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In  the 2nd paragraph, add a for in between fighting who got to.... and replace who had with who would have to ride with my mom.

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In  the 2nd paragraph, add a for in between fighting who got to.... and replace who had with who would have to ride with my mom.

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add more detail

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Get rid of some of the "ands" especially in the 2nd paragraph.

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Get rid of some of the "ands" especially in the 2nd paragraph.

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in the 1st paragraph, replace use with used and six again with six years old again.

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in the 1st paragraph, replace use with used and six again with six years old again.

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Maybe rephrase "brought everyone everywhere" in paragraph 2? Try something like, "Our family probably abused this car waaay too much, it was such a fan-favorite," or something like that.

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Don't use so many 'ands'

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Use less "and"s.

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For the 1994 ford f-150 maybe don't jump right into different scenarios

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Add more, don't just let us guess at your stories and memories, tell them to us, explain them, and elaborate this could be a great topic not many write about cars and a lot can happen in a car just tell us a story and it will be great

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what kind of body kit went on the doge neon.

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Some of your sentences could be broken up, like in paragraphs 1 and 5 (maybe add more detail?)

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I feel that you did a great job, but could you describe the car or smoother transition from car to car?

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This is a run on sentence, also tell us a memory you have in the car, don't just say hey I have memories of this and move on, write.

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Add more detail/ predictions to the 2005 Dodge neon

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Details need to be added to the story in the Ford F-150

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add detail to dodge neon, tell us your fantasies about that car.

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you need to add more about how it made your memories and more about the dodge

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Way to get us hooked in the last paragraph (My 2005 Dodge Neon) by making us want to know about whats to come next.

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It's kind of vague. Try to add more detail about why these are important memories to you, or try and add some imagery to make it seem more like it's in the moment.