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Good to explore the range of elements including potentially managing safeguarding situations

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I like the fact that you give them the reality

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I like the fact that you give them the reality

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You do make children’s Nursing very scary. Is this the intention?

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Is this right for me re sick children articulated really well

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Is this right for me re sick children articulated really well

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Picture slides are good but if talking for a long time it is good to also have some text of key points.

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When exploring why people want to be a children's nurse consider asking the audience could make it more interactive

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Good to get them reflect on choice of career

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Good to get them reflect on choice of career

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Could you use a student to tell the applicants why they want to be a children's nurse? Well their stories/experiences. Are there's any videos you can use as part of your presentation ?

I really think that you could make a big impact by telling a story

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Use of humour engages the audience and not just passively observing

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Enthusiasm is very clear and engaging

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Why did you become a children's nurse? Story telling. What inspires you. Could also ask audience about their experiences

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Great to explore the point of "Do I want to be a children's nurse?"

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Good pace in delivery

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Slide 2 was the standard slide given from ICP project and is not user friendly st all

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Slide 2 was the standard slide given from ICP project and is not user friendly st all

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Eye contact is focused towards the back of the room. Don't forget the people near to the front

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Less text/more images might enhance your audience.

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Great to keep mentioning Sheffield Hallam - the the university in the forefront of people's minds

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What is C Q C?

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Lots of text on that second slide

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Too much text

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Be careful about the amount of text on a slide

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Be careful about the amount of text on a slide

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Maybe include some story telling

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Abbreviations

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Great to explain the range of things that the lecturers are involved with

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Define abbreviations

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Nice to get them to reflect on their choice and make them sure...... or could this make them think too much and opt out?

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Make sure you introduce yourself

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Explanation that all staff are qualified nurses

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Header and text is a bit big on first slide

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Videos are a great idea

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Stop - review and minimise amount of text on slides
Continue - emphasis on relevance and integration of teaching team with practice beyond the university, which emphasises the value of the programme AND emphasis on involving images to tell your story

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Lots of writing on this slide, can it be broken up with some images

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NMC what does that mean?
The slide layout is a bit dull, don't need so many words, use images,
NICE?
Slide just words- dull, use imagery,
Your presentations skills are strong however, your passion  does come through Sue, maybe nerves

Do I want to be a Children's nurse slide & narrative is fabulous. Kate your presentation skills are great & your 'authority' on this subject comes across really well

Again too much text, not needed, just have the image of the child having an injection & a few others

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Stop so much text on 2nd slide

Continue nice pace of presentation