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After scanning through your sliderocket, I can conclude that this is what I thoroughly enjoyed about your presentation:

- Your choice of names were very professional

- You stated your criteria in an elegant form

- I enjoyed your imaginative thinking (The money, and snow came down on particular slides)

- Your pictures were incredibly clear (almost High-Definition)

- When you were organizing your slides I found it interesting that you inserted them in a backwards formation

- I enjoyed how you made each piece of text a different colour

Overall, an prestigious presentation!

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I like how you decided that a prize is involved.

The Criteria is terrific.

Great explanation on the Ranking.

Well organized.

It is a little difficult to read because of your font and background.

Extraordinary wording.

Why did you decide to use that as your criteria?

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What I enjoyed about your presentation:

Your background made the font stand out.

How you had a "Final Ranking".

How you wrote the amount of criteria met.

Questions I have for you:

Why'd you choose that criteria?

What did you use the websites for?

Observations I've made:

On "Structure #4" the place/rank is not filled in.

On "Structure #5" the structure "Wheely" you stated "None" for the question "What gears/pulleys?" When in fact it does have a gear, which is the wheels that make the structure move.

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you should nt have the money falling besides that great title page

Fine criteria you should of put the meaning too

Okay table of contents dont forget capitals

Question:

Why did you pick those places

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-Substantial font & font size

-Beautiful chart it is spaces out and all the criteria is along the top

-I learned new words

Questions:

Why did you choose those places?

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Decent Title

Great layout & nice names

Why did you choose that criteria

Questions

What made you pick the names ?

How did you choose those places ?

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Here is what I really enjoyed about your slide-rocket presentation:

Your background matches your text

Your criteria

The creativity of the names of your creations

The reasons for 'Why this place?'

The descriptions of Forces,Gears and Pulleys

The concluding page

I think I speak for the class when I say that your presentation was amazing!!

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I thought that your presentation was simple, but still used knowledge in all of your work, making it a perfect combination. Everything was very organized and that made it very easy to understand. You kept the colour's the same throughout your whole presentation, making it look very professional.

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I liked about it was the words at the front and the pictures of your structures but you need some more time on it

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What I enjoyed about your presentation:

Your background really made the font stand out.

You had an introduction and conclusion, not many people thought of adding that.

How you had the criteria that each structure fit, on each structure's slide.

It was well organized.

Questions I have for you:

Why'd you choose flexibility as one of the criteria? (I'm not asking in a negative way)

How'd you choose the criteria?

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Just like ryan said I like how you put hannah certified in the very beggining.

Your cover page was perfect i like the title and how you put hosted by...

I love you introduction its probably the best i've ever seen .

I like how you started it of with good evening ladies and gental men that was very professional.

I liked how you orginized the contestants slide .

The way you put you photos was very cool.

I like you conclusion

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Your slide rocket was very simple, and easy to understand, and had a background that made everything clear, and easy to see. The picture's of the models really made it much easier to understand your presentation. Your organization was neat, but do you think your sentences would fit your criteria?

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After scanning your sliderocket presentation, I can conclude that this is what I thoroughly enjoyed about your presentation:

- Jakob your presentation stunning (very

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nice work

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I would like to begin by informing you that, I felt your organization was eloqent. You completely exceeded expectations

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What was flawless:

You were extremely organized.

-The texts you chose stood out

-You had plenty of criteria.

-Each question was well explained and had many examples.

-You made sure that 1st place met the criteria.

-You used creativity to make up your named and they still matched your structures.

What I liked:

-The background looked like a notepad to match school.

-The text and font stood out.

-You made creative names.

Questions:

-Why did you choose that criteria?

-Why did you choose these names?

-Where did you get your inspiration from?

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You only give us one secend to watch your slide you should make it 20 secends and maybe no music but everything else is amazing great job i really like yours it was out of the charts

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What I liked:

~ Your names

~ Table of content.

~ Well organized.

~ How you put why you put the structure in that place.

~ How you put what forces were being used.

Questions:

~ Why did you choose those names for your structure?

~ Would you only sell your structure at Cat?

~ Why so many criteria?

~ What structure would you sell for free?

