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I need to work on the vocabulary i use ad work on citing evidence

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I learned that it is important to use good vocab and provide examples. With your examples you should always post the source you got the information from

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Something my own writing needs work on is a little bit more advanced vocabulary and

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Friday, I learned that it is important to provide examples and explain why those example relate back to your claim. Also, it is a good idea to use advanced vocabulary.

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An area of weakness that I need to

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My take on the lesson on Friday about writing and examples we looked at is that you need to make the reader believe you are intelligant and have a great use of Improved vocabulary. You need to have examples and sources.

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I need to work on better sentence structure and keeping the essay on topic

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My take away from the writing lesson was that you should really use several intelligent words to make the paper you're doing make you seem very smart and also to bs a lot too.

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In our lesson Friday I learned that we need advancement in our vocabulary and that we need to stay on topic when putting our paragraphs together. I need to work on putting more advanced words into my paragraphs and i need to work on making my introduction.

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I see weakness when i dont use high school words

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An are of weakness that I need o work on in my own writing is staying on topic and not procrastinating everything. I also need to figure out how to get what is in my mind on the paper in a organized state.

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It is important to stay on topic and have a clear mind.

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You need to make yourself sound like an intelligent person, as in using a more extensive vocabulary. you need to be easily understood and use more organization while writing.

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I need to write things that are a little easier understood. Sometimes I try to weave together too much and it turns to garbage. I should write in a way that's best for the reader.

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I learned that writing complex sentences isn't always important. Mixing in language that is easily understood and makes one seem informed and intelligent is good.

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I need to work on transitioning paragraphs and using "big kid" words

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an important take away is that I'm not the worst writer, so that's good. Making good connections, translations, and having good order and structure is, well, good. Also develop your ideas fully!!!

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the order of my writing, which typically is like the first essay, everywhere and going off topic. Appropriate examples and developing/connecting them too.
my essays aren't that bad.

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An are of weakness that I can see in my writing is my paragraph structure. I need to work on keeping my sentences detailed and use the vocabulary correct for my age group.

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An important take away, from my perspective, was that to really write more, connect your thoughts, and describe your ideas more thoroughly. Also, Keep your mind on the topic and make sure that the response is detailed and answers all parts to the prompt.

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You need to have clear evidence and use formal words.

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Staying on topic and bringing everything back to my central idea and also using more sophisticated words and also get my points across in a better and more precise way

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I took away that it is important to have clear and strong evidence that you connect with real world applications and also try to use more formal and precise language and have a sentence structure that is varied in a correct manner also keep on topic.

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An important take I had from the essay lesson on Friday was the re-enforcement that some people don't care about school and are throwing this opportunity away. another take away was that the effort one gives decides their grade.

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They need to make it more organized and explain themselves

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An area of weakness in my writing would be my transition between paragraphs, and longer conclusion paragraphs.

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I need to work on basically everything because i suck at essays