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Write about your shopping habits.

Suggestions:

1.    Topic sentence (this sentence should summarize the main idea of the paragraph).

2.    Supporting ideas:

-       Are you a shopaholic? Why?

-       Where do you shop for your clothes/ household appliances/ electronic devices? Food/ flight tickets/…?

-       How often do you shop online?

-       What items do you usually shop online?

-       What is your favorite website to shop online? How do you pay?

-       What are the advantages/ disadvantages of shopping online?

-       Do you like to buy sale off items? Why?

-       Are there any bad experiences about shopping?

-       Do you often bargain when you shop? Why? Why not?

-       What factors do you consider when you shop online? (price/ customer review/ product origin/ after - sale services…)

3.    Concluding sentence (informs readers that the article is coming to a close. It provides a summary of the main points.)

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Hello teacher.  Today I would like to talk about my shopping habits.
Shopping is one of the most common habits of each of us. People can view shopping as entertainment and they shop at any time, when they are happy or sad.
I am not a shopaholic, because I think evening shopping really takes too much time and money. I am a student, so I have to spend my money wisely and use my time on developing myself rather than on the luxury of shopping.
Before buying something, I often have to consider what is the best for me. The items that I usually shop are clothes, cosmetics, skin care products, home appliances, electronics needed for school and work. Every month, I spend a certain amount of money on necessary purchases for myself. I usually shop at student markets, the stores with sale off programs. Regarding cosmetics, electronics, technology devices, I always choose reputable stores to own the best products. In addition, I also shop on e-commerce platforms such as Shopee, Lazada, Tiki. In the current pandemic of travel restrictions, I think online shopping is the right choice for all of us. We just need to go to online shopping sites to search for the products we need to buy, then choose a suitable payment method, then we just need to stay at home and wait for the product to be delivered. Besides, online shopping sites also have promotions like other offline stores, is that very convenient? However, there are also limitations such as shipping costs, delivery with a long time, fragile products, wrong product, etc.
I have been disappointed when do online shopping due to long delivery times, poor quality delivery, etc. So from those experiences, I learned the lessons that when shopping online, I have to carefully review the products and their factors such as prices, previous buyer reviews, shipping fees, and delivery time.
Shopping preferences help us to be happy and reduce stress. There is a limit in that if we do not shop wisely. Therefore, to be able to limit arbitrary wasteful shopping, we need to watch carefully and consider your own shopping needs before deciding to buy.

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Good morning Ms. Thuyen and class. Have a fantastic day! My name's Kim Thoi. Today, i am into very happy to talk about my fitness and my eating habits. As we all know, in order to have good health and a good-looking appearance, we have to exercise and eat healthy.
Maybe i was born for physical activities. I love it and i would fell very uncomfortable if i didn't exercise.  My favorite sports are badminton, swimming and doing gym. Especially, when i become a college student, i exercise hard at the gym near my house every day. I spend an hour for exercise. At the weekend, i join the badminton club, clean the house or go for a run in the park. After that, i feel comfortable, my body is much stronger and more beautiful.
It will be great if we combine physical exercises and healthy eating habits.
Being a young generation, even though i often eat healthy foods such as vegetables, drink lots of water, eat enough nutrients (meat, fish, eggs, milk...), avoiding sweets, grains, fatty foods; sometimes i can't control myself in front of fast foods. In my opinion, fast foods are also quite delicious and interesting, but they contain many calories. They cause fat and increase the risk of dangerous diseases. So we need to limit the amount of fast foods as much as possible.
In short, fitness and eating healthy help us healthier, more beautiful and think more positively. To do that,  we should be disciplined and love ourselves. Act now, i can do it and you can do it.

(Bài viết có nhiều ý tốt nhưng lần sau lưu ý diễn đạt ngắn gọn lại, đừng quá dài dòng lặp ý)

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Good morning Ms. Thuyen and class. Have a fantastic day! My name's Kim Thoi. Today, i am into very happy to talk about my fitness and my eating habits. As we all know, in order to have good health and a good-looking appearance, we have to exercise and eat healthy.
Maybe i was born for physical activities. I love it and i would fell very uncomfortable if i didn't exercise.  My favorite sports are badminton, swimming and doing gym. Especially, when i become a college student, i exercise hard at the gym near my house every day. I spend an hour for exercise. At the weekend, i join the badminton club, clean the house or go for a run in the park. After that, i feel comfortable, my body is much stronger and more beautiful.
It will be great if we combine physical exercises and healthy eating habits.
Being a young generation, even though i often eat healthy foods such as vegetables, drink lots of water, eat enough nutrients (meat, fish, eggs, milk...), avoiding sweets, grains, fatty foods; sometimes i can't control myself in front of fast foods. In my opinion, fast foods are also quite delicious and interesting, but they contain many calories. They cause fat and increase the risk of dangerous diseases. So we need to limit the amount of fast foods as much as possible.
In short, fitness and eating healthy help us healthier, more beautiful and think more positively. To do that,  we should be disciplined and love ourselves. Act now, i can do it and you can do it.

(Bài viết có nhiều ý tốt nhưng lần sau lưu ý diễn đạt ngắn gọn lại, đừng quá dài dòng lặp ý)

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1. Doroty is not young enough to get dressed herself
2. Susan is not too energetic enough to type the letters
3. They are not early enough to catch the bus
4. Sarah doesn't speaks English slow enough for me to understand
5. The sea was not warm enough to swim

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1. Dorothy isn’t  old enough to get dressed herself.

2. Susan isn’t  energetic enough to type the letters.

3. They aren’t  early enough to catch the bus.

4. Sarah doesn't speak English slow enough for me to understand.

5. The sea wasn’t warm enough to swim.

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1. Dorothy isn't old enough to get dressed herself.                                                           2. Susan isn't energetic enough to type the letters                                                           3. They aren't early enough to catch the bus.
4. Sarah doesn't speak English slow enough for me to understand                              5. The sea wasn't warm enough to swim.

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TRẦN THANH XUÂN PS17933
1. Dorothy is not enough to get dresses herself
2. Susan is not energetic enough to type the letters.
3. They are not early enough to catch the bus.
4. Sarah speaks english slow enough for me to understand
5. The sea was not warm enough to swim

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1. Dorothy is not old young to get dressed herself
2. Susan is not too energetic enough to type the letters
3. They are not early enough to catch the bus
4. Sarah speaks English slow enough for me to understand
5. The sea was not warm enough to swim

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1. Dorothy is not old enough to get dressed herself
2. Susan is not energetic enough to type the letters
3. They are not early enough to catch the bus
4. Sarah doesn't speak English slow enough for me to understand
5. The sea was not warm enough to swim

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1. Dorothy is not old enough to get dressed herself

2. Susan is not energetic enough to type the letters

3. They are not early enough to catch the bus

4. Sarah doesn’t speak slow enough English for me to understand

5. The sea was not warm enough to swim

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1. Dorothy is not old enough to get dressed herself.
2. Susan is not energetic enough to type the letters.
3. They are not early enough to catch the bus.
4. Sarah doesn't speak English slow enough for me to understand.
5. The sea was not warm enough to swim.

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1. Dorothy isn’t young enough to get dress  herself
2. Susan isn’t energetic enough to type the letters.
3. They aren’t  early enough to catch the bus
4. Sarah doesn’t speak English slow enough for me
5.The sea wasn’t warm enough to swim

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1. Dorothy isn't old enough to get dressed herself
2. Susan isn't energetic enough to type the letters
3. They aren't early enough to catch the bus
4. Sarah speaks English slow enough for me to understand
5. The sea was not warm enough to swim

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1. Dorothy is not old enough to get dress herself.
2. Susan is nôt energetic enough to type the letters
3. They are not early enough catch th bus
4.Sarah doesn't speak English slow enough for me to understand.
5. The sea was warm enough to swim.

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1. Dorothy isn't old enough to get dressed herself.
2.Susan isn't energetic enough to type the letters.
3.They aren't early enough to catch the bus.
4. Sarah doesn't speak English slow enough for me to understand.
5. The sea wasn't warm enough to swim.

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Good morning teacher. Today, I would like to talk about my shopping habits. I really love shopping when I have free time. I consider myself as a shopaholic. Because I am a makeup artist, I need and must buy a lot of tools that are relevant to makeup features. I usually shop for my makeup tools on online applications and websites such as Guardian, Xuka Store, Luu's Store, etc. I usually shop online. Every week, there are about 2-4 orders that are delivered to my house. The items that I usually buy are the required makeup tools and necessary things for my house. Xuka Store is my favorite website to shop online. I usually prepay by credit card or electronic purses, so when I receive the packages, it will be more convenient. The advantage when shopping online is that you just need to stay at home then receive the package. There are many factors that may be dangerous if you go out. For example, it is traffic jams, traffic accidents, bad weather, etc. In contrast, the disadvantage of shopping online is that you cannot carefully check the products or they are not real.

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Hi ms.Thuyen . Have a good day !!!

My name is Thoa , today I would like to talk about my shoping habits . I am not a person who likes to shop for clothes because I am interested in minimalist style. I usually buy clothes on Shopee, an online shopping site that everyone knows. In addition to clothes, I also often buy school supplies on shopee. I usually order and pay with my Airpay wallet. Talking about the advantages, this website is very convenient and especially safe during this epidemic season because it limits the movement of people. Shopee has a wide variety of products, we just go there and choose. However, it also has some disadvantages. Firstly, we must not try the product and receive it by mistake. Secondly, the furniture is broken during transportation. I really like Shopee's sale off because there are very cheap products at that time. I don't know how to bargain. Therefore, I choose to buy online instead of going to the market. I often look at reviews to choose a product because they give me a sense of security when deciding to buy it or not.

That's my whole shopping habit, how about you?

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Hi Ms.Thuyen . Have a good day !!!!

My name is Thoa. To day, I will talk about my favorite means of transport. In the 21st century, there are many different vehicles such as motorbikes, cars, trains, etc. But my favorite is the electric bicycle as it is eco-friendly, easy to move and also compact. Because it runs on electricity, it does not generate any waste that affects the environment. However, I think it also has a drawback. It can't run for long distances because it will run out of power quickly and it takes time to charge. Although it is my favorite means of transport, because of the requirements of work and study, I have to ride a motorbike to ensure punctuality, to go to many places during the day without having to worry about charging like using an electric bike. However, I will try to use electric bicycles more to help protect the environment to some extent.

