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Think about the author's choices. What has the author done well so far? Have they successfully created suspense? Do they have a good use of dialogue, word choice, or figurative language? Do they use flashbacks/foreshadows?
I think they did a good job because they do great with flash backs and detail just there is a bit to much of it like oh my god there is a lot of detail they create suspense fine but like we are in a book where the world is overrun by vampires they could do a lot better. Also there is little to none figurative language like some here and there but not that much same with foreshadowing like it could be better

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Give me a review about your book. So far, what do you like about your book? What do you not like? Who would you recommend this book to? Why?
I think out of ten a 7.5 because they don't give name of my main characters its too long for just talking about surviving through a vampire Apocalypse to many little details that could have just been mentioned in like a conversation or a thought. I like that my book is doing something different from usual apocalypse by using vampires. I don't the how they get into every single little detail like the book is to long for its own good and not really I would not recommend it because its just a hassle to read through all of it but it is bit interesting once you get to the non boring part.

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In this scene he has to split from the group he is in to get rid of his scent because they all keep saying they smell and human around and that he would rather not be a million pieces and in someone stomach. This affects my characters emotions/ actions because it cause him to action and get away from the group and clear his scent and his emotions because he feels he might be ripped to shreds if he did not get away fast enough

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In this scene he slips when he is talking and kept doing because he was nervous because there was so many vampires and believe he might be dead but it is ignored.This is a mirror for me because that happens to me a lot when I slip up and jumble my words together or stuttered and I have to go back and think.

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in this scene He is with some people that have also won the lottery and we take a small look into what is going on in his mind because in the dialogue it shows him talking about what he should say to not get caught and on thing slips out while he is talking which causes him to freak out but the kind of just ignore it. This affects his emotions/actions because it causes him to think hard about what he is saying and what movements he is making and his emotions because when he slips up he freaks out thinking he might be dead or even worse

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In this scene the main character feels like he is out of place when they are training because he is not a vampire but finds another vampire that is like him just not human and he feels that like he is the only person he can connect to in that moment.This is a mirror for me because I have felt like this when going to new schools when trying out for new sports or when just trying out new things and meeting new people

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Tell me about the conflict of the book. Are there many conflicts or one main conflict? Does the conflict affect the characters or plot? How? In my story the world or the part that he lives in is ruled by vampires and they live in this dome and outside it is a waste land so the conflict is that some humans are left and trying to survive so the conflicts that humans are trying to survive in this vampire infested world. Yes this affects our main character because he himself is a human trying to survive and already he has almost died like four or five times

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In his world it is ruled by vampires and outside is a waste land but there is a field out there with trees with fruit and other things so he has to go here a lot of the time to get food because the vampires control in this affects his emotions/actions because it makes his go to the special place and also it make him think about his father that had past after a vampire incident

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In this scene he wins the lottery and is surround by a lot of people and in his mind he feels like the luckiest person in the world but and that same time the most unlucky and that same time. This is a mirror or me because something has happens that has had a rare chance and I feel lucky but at the same time like it was not really that worth it

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in hunt the main character has  a place he goes when he needs a break somewhere where the sun always shines and he eats fruits and takes a break form society and this is a mirror because sometimes or most of the time I don't have that on rare occasion but not often and kind of just waiting for that to happen thats why it is a mirror

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Response 4: Tell me about an interesting topic that is present in your book. What have you learned about this topic/idea? What are you still wondering about this topic? How has this topic impacted your story (the characters and/or the plot)?
In the story there was a vampire and some how it turned millions into vampires and I thought it was interesting because it is like a Zombie Apocalypse to a whole new level because they are stronger faster but they burn in the night

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Response 1: Make a prediction about what you think will happen next. Use information from your story to support your prediction.
(He got picked for a hunt lottery and now has to hunt humans for sport but is a vampire and does not have the power or skills to do that)I predict that he will find a away out of the mess he is in by either escaping or helping the other humans escape before he escapes or he faces off with the vampires and defeats them or falls to them

