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1. NUR SYAFIAH BINTI ABU BAKAR (2019258982)
2. NUR ALIA BINTI MOHAMAD SAFARI (2019447032)

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On paragraph 1:
I suggest this thesis statement be written in a general statement

On paragraph 6:
In this opinion paragraph, I would want to see your own additional reasons why do you agree with the author. Right now you're just repeating the same points - you agree with the author ;  so obviously you would agree with his points too. So I need reasons that are not stated by the author why do you agree with Internet freedom

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Only the last article is an argumentative article. However, the topic is a bit sensitive and complicated. You need to read more on human cloning if you want to proceed with this article. Otherwise, you can keep searching for other articles.

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2 & 4 no.
1 & 3 yes
so you choose based on the topic you prefer & the ease of finding main ideas & supporting details.

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Chosen Article (Why Countries Should Not Restrict Internet Freedom)

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Chosen Article (Why Countries Should Not Restrict Internet Freedom)

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On Main Idea 1:
Do not express the whole idea about the main idea, please read again, understand & revise.

On Main Idea 2:
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On Main Idea 3:
Also needs to be revised