(Bài viết khá tốt, có nhiều ý hay. )

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Hello teacher.  Today I would like to talk about my shopping habits.
Shopping is one of the most common habits of each of us. People can view shopping as entertainment and they shop at any time, when they are happy or sad.
I am not a shopaholic, because I think evening shopping really takes too much time and money. I am a student, so I have to spend my money wisely and use my time on developing myself rather than on the luxury of shopping.
Before buying something, I often have to consider what is the best for me. The items that I usually shop are clothes, cosmetics, skin care products, home appliances, electronics needed for school and work. Every month, I spend a certain amount of money on necessary purchases for myself. I usually shop at student markets, the stores with sale off programs. Regarding cosmetics, electronics, technology devices, I always choose reputable stores to own the best products. In addition, I also shop on e-commerce platforms such as Shopee, Lazada, Tiki. In the current pandemic of travel restrictions, I think online shopping is the right choice for all of us. We just need to go to online shopping sites to search for the products we need to buy, then choose a suitable payment method, then we just need to stay at home and wait for the product to be delivered. Besides, online shopping sites also have promotions like other offline stores, is that very convenient? However, there are also limitations such as shipping costs, delivery with a long time, fragile products, wrong product, etc.
I have been disappointed when do online shopping due to long delivery times, poor quality delivery, etc. So from those experiences, I learned the lessons that when shopping online, I have to carefully review the products and their factors such as prices, previous buyer reviews, shipping fees, and delivery time.
Shopping preferences help us to be happy and reduce stress. There is a limit in that if we do not shop wisely. Therefore, to be able to limit arbitrary wasteful shopping, we need to watch carefully and consider your own shopping needs before deciding to buy.

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Selamat Pagi, Ms. Thuyen, today I would like to talk about my shopping habits.

As you know, shopping is the main way of consumer culture and some people develop shopping addiction. Eventually, they can turn into shopaholics but I am not one of them. When I go shopping, I always think twice before buying anything. Before the pandemic, I used to go shop in familiar stores but now I shop online through E-commerce websites such as Shopee, Tiki, Sendo, Lazada. I like online shopping because it's convenient. I only shop online once a month. I buy shirts, pants, jackets and other useful tools. I make all my transactions through e-banking or other e-wallets. The advantages of shopping online are varied. First, it's convenient, fast. There is a wide variety of products with good prices. On the other hand, you will be faced with fraud, shipping problems, delays. And sometimes returns can be complicated. Once in a while, I like to buy sale-off items so I don't have to spend so much money on those things. Most of the time, I don't bargain when shop online, I just bargain if I buy items in large quantities. There are a few times I almost get scam. For example, in the past, I ordered some items from a guy through Shopee and he sent those items but with the wrong quantity then he texted me he will compensate me with mobile top-up cards. I rejected his offer and returned them back to him, so I could get my cash back through Shopee. After that case, I listed that guy on my blacklist.

In conclusion, online shopping is a new way for us to buy things and find other items that are hard to find in regular stores. I like online shopping but I am also careful not to be scammed again.

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Hello, ms. Thuyên. I'm Hương Ly. Today I will talk about my shopping habits.
Shopping is one of the habits of all people. And it is definitely one of my favourite habits during my free time. According to me, I am a shopaholic because I can control myself when I use shopping applycation. Because I am just a student so almost the things I buy are very cheap and i shop online very often. I usually buy books, clothes, makeup items and things for decorations. My favourite application to shop online is Shopee because it has many promotions. I will pay when I receive the products from the shipper to make sure that they will come to my hand safely. The advantages of shopping online are the convenience and that we can find what we want very easily. However, the worst disadvantage of shopping online is the quality of the things we buy. We don’t know the item is genuine or not. I have a bad experience with shopping online, I used to receive fake shoes when I ordered them on Shopee. After that experience, I make a habit of checking. That is checking the customer reviews and see the differences of prices of many shops. After all, shopping online is still convenient and we need to have some habits to protect our benefits.

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Hello teacher. My name is Tra Mi. Today, I’d like to talk about my shopping habits

Shopping is one of the habits of all people. I'm a shopaholic because  I love to observe and buy everything, not just clothes or some certain goods. I generally shop for household appliances, food, etc. at supermarkets. I usually go shopping by motobike with my mother or my friend. Also, I usually shop online. I often buy shoes and T-shirt online. My favourite website to shop online is Shopee, Instagram,etc. I usually pay by credit cards because it is convenient. An advantage of online shopping online is cheap prices with a wide variety of items. And the disadvantage is that when buying, I often do not trust the seller and do not have enough information before buying. I like to buy clothes sale off because it is cheap and they offer many beautiful items. My bad experience with shopping online is that the clothes are not the same as the pictures, the fabric is thin, the quality do not match the prices. When shopping online, I consider customer reviews, sales services. Generally, shopping is a relaxing experience.

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Morning Ms. Thuyen!

I’m Cam Phuong, today I love sharing about my shopping habits, that is one of my habits when I want to release stress.

To be honest, I’m not a shopaholic because I don’t want to spend too much time and money on it, just only when I feel bad. I almost shop online on Shopee or Lazada once or twice a month. First, the items I often buy are clothes and skincare products as I’m really into fashion and beauty. Second, I love buying the items of household appliances like mirrors, brooms, blenders, cookers or some technology equipment, etc. as I love a convenient and modern life. Absolutely, I’m excited about buying sale-off items because I can both save money and have quality products. I barely bargain due to respecting the value of the products and I usually pay by cash. In order to shop online, I consider several factors such as  prices, shipping fees, customer reviews, and sale services. Besides, I’m not pleased about the time of delivery, it takes 2 - 3 days, or even 1 week, or 1 month. I had various bad experiences when shopping online. One of them is that I buy some items which are suprisingly cheap when there was an event called Flash Sale. In fact, the quality is also like the price, just 1000 dong or 10000 dongs, so it’s out of my expectations.

In conclusion, shopping is one of the ways to decrease bad feelings effectively. That is all I want to share.

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Hi teacher, my name is cong anh. Today I want to talk about my shopping habits. I love shopping but am not a shopaholic because I don't have much money. I usually buy clothes and shoes. I usually shop in stores and sometimes I shop online. My favorite site for online shopping is www.shopee.com. I usually pay in cash when I receive the package. One advantage of online shopping is convenience. One drawback of online shopping is the lack of quality assurance. I love buying things off sale because I can save a lot of money thanks to this. When I shop online, I usually consider several factors such as prices, customer reviews.

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Good morning teacher. My name is Tien. Today I will talk about my shopping habits. I am a person who really loves to shop. I usually shop for skincare products and clothes on e-commerce platforms or Facebook. My favorite websites are Shopee and Facebook. The advantage of shopping is convenience, easy search without going to the stores. The downside is that you cannot try the products. Also, you may be tricked into the wrong products. I had scam quite a few times when I received the products that did not match the descriptions of the shops. I usually don't bargain when shopping because I don't have that skill. I often consider factors such as cheap prices, many dark reviews, and the locations of ​​the shop before deciding to buy. Those are my habits when shopping.

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Hi teacher, i'am Lợi, today i will talk about means of transportation.  Nowadays, traffic is very disorderly. The roads are narrow and have many potholes. So I think that motorcycles are a good choice in the current situation. This kind of vehicle is more flexible than cars. In addition, the price of a motorbike is suitable to my salary. The motorcycle is very useful for my life and my job because it helps me save a lot of time. I can control the time easily when riding a motorbike to my student’s houses for tutoring. Now, it is still necessary to me.  Although there will be some dangerous situation when I attend in traffic, I still love riding a motorcycle. I know that because the infrastructure in our country is not very good, traffic jams or accidents often happen when many kinds of transportation attend on narrow streets at the same time. Anyway, I think that not only me but also a lot of people like to ride motorbikes. In short, motorcycles are the most popular transportation means in our country.

(Bài viết na ná những bài khác, tốt nhất bạn nên tự viết bài của chính mình để tiến bộ nhiều hơn nhé)

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Bùi Quang Tú-PS15352                                                                             Hello teacher, have a nice day, today i will tell you about my shopping habbits. Although i would like to have new clothes i'm not a shopaholic. To me, my income is limited and i don't have many times for hunting sale or everything. I usually buy clothes at Heyyoustudio shop and Shoppee Mall for shopping online. The items that i buy online are usually clothes, shoes, skincare products, etc. My favourite website is Shoppee and Lazada. I usually pay by ATM cards or Airpay wallet and sometimes i pay in cash. The advantage of shopping online is that it is convenient and fast. About disadvantages, they are fake pruducts and virtual orders. I like buying sale off items because somtimes i am very lucky. I can buy a good item with cheap price. My bad experiences is that I received a poor quality product because of the law which did not allow me to check products before paying. Sometime if the prices are much more expensive than the normal ones,  I will  bargain . When i shop online, i will see the buyer reviews and product sales. 

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Bùi Quang Tú-PS15352                                                                             Hello teacher, have a nice day, today i will tell you about my shopping habbits. Although i would like to have new clothes i'm not a shopaholic. To me, my income is limited and i don't have many times for hunting sale or everything. I usually buy clothes at Heyyoustudio shop and Shoppee Mall for shopping online. The items that i buy online are usually clothes, shoes, skincare products, etc. My favourite website is Shoppee and Lazada. I usually pay by ATM cards or Airpay wallet and sometimes i pay in cash. The advantage of shopping online is that it is convenient and fast. About disadvantages, they are fake pruducts and virtual orders. I like buying sale off items because somtimes i am very lucky. I can buy a good item with cheap price. My bad experiences is that I received a poor quality product because of the law which did not allow me to check products before paying. Sometime if the prices are much more expensive than the normal ones,  I will  bargain . When i shop online, i will see the buyer reviews and product sales. 

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Nguyễn Thị Thanh Tâm - PS18042 - Topic 5 

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Nguyễn Thị Thanh Tâm - PS18042 - Topic 5 

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Good morning Ms. Thuyen! My name's Tam. Today, I would like to talk about my shopping habits. When I was young, I used to go shopping with my mother. I'm not a shopaholic because I don't have much need. I just enjoy shopping online when I need to buy something. I usually go to the shopping mall, supermarket or department store near my house. I often buy books, gadgets and clothes online every months. I choose Tiki and Shoppee for do the shopping. After each order, I pay in cash. The advantage of shopping online is convenience, speed, and a variety of goods. However, the weakness of shopping online is poor quality of goods, careless packaging, delivery and fraud to customers. I like buy to sale off items because this will save money for me. In the first time, my mother and I bought a fan at Dien May Xanh. Although I tried the fan at the store, when my mother and I brought the fan home, it was not as usable as it was. I sent it back to the store for warranty, but the quality of the fan still disappoints me. I no longer use that fan at home. I often bargain when I go to the market because I want to save money. I care about the quality of the goods, the affordable prices and the reputation of the stores or the brands. In conclusion, i think shopping habits needs to be considered and improved on the daily basis. Because if we make the right decisions, this will help us save money and own better goods in the future.

