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Hi

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Lacking

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Look at the audience

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Use better grammer

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Concentrate

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Anecdote

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"Can't buy back a life" well said

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Try to speak more formally and clearly

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More relevant information

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Use better grammar because also don't tell us obvious rhings

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Choose appeals that are relevant

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Next time use eye contact and do more research on the speech.

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Next time when you use an emotional appeal try and sound more passionate about your story

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Shows repetition, but needs better posture and eye contact

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Make it more of a emotional appeal when you are talking about something emotional otherwise it doesn't seem right.

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You need to keep eye contact

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Be more confident, and know your contention

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Don't slump ove r

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Please

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Try and make your contention clearer

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Concentrate

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It's dodgy but its an appeal to an expert.

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Practice more so you are not hesitating and getting nervous

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Your composition was a little unsure. Try to be certain of what part of the speech you are on.

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It isn't ligit

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Very informal language.

Don't sure so any "umms" and "likes"

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Next time try to find more up to date information

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Is it your speech

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You should try looking at us

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KNOW YOUR TOPIC MORE NEXT IM

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Next time try to know some of this off by heart, look up more and try not to pause so much between words.

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Use updated information

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Needs more preparations and be more confident next time

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Be more confident with

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Be more specific have info more up to date unfocused

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Was it a legitimate expert appeal?

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It was good how you used statistics but whey of are speaking stand up straight

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Maybe you do the maths

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Prepare your speech better and try to appear a bit more confident, and don't 'talk to yourself' (how do you say that, no not 5 million, etc.) Just go on with your speech. This will help keep your speech easy to follow

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Formal language

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DONT SAY LIKE AND UMM...

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Try and don't say like and um because it distracts us and we don't concentrate properly, also use more emotive language to make it interesting.

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Be more

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Just a bit too casual

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Look up at your audience more

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Appeal to an expert

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Try to have more eye contact and don't stumble as much

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You need to know your facts and you also need to have a clear point and every thing needs to be legitimate

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Try not to say like and umm maybe practise a bit more

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Be less jumpy

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Try standing straight a bit more so you look a professional

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Practice more next time you do a speech

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Next time make sure you learn your lines

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Have clear beginnings and ends for your arguments.

Be clear about your contention

Use legitimate sources

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Try to practice your speech and link your words more smoothly

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Use words that you know how to pronounce instead of rambling and spending a lot of time trying to figure them out (especially if you're on a time limit)

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Make sure you have a bond with the addience

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Well, there was an anecdote

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Try and make us infer instead of bluntly telling us

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Next time practise your speech more so you know what you are saying

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Try and sound more knowledgeable and confident

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Perhaps try to make it a bit clearer. And make it more fluent throughout the speech.

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Good but I cold not see a intro

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Next time, practice your speech more so it runs more fluently and you don't have to keep checki

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More eye contact maybe

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Try and make some more eye contact.

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Maybe slow down a bit

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Next time le

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Lethal*

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Rehearse your speech

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Doesn't seem to know the topic very well

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Try to be more interested and enthusiastic about your topic so it's more persuasive.