there should be more pictures. Your group was so well done that all my questions were answered!

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Developing
I love the amount of detail and information you added but I think you could of found more things in common between the 2. But I love the detail and design nice job.

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Grade: developing because you included the festivals, customs and traditions
WWW: The things you did well were finding the similarities and differences between the two countries. The best part of your work is that you added beautiful illustrations ✌︎('ω'✌︎ )
EBI: To improve your work you need to maybe add more information in the front page. For example the official languages spoken in Malaysia (There is also mandarin :)

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Developing
WWW:You were able to identify all the similarities and differences.You were also able to add colour and decorations to it to make it beautiful anf fun to read.

EBI: It will be better if you find more similarities.

Q: I would like to know more the music of the countries.

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Why did I put devoloping? It is because you guys did quite a good work but the traditions is just not there that is the most important thing. You guys decorated your poster very well. It would be better if you guys can put traditions in. What interesting places are there in Mexico?☺️

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Grade: Developing

Reason: They did their work well and identified all the nessesary information. Even better if they could make it more detailed and do some of the optional topics.

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Developing because they didn’t add enough information ont the similarity part
They give good information on the separate part.
Even better if you can add more information to the similarity part.
Would you like to go to Cuba?

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Devoloping
-Good list of festivals for each country
-Did not add enough information on the similarities
Even better if there are more relevant similarities
Good job.

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I will give you developing because you guys are very creative

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Developing because you managed to identify the customs and more about each countries
WWW: -Enough basic information
-Managed to find similarities of both countries

EBI: -Unique And detailed similarities

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Developing because
WWW:The information are clear and alot  of good informations
EBI:They would be even better if they have detailed descriptions of similarities.
Questions:what are there traditional cloth and foods?

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It would be even better if you guys could find more things in common.

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I think they deserve mastering because they included lots of information and drawings.

What went well: they had alot  of information including extra information

Even better if they dont leave any empty spaces on the paper.

You guys did so well I dont even have a question because you covered everything. 5/5 stars

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I will give you developing because it's creative

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Grade : Mastering  because they gave enough information and did a good job on decorating
Www: they did a Good job on putting a lot of information for both countries and their similarities
Ebi: they could have add a bit  more colour on their wordings because it would look a bit dull with all written in black colour .
5. Is Peru near

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What wine well? I like the drawing and colour you added.
It would be even better if you guys did the design different because it is very hard to understand and it is also confusing.
Did all members of the group contribute to the project?

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Beginning

WWW: You were able to write information about the countries and also decorate the paper.

EBI: You should have find more differences and similarities of the countries.

Question: I wanna know about the religion and music of both countries.

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WWW:They were able to write a few thing about the similarities and difference but I think they should get a beginning

EBI:If They Added more information and more drawings because there is still alot  of empty room

Question:Why is Cuba in Europe?

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I grade you a developing, your group was really organised but your group didn’t add any extras. WWW- I like how your group’s work was organised and neat, the front covers are nice. EBI - you should add more details and add more drawings.

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Beginning
WWW: the decorations and the descriptions were clear
EBI: They have to put more informations and be more specific and also work as a team, I think Emily did all the work.
Questions: what are they customs and traditions?

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Grade : I think I will give a Mastering for their work because the information is well shared and also very beautiful. Their differences were very clear and understood the culture properly.

WWW : I really like the front page and few very information squeezed into the front page. But the best part of this is that I like how they designed and tried to make them very good looking.

EBI : Some more information was written down in the poster, not just very different facts but more explanations.

Question : What is the currency?

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Grade: D
WWW: What went well is that you included awesom illustrations! The best part is that you added extra information!
EBI: What you could do better is to maybe add more festivals, traditions and customs （＾ν＾）

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Developing because you had information but no extra information.

Www: nice decoration and organisation

Ebi: you should include extra information as well

Question: what other similarities do your two countries have?

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I will give you mastering because there is a lot of information

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Mastering
-lots of detail and information in terms of each country
-drawings are nice
How are the drawings so detailed
Awesome work

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Mastering because a lot of detail
The drawing were nice
No even better
Why did you write your Peru like penu

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I really think you can do better if you can write down more information with the title. It’s juat that little tiny bit that you are missing. You can do better than this. The cover is a little plain as well. What can you do in Buenos Aires? 😅

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Grade: Developing
Reason: They added some optional topics but it wasn't as detailed as it could have been.