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Today i wanna talk my favorite means of transportation. I generally go via public transportation. It's a bus as well as a water bus. You know how convenient it is, and I can do anything when traveling with these ones. I can listen to music with headphones without fear of being arrested by the cops. I can read a few novels and take a short sleep. However, public transportation has some drawbacks. For example, it is always operational from 6 a.m. to 9 p.m.; you cannot use it outside of those hours and wait for a flight bus for an extended period of time. I occasionally missed a flight bus. However, the only aspect of the public transportation that I dislike is that it picks you up at one bus stop and lets you off at another, which requires you to walk to your desired place. I always use it when I go to school and to the locations that are far away from my house. But I also use buses when I am late for school, when I want to hang out with my friends or family, or for other reasons.

(Bài có nhiều ý tốt, diễn đạt ổn)

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Write about your shopping habits.

Suggestions:

1.    Topic sentence (this sentence should summarize the main idea of the paragraph).

2.    Supporting ideas:

-       Are you a shopaholic? Why?

-       Where do you shop for your clothes/ household appliances/ electronic devices? Food/ flight tickets/…?

-       How often do you shop online?

-       What items do you usually shop online?

-       What is your favorite website to shop online? How do you pay?

-       What are the advantages/ disadvantages of shopping online?

-       Do you like to buy sale off items? Why?

-       Are there any bad experiences about shopping?

-       Do you often bargain when you shop? Why? Why not?

-       What factors do you consider when you shop online? (price/ customer review/ product origin/ after - sale services…)

3.    Concluding sentence (informs readers that the article is coming to a close. It provides a summary of the main points.)

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Good morning Ms. Thuyen. I'm pretty exited to tell you about my favorite mean of transportation.

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Hello Ms. Thuyen, have a nice day! My name is Tam. Today, I would like to talk about my favorite means of transportation. In Ho Chi Minh city, the number of death by traffic accident is considered as large as the number of death by plague. There’s about more than 30 people die everyday. Because of the above problem, I think motorbikes have never been my favorite vehicle. Another way, I have been with my motorbike for more than 10 years. In the present era, there are many new means of transport, but the bicycle is still one of my favorite means of transport. In addition to its compact and eco-friendly design, cycling will also help us exercise. Bicycles are friendly and approachable means of transport. Because bicycles are the first means of transport used in difficult economic times. During the war in Vietnam, soldiers used bicycles to transport goods, supplies, food and weapons for the Vietnamese people’s army. With cheap price, bicycles are always suitable for all classes of society. Time of bicycle is also very durable and long-lasting. Compact design, allowing bicycles to slip into many alleys in Vietnam. However, bicycles can not respond in terms of speed like other vehicles. And in case of danger, we should use protective gear when using bicycles to ensure safety. I love bike rides with friends and family. This activity gives me a feeling of peace and relaxation. In the hustle and bustle in the city, bicycle is a suitable choice for me to take care of my health and improve my spirit. In conclusion, I think bicycles should be given more priority and attention to vehicles in Ho Chi Minh city. Because bicycles are a simple and safe solution in reducing environmental pollution and traffic jams.

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Hello Ms. Thuyen, have a nice day! My name is Tam. Today, I would like to talk about my favorite means of transportation. In Ho Chi Minh city, the number of death by traffic accident is considered as large as the number of death by plague. There’s about more than 30 people die everyday. Because of the above problem, I think motorbikes have never been my favorite vehicle. Another way, I have been with my motorbike for more than 10 years. In the present era, there are many new means of transport, but the bicycle is still one of my favorite means of transport. In addition to its compact and eco-friendly design, cycling will also help us exercise. Bicycles are friendly and approachable means of transport. Because bicycles are the first means of transport used in difficult economic times. During the war in Vietnam, soldiers used bicycles to transport goods, supplies, food and weapons for the Vietnamese people’s army. With cheap price, bicycles are always suitable for all classes of society. Time of bicycle is also very durable and long-lasting. Compact design, allowing bicycles to slip into many alleys in Vietnam. However, bicycles can not respond in terms of speed like other vehicles. And in case of danger, we should use protective gear when using bicycles to ensure safety. I love bike rides with friends and family. This activity gives me a feeling of peace and relaxation. In the hustle and bustle in the city, bicycle is a suitable choice for me to take care of my health and improve my spirit. In conclusion, I think bicycles should be given more priority and attention to vehicles in Ho Chi Minh city. Because bicycles are a simple and safe solution in reducing environmental pollution and traffic jams.

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Bài viết rất tốt nếu thực sự là em tự viết. Ý ổn, mạch lạc, dùng từ tốt và chia thì, chia động từ chính xác. Lần sau em ghi rõ họ & tên giúp cô.

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Good morning teacher, today I will talk about my favorite means of transport. Transportation is an indispensable and necessary thing in our life. However, there are many types of vehicles, but my favorite means of transport is motorbikes.
Because I have vestibular disorder and always feel headache when travelling by car or bus. The advantage of motorbikes is that they are very convenient and fast . Besides, the disadvantage is that the exhaust from motorbikes causes serious air pollution. Our country has millions of motorbike rides every day, every hour. This makes the air more and more polluted and makes the Earth have greenhouse effect. Therefore, there are many invitations to take public transport to reduce the risks of pollution. Although taking the bus makes the body uncomfortable, but I still choose it as a daily means of going to school to reduce pollution somewhat. Although motorbikes are very convenient, there are always potential dangers when you do not know how to use them and go against the laws. I don't often use motorbikes. I just use motorbikes as a means of transport when I have urgent work. I am trying to protect the environment. Even it's just a small thing, it has made a great contribution to environmental protection of the world. And that's my favorite means of transport.

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Hello teacher and everyone, today i'll talk about my favorite transportation. I often go to school and hang out with my friends by motorbike, so my favorite transportation is motorbike. The reason that makes me always choose motorbike to go everywhere because it's faster, smaller and more convenient than public traffic and cars. I traveled to Vũng Tàu by motorbike with my friend about  some months ago. We went to "Pig hill" , Blue Stone lake". It was an interesting experience. I usually ride motorbike alone around the city and it makes me feel very comfortable and interesting. I can see my whole city shining when the sun goes down and enjoy the wind blowing in my face, it's so fantastic. The price of a motorbike is also cheaper than a car, so it's very suitable for people who don't have much money in Viet Nam. Also, it's very convenient to ride a motorbike when the traffic jammed. But the disadvantage of this vehicle is that pollutants can cause serious harm to the environment and human's heath. In the future, i hope people can invent more environmentally friendly cars. That are some reasons why I like motorbike  for transportation.

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Hello teacher. My name is Thuy. Today, I will talk about your favorite means of transport. My favorite means of transportation is motobikes. Because they are very convenient, I can go to many places like going to work, to school, going out in the city without worrying about being late. The advantage I like the most about the bikes is being fuel- saving. However, the disadvantage of motorbikes is that the dust from them pollutes the environment. They easily cause traffic accidents and it is inconvenient to use a motorbike when it rains. Living in this city, I often use a motorbike because it's my main vehicle. Overall, hopefully in the future people can invent more environmentally friendly bikes.

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Have a nice day teacher. Today, I would like to talk about my transportation. When discussing transportation, I love the thing that is convenient and easy to use. With those features, the transportation that I like most is motorbikes.

The first thing that I like about this vehicle is that I can ride it to everywhere by myself and do not depend on anyone. Moreover, its driving license is easier to get than that of car, truck, plane, etc.

Also, another advantage is that I can park my motorbike in an area where there is no big space. Furthermore, this kind of transportation has the variety of designs and colors, so I can change its appearance without paying too much money.

The disadvantage of motorbikes that I don’t like is they are harmful to the environment. Because there are a lot of people are using this vehicle, the traffic jams are always happenning. I travel by motorbike twice a year in the spring and summer. I usually travel to the Western areas of Vietnam.

Due to the motorbikes' convenience, suitable prices, negligible harmful effects; a lot of Vietnamese choose to use them. That is all about my favorite transportation.

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Hello teacher. Today I will talk about our topic 4 which is my favorite means of transportation.
In an increasingly modernized society, means of transport is more and more popular and modern. There are many types of vehicles such as motorbikes, bicycles, cars, planes, trains, subways, etc.
To serve daily travel such as going to school, work, going out, etc., motorbikes are my favorite means of transport. Simply because they are one of the most popular vehicles today, with a reasonable price and easy to use. Just spending an amount of money suitable for us students, we can own a motorbike so that we can travel freely without depending on weather. We do need to pay on trips for public transport such as buses, subways. With the traffic on the streets of Saigon which is crowded and busy, motorbikes are the best choice for me to be able to easily move on the roads. Besides, traveling by motorbike helps me relax more. I can watch the people and sceneries on the route passing me and especially feel the cool breeze. About the disadvantage of this vehicle, I feel it is inconvenient when it rains, even if we wear a raincoat, the sudden heavy rains of Saigon also make us wet. One more disadvantage is that a motorbike can carry two people only and it can't carry a lot of bulky items.
To be able to use a motorbike in accordance with the law, you only need to be at least 18 years old, have a driving license and other relevant papers and comply with the rules when participating in traffic.
Even though motorbikes are my favorite means of transport right now, I still want to have a car in the future.

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Hello teacher today i wanna talk about my favorite means of transportation
Vehicles are very important in life, some examples are motorbikes, cars, buses, etc. But my favorite vehicle is cars, especially supercars and it is Lamborghini. They made a strong impression on me with their looks and engines which block up to more than 700 horsepower. They usually go very fast and I am a speed enthusiast. That's why I love supercars. The advantage of the supercar is that it has a very cool appearance and it also gives the driver interesting experiences such as the feeling of the back of the seat when accelerating from 0-100km in just 2.9 seconds and a maximum speed of 350km. The disadvantage of the supercar is that the operation is not smooth because it is a sports car and the price is very high. And what I don't like about supercars is that they are very gas-guzzling. If in the future I have enough money to buy a Lamborghini aventador SVJ then I will use it for my daily commute because it gives me a very excited feeling.

