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The author doesn’t use the typical type of formatting like quotation marks around quotes and many pronouns to describe the subject. These sentence structures make the text more simplistic and childish

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The author includes no quotation marks, there is an apostrophe at the beginning of the passage. Without the quotation marks the story feels more seem less. It feels as if you’re there peering into Connell’s thoughts

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I think the author makes the choice to indent paragraphs at some points as a way to indicate dialogue between characters

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I see him going in a direction as to where something traumatic happens and they end up becoming more open to what this relationship is to them.

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I think the author provides a quick storyline but doesn’t explain what’s happening. They don’t use proper grammar or punctuation and it kind of adds to the confusion we as readers feel. I think the author does this to make us want to find out what all this random information is and how it pertains to a specific storyline.

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I think the way the author writes makes it easy to follow the story even though the lack of quotations could get confusing if you don’t pay attention

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I think the author uses the dialogue to communicate to us the simply but somewhat complex relationship the characters have and the dynamics between each other

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I didn’t like the fact he didn’t use quotation marks. Since the whole story is a conversation. Although the confusing storyline made the reader want to continue reading to try to figure it out.

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I think the author makes the choice of removing punctuation to make it sound more natural.

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I think the author uses less punctuation and quotation marks because they want the read to be fluid and easy, which it was

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I think the author makes the choice of leaving out punctuation/using incorrect puncture to potentially add a sense of naturalism to the dialogue

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I think the author’s lack of quotation marks are meant to make dialogue seem more natural. Lots of dialogue helps readers understand relationships between characters.

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The author makes the story line very hard to follow by using unorganized complex diction.

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The author didn’t use much quotations and at some points in the story you were just so confused as to what was going on because of the way the author used his formatting. I’m not sure why they made these choices because in the end, this story was so confusing

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The author uses a lot of dialogue to help show the connection between characters and their relationships

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The author makes a confusing plot or storyline to keep the reader questioning and engaged

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I think the author makes the choice to use words like “screwed” along with phrases to describe a more sassy attitude because he wants to connect to a younger audience and engage them in his story.

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I think that the author makes the choice to use a lot of dialogue to keep the reader engaged.

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I think the author uses simple, digestible, and short phrases to make it more appealable to teenagers. We tend to have a short attention span, especially in recent years. This use of sentence fragments is to catch our attention .

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