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This feedback is actually for everyone. Most proposed research assignments can be much more detailed! 3 pages or more shouldn't be an exception as everything you do now, you can use for your thesis and there's actually a lot you should think about at this stage.

If you haven't received feedback, it is because you missed the deadline (every Sunday evening) or did not watch the clips on Scalable.

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As I am still not sure about my topic, my proposed research is not complete. I still think it is too vague and dont know from which perspective I should look at the topic, or what would be of added value to research. Perhaps you have ideas or suggestions that could help me out?

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My study is about the sufficiency of sport facilities in workplace offices, due to the increase of overweight and obesity costs per employee are increasing.  The research will be concluded into an advisory report, with the aim to inform employers where there are opportunities in chancing current behaviour regarding how to empower a healthier lifestyle under employees.

In order to make a comparison I would like to do research how expensive a workplace gym is and how much reduction a company has seen in healthcare cost related to obesity/ overweight, from the moment from before installing and after installing.

Furthermore, I would like to do purpose interviews with employees, who are working in traditional companies and employees who are working in modern companies with sport facilities and healthier food choices etc.

I would like to finish my report with an advise if sport facilities are sufficient enough to reduce total costs spend on overweight/ obesity.