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Hello teacher. My name is Tra Mi. Today, I’d like to talk about my favorite means of transportation
Out of all the means of transportation, buses are my main way to get around the city. Firstly, I usually go to school by bus. It takes about 45 minutes to get there by bus. I sometimes go with a group of friends to visit the city by bus about once a week. Secondly, traveling by bus is very convenient and comfortable. On rainy or cold days, I can sit on the bus without worrying about dirt, mud or cold wind. In hot weather, buses are air-conditioned to make us feel better. While riding the bus, I can take time to sleep, listen to music or review my lessons. The bus fare is 3000 VND for students and 6 thousand for ordinary people, which is the thing I love most about buses. Besides, the scene of children giving up their seats to the elderly, children and women is warm-hearted. What I don't like is the long waits and late arrivals in hot weather. In short, buses will always remain my favorite means of transportation as it brings many benefits not only for myself but also for the environment.

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Hello teacher. My name is Anh, Today I will talk about my favorite means of transport. It is motorbikes. Today, traffic is very disorderly. The roads are narrow and there are many potholes. So I think motorbikes are a good choice in the current situation. This type of vehicle is more versatile than a car. In addition, motorbikes are suitable for all ages, both old and young people can easily control and control it. A motorbike is very useful for my life, because it saves me a lot of time when going to school as well as to work. In the past, I used to ride a motorbike from Ho Chi Minh City to Binh Phuoc and vice versa. Now, it is still necessary for me. I've been driving it for 2 years and it is still durable. Although the emissions of motorcycles are very harmful to the surrounding environment, they provide people with a means of transportation and save a lot of time for many people. Everything has two sides, if we know how to take advantage of the good side of the bikes then they will be useful for us.

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Good morning Ms. Thuyen and my class!
Have a fantastic day!! I'm Kim Thoi.
In the 21st century, we want to get to our destinations, we must have transportation. So, what is your favorite means of transportation? To me, my favorite means of transportation is bicycle. Every means of transportation has advantages and disadvantages. So does the bike. I love it the most because of its great benefits. As we all know, bicycles protect the environment, save money. They have compact designs so it is easy to carry them. They help us avoid traffic jam. Especially, they make us have beautiful body, a fantastic skin and a good health. However, the biggest disadvantage of bicycles is that they can't go far in a short time. We can only use a bicycle to exercise, to go to somewhere near our houses. I usually use bicycle. Everyday, I go to the market, hang out with my neighbors by my bicycle.
I think there will be a lot of people who like bicycles like me since it brings benefits for ourselves and for our environment.

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Hello teacher. My name is Thanh. Today, I will talk about my favorite means of transport.I think in the future there will be many modern means of transport such as speed trains, trains, submarines, airplanes, space trains, unmanned vehicles but my favorite vehicle is the airplane because it is beautiful and environmentally friendly. Especially when there is too much traffic, it can fly to the sky so that we can move faster without losing much time. We can also use it to tour the sky. It is the perfect combination between cars and planes. It has a drawback as it is very expensive, so not many people can afford it. If I have a lot of money in the future, I'll buy one to take my family to the sky and more places in the world.

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Hello teacher. My name is Thanh. Today, I want to talk about my personal dress code. I have a very simple style of dress. When I'm at home, I usually wear comfortable clothes. When I go to school I will dress modestly. I wear trousers and T-shirts or shirts. When I go to the movies, I will wear dynamic and personal clothes. When going to a wedding, I will choose for myself a nice dress combined with a pair of high heels. And when I go to a funeral, I will wear a black T-shirt or a black shirt paired with black pants. This will bring for me politeness. We should not wear flashy, colorful clothes to funerals. I think I should not wear impolite clothes to weddings, and to school. When I dress formally, I feel more confident about myself. I usually buy clothes at E-commerce sites instead of going to the stores because I can read product reviews and compare prices there.

(Bài viết khá tốt, cố gắng phát huy nhé em)

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Hello teacher. My name is Tai. Today, I’d like to talk about my personal dress code. Everyone has their own way of dressing and so do I.
I'm a simple person, so my style is pretty simple. I don't like colorful clothes. I dress simple because I like comfortable things. I usally wear jeans or kaki , T-shirts and a pair of sneakers when i go to school.  I study at FPT Polytechnic college and dress comfortably, no uniform is required there. I usually wear formal clothes when I have an important exam at school and it gives me more confidence. I never wear colorful and the clothes with many patterns. I often buy clothes at local stores and international such as  H&M, Zara, Blanke, Polo Ralph Lauren, etc. I usally buy clothes directly at stores or a family member buys it for me. My dress style is not formal but I will always keep it.

(Bài viết tốt, đủ ý, chia thì và dùng từ ổn.)

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Have a fantastic day teacher. Today, I would like to talk about my personal dress code. My dress code tends to be simplified because I like things to be simple and not flashy. I usually wear T-shirts with pair of long jeans to go to school. In my opinion, our main purpose when going to school is to gain knowledge and it is unnecessary to dress like going to weddings, party, prom, etc. When we are at the school environment, we should not wear short, revealing, or flamboyant clothes. On usual days, I do not need to wear school uniform. I just need to wear it on the special days of school such as Teachers' anniversary, some other events, etc. Whenever I wear my school uniform, I feel proud of it and this shows the solidarity and unity of the students. Regarding myself, I never wear tight clothes, because I feel uncomfortable when wearing them. When I wear formal clothes, I feel professional and this shows respect to the people who are around me. I rarely buy new clothes because I do not want to waste money on clothes. I usually buy new clothes on Taobao website.
(Bài viết khá ổn, dùng từ hay và chia động từ chính xác. Cố gắng phát huy nhé!)

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Morning Ms.thuyen! Have a sweet time!

I’m Cam Phuong. To me, each of us is unique, so the fashion standards are also different. And now, I love to share my personal dress code.

I'm pretty easygoing and dynamic, so I always prioritize some basic and comfortable items like T-shirts, jeans, trousers for unusual days. I love black a lot, so that reason why there are almost black clothes in my wardrobe. However, on special occasions, I spend a lot of time dressing up with blouses, skirts, blazers, and sneakers to make my own style. Sometimes, I try becoming a lady or a sexy woman, I love to see myself in all different styles. Especially, I'm really into wearing the uniform because I feel confident and formal when I put it on. In my opinion, the uniform lets us feel the pride of an organization. Moreover, the uniform makes the connection and equality between the college and the environment. Besides, I barely wear tight clothes, typical as leggings. I know they make me more good-looking, but I'm not confident at all. In the past, I used to shop online once a month because of convenience. But now, I haven't bought anything new since the quarantine period.

In conclusion, I remember the proverb: "Fine feathers make fine birds". Therefore, let's be yourself and love yourself.

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Good morning teacher, my name is Ngọc. Today, I will talk about my personal dress code

Every morning, I always have a headache because I don't know what to wear. At school, I always choose the simplest and most comfortable clothes. They are T-shirts, pants, sneaker or sandal . At FPT POLYTECHNIC COLLEGE, there's an eye-catching orange polo shirt but the school does not required students to wear it every day so I can wear it whenever I want to look polite . When I wear a school uniform, I feel great and look more professional when all wear similar uniforms. I always want to try out different outfits to refresh myself, so there's nothing I don't like. When I wear formal clothes, I feel more mature and polite. I can buy clothes once a week or once a month and it is not fixed because if I feel like buying, I will buy it. I usually buy clothes at the shop to make it easier to experience the products and in case the shops are too far away, I will order clothes online.

In general, clothes are the most important thing for us to leave a better impression on the others and help us become more beautiful.

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My name is Hieu, today I want to talk about my own dress code. Everyone has their own preferences in dressing and so do I. Therefore, when I go to school, I also choose clothes that are suitable for my body to be comfortable. I usually wear trousers or jeans and T-shirts to school. Sometimes I also wear a shirt with a crossbody bag. I study at FPT Polytechnic college which doesn't require uniforms, so I can wear whatever I like. But I think we should not wear shorts to school. I think I will never wear clothes that are too colorful. I often buy clothes on Instagram or clothing websites, sometimes I also buy it in stores when I feel like it and can try it on. To sum up, I think everyone has their own styles. As long as it suits them and the environment, they can wear whatever they like.
That's how I dress, how about you?

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Hello Teacher ! Have a nice day. I’m Khanh Trinh, today i’m talking about my personal dress code.

I like many different default styles. However the style that I like the most is the sporty one. Dress style can help me feel comfortable. A font personality combined with torn jeans helps me stand out from the crowd. I like classic black and white. Hence most of my clothes has this color. My college is not so strict about the dress code, so I can default anything to school as long as it’s not too ridiculous. When it is hot, I like to wear knee length clothes. It makes me feel good. I have tried many different fashion styles but everyone says I match the current style. I am also very happy about that. I don't wear kinds of clothes that look too revealing. I usually buy clothes in stores near my house but it is under Covid 19 situation now, I usually shop online.

For formal ceremonies, I will choose long dresses for elegance. Everyone has a different favorite styles. Would you like to share your favorite outfit with me?

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Hello teacher, i'am Loi, today i would like to talk about my personal drees code. I have a very casual style of dress. At home, I usually wear comfortable, cool clothes but when I go to school I will dress a little more politely. I wear trousers and T-shirts. But when I go out or go to the movies, I dress in a youthful, dynamic style, and I can take good pictures. When going to a wedding, I will choose for myself a polite suit, combined with a pair of Western shoes but not too prominent. And to a funeral, I will wear a black t-shirt or black shirt, combined with black pants. This will bring politeness. We shouldn't wear flashy, colorful clothes to a funeral. And we shouldn't wear impolite clothes to weddings, and to school. As you know, wearing formal makes we feel more confident in front of crowds. I would rather buying clothes at convential shops because i can try it on and find out the ones which are suitable for me.

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Hello teacher, My name is Huong. Today , I'd like to talk about the personal dress code myself.
I am person with a lively personality. My outfits are based on my personalities . However, I have to adjust my clothes and styles differently to suit different places and situations.For example, at school, I usually wear net and casual clothes that are appropriate. They are long pants, shirts, T-shirts, sports shoes or knee-length skirts and flats. And I won’t wear short clothes to school.