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in this scene his father run in to tell him he has been infected and that everything he has told him about an what to do is going to come in play here and he runs out the door far far away.This is a window and a mirror at the same time because I still have a dad but he has prepared me for things and I have done them on my own like ride a bike cut wood and other things that can be useful

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In this scene he has over slept and his clothes are messed up his eyes are blood shot he has stubble and someone is knocking on his door, and he realizes that everything he needs is at his house far away, This affects his emotions/actions because he becomes worried and panics then calms down before being resourceful and putting new clothes on , shaving with this sharp object and putting on sunglasses and getting out of the situation

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in This scene he is telling us about the world he is living in and he talks about everything he does to stay alive like being fit and doing things that vampires do like not laughing and not sweating and this affects his emotions/actions because instead of laughing he has to scratch his wrist and because he can't sweat he takes swimming because you can't see the sweat also he barely goes outside in the day because he can't have any sun burns

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in This scene he is at home doing things a normal human would do hiding from the vampires when his dad burst in and he tells his son that he will never see him again and then he runs out the door and locks from the outside and runs as far as he can away because he has been infected. This effects my characters and his emotions/actions because it causes him to hate vampires and everything about them , developing a blood lust from them

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It affects him because in this scene he wins a lottery to hunt down humans and he is one now everyone is looking at him and congratulating him because he won and now he is kind of screwed and does not know how to get out of the situation this affects his thoughts because he thinks he might die because the thing he has been picked for is hunting down humans and he does not have the skills or powers of a vampire to be able to hunt them down or eat them effectively

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in this scene he wins a lottery to hunt down humans and he is one now everyone is looking at him and congratulating him because he won and now he is kind of screwed and does not know how to get out of the situation and that has happened to me sometimes and I have found away out but sometimes folded

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Miuntes 30
pages:15
Di I meet my goal : yes I did I read through the very boring and very fun parts

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Goal 2- Keep reading even through the boring parts

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Goal 2- Keep reading even through the boring parts

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I was able to barely make it through the first boring part and  I know there is more but I will meet this goal by just reading and knowing that after this something will happen

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Minutes :25
Pages:10
How am I: I felt good just a bit bored because there is nothing really going on right this second

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Metaphor because she says she was born bad when really no one can be born bad only raised to be. It is effective because she says this but it does not really mean she was born like a horrible person

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"What about a house, I say, because that's what I came for" (Mango street p.64)

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"What about a house, I say, because that's what I came for" (Mango street p.64)

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Denotation:a building for human habitation, especially one that is lived in by a family or small group of people.
Connotation: Somewhere Esperanza can be free from her family and troubles
The mood is positive because it is something Esperanza wants so desperately
They used it because she came to the fortune teller for it so now she wants something about it from her five bucks

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Explain what Esperanza means based on the following section: “Not this way, every evening talking to the trees, learning out my window, imagining what I can’t see” (p. 73).

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Explain what Esperanza means based on the following section: “Not this way, every evening talking to the trees, learning out my window, imagining what I can’t see” (p. 73).

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She is probably relating to her grandmother being stuck in a window only to imagine what the world looks like outside and what she could do but being stuck in a window where she can look pretty

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Based on the following section, compare Lois and Esperanza: “She’s got big girl hands, and her bones are long like ladies’ bones, and she wears makeup too. But she doesn’t know how to tie her shoes. I do” (p. 73). 

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Based on the following section, compare Lois and Esperanza: “She’s got big girl hands, and her bones are long like ladies’ bones, and she wears makeup too. But she doesn’t know how to tie her shoes. I do” (p. 73). 

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Lois is the girl that is pretty and kind of dumb too but some people look at the first part and say yes instead of reading the whole part so are different in that Lois is more pretty but Esperanza is smarter

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When Esperanza asks about a house, the witch lady says, “Ah, yes, a home in the heart. I see a home in the heart” (p. 64). Explain what you believe this means. 

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When Esperanza asks about a house, the witch lady says, “Ah, yes, a home in the heart. I see a home in the heart” (p. 64). Explain what you believe this means. 

