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'La La La' Music Project by Grace Butcher

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WWW- your piece sounds like the real song.

WWW- you also picked good instruments to use.

EBI- you could have made the vocals sound more electronic.

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WWW- i have used instruments that make it sound like the original song.

WWW- I think i perfected most of the notes and their lengths.

EBI- i think i could have got more done.

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*The piece sounded very complex and was very nice

*Your composition actually sounded like the song.

EBI: You changed some of the features of some of the song because for some of the song, it wasn't that interesting but it was still amazing.

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Www: used all instruments and did so correctly

Ebi: you changed the volume of some to emphasis the different instruments

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* used correct instruments

* can recognise the song a bit

- add a few more instruments

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WWW-I have used the correct notes.

WWW- From what I have done so far you can recognise the song.

Wish-Make sure my notes come in at the right time as they were a bit out of time.

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WWW-Everything is in time.

WWW- You have used a range of different sounds which all fit together well.

Wish-It is easy to recognise what song it is you were re-creating but maybe you could change a few of the sounds just so it sound's even more similar to the original song.

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Me:

*I have used different timbres

*they layers are in time with each other

-3 of the layers cant be heard for some reason and I don't know why (they are not on mute), so it would be better if I could hear them.

Sam's:

*nice different experimenting timbres (the voices)

*it actually sounds a lot like the piece because you have done lots of layers

-I don't know if you used velocity change, but if you didn't then you could try that? maybe change the volumes of certain notes to make them stand out more.

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I like the sounds in all of your tracks

You have completed all of the layers by the sound of it and the fit well with each of them

You could of added a few bits and sound to make it sound more like the actual song

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I have used good timbres throughout my piece

I have used the voluntary for each note

I could have found a better sound for the misplaced note a the start

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You have a nice range of different timbres

You had the correct notes in the layers done

The timing of the notes was a tiny bit offset try writing the notes in

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I must have posted the wrong mp3 file because there is another one containing the lala la

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*He has used lots of different timbres.

*He had a good use of velocity change

-The rhythm was off beat as it was stuttering.

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*I was able to follow the notes from the sheet into cubase

*I have used different timbres for each section

-I had a very distinctive more powerful note that does not fit in.

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*Good good of timbres in the piece
*You have made sure all the notes are in time and the right pitch
- Some of the layers of music were drowned out by more powerfull bass notes

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WWW - You got all of the layers done.

WWW - You used the correct notes and rhythm in each layer.

EBI - Now you could start changing the velocity to emphasize specific notes.

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WWW - I have used the correct notes and the correct rhythm.

WWW - I think the layers of music mix nicely with one another.

EBI - I could change the velocity on notes to emphasize them.

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www- Everything was the right rhythm and in perfect timing.

www-All the timbres accompanied each other well.

ebi-There was a few notes that you may want to check to see if they were the right pitch.

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*your structure is good and your layers mix nicely

*you have made sure that the notes come in at the right time which makes the piece sound better all together

-although it sounds really good, you could maybe have used more realistic sounds to add to the realism of the piece.

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*I have followed the music carefully and my piece sounds somewhat like the actually piece

*I have experimented with different timbres

- I could have made the vocals more prominent by playing with the velocity as it is drowned out by other layers

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* you used the correct instruments by listing carefully

* it sounds like the actual song an the keybord and drum line are very prominant

w if you added a few more layers to emphisiss

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*I like the range of timbre you have used.

*The velocity is thought out through the intro.

-I think you could make the accompaniment a lot more louder so it's not the melody that is over powering the song.

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*I think I used a good use of structure by the amount of layers

*I think I have experimented with the velocity really well

- I could change the pitch in the bass when it comes to the verse and chorus to an octave lower

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You have made sure that the notes are in time. Also, the instruments match well with the original.

To improve you could change the velocity, this can make it closer to the original.

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I think that I have used a good sound for the bass and that I have used lots of different sounds.

To improve I would make sure that the notes are at the right pace and that the timing is right.

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WWW: I think I have made my music sound reasonably like the song and I could tell what song it was.

WWW: I think my pitch and rhythm was quite accurate but with many obtrusive errors.

EBI: Include more parts and make it sound more human using dynamics and pitch more etc.

On Sam's

WWW: He has chosen a sound of singing which gives a good effect with the music and makes it feel more like a song.

WWW: It was quite fluent and flowed quite well.

EBI: Change velocity for a bigger impact

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* You have played the notes accurately and in time.

* The velocity has been correctly used to allow the listener to focus on the main voice.

- You could bring the Bass one octave higher to make it more noticeable in the composition.

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* I think my composition sounded good as it was fluent throughout.

* I also used a variety of electronic sounds correctly to make the piece more complex.

- I could change the velocity on certain notes or sections to make the piece more interesting because currently it is the same throughout the piece.

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I have changed the velocity of my voice so it sounds realistic and the pitch is accurate

The voice is the loudest layer so it resembles the piece and sounds alright.

Maybe change the velocity of a note at the end of a motif as it does sound a bit stabby and add a harp layer so the texture is better.

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WWW- The texture of your piece is very well built up with many layers that i can pick out and have been added across the music.

WWW- the rhythms of your piece are correct and sound good as they are fluent with changes in velocity. :D

EBI- Maybe change the volumes of certain layers so your voice can really be heard as i notice the drums tend to drown the voice out. ;)

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*Your accuracy with the chords and the vocals are accurate.

* It sounds like there is some velocity and thus sounds like its being played by a real person and not a computer.

Wish- There are one or two incorrect notes, otherwise it's perfect note wise.

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* I have used the correct notes and rhythm.

*There is a fluency to my performance with a few minor hesitstions.

Wish- The ending is inaccurate, I should have spent more time on it.

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•WWW- Your composition sounds really complex and really interesting to listen to. I think this is because of the wide range of electronic and acoustic instruments which you have used. •WWW- The rhythms are all accurate and are fluent throughout the piece. •EBI- You could go back through your composition and check that all the notes are the correct pitch.

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•WWW- The pitch and rhythm in my composition is accurate throughout the piece. I have checked that there are no notes which have been played in incorrectly. •WWW- I have changed the velocity of some of the notes to improve the sound. At first half of my melody had a very high velocity and the other was very low. •EBI- I could change the drum sound, as it currently sounds quite static and unrealistic.

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I like the sound you used for the voice and i like how fluent it was played. You could have changed the velocity to make it sound a bit better.

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I think that my work sounded good and it was in time to the beat, also i liked the fluency of the voice. i think it would sound better if i did the pre chorus and added more layers

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Two stars and a wish on your work and one other person. Make sure you write your name and the person who you are commenting on.

Due 6th January

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La La La (feat.Sam Smith) cover (Sam Macleod)

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