If I go to the movies, go out with friends, I will wear comfortable, age-appropriate clothes and they still show my own personalities. Going to formal and elegant places like going to a party or wedding, I will pay attention to choose gentle and elegant clothes such as a long dress and high heels or casual pants and a light color shirt. I become more elegant, polite and sympathetic in the eyes of everyone. As everyone knows, we girls love to buy new and beautiful clothes, so I bought a lot of clothes at shopping centers and stores near my house. Recently due to the COVID-19 epidemic, e- commerce platforms are my choice for shopping because they are quite convenient and safe.

My personal style of clothing helps me to be confident and comfortable, but I always change to suit myself and absorb people’s comments to help me improve more.

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Goo morning teacher. I'm Thuy. Today I would like to talk about my personal dress code. I think every individual has a different point of view about dress code. Whenever I go to school, i always have to dress up formally, so I always wear a pair of pant and T-shirt. Sometimes I use a shirt instead, with sneakers or western shoes. As I mentioned above, i have to wear formal clothes when i go to school so i think you can not wear short jeans (i mean it is too short to be acceptable) neither pyjamas nor swimming costume. Last year, I still had to wear uniform because i was a high school student but now i am a college student. Therefore, i can wear everything i like as long as it is reasonable. I feel that my school uniform is quite nice and fits my body. I hate wearing sexy clothes because that's not my style. Normally, I buy new clothes for myself three times a month, sometimes when i am broke, i just can buy once. I purchase clothes online and also at shops or malls provided i see the stuff that catches my eyes.
To summarize, I think everyone has a specific style. As long as it is appropriate to the situation, they can wear whatever they like. That is all my thoughts about dresscode

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Hi Ms.Thuyen. Have a good day !!

My name is Thoa , today i would like to talk about my personal dress code. Everyone has their own way of dressing and so do I. I dress simple because I like comfortable things . So, when I go to school, I also choose for myself comfortable and simple clothes. I usually wear jeans and T-shirts to school, sometimes I also wear skirts. I study at FPT Polytechnic college and dress comfortably, no uniform is required. But I think we shouldn't wear dresses that are too short or sexy. I think that I will never wear thin or sexy clothes that are impolite. I usually wear formal clothes when I have an important exam at school and it gives me more confidence. I don't buy clothes often. I only buy clothes for important occasions like weddings, birthdays, etc. and I usually buy in shops because I can try on clothes there. That's how I dress, how about you?

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Hello everyone today i wanna talk about my personal dress code.
I am very careful about choosing my clothes when I go out. I like the simplicity of the way I dress. My school is not strict, so about the uniform, I can wear clothes comfortably when I go to school. I just wear a T-shirt with jeans and a pair of sneakers. But on test days I have to wear the school uniform, it's an orange polo shirt with the school's logo on the left corner. Since it's a T-shirt, it's very comfortable to wear. But when I go to a party or go out with friends, I dress better than a polo shirt and trousers. For example, in terms of formal clothes, wearing it makes me feel more luxurious at special events. I often go to the clothing stores to buy clothes because I can know the fabrics and it fits me or not.

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Hello teacher , My name is Tuan. Today. I'd like to talk about fitness and eating habits.
I’m so lazy so I don’t exercise everyday but sometimes I play soccer. Playing soccer increases fitness of my body and it's my passion. I always do it on the weekend or in my free time. I often play soccer with my friends at the football field near my house. I usally spend 2 hours playing soccer. After finishing play soccer, I feel comfortable and it makes me have better health. Besides, I want to share something about my eating habits. Everyday, I usually eat rice with meat and some vegetables or some kinds of soup. I eat a lot of vegetables to supplement vitamins for my body. Also, I always drink 2 liters of water everday. I avoid unhealthy foods such as the foods containing a lot of grease and alcoholic drinks. As for fast food, it looks attractive and convenient but it's not good for health. I rarely use fast food, I only use it when I don't have time or it is really necessary.
I will mantain healthy eating habits and play sports regularly to have a healthy body.

(Bài viết ổn, chia thì và dùng từ đúng. Cần chú ý viết câu đa dạng hơn để ko bị trùng ý, lặp từ.)

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Hi guys, in this topic i hope i will have something to write about my dress code. I have no personal dress style, I wear evething I like and I feel comfortable. I usually wear casual clothes to school like T- shirts, jeans , sneakers. They are always a good choice for students. Also, I wear a bag to put everything I need in it. if the weather is too hot, I will wear a jacket or hoodie to keep me away from the sun. My school has uniforms for students. The uniform is like a polo shirt and its very colourful but I rarely wear it. It is not beacause I don’t like it, it’s just because I prefer to wear my cool T- shirts. When I go to the cinema or hang out with my friends, I prefer to wear skirts and croptops. The wedding is an important event, so I usually wear dress and high heels with some items like earings, a necklace and a hand bag. I never wear a bikini, because I’m not confident about my body. If I lose my weight, I will try it some day. I often buy clothes when I have free time , I always order clothes online in Apps such as lazada, shoppe, etc. It’s very fast and convenient. That's my way of dressing and i like to dress simply.

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Kumusta po, Ms. Thuyen, In this talk, I would like to concentrate on transportations.

Firstly, transportation is important because it facilitates exchange and travel. There are many different types of transportation such as trains, buses, bikes, motorcycles, airplanes, cars, and so on. For daily transportation, I choose motorcycles because they are easier to park and fix. They can navigate busy city traffic with ease. You can weave in and out of traffic if you use a motorbike. Besides, the cost of a motorcycle comes at a much lower price than that of a car, and riding a motorcycle can actually benefit one's physical health. For example, thanks to motorbikes, we get stronger knees and thighs, calorie-burning, improve neck strength, mental wellness. The disadvantages of riding a motorcycle are when it rains, you will get wet and you cannot carry a lot of luggage when traveling. Also, it is quite dangerous if you get into a motorcycle accident, you might get seriously injured. There is one thing I do not like. It is the headlights. They are pretty weak and barely light up the road of two meters in front of you, so if you want lighter headlights, you have to change to the other kinds by yourself.

The bottom line is that I like to ride my motorcycle every day, but only in the city. For traveling, I would rather choose cars or other transportations because they are safer than riding motorcycles.

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Hello teacher!  I  wanna tell you about my personal dress code. I really like basic styles, so my wardrobe is full of simple things. I usually wear T-shirts, feat jeans. Sometimes i change my dressing styles with shirts or dresses. In my view,  we shouldn't  wear shorts jeans or miniskirt to school. We need to wear polite clothes at school. I don't have to wear school uniform but sometimes I wear it on important occasions like school exams. My college has a very eye-catching uniform. It has orange and white color with college's logo. When I wear the school uniform, I feel comfortable and confident because I'm a student of a well-known college - Fpoly College. I never wear sundress, maybe I will try it soon. I rarely wear formal clothes but when I have special occasions like weddings or parties I always choose princess. When I wear it I feel pretty nice. Sometimes I buy clothes online, on e-commerce websites like Shopee, Yesstyle, etc. I just buy clothes at conventional shops on Black Friday.

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Hello teacher, my name is Thanh Xuân. Today, I'd like to talk about my personal dress code.
I'm a simple person, so I don't like to dress colorfully. My style of dress is usually just a T-shirt and jeans. When I go to school, I just wear as normal as possible such as a T-shirt and jeans. We should not dress in short clothes to school, we need to dress appropriately and formally. I usually wear the school uniform when there is a lecture day or exam day. I feel like wearing my school uniform. My uniform is quite beautiful with the main color of orange.  I don't like to wear dresses or skirts and especially, I never wear sexy clothes. I feel comfortable with my style. And it's okay to wear formal clothes for formal events. I usually buy things when I feel like or when I don't have anything to wear. I buy things online and rarely buy things in stores. My style of dress is not trendy at times but I am comfortable with what I wear, so I continue to be consistent with my style.

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Hello teacher. My name is Tuan. Today, I’d like to talk about my personal dress code.
I'm a simple person so my style is pretty simple. I don't like colorful clothes. My school isn't strict about dress code. I usally wear jeans, T-shirts and a pair of sneakers when i go to school. However, I sometimes wear school uniform, it''s an orange polo-shirt with the FPT logo on the left, the featured image of my school. I feel comfortable and proud of it when I put on that shirt. I never wear colorful and clothes with many patternes. I'm a simple person, so I rarely wear formal clothes. But it's really necessary when you go to the office or go to a party. I often buy clothes at local stores such as Dirty coins, 7milions, SWE, etc. I usally buy directly at the stores or buy online on the fanpage of the stores.
My dress style is not formal and mordern but I will always keep it.

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Hello teacher. My name is Tra Mi. Today, I’d like to talk about my personal dress code

I'm a fashion-conscious person but my style of dress is quite simple. I don't like clothes that are too colorful. Now, I'm studying at a college and my school isn't so strict about clothes. I usually wear jeans and T-shirts to school. When going out, going to the movies with friends, I often choose smart clothes. On special occasions, for example on weddings or birthdays, I usually wear beautiful dresses with high heels. It will help me to look more luxurious and elegant. I rarely don't go shopping and my clothes are usually bought online through channels like Shopee, Intargram, etc. Casual dressing is the style I love the most. I prefer to wear formal outfits only if it is mandatory for my work because they give me more comfort and ease of wearing. In conclusion, I think that knowing how to wear not only makes me convenient, confident in myself but also shows my respect to the people around me.

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Good moring teacher and my class. Have a nice day! I'm Kim Thoi. Everyone has a different style of dressing and me, too. My style of dressing is very liberal and especially, i like to wear clothes with oustanding colors. I usually wear long pants and T - shirts when i go out and hang out with my friends. My school is a private school. Therefore, the way students dress is very comfortable. However, it still retains the formal of the education environment. For example, students must wear long pants or knee - length skirts, uniforms for important events and wear business clothes for prensentations. I love my orange uniform. I'm proud of it every time i wear it. Outside the school, at formal parties like weddings or formal ceremonies like funerals, i don't wear clothes with colorful colors, i usually wear modest dresses or shirts combined with long pants.
I rarely buy clothes. I usually buy it at conventional shops.
I have a comfortable style of dressing but depending on the situations, I will choose suitable clothes for them. And you? Let's talk about your dressing style.

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Hi teacher, my name is Anh. Today i will talk about my personal dress code. I'm a homely person and my dress style is quite simple, so i don't like too colorful clothes. The school I attend is not so strict about dress code. However, I often wear long pants and school shirts. When I go out with friends or stay at home, I often wear comfortable clothes like shorts and T-shirts. Sometimes I go with my mother to buy clothes for me. Because I like comfortable clothes, so formal costumes make me uncomfortable. However, I still need to wear formal clothes when going to school and important parties. That's my way of dressing. And you?