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I believe this could mean that she is a home for people around her and that they can be with her when they need someone to lean on or this could mean is could have a house close to the heart of a city

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The witch lady sees jealousy and sorrow in Esperanza’s cards. Why do you think these showed up for Esperanza fortune? 

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The witch lady sees jealousy and sorrow in Esperanza’s cards. Why do you think these showed up for Esperanza fortune? 

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Maybe because someone she knows in life will get everything she wants and she might be Jealous of that and sorrow because maybe she might lose someone close to her

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Is the name ­calling serious, meant to hurt each other's feelings, or is it just joking? 

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Is the name ­calling serious, meant to hurt each other's feelings, or is it just joking? 

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Yes and no because sometimes it can because you can call someone something harmless and other times it can be hurtful maybe even racist I mean like i said yes and no it could but usually no

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"The kids bend trees and bounced between cars"(HOMS p .28)

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"The kids bend trees and bounced between cars"(HOMS p .28)

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This is a hyperbole because they might be hyper but they would not have super powers when they are hyper.I know this because there might be kids with a bit too  much energy but not super powers
The is effective because it telles you that the kids can be very hyper therefor very hard to deal with

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"She use to own a building as big as a whale"(mango Street p. 12)

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"She use to own a building as big as a whale"(mango Street p. 12)

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This is a simile because she is comparing a whale and a building.I know this because there is no way a building on mango street is that big
This effective because it shows how big the building is and telling you it is huge.
This helps you understand how big the building is.

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"You eyes notice a pair of gold glasses floating in the dark".(Mango Street p .19

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"You eyes notice a pair of gold glasses floating in the dark".(Mango Street p .19

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This is a personification because glassess can't float in the dark
This is effective because this shows what the man thinks of a feels he is quiet and patient.This is in here because it just kind of shows the perspective of the old man
This helps you under stand that he usually unseen in the dark.

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"They are wearing shiny Sunday shoes without socks"(Mango street p.14).

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"They are wearing shiny Sunday shoes without socks"(Mango street p.14).

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Denotation: Sunday is the day of the week between Saturday and Monday
Connotation: It is a day when your suppose to look nice because most things like weddings and party happen on Sundays
The mood is positive because Sunday is a positive things and they are telling us these kids shoes looks nice
They used this because it contrasts to the previous sentence they are wearing crooked clothes up top but their shoes look very nice, It added that these kids probably look in dumps or other places for close like trash cans or they get clothes from goodwill

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"Their clothes were crooked and old" (Mango street ,p14).

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"Their clothes were crooked and old" (Mango street ,p14).

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Denotation :bent or twisted out of shape or out of place
connotation:the connotation is like badly treated and beat up and broken down kind of bad
The mood is negative because they use it for the person clothes meaning they have bad clothes
They used this because they thought it would help portray that these kids clothes were bad and kind of run down ,It added that these kids were poor or in poverty and that's why they are were those things

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FORMAT-"Sentence from the story "(Mango street ,p.#)

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What type of figurative language is the author using ?Explain how do you know this.
Why is it effective?Why did the author include this piece of figurative language ?what does it help you picture or understand

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"Windows so small you'd think they are holding their breath"(Mango street,p.4)

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"Windows so small you'd think they are holding their breath"(Mango street,p.4)

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Personification . I know this because it is making a thing or object do a thing a living human being would do .It is effective because it makes you have a picture of how small these windows are .My house is as big as the sun and my windows are like giant glass panes you see in churches

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Connotation :
What mood or feeling is shown in this phrase?Positive?Negative?
Why did the author use this phrase or word?What did it add to the story ? what do we learn?

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“As if she were a fancy chandelier” (p. 11) 

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“As if she were a fancy chandelier” (p. 11) 

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-Denotation- a decorative hanging light with branches for several light bulbs or candles.

Connotation- valuable, elegant, delicate, expensive, desirable

-Using the word chandelier adds a positive and sophisticated mood to this section of the story.

