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I noticed that first she did not realize how much she need kisses from her dad.

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I noticed that first she did not realize how much she need kisses from her dad.

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You can see that in memoirs, they are very emotional and sad.

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I noticed that she was really sad and she doesn't want to be like the jellyfish. She doesn't want to drift away, she wants to be lucky.

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I thought her mom and dad might divorce and that's why her dad did not kiss her.

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I think that sense her dad shook her hand and he was going on a work trip he might have just been stressed about it and that affected how he acted and that affected how she felt about their relationship.

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I noticed she realized she took her dads kisses for granted when her dad stopped kissing her on the cheek.

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I noticed that she feels really bad because she don't get a kiss from his dad

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I think she feels really bad because she doesn't et a kiss from her dad

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I noticed that she really misses her dad when they are apart and she doesn't feel the same when her mom kisses her on the cheek.

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I think she get nervous when her dad does not give her a kiss. She think they are drifting apart.

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I noticed in the new memoir she compared herself to a book.

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I notice that she is very shy. I also notice that the book eleven and Quietly struggling don't give the names of the main person.

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I noticed that it was kind of like a essay it kept saying another way it is hard to be outgoing is...

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I noticed that she was very quiet and shy to herself

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I noticed that she likes to be 11 but sometimes she can't and she think she get 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1

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I noticed that she likes to be 11 but sometimes she can't and she think she get 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1

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I noticed that she is very shy and is afraid to speak for herself.

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I noticed that she is really shy and she is scared to speak up.

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I noticed that she wants to be eleven but she can't so she wishes that she was 102.

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I noticed that se is very independent and is working hard even though she is very quiet.

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She is quiet and nervous because she does not what to get made fun of

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You can tell that she is very quiet and independent like in the story Eleven.

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I think that she is a very independent person and that is good for certain reasons.

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I noticed that Eleven by Sandra Cisneros was more of a story layout. You could really picture what was happening to Rachel.  Quietly Struggling was more of an essay layout.  Some paragraphs started with for example, and another reason.  Eleven and Quietly Struggling are both different kinds of Memoirs.

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The girl from Eleven and the girl from Quietly Struggling are kind of the same person in different worlds. They are both Quiet and they don't have much people to talk to. They are both trying to be positive because the girl from Eleven tried to remember that it was her eleventh birthday. The girl from Quietly Struggling was thinking about the girl from the story she read and to be more like her.

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I noticed that she wished she wished she was 102 and was trying to think on the positive side when the red sweater got thrown on her desk.

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there isn't a space for last kiss so I'm just writing it here.

I notice that all of the memoirs we have read are all kind of sad.

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I noticed she kept saying she wished she was 102, and that she said she hated these two people.

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I noticed that it kept saying I'm 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10. it was kind of like a poem it said when you turn eleven you are 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 and 11 like how a tree has how many rings of how old it is.

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She was really dramatic about being 11 years old in this story. and she also was very dramatic too.

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You can tell that she was being very emotional like a memoir.

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I notice that she was being emotional and was overreacting just because she turned 11.

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I noticed that this article has a lot of emotion in it.  I really was able to fit in Rachel's shoes, and picture the story.  I was also able to see all of the different emotions that Rachel was feeling after her teacher forced her to put on the sweatshirt. I think it was a very powerful essay.

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I think that she over reacted at having to put the sweater on, I mean, it's just a sweater! Just say it isn't mine and then it would be all over and done with! Right?!?!

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I noticed that she is shy.

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I notice that she is very emotional.

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I notice this essay is very powerful and shows a lot of emotion

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I think the Last Kiss was more of a story Memoir.  You could really picture the story and how the main character was feeling.  It was different than Quietly Struggling because that was more of an essay Memoir.

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I noticed that she feels bad because she is not getting a kiss from her dad.