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Beginning
WWW: -the decoration
-enough basic information

EBI: -You could’ve added the customs of each country
-work as a team because from what it looks like, Emily is doing everything by herself

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Beginning
WWW: There was a generally good amount of information about the two countries, and the illlustrative decorations there were in the poster, was very pretty.
EBI: Howevrr, I suggest that you 3 work as a better team if you guys end up with each other again as it seems that the poster was mainly one persons effort, which also meant it lacked alot  of other information such as traditions and customs of the countries.
Question: Would you consider working with each other again? If no, why not?

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Grade : Mastering because they showed the information very clearly
They did well at giving a lot of information in similarities and differences
Even better if they could add a few more drawings to their leaflet ( in the inside )

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WWW:They wrote a lot of information and their drawing were very nice so I think they deserve a mastering

EBI:More colour to make the things not so plain

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Grade: Developing

Reason: They made their work really detailed and added decorations and optional topics. However, they didn't add the compulsory topics. Even better if they could include the compulsory topics as well.

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Beginning
WWW: the informations were well organised
EBI: ADD MORE INFORMATIONS
Questions : what are their customs and traditions?

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Grade: M
WWW: What went well is that you added a lot of extra information like food that made me hungry (*´꒳`*).
EBI: Even better if you could add customs in your work.

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They should get mastering because all the criteria’s they needed were all there. The poster is amazingly coulourful. The cover is just a little plain but the information part, WOW! GREAT JOB! This is what I call an amazing work! What fun stuff are there in Colombia?😎

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MASTERING(・∀・)

WWW: Nice design and writing.You guys were able to find all the right similarities and differences.

EBI: You could have addded more facts about it.

Question: I would like to know more about its music.

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I think you should beginning, it’s beginning because you didn’t add traditions and customs. WWW- your group’s work was well written and neat. EBI - you should add more topics and details into the project. Question: Did you search the traditions and custom? Or is it because you forgot?

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Developing
Www: I like the way you wrote the capitals.
EBI: even better if you added more colours to your project. But apart from that well done

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Developing
WWW: -The decoration
-the basic information
-some extra information

EBI: -You add customs
-the music of each country

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Grade : Beginning

WWW : The flags looked very realistic and very good. They included most of the facts about the country and mostly facts

EBI : more colour and decoration and more information please

Question : what is the drawing in the right down corner?

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I would give you guys developing or beiggining becasue you didnt really put any traditions or customs in the mind map.

Www: you put alot  of information

Ebi: you include the traditions and customs of mexico.

Question: did all group members contribute?

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Mastering
-clear information
-nice drawings
Even better if: some bigger drawings on the mindmap page.

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Mastering because there is clear information.
Your drawings were nice
Ebi if your writing Is bigger
Can you write bigger?

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Beginning
WWW: I like the effort that you guys had put into the decorations of the poster, and how you decided to add alot  of extra information of the two countries but I I feel that you guys were missing alot  of the basic information from the two countries.
EBI: please try to include the traditions and customs of the two countries. But other than that really, good job!
Question: Do you think that you would like to go there? And for what reason?

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I will give them developing because they should add more pictures and drawings

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I think your grade should be developing, you didn’t add traditions and customs... WWW- The front cover was good, and you added more detail. EBI - Your group could have wrote the tittle above the texts so it’ll be more organised. Questions: what are the traditions?

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Grade: Developing

Reason: They did their work well and included all the compulsory information needed. Even better if they could add some additional topics and make it more detailed.

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WWW:They have quite alot  of information so I think they deserved a developing

EBI:If there was more colour it would be better because it easier to tell what it was

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mastering
WWW: every informations were clear and straight on the point
EBI: it would be better if you add customs
Questions: How did you do the decorations!
It’s very nice!

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Developing because they should decorate more and research on their music and food.

WWW: They were able to find facts about the countries .

EBI:You should add more information.

Question: I wanna know about its food.

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Grade: D
WWW: What went well is that you added festivals and traditions in your work. The best part of your work is that you added very cute (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵) illustrations.
EBI: Even better if you would add more information on like what the people do during the festivals.

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Developing becouse you guys printed stuff out.
Www:I like the way you added extra information .
EBI:you guys could draw your pics instead of printing them out.