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organized

what structure would make any object what would u make ?

picture quality

I thought you did this project perfectly

good but could have a little more text

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You had a fair amount of writing but there were a lot of spelling mistakes other than that you have a good slide rocket

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I though that your presentation was very well put together. I thought your wording was absolutely beautiful. Good choice in background and colors, It was bright but didn't take away from your presentation,props to you on that. I liked how you answered your questions, you had a lot of evidence for each slide and that helped me see why you ranked each contestant. I enjoyed the transition from each slide to slide. Overall I thought your presentation was very well put together and beautiful. Good job Serena!!!

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Likes:

- your presentation was very organized and had a beautiful set-up

- you used your criteria effectively to judge the contestants

- the black background and the yellow font made everything stand out

- your descriptions were brief, yet detailed

- you answered all the required questions with described detail

Questions:

- What inspired you to name the structures the way you did?

Overall:

This was a phenomenal presentation. You had all the required slides in your presentation, made the slides descriptive, well thought out and over-all admirable.

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I enjoyed watching your 'Beauty Pagent After Show!'

What was I liked:

~>I liked how you had the idea of make a prize for the winner!

~> You were extreamly  orginized!

~> I found that your background was creative!

~> I was impressed by how much you wrote, it is unbelievable!

~> The colour of the text stood out from the background.

~> You had phenomenal pictures!

~> I admired your table of contents it was well layed out, I loved how you put 'The winner is..' instead of first place is.

~> You had breathe taking information!

What was perfect:

~> Table of contents.

~> Pictures

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What I enjoyed about your presentation:

Your background really made the font stand out.

Your transitions weren't all over the place.

You had the same font throughout the whole slideshow.

Questions I have for you:

Why'd you choose that criteria?

Where did you come up with your structure names?

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you killed it!

your criteria was great.

you explained everything like a pro.

Amazing.

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What i very much enjoyed:

- Your criteria was short and to the point

-Multiple fascinating fonts and texts

- The white background really made your text appealing

-Well organized and interesting

Question:

-Why did you choose this criteria?

Summary:

Over all a magnificent presentation, it was appealing, interesting, and well rounded.

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I think you could have explained more because when  was watching it you didnt really use good wording.

Table of contents you forgot about

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What I liked:

~ The names you came up with.

~ How you put what gears and pulleys are being used.

~ Why your structures are in that place.

~ What forces were being used for that structure.

~ Well organized.

Questions:

~Why would you chose to sell it at Walmart?

~Why would you chose that criteria?

~ What inspired you to come up with those names?

~ Why did you name your structure Moooooo?

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Things i thought you did well in your slide show:

~ you had terrific criteria

~ i like how you had the table for your contents

~ you were very orginized

~ very discriptive words

~ Breathtaking information of why you put it in that place

If i had to ask you questions about you slideshow i would ask you:

~  Why did you choose to orginize that way

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Here is what I thought about your slideshow:

* It had substantial writing

* Imaginative word choice

* Creative structure names

* Extremely organized

* Complex Criteria

What I liked:

* Bright colors

* Punctuation

* Information chart

Questions:

* What evidence could you add?

* Did you feel you met the criteria?

* Where did you get your inspiration?

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Here is what I thought, you did absolutely perfectly:

- Organization

- Text/Font/Background Colour

- Picture Quality

I liked how you:

- Built suspense by saying "and the winner is..."

- Placed the Hannah Certification slide at the very beginning

- Chose a black background, so your white text would really "POP"

If I had to ask you some questions related to your Slideshow, they would be:

Why did you elect to display all 5 contestants on one slide?

What was your thought process, during the creation period of this presentation?

Which structure would you choose, if it were being auctioned off for free, and why?

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Good wording ivy

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Good, but too fast.

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Awesome. Just Awesome.

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Good presentation could have used a little more text but good.

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Good presentation, but there were some forces i saw on certain structures that were not listed. But other than that amazing.

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Strong wording, large amount of text, over all a great presentation.

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Yours was really good, simple, and easy to understand.

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This comment is related to "Andy Zeng", and his Science Sliderocket Presentation.

I felt that, even though it was short and to the point, it needed further organization.

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This presentation was short and sweet with just enough description.

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I like how much text you showed for each.

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Anthony nice idea with the first place.

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My Slide rocket

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Hope you enjoy:)

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Nicholas sliderocket

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