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Some positives about the media album is that we get different perspectives on our Writing responce, and you have another pair of eyes to catch your mistakes

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I Wasn’t here yesterday, was at an orchestra lesson... so I don’t know what that is.

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The positive things of the media album are how we were able to see what we had to work on when we finished, and to see what others can change. We don’t have to change anything about the album, since it’s good enough like that.

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A poodle in a puddle had a paddle of his own

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A poodle in a puddle had a paddle of his own

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I believe that the media album worked fantastic yesterday. I felt that the post-its made it really exciting and waiting to see who had you. I feel that using the 4 pt rubric really helped us understand what people were trying to say. The suspicion was the best part. I loved this evidence organizer media album.

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The positives of media albums is that you get to see what kids your age think of your work instead of adults. I would have loved more feedback and i think there should be a certain number of comments we need to make.

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I thought that the media album had its positives and negatives. One positive is that we were able to help people revise their work. One thing that we should improve on is how we give feedback. We need to really think deeply about what we can improve on so that the person knows what to revise.

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I think everything went very well, and it was a good idea to give feedback based on the 4-point rubric because it helped enhance out writing skills and it also helped us view someone else’s understanding of the text and our writing skills.

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I think that the activity went well. I feel like it’s helpful to have a classmate look over your work because they can see things that you might of not noticed. Also, getting to pick a classmate randomly with the post-its was really fun. Overall, I wouldn’t change anything about this activity if we were to do it again.

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I think one thing that went well was being able to randomly pick a name because sometimes classmates don’t get any criticism on their work and don’t know what to fix.Also using the rubric to give advice went really well because we can go back to it and find things we need to improve in our essay.

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I don’t think we should change anything. The positives of the media album was being able to hear what other people thought about our evidence organizer and what they thought we did great and what we could work on.

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I don’t think we should change anything except for getting more partners to work with and having more time. I thought it was really cool to have other people that I may not know well asses my response. I also feel like we really helped eachother  to edit and make a better organizer. I think we should work with more people so we can hear more ideas. I think we should have a longer time so we can make time to work with more people and have those people write better suggestions that can help us more. For example, my parter, Marissa didn’t really have time to give me suggestions. That is what I change about yesterday’s activity.