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Hi my name  is phạm Thanh Trí and today I wanna talk about my personal dress code. I don't dress in a certain way. As long as it is comfortable and I am proud of wearing it, I will choose it. Personally, my style can change depending on my moods and time. But for my exams, I always wear my school uniform, which is an orange T-shirt with a little logo of my college on the left because it is obligatory. In my opinion, I feel so comfortable when wearing it. I usually buy clothes at conventional shops of famous brands like routine, Uniqlo, H&M, etc. and I buy clothes on Black Friday since there are many good deals. That's all about my personal dress code.

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Hello teacher my full name is Bui Quang Tu. Today i will tell you about my personal dress code.I usually dress quite simply when i go to school. I am ready to introduce that i'm studying at Fpt Polytechnic College. My school is very comfortable, they just require students to wear beautiful and simple clothes. I always wear T-shirts and jeans combined with sneaker shoes because this is the style i like. When I dress very well, i go out with my friends. The things that i never wear  to school or wedding parties, funerals is ripped knee pants or thin tank top because they bring for me a feeling of lack of confidence. As for the fact that whether i have to wear school uniform or not, I wear it on exams or events at school. Wearing school uniform makes me very proud of my school and i don't even know how to describe that feeling. About fomal and informal clothes, i think they all have their own beauty. I sometimes buy clothes and i buy on Shoppee and coventional shops.

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Hello teacher my full name is Bui Quang Tu. Today i will tell you about my personal dress code.I usually dress quite simply when i go to school. I am ready to introduce that i'm studying at Fpt Polytechnic College. My school is very comfortable, they just require students to wear beautiful and simple clothes. I always wear T-shirts and jeans combined with sneaker shoes because this is the style i like. When I dress very well, i go out with my friends. The things that i never wear  to school or wedding parties, funerals is ripped knee pants or thin tank top because they bring for me a feeling of lack of confidence. As for the fact that whether i have to wear school uniform or not, I wear it on exams or events at school. Wearing school uniform makes me very proud of my school and i don't even know how to describe that feeling. About fomal and informal clothes, i think they all have their own beauty. I sometimes buy clothes and i buy on Shoppee and coventional shops.

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Hi teacher, my name is Hien. Today I will talk about my last vacation.
Last Lunar New Year, I had a wonderful holiday with my family. We decided to go to Vung Tau to swim and eat seafood after a year of studying and working hard, especially for my grandparents. There are totally 21 people in my family, so we rented a 30-seat car to get around. My house is 200km from the beach and it took more than 2 hours to get there by car. My father and my cousin took turns to drive. The trip was very fun and interesting, my family stayed there for 4 days and 3 nights at a resort. The weather was very nice at that time, although there was still some influence of covid-19. The business activities were a bit worse, but the atmosphere and people there were always bustling and very friendly.
My family and I climbed to the statue of God and ate stingray hotpot. We visited the lighthouse and enjoyed some yogurt, walked the square in the afternoon and then returned to the karaoke room. All fun activities made me forget the fatigue in studying and recharge a lot of energy for the new semester. During the trip, I couldn't help laughing and eating a lot of seafood. Because it was 4 days, I felt very sad when the trip ended. It has been a long time since my family had time to go travelling together.
In my opinion, everyone is busy, but we should take some time for ourselves and our families because working and studying too hard will not be good for health. (And that is my last vacation. How about you, when was the last time you went on a vacation with your family?)

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Hello teacher, today I'll tell you about my recent vacation. Last summer, I traveled with my family to Da Lat. It took about 7 hours for my family to go to Da Lat by car. The trip was very interesting, I visited many places such as Van Thanh Lang Hoa, Da Lat Railway Station, etc. Also, there was a lot of delicious food, especially street snacks. My family stayed in Da Lat for 4 days and 3 nights. The weather there was always cool and fresh. The people were friendly, sociable and the food  was delicious. The thing I don't like on this trip was the light rain in the afternoon. I found nothing unpleasant about this trip. And after the trip, I felt relaxed. I created many beautiful memories with my family. That is all I want to share.

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Have a fantastic day, Ms. Thuyen!

One of my best memories is the trip to Da Lat with my friends last spring holiday, which lasted 2 days and 1 night. Therefore, I want to talk about it today.

To me, the trip was not just a holiday but an interesting experience, because the trip is the school's training coach. It’s called “Thu Linh Sinh Vien'' for the leaders of each class to improve the team spirit and leadership. That was the first time I decided to take a trip independently. As we know, Da Lat, which is the most popular destination and attracts numerous tourists, is located in Lam Dong. We spent 6 hours to get to Da Lat by coach. As soon as we reached there after a long journey, I was stunned by the beautiful views that I only heard from rumors. After breakfast, we moved to another place to join the training program. All of us were excited and crazy about having to play with water balloons under 16 degrees. After lunch, we took a short rest then we went to a coffee shop. In the evening, we joined the Gala Dinner and chilled together. That moment was meaningful. Next, we went to Da Lat’s market to enjoy some popular dishes like baked rice, hot royal milk, avocado ice cream, etc. On the following day, we visite Cau Dat to witness the view. How amazing it was. I was extremely surprised at the natural beauty, the fresh air and it was nice to take some fabulous photos. I was really into it and absolutely didn't want to leave. I had a relaxing and wonderful time in Da Lat. That was a pity when we just stayed there for 2 days. The trip left me with many impressive and unforgettable memories. That is all I want to share.

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Hello teacher! Today, i'll tell you about my recent vacation. During my last school holidays, I spent a few days at my cousin’s house at Nha Trang, a well-known sea resort.

On the day I arrived at Nha Trang, my cousin told me that he would make my stay interesting. He would make a raft to use it in the sea. Then he would buy a fishing net to catch some fish in the shallow water near the coast. When I heard all this, I was very delighted because it was one of the reasons that I had decided to visit my cousin. We then walked up to the beach which is near his house.

While we were there, sometime in the evening, the sea looked extremely beautiful. I saw the islands and hills in the distance, the birds in the air, and a few boys and girls playing on the beach. I also saw some fishermen coming out of the water with their catch. This was indeed very interesting to look at.

On the next day, my cousin and I collected some tree trunks from the forest nearby. As my cousin’s house is close to the sea, we decided to make the raft on the beach ourselves. It took us almost the whole morning to make the raft. We then had our lunch and went to Banting, the nearest town, to buy a fishing net. After that we returned to my cousin’s house.

In the evening we put the raft on the sea. The water was still high, but the raft floated quite well. My cousin and I sat on it and began to row it by using the oars that we had made ourselves. We felt very happy indeed and continued to row it. We remained on it for a long time, but as it was already getting dark we did not go far. We returned to the shore and tied the raft to a tree.

On the next day, we went out to catch some crabs and fish. We used the net that we had bought and caught a lot of fish. Then, we had our lunch and went out again on the raft. We continued to row it as far as we could. It was really a pleasure to be away from the shore. The sea was calm and we could row with ease. My cousin taught me many interesting things about Nha Trang. We then returned to the shore.

In this way, I spent my happy holiday at Nha Trang. What a nice vacation!

(It is really nice but should be a little bit shorter)

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Good morning teacher. My name is Tien. Today I will talk about my most recent vacation.
My most recent vacation was during Tet holiday last year. I went to Da Lat with my class. We departed at 5am and traveled by a tour bus. This is my most memorable vacation. Because it was my last trip as a high school student. I was there for 3 days 2 nights. In those days, we tried many specialties of Da Lat such as banh trang nuong, che he, kem bo, etc. The food there was very cheap and delicious. In Saigon, I have not found a 'banh trang nuong' shop with as many toppings and it was not as cheap as that in Da Lat. In addition to eating, we also did a lot of different activities such as parties, nightly bonfires. In the morning, we were led to the top of langbiang, infinity lake, Truc Lam monastery and Con Ga Church. We took a lot of pictures while we were there. This tour was just perfect for me. I'm a little sorry that for some reasons I couldn't do more sightseeing. And we make an appointment that we would come back to Da Lat the following month to make up for that. Hopefully, the covid pandemic will pass soon, so we can do it.

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Hello teacher, my name is van. Today I would like to talk about my recent vacation
Last summer, my friend and I went to Da Lat, we rode motorbikes to there. It took us only 3 hours to get there. This trip impressed me the most because it was my longest trip which was 4 days. When coming to Da Lat, the first thing that impressed me is that the weather there was quite cold. A lot of tourists came there. The first thing we did was finding a place to stay, and it took us an hour to find the place that was both cheap and safe. Dalat has a lot of delicious strawberries, there are unique fruits and tasty dishes, so we ate a lot. Da Lat people were very sociable and funny. On the first day, we went to Lam Vien square at night. In the square there were artichoke flowers and a unique coffee shop. We spent 2 days exploring all the beautiful places in Dalat and taking pictures. On Wednesday, we enjoyed the food there for the last time and were about to go home. What I don't like about Dalat is that the food is quite expensive and the weather is too cold. This is probably my first trip without disadvantages. My trip to Dalat was very fun and impressive. I hope next year we will continue to travel.

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Good morning teacher. I'm Thuy. Today I would like to talk about my most recent vacation.
Last summer I had a trip to Dalat at the end of August with my friends. We went there by bus. The trip was amazing. I stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights. Da Lat’s weather was cool and pleasant, completely different from the heat of the summer. I like it the most when I woke up to feel the chill of the morning with a cup of coffee. The food there was delicious and reasonably priced and what I love most there was the people because they were friendly and approachable.
Although I stayed there for a few days only, I had a very happy trip. I went to the coffee named "Tiem ca phe tui mo to", and Langbiang mountain. Finally, I went to visit the night market and went back to the homestay.
After the trip, I felt very happy because that was my first time to go to Dalat. I hope to come back there soon.

