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Today, I have learnt how to elaborate one idea in two or three lines. moreover,  I have an feedback of essay and i learnt many things from that also.

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Use the structure criterion to see what can we improve - logical

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I have learnt some details about how two develop the benefits and limitation paragraphs, such as giving some evidence and some examples. We also listened the report about why study abroad.

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Today, we write speed writing and plan the benefits and limitations of importance of having pets and post an introduction on ilearn. I have learnt do not use informal words and personal pronouns in essay.

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Tenses - present/ past/ future
Informal language - avoid using personal pronouns

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Today, I have learnt  some grammars about sentence tense. Additionally, we learnt that how to write the discussion essay. There are four paragraphs.

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The three benefits of E-books are their fonts are adjustable, environmentally friendly and very convient.

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The three benefits of E-books are the reduced cost, friendly  ecosystem and instant accesibility.
The three benefits of printed books are...

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The three benefits of E-books are that they are environmentally friendly, portable and cheaper.

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I am from Punjab, India. I have learnt how to write complex, compound sentences. I hope, I can improve my writing in IW in upcoming days.

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PEEL structure (point, evidence, explanation, linking)

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I have learnt how to write the topic sentence and simplify it. I need to use some noun phrase to develop the paragraphs. And I also learn that using different vocabularies to replace firstly, as well as using some correct structures.

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My three strengths are analytical thinking, patience and attention to details.

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My three strengths are reading, imagining and patience.

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I am from Heilongjiang province which located in northeast in China. I like to travel, and I love animals, I have a cat. I will further study my master degree of business analytics. I hope I can improve myself in next two weeks. I like watching some movies, and my favorite director in China called Jiangwen.

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I live in Sydney. I come from Jiangsu Province which is located in the east of China. It takes one hour from my hometown to Shanghai. I quit my job and came to Australia in 2018. The reason why I chose Juris Doctor is that I'm interested in law.