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A range

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A range

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A

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Somewhere along the B range

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B or A

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Jane- D-
Alice-  C+

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C at best

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Thesis- B
Evidence- A
Orgiantion- B-
Audience- C-
Grammer- A

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Rory:
Thesis:b/evidence:c/organization:a/grammar:a

Jane:
thesis:c/evidence:b/organization:c/grammar:B

Hannah:
thesis:c/evidence:d/organization:b/grammar:d

Alice:
thesis:b/evidence:a/organization:a/grammar:b

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Probably a B range

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B-

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A

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B-

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Thesis- C
Evidence- A-
Orginaztion- B+
Audience- A
Grammer- C

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I would give Alice a B+, her essay and argument is strong. She went in depth but her MLA format was wrong as well

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Thesis- A
Evidence- A
Organzation- B+
Audience- B-
Grammer- C-

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B

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B- because he had an interesting essay just that his argument was unclear.

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Thesis- A
Evidence- B-
Organization- A-
Audience- B-
Grammer- C

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B. Her body paragraphs followed her argument. She used proper citation.

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C+

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B-

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I would give Jane a D or F. While the essay itself was great, there was no works cited which is basically plagiarism. MLA format is wrong as well.

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C

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C+ His thesis did not tie in with his topic sentences for his body paragraphs.

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Thesis/Argument/Reasoning: B-
Evidence/Quotation/Support: B+
Organization: A-
Audience: A
Grammar/Language/Formatting:  B-

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B-

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A

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Thesis/Argument/Reasoning: B
Evidence/Quotation/Support: A
Organization: A
Audience: A
Grammar/Language/Formatting: C

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A

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C

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A but the citation is wrong

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Thesis/Argument/Reasoning: A-
Evidence/Quotation/Support: A-
Organization: A-
Audience: B+
Grammar/Language/Formatting: Unacceptable

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B

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B

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I would give Rory a B- or a C+. MLA format is not correct with heading and pages numbers, as well as thesis did not give a strong argument and It was sort of hard to follow.

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Thesis/Argument/Reasoning: B+
Evidence/Quotation/Support: C
Organization: A
Audience: A-
Grammar/Language/Formatting: C

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C+

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D