-The author used the phrase fancy chandelier so we can learn how Esperanza's great-grandfather views her great-grandmother. We learn that he loved her and really wanted to marry her. He values her and sees her as a delicate, elegant, desirable woman. The message would have been significantly different if the author said, “As if she were a sack of potatoes.”

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She has a long name and it is means something just like me my last name is long and weird and means immortal it is weird because it has an apostrophe but it does not really mean anything that supports my name meaning immortal

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This scene she says "Everything is waiting to explode like a Christmas tree". This is a window for me because there have been time where I have been like this on edge and waiting to explode

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The window is that she lives on mango street this is a window for me because I have never once in my life seen this street or heard of it that is why

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A mirror for me is that she has a sister that she does not like and thinks her name is ugly I have a sister too that I dislike but her name is not ugly this is why it is a mirror for me

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The window for me is that she has had to move a lot in the past and had to move all over they place this I have never had to do once in my life

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The House On Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros

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The House On Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros

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In this scene Zeke meets someone who does not believe that he is the child of Birar Wilkes  and almost threatens to hurt him if he says it again he checks with his colleges and finds out that it is him and chases him down to try and kill him in that moment Zeke falls down a ventilation shaft and he is woken up by an older woman that bombards him  with questions

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Zeke's father has died but also created something that thought would help the world but in the end destroyed some of the USA with earth quakes and also made a zombie out break happen.
This is a window because I don't have a dead father that has broken a quarter of the continent and at the same time

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Give me a review about your book. So far, what do you like about your book? What do you not like? Who would you recommend this book to? Why?
I like it so far I give it a 9.5/10 I love it and the reason why it is this is because it has zombies which is one of my favorite genres and steam punk which is also very cool I like the creativity that was put into this book and I wish there was a second I would recommended this to whoever likes zombie apocalypses and steam punk it is also very interesting in that we don't get know what cause all this damage in till later in the story

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In this scene Zeke is lying on the ground and he is pasted out and has amnesia and is confused where he is. He is with a older woman that has been asking him Are you dead or alive.
This is a window because I have never suffered from something like amnesia or memory loss.

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Response 4: Tell me about an interesting topic that is present in your book. What have you learned about this topic/idea? What are you still wondering about this topic? How has this topic impacted your story (the characters and/or the plot)?
Response: There was a drill called the bone shaker that was suppose to be able to drill really fast and precise but instead it created thousands of earthquakes across america and created a blight leak which made a bunch of people into zombies very interesting because I would have never imagined steam punk and zombies together.

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Zeke sees a dark walk way and room. He hesitates and walks away even thought he needs to go that way a looks for a way around but does not find realizes that he needs to go through the hall way of black inky darkness. This is a mirror because I am also afraid of the dark not because of what you think but because I can see so one of my senses is taken away and it is very creepy when that happens

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Her past affects her future because while she was in trouble stuck in a tight space about to faint someone yanked her out and she was fine. They did this because they saw everyone else just starring and he knew who she was and that its not her fault what happened

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I believe the narrator is good because they are actually there and they are experiencing what is going on like the story's narrator is Briar and Zeke Like they are the main characters and they are telling us what is happening so yes I believe that they are reliable. But there are more window scenes because they are set in a very different place and in a very different time and with both very different personalizes

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Pages 15
Minutes: 30
How i felt : bored
Did I meet my goal: yes

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In this scene Birar is in a tight space and she is has claustrophobia and she is hyper ventilating and starting to faint. This is a mirror for me because I have this because I am claustrophobic and have a hard time keeping calm in tight spaces.

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In this scene my main charcter was jumping out of a blimp to fall down into a pile of garbage because she needed to get down to the ground.This is a window for me because I have never jumped from a far up Place and fallen into garbage.

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My character Briar Wilkes Blue or just Briar her past affects her present because in the past her husband created the boneshaker the boneshaker when created made a very bad earthquake that made a lot of buildings break and ripe apart also it made the blight gas erupt and spread around. This is tarnishing because now everyone hates her and her own father was disappointed in her because of marriage with Maynard Wilkes. I chose this question because not much is said about her in the first 80-90 pages and because she was talking about how a lot of people hated her.