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Devoloping
-very plain mindmap  page
-nice front page for Malaysia and Mexico
-Good information on each country
Good work

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I will give you mastering because it's very detailed even better if you add more pictures

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I’m so sorry but, yeah! Too less information very plain. But I hope you can do better, COME ON WHERE IS THAT SPIRIT of you guys doing the good work! You guys can do it! More info, but great job on the cover, WELL DONE! 😃 Is Cuba in Europe?🤪

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I’m so sorry but, yeah! To less information very plain. But I hope you can do better, COME ON WHERE IS THAT SPIRIT of you guys doing the good work! You guys can do it! More info, but great job on the cover, WELL DONE! 😃 Is Cuba in Europe?🤪

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Beginning because it is very plain
Your drawing were nice
Ebi more information
Can you put more information

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Mastering
WWW: -The decoration
-the basic informations
-a tons of extra information
-the cute cactus

EBI: -you add both country’s customs
-if you could add more similarities to both countries

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Developing because they had nice drawings on the outside.
They did well at including enough information
They could have added a bit  more drawing in the inside
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Mastering
WWW: I like the fact that you guys had included alot  of information when it comes to the differences between the two countries. You guys added alot  of information to it and gave alot  of details, which is very evident if you just see it from first glance. You guys put alot  of effort when it came to the information, adding alot  of details to the extra pieces of information and core subjects of information.
EBI: However, I feel like you could add more similarities instead of only political stands the countries are in. Other than the similarities, you guys were very close to acing the project. Other than a few minor things, EXCELLENT JOB!

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I think that even though you guys had alot  of information you us didnt include anything about traditions and traditions are compulsory so I would give them a developing/big giving.

Www: creative ideas

Ebi: they followed the rubrics

Question: would you want to go to argentina?

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Hyb

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WWW:Their design is very nice they had alot  of colour but I will give them a beginning.

EBI:More drawing to include with information

Is it worth going?

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Grade: M
WWW: What went well is that your illustrations are WONDERFUL and you added every compulsar information. The best part is that your words.... GIRL IT’S SO DAMN NEAT AND WELL WRITEN! (・Д・)
EBI: Even better if you could add a little bit more information in the front page, like population. ( ◠‿◠ )

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I give you a beginning because you guys decorated it creatively.

WWW: You guys found facts about them and also decorated it nicely.You were also able to identify the similarities.

EBI: You should have added the customs and traditions.You can also decorate on the back page.

Q: Would you like to go there

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Beginning/Developing 1/2
WWW: that have a good clear informations
EBI: it would be better if that add foods and customs and more drawings
Questions: what are the customs?

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Beginning
-good amount of facts
-no customs and traditions
Ebi= Put customs and traditions
Good work

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Grade: Mastering

Reason: Their work is very detailed and neat. They included nice drawing and made sure to add all the compulsory information, even the optional ones.

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I give them mastering because they had a very detailed and amazing mind map with lots of colours.

Www: everything mostly

Ebi: Please add more similarities

Question: would you like to go to Columbia?

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Your grade should be Mastering, you guys added more topics and the map mind and front cover are very organised and neat. WWW- your group added the topic ‘food and religion’ and your topics is very detailed. EBI- your group should have added more similarities. Questions: what are the tourist attractions for Colombia and Malaysia?

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Grade : Devaloping

WWW : Lots of information contained in the piece of the leaflet and I was very creative to put this kind of printed-out things to outstanding thee decorations.

EBI : Even better if they had more decoration not just printed-out stuff and this is going to be very good when you say that this things contain a lot of information and it is very important.

Question: What is the currency?

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Beginning - Developing
WWW: -the basic information
-dem decorations ( drawinggggssss )

EBI: -The customs of both countries
-more similarities of both countries
-add more informations ( music, food etc. )
MORE COLOURS AND ILLUSTRATIONS!!! I KNOW Y’ALL GOT DEM ARTISTIC TALENT OWO

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It is so neat and tidy, all the information needed is all there, if I was a tourist I would never ever not know much about Peru or South Korea. The cover is so amazing and awesome! 🤓 How did you guys keep everything in a straight line! 😜😝

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Beginning because you didn’t have any customs and traditions.
Www.Decorations was nice
Ebi they should add customs and traditions
Is there anymore similarity?

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Beginning because they did not include the topics that were compulsory
Www : they did well at adding pictures and decorating their leaflet however theycould  have added more information for each topic and similarities for both countries
What are the other similarities of the both countries ?

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I will give you mastering because it's very detailed and info

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Beginning
WWW: you guys did a good job on giving basic information about the traditions and festivals of both countries.
EBI: It would be nice if you guys added a bit more information to your poster and maybe a bit more doodles but other than that, good job!