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Hello teacher, My name is Huong. Today , I'd like to talk about my most recent vacation.
My most recent vacation was at New Year's Eve last year.  The tourist destination I have chosen for the holiday is Sapa, a city of Lao Cai. I enjoyed the holiday with my family in 7 days 6 nights in that foggy city. To enjoy this holiday, my family had prepared very carefully. We started to go at 6.00 a.m and arrived in Sapa in 3.00 p.m. After arriving in Sapa, we  went to the hotel which my Dad booked in advance to check in to rest and take a shower. At 7.00 p.m, my family started going out for dinner. Sapa really has a lot of specialties such as Lam rice, grilled food, Sapa noodle soup, hot pot, etc. On the following days in Sapa, I ate most of these special dishes and many others. The food in Sapa was really good. Some of the famous specialties in Sapa were buffulo meat and chestnuts, My family bought a gift. Before coming to Sapa, my family searched a lot of famous places in Sapa to see. The first place we chose to explore was Sapa stone church. It is located in center of town and was built during the French  colonial period. On the next days, we went to Ham Rong mountain, Tien Sa waterfall, coloud bridge, Cat Cat village. An experience I feel very interesting in Sapa is just watching the snow and participating in people's activities. What  I don't like  about the holiday is the foggy weather early in the morning and late at night in Sapa. I had a very happy and enjoyable holiday with my family in Sapa and learned a lot of interesting things from the friendly local people in Sapa. I love Sapa.

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Hi teacher! I want to talk about my recent vacation, I went to Nha Trang beach 2 months ago with my friends. We went there by motorbike. The trip was wonderful. We stayed there for 2 days and 1 night. The weather was quite cool and peaceful. The food there was extremely fresh and diverse, especially the seafood such as crabs, shrimps, snails, squids, etc. What I like most in Nha Trang is that I can both eat well and relax in a very cool place. That vacation was really a memorable one to me.

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Hello Ms. Thuyên . Today I would like to talk about my recent vacation

I went Da Lat with my boyfriend on the anniversary date last January. I went to Da Lat by a tourist bus of Thanh Buoi and I stayed there for 4 days. Everything was so good. During the day, the weather was neither hot nor cold, it was very comfortable . However, at night, the temperature was 9 degrees. It was so cold but I liked it. 4 days in Dalat makes me feel Da Lat very peaceful. Time went by very slowly. In Da Lat , we stayed at Nha Cua Gio homestay. We ate a lot of food such as Lau Bo, Banh Mi Xiu Mai, Hot Soy Milk, Cheese Yogurt , Banh Trang Nuong, Nem Nuong, etc. The people in Da Lat were friendly and generous .

All day, after having breakfast , we went to the coffee shop. And then I went to another coffee shop. Later , we went to have lunch and walked around Da Lat market and then came back to the homestay for a rest. The thing I don’t like during my vacations is a few restaurants sell expensive food with low quality. Another bad thing is that the roads have steep slopes that make it very difficult for us to control and it is so dangerous.

After having many good experiences, I think I will comback to Da lat as soon as possible . I love Da Lat.

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Hello teacher, Ms. Thuyen. My name is Van. I would like to talk a bout my fitness and eating habits. I played sports like football, badminton, volleyball, etc. I like to play football. When I was in the countryside, I played football every afternoon. I've been playing football since I was a kid, so I'm pretty good at this. Every soccer game is 90 minutes. In addition to football, I also practice running, push-ups, pull-ups. Football helps me to increase fitness. My diet is very simple, I usually eat vegetables, rice, beef or eggs. Sometimes I eat noodles, junk food and greasy food. I'm not afraid of being fat because kicking football helps me release energy. I like to eat fruits because they are very good for health. I eat less salt, salt makes me dehydrated. Eating a little fast food does not affect health, eating too much is harmful to the body. I like fitness because it keeps me healthy and in good shape. Eating right gives me energy to work.

(bài có nhiều ý tốt, cố gắng phát huy)

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Hello Ms. Thuyên. My name is Ngoc. Today I would like to talk about my fitness and eating habits

I have played many kinds of sports such as : volleyball, badminton , swimming , basketball, etc. but the sport I love the most is swimming. I usually swim at the distric 9 sports center. I learned to swim when in grade 8. I spend 4 hours swimming on weekend mornings. It makes me have so much energy and become healthy after finishing.

To have a nice body, besides playing sports, I also need to eat clean. Some kinds of food I usually eat are chicken breast, boiled egg and broccoli.  But one substance that is indisspendsable in every meal is starch. And the starch that I choose for my meals is brown rice. I always try to avoid sweet things and junk food because they can make me fat. Therefore, I rarely eat fast-food. It may be delicious and convinient for students but it is not good for my health .

In general, to maintain a nice body, I think all of us should keep doing exercises every day or playing sports as much as possible. In addition, eating healthy helps us not only get a nice body, but also increase our resistance.

(Bài viết khá tốt, cố gắng phát huy nhé)

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Hi, my name is Duy Hiếu, today I wanna talk about a recent vacation. When I was in 12th grade, we had a trip to Dalat with my friends. It was really a good memory when I was in high school. We moved to Dalat by coach and it took 5 hours to get there. We stayed there for 3 days and 3 days for me is enough to discover Dalat. As everyone knows, the weather in Dalat is very fresh, cool and pleasant. I really love the climate there. Dalat food is very delicious, especially grilled rice paper. When we arrived in Dalat, it was late at night, we walked around the Dalat night market and took beautiful pictures together. The next morning, we got up early to drink coffee and walked around Xuan Huong lake and didn't forget to visit domaine church and the lonely pine tree. In the evening, we went to eat beef hot pot in Da Lat and still did not forget to visit the night market in Da Lat. After that, we went to the homestay to talk about the trip. On the last day in Dalat, we went to eat bread with meatballs and took some photos. Then we got on the coach and returned to Saigon. The trip was really great. I didn't have any bad experiences during the trip. Although the trip was short, it was enough for us to relieve stress after tiring school days.

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Hello Ms.Thuyen . Have a good day!

My name is Thoa, to day I would like to talk about most recent vacation. Nice to tell you about my trip to Vung Tau last April and i went by motorbike with my boyfriend. We decided to stay in Vung Tau for 3 days. We started going at 5pm and the weather was great to start an interesting trip. Along the way we saw many beautiful scenes and took pictures together. We went to eat Banh khot and went to the beach. And then we walked around the city and drank milk tea .The people there were very friendly and nice, they were willing to let us try the food. But, there were some people who rode quite recklessly and i don't like this. Fresh air, beautiful sceneries and delicious food are my favorite things when coming to Vung Tau. Looking down from above the city at night was very beautiful, there were nice lights and waves. Hope everything gets better  and I will come back to Vung Tau again.

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Hello teacher. Today I will talk about my most recent vacation. It was a wonderful trip in Vung Tau last March. Starting at 9:00am and arriving at 2:00 pm by car, I went with my family. We traveled after a stressful time and stayed in Vung Tau for 2 days at resort 5* with cool weather and delicious seafood dishes like crabs, snails and fish. The people there were happy and friendly. My main activity were swimming in the sea and pool, going for a walk and taking pictures around the resort with my family. The vacation was wonderful, and nothing bad happened. I feel it was the most unforgettable vacation to me.

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Hello teacher. My name is Tra Mi. Today, I’d like to talk about my most recent vacation
This is the first time I went to Da Lat, the city of thousands of flowers, at the end of 12th grade with my friends. I choose the safer option which is to go by bus. If you go at night, it only takes about 5 hours to come to Da Lat. It was a pleasant and memorable trip. Da Lat, the capital of Lam Dong province, is located on Lam Vien plateau with a temperate climate, cool, poetic scenery. My first impression when I came to Da Lat was the weather, it was quite cold. I stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights. The food in Da Lat was quite good, the scenery was also very nice and the hotel where we stayed was very beautiful. Especially, the people were very friendly. In the morning, we went to Van Thanh flower village. In the afternoon, we hanged out and went around Dalat city. It was very cool but it was so romantic. In the evening, we went to the park and drank the hot soy milk, we sang together and saw the movies. We enjoyed this holiday a lot. It is pleasant and there's nothing I don't like about it. I really like everything in Dalat. After the vacation, I had a memorable experience with my friends. Maybe I will return to Da Lat someday.

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Do you like traveling? I am a person who loves traveling a lot. And today, I would like to talk about my most recent vacation. Some months ago, I had a trip to Vung Tau with my friends. We went there by motorbike, we stayed in my friend's house for two days and one night. Her house was so adorable and her family were really nice. In the morning, I went sunbathe on the beach, then we tried many special dishes in Vung Tau such as Bánh khọt, seafoods, salt eggs cake, etc. and had some nice coffee with my friend. After that, we visited to some famous places such as lighthouse, "pig" hill. "Blue stone" lake, "White Rabbit" entertainment area and the marina. In the evening, we came to the place namely Bãi Sau. It is like Nguyen Hue walking street in Sai gon, you can see local people entertaining there. You also can watch the beautiful sunset from there and enjoy the atmosphere of the ocean. It was fantastic. Besides the famous places and great beach, the food at Vung Tau was also delicious and cheap for students like us, especially the seafood was always fresh. I ate a lot of seafood there like crabs, shrimps, squids, many more. Vung Tau is a great place to travel with your friends. I hope I have time to come back there with my friends again.

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Have a nice day teacher and friends. Today, I would like to talk my most recent vacation. My friend and I had a practice program– “Thu Linh Sinh Vien”. This program was held by my school. This year, Thu Linh Sinh Vien was organized at Da Lat. All of participants were taken there by bus. This trip is an amazing one to me because this is an opportunity to improve my solidarity and have more friends. The duration of this trip is about 2 days. The thing that I like most is the weather and the local people. The weather was cool, so it made me feel comfortable and relaxing. The people who are living there were very friendly and funny. Because it was a practice program, I joined many games to show my teamwork and learn many skills that are necessary to me. The thing that I don’t like is the time I was sitting on the bus. It was too long, so my friends and I felt tired and we got headache. While the practice program happened, there was some light rain. After the vacation, I felt happy because I got new friends and learnt more nice skills that support me in the future. That’s all about my most recent vacation.

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Good morning Ms. Thuyen and class. Have a fantastic day!  My name's Kim Thoi. Today i would like to talk about my memorable travel. Before the graduation exam last year, i went on a trip to Da Lat with my teachers, teacher's family  and my younger sister. It was a school tour to help us relax at the end of the year. It was the first time i had been to a far-away place for four days. The first thing i felt in Da Lat was the weather. Compared to my hometown,  the weather in Da Lat was colder, cooler and fresher. This is a quite famous place in Viet Nam and attracts a lot of tourists. The people there were very kind and hospitable. The food was very delicious, especially the mixed salads. Although it was only four days, my group experienced many memorable activities such as eating the specialties of Da Lat together, visiting tea farms, flower farms, going to the night market together, drinking Da Lat wine together and singing, dancing with ethnic people. I also have funny memories such as going into a crowded place when it rained, my skirt was torn when i got off the model car, ate all the teacher's bananas and went to the wrong hotel because there were too many similar hotels. After this trip, i felt very comfortable. The car that carried us was always full of laughter, everyone was always supportive to each other. They are like another family to me. I got many special experiences in that place. For example, there were no traffic lights, no fans, no air conditionals and flowers bloomed all year round. My younger sister and me always look forward to traveling to Da Lat again, even many times in future.