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Response #2 : Tell me about the conflict of the book. Are there many conflicts or one main conflict? Does the conflict affect the characters or plot? How?
The conflict in Boneshaker is that Brirar Wilkes's son ran away and she is trying to find him . The other conflict is that Zeke her son is trying to find evidence that wold make his father not guilty of the crimes he committed like destroying a lot of Seattle and make a blight leakage

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Her past affects her future because now while in the city she has to run from people that know her at hater her making her journey to find her son very difficult.

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in this scene brirar is flying past a bunch of broken and run down buildings and ships she is seeing what is happening in the city and she realizes that it is bad and the situation for them sucks. This is a mirror because I have seen many places like this and I just feel bad for the people there

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Pages 25
Minutes:27
How I felt : good
Did i meet my goal : yes

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A lot of people know her because of the things they call her blue widow because her husband's last name was blue and he is now dead making her a widow. They call her this because it is kind of a name that should make you feel depressed but I think it sounds cool

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Response 1: Make a prediction about what you think will happen next. Use information from your story to support your prediction.

I think that Briar is going to make it into the city and start looking around for her son Zeke while on the other hand Zeke is going to be running around ton with Rudy running from Zombies and other fugitives

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In BoneShaker Briar wilkes blue she is now trying to find her son who is is the city and is trying to rewrite history this is a window for me because no one has really gone missing in my life that I have never seen again I have eventually seen everybody I have meet and talked to again unless they are a stranger

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What is happening is that Birar is conflicted with her son Zeke because he does not look like his father but also he does not think his father is bad but the father has started an earth quake and a blight leak with his contraption the BoneShaker drill(haven't learned what it is yet)

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In this scene Zeke is on adventure with his new friend Rudy they walk around trying to find his grandfathers old house. This is a mirror to me because they have something that is lost in time that they are going on an adventure to find and that has never happened to me

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Pages: 25
minutes: 24
How i felt:fine
Did i meet my goal:yes

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Pages :45
Time: Hour 1
How i felt I felt a tiny bit bored because we are still learning about things in the story

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Minutes 12
pages: 15
How i felt during reading: fine

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I have seen that I make some progress but not a lot and that i should try to get farther into the story .

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pages:10

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Minutes:24
pages:20
How I felt: I felt a little bored at the end

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Minutes:26
pages:20
How i felt reading : I felt good and stuck to reading my book for the whole time and only looked up once right before the end

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-Boneshaker - cherie priest
- Billy summers-Stephen king (3)
- Get away -Zoje stage (5)
- All's  Well- Mona Awad (4)
- Dreadnought-Cherie priest (2)

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Favorit authors
-steven king
- Sara Pennypacker,
- cherie priest
Favorite books
-Argos
-the shinning
-Pax
-storys to tell in the dark
-Al copone does my shirts
Favorite Genre
-Fantasy
-Adventure
-action packed
-horror
Topics/Characteristics
- brave
- silent
- calm
- collected

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This is getting good grades this a dream for me because I know very well that I can complete it easily. I inspired this dream myself.
I will accomplish it by studying and working harder at school

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Who inspired this dream was my mother father and mother or my mom's side grandparents they were very Italian and they inspired me to find who I am and what my heritage is .
I will accomplish it by taking a plane there and saving enough money to go.

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To become one of the best lacrosse goalie to touch a lacrosse stick
I was inspired by my goalie coach to do this a he inspired me because he was always smiling and never really yelled but even when he yelled its when he stopped smiling you should be scared
I will accomplish this by doing by best and working as hard as I can at it even if it means sacrificing other things that are not as important.

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To become some type of engineer
This was inspired by my fascination with building things and looking at the different parts of things and taking things apart to put them back to gather and seeing what each part did
I will complete this by finding and trying out the different types of engineers I can be.