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Does the paper start off with a sentence that is interesting and makes you want to read furthur?

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Is there a clear topic sentence?

What about details supporting?

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Look back at the prompt, are you answering it?

Is there flow to what you're saying?

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Look at the tenses of your verbs (past, present, future)

Make sure everything is correctly capitalized & that there are no stray capitals.

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Make sure you are using these correctly.. . , ? ! ; " ( ) :

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If every sentence starts with a pronoun (I, he, she, they, we...) try to change it up.

Try for sentences of varying length, some short, some long.

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Is each paragraph indented correctly?

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Try reading it out loud and see if it makes sense.

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If you aren't positive, check it on the iPad.

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If there are complete thoughts on each side of the comma, it is probably a run-on.

Try reading it out loud. If you lose your breath before you get to the period, it might be too long.

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Is it interesting?

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Are there places to improve (spice up) your vocab?

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Are there places to improve (spice up) your vocab?

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Try synonyms that elevate your language but still make sense.