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Bonjour, Ms. Thuyen. Today, i would like to converse about my last vacation.

My last vacation was a year ago, it was a seven-day trip to Dalat in Lam Dong province. This is the third time i have been there. I went there with my friends. We took a double-decker bus of Futabus. It took us a long time to get there. It was a six-hour journey and we got there at 06:00. After checking in the hotel, we started to unpack our suitcases and took a little break. At first, we rented few scooters, we visited Xuan Huong lake, Dalat train station, Da Lat cathedral then we enjoyed delicious food on the street. The following day, we joined some adventure games such as Datanla waterfall-sliding at Prenn Pass, Kayaking at Tuyen Lam lake. We felt so good and exhilarated! The day after that, we took some photos at Dalat milk farm, i must admit it is a beautiful place. On the remaining days of the trip, we explored other places, bought some stuff, souvenirs, did some touristy things, took some selfies, etc. then we took a double-decker bus to go home and arrived home at 18:00. During the vacation, the local people were nice and friendly, the weather was fine eventhough it was drizzly. There was only a small incident where we almost bumped into a local person but everything turned out fine.

At the end of the day, I felt so happy because i had a great trip with my friends. We have stored quite a lot of photos, videos and made good memories together. I am looking forward to the next trip with my friends. Who knows where we will travel in the future? Maybe some place in foreign countries.

(Such a nice piece of writing. Good job!)

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Hello teacher. Today I will talk about my most recent vacation. It was a wonderful trip in Vung Tau last June. Starting at 23:00 and arriving at 6 o'clock by car, I went with my close friends. We traveled after a stressful exam at school and stayed in Vung Tau for 3 days with cool weather and delicious seafood dishes like crabs, shrimps and squids. Everyone was happy and friendly. My main activity is swimming the sea and taking a walk with my friends in the evening. The vacation was wonderful, and nothing bad happened. I feel it was the most unforgettable vacation to me.

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Hello teacher, my name is Hieu. Today. I want to talk about my exercise and eating habits.For me health is very important. That's why today I want to share with you the exercise and eating habits to have a healthy body. In terms of staying healthy, I choose running as a kind of sport to practice. Every day I spend 60 minutes jogging in the morning or afternoon around my house. By learning to coordinate breathing and movements, running helps me improve my fitness. After jogging, I feel healthy and full of energy. In terms of eating habits, I usually eat meat, eggs and dairy products because they are high in protein. I also eat a lot of vegetables and drink a lot of water to cleanse my body. Besides, I rarely use alcoholic drinks and greasy foods. I think that fast food and carbonated drinks are not healthy. In general, to be healthy, you must exercise enough and try to eat in moderate amounts. (Bài ngắn gọn nhưng đầy đủ ý, chia thì và động từ ổn.)

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Hi, my name is Duy Hiếu and today I wanna talk about fitness and eating habits. I  love doing exercises, so I always go to the gym. Because I marginalize the society, so i don't go to the gym, now I do it at home. I spend 1 hour doing exercises every morning. I exercise every day to maintain my resilience and improve my health. Aside from that, I maintain a healthy eating regimen; I usually eat enough nutrients every day and reduce the amount of fat foods. I feel like I have better health. In addition, I go to bed early and do not stay up late. I never drink beer and other alcoholic drinks because they are not healthy and  I don't like the taste of them.
(Bài chắp vá nhiều nguồn hay sao mà có nhiều màu vậy em, cố gắng chia thì HT đơn xuyên suốt giùm cô nhé.)

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Hello Ms. Thuyên. Have a good day!

My name is Thoa . I’d like to talk about my fitness and eating habits . I often do simple exercises at home to help myself stay healthy. 4 times a week I work out at home with butt and thigh exercises. Besides, I often go jogging at the park after doing exercises. I spend 30-60 minutes every day on exercises. After training I feel healthy and full of energy. About diets, I usually eat a lot of vegetables and chicken breast because they do not contain much fat. I usually use cracked rice or potatoes instead of rice. I also often eat a lot of fruits containing vitamin C to help increase resistance. Sometimes I also eat fast food, but I know how to control my calorie intake, so it doesn't make me gain weight.

Finally, health is very important, so let's take care of our health and eat in moderate amounts, participate in exercises to strengthen resistance.

(Bài viết ổn, có nhiều ý tốt.)

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Hi, my name is Phạm Thanh Trí, today I want to talk about a recent vecation. It's been a long time since I've taken a vacation for myself. I recall my most recent vacation to Nha Trang in the summer of 2019.
I was fascinated by it because it reminded me of something good. I took a coach with my family to go there. I stayed for 5 days and everything was okay, but the weather was too hot for me and the route was so lengthy. I was exhausted on the first day. Then I slept till the afternoon. Then I went for a stroll around the city at night and ate some great seafood. On the following days of the vacation, I went to the beach for a walk. After all, the vacation made me feel at ease and relaxed after long school days. I really appreciate it,  but I did not enjoy the fact that visitors frequently left rubbish on the beach, which gives a terrible impression of the lovely coastal city. I hope everything will be better when I return.

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Good morning Ms. Thuyen and class. Have a fantastic day! My name's Kim Thoi. Today, i am into very happy to talk about my fitness and my eating habits. As we all know, in order to have good health and a good-looking appearance, we have to exercise and eat healthy.
Maybe i was born for physical activities. I love it and i would fell very uncomfortable if i didn't exercise.  My favorite sports are badminton, swimming and doing gym. Especially, when i become a college student, i exercise hard at the gym near my house every day. I spend an hour for exercise. At the weekend, i join the badminton club, clean the house or go for a run in the park. After that, i feel comfortable, my body is much stronger and more beautiful.
It will be great if we combine physical exercises and healthy eating habits.
Being a young generation, even though i often eat healthy foods such as vegetables, drink lots of water, eat enough nutrients (meat, fish, eggs, milk...), avoiding sweets, grains, fatty foods; sometimes i can't control myself in front of fast foods. In my opinion, fast foods are also quite delicious and interesting, but they contain many calories. They cause fat and increase the risk of dangerous diseases. So we need to limit the amount of fast foods as much as possible.
In short, fitness and eating healthy help us healthier, more beautiful and think more positively. To do that,  we should be disciplined and love ourselves. Act now, i can do it and you can do it.

(Bài viết có nhiều ý tốt nhưng lần sau lưu ý diễn đạt ngắn gọn lại, đừng quá dài dòng lặp ý)

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Hello teacher, i'm Loi, I'd like to talk about my fitness and eating habits. I do exercises in the morning during the week. I exercise from 30 minutes to 1 hour. I usually practice in the yard, and run around my neighborhood. I find that regular exercises help the body to be stronger and more resistant. I want to consume a lot of things such as candies, soft drinks, fast food, but because of my body size, I have to eat healthy.  I usually eat fruits, and drink a lot of water. I eat the foods with protein, fibers; milk or eggs for example. I stay away from the foods that are high in fat and protein. I recommend you to eat in a healthy way, exercise regularly, play sports to improve health.

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Hello teacher, am Loi today i want to talk about my most recent vacation. Last summer, my friends and I go to Vung Tau by motobike. we had two interesting days in Vung Tau city. We started the trip on 6am, after 1 hour we arrived at the city. There are many hotels and motels but we had to spend about 1 hour to look for a good hotel to stay. The hotel which we stayed is a small nice hotel. From our hotel, we could see the beach and it was a good view. Because we had a long trip by motobike, so we were very tired. After checking in, we only wanted to sleep. I don't know what the others do but when I woke up and walked to outside, I saw my friends drinking coffee. It was 2 o'clock PM. We spent 2 hours on drinking coffee. After that, we went to the beach to swim. In the evening, we went around Vung tau by motobike. Everybody wanted to see the city by night. At 10 o'clock, we returned to our hotel. We played cards together all night long. On tomorrow morning, we walked to the beach and swam with the local people and other tourists. After that, we went to a coffee shop and chatted together until 12 o'clock. Then we had lunch and at 3 o'clock we came back to HCM city. We arrived at the city at 5 o'clock.

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 Hello teacher , my name is anh ,  today i will talk about my fitness and eating habits. For my fitness, I play soccer, volleyball, swimming and my favorite sport is swimming. I usually swim at the swimming pool which is 2km from my house. I usually swim there every weekend , once a week. After swimming, I often feel quite tired and hungry, so I usually eat a lot of food at this time. Okay , now I will talk about my eating habits, the food i usually eat is dishes cooked by my mother, i think it is the safest and healthiest food i have ever eaten. There are many healthy foods such as milk , eggs , cheese , beef , fresh fruits like apples , strawberries , bananas , oranges , nuts, etc. I rarely avoid any kinds of food, just limit eating. I think we should limit eating fast food , greasy food, instant noodles, sugar, alcohol, etc. For fast - food, I think it is quite delicious and looks very attractive to some people, but to me, I rarely eat them. According to research on the internet, the food has a lot of energy, protein but very little minerals and vitamins. Thus, it is easy to cause obesity, increase the risk of cancer, diabetes and other digestive diseases. So we should limit eating them to protect our health . 

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 Hello teacher , my name is anh ,  today i will talk about my fitness and eating habits. For my fitness, I play soccer, volleyball, swimming and my favorite sport is swimming. I usually swim at the swimming pool which is 2km from my house. I usually swim there every weekend , once a week. After swimming, I often feel quite tired and hungry, so I usually eat a lot of food at this time. Okay , now I will talk about my eating habits, the food i usually eat is dishes cooked by my mother, i think it is the safest and healthiest food i have ever eaten. There are many healthy foods such as milk , eggs , cheese , beef , fresh fruits like apples , strawberries , bananas , oranges , nuts, etc. I rarely avoid any kinds of food, just limit eating. I think we should limit eating fast food , greasy food, instant noodles, sugar, alcohol, etc. For fast - food, I think it is quite delicious and looks very attractive to some people, but to me, I rarely eat them. According to research on the internet, the food has a lot of energy, protein but very little minerals and vitamins. Thus, it is easy to cause obesity, increase the risk of cancer, diabetes and other digestive diseases. So we should limit eating them to protect our health . 

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