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Hello my name is Ashanty and this is my shameful story

I be walk by it street, road with my mother and we were going to the train stop and when now we were have go down the stairs and i the go down fast, and me fall down roll and when my mother see that me fall down me say these properly laugh and that dia happens many embarrassment because me see several person fall down...

when arrive to my house me hurt it leg and when me take off the shoe see that have one o'clock wound and me hurt many then himself him say a my father and my father me treat it wound...
When finished him dif the thank you.

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THE ISLAND

Hi I’m Moad and I goin tell a story about a tapeworm when I was a little boy…

-Once upon a time when I was a little boy,we went from vacation to an island.

When I arrived I went directly to the sea to swim because I love swimming.

In an unexpected moment I moved too much to the coast. I observe that I am tired and I don’t can’t swim to the coast.Beginning I got nervous and my dad gave an account to come running towards me.

To leave the sand my dad inspected if it is properly.

Fifteen minute later we went to eat,in the meantime we observed that we lacked something  ¡my brother! ¿Where is?

In the final scene, he plays with a friend.

A little while we went back home.

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Hello, my name is Alba and today I'm going to explain my story.

When I was 8 years old my family and me go to portaventura, my brother love Tutuki, and i don't understand how is Tutuki, 4 minutes left, in first lowest i'm very scared, but in the last lowest, never in my live... My body flying in one moment. When finish, My body is a paper, my family and me go to the restaurant, but later my family go to stampida, my mind talk's to Me: No,no,no,no,no, is dangerous.(For me)
My family: Do you want to go to the ''tronquitos''?
Me: No, no more but thanks, I want go to my house, but now I can't :(.
5h later my family and me go to my house, in this moment i'm very very happy :).

Corrections:
When I was 8 years old my family and I went to Portaventura
my brother loves the Tutuki attraction, and I don't understand what is Tutuki about,

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Long time ago when I was a little boy They called me mini messi, today I will explain the story to you.

I was in the park when I was little with my friends when I was 8 years old. Then come older kid and us say play football with us, then start playing football and when see my playing football be freak crazy because i’m a good football player. Then they all went to tell my mother to sign me up for a soccer club and my mother said yes. When they signed me up in the first training session, everyone was freaking out and that's fine with my nickname minimessi.

I hope you liked it

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Hello my name is Monica and today I am talking about my history

On the 29th of june and my father a surprise why went at airport to go a jerez(cadiz) to go to the family, let’s go there for four days on the first day we got of at 8 a.m and I have breakfast with my cousins,

and then we went for a walk me and my father,watch a market the next day we went to supermarket and my cousins,the day there get on a airplane for come back a barcelona when land my ancle us be wite for to carry a our home.

after from two days was a home from a aunt be five days,after be a camping pass a
eight days and my mom and sister be a beach,after a it was a my birthday my cousin anna's birthday too.

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Hi! My name is Marta and I'm going to explain to you a story.

When I was younger I used to go to a little bank that was high. One day I was there with a friend and we started to sing so I was very distracted so I fell off the bank, so I hurt myself a lot. I started to cry so my mom noticed me. My mom took me to the car very quickly, she took me to the hospital and I skipped the afternoon classes because the doctor told me to. The doctor put ice in my head to stop the pain and I felt better.

The second story: One day I Was training athletics and we’re doing the high jump and we saw a man that was picking asparagus and he started to sing. We all laughed, then the president of the club told the man that he could not be here, the man was so crazy. After a big discussion, the man went to his house. And we all remember that day.

Bye!

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When I was 11 years old, I used to went to an English academy always on Tuesdays and Thursdays at 17:45 P.M.

That day was Tuesday, I had just left school (16:30 P.M.), when my mother told me  to go to her house because she wanted to teach me something.When I arrived with my dad to the house, there was a handbag made of cloth on the piece of furniture and inside there was a scared little cat !

At that moment I was very happy and surprised because for years I wanted to have a cat.

I wanted to stay a while longer with Mini(the name of the cat) but I had to go to the English academy and my parents had to go shopping after accompanying me so my grandparents stayed taking care of the Mini.

When I left my English academy at 18:45 P.M. my parents picked me up and we returned home.

My grandmother was cooking when we walked through the front door, I took off my shoes and I ran to the mini because I was looking forward to seeing her.

I searched the whole house and I didn't find the mini, I looked under the sofa, under my bed and even on the balcony and I found nothing, we thought it had escaped because it was nowhere until I finally looked under a piece of furniture of color brown made of wood where it was impossible to get in and had been there all the time and we didn't we knew it.

Corrections:
I used to go to an English academy...
When I arrived with my dad at the house, there was a handbag...
I wanted to stay a bit longer...
...and it had been there all the time and we didn't even know it.

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Hello I'm Sara and this is my story✨

When I was six years old, in summer my parents gave me a surprise to travel✈ to Canary islands to its capital Las palmas.

The first day we went to a Fuji restaurant we ate Sushi mmm it was tasty🍜 and then we went to dive into a natural aquarium of the Canteras beach we went a market too I was hallucinate .

The next day we went to visit the Cumbrevieja volcano. Also we went to see a comedy theater and we visited the canary garden .

It was a fantastic holiday🥳

Goodbye!✨

Sara

Corrections:
my parents gave me a surprise to travel✈ to the Canary Islands and to its capital Las Palmas.
we went to Fuji restaurant and there we ate Sushi...
we went to a market too I was hallucinating.
We also went to see a comedy play in a theater...
Be careful with pronunciation like in gave, went, ate, tasty, theater, visited...

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Hello! I'm Ainhoa Hervás.
I'm going to explain  an anecdote that happened with my parents and my little sister.

It was a sunny day and we decided to go to the beach. The sea was dangerous, that’s why we got very close to the sand with my dad.
Afterwards, my mother and my sister came with us. After a while, we saw how a wave passed overhead to my sister. I quickly realized when I turned around and I warned my mom.
They got scared and helped her. They came out of the water and I stayed inside with my father. I put on my diving goggles to collect shells on the sand, under the sea. As my head rises to the sea, a wave carries me to the sand, scraping me with the stones below. My dad noticed when I was down for a few seconds. I got a little scared and I got out of the water. From that moment we did not return to the beach.

I could never forget it!

Corrections:
Stress a little bit more verbs in past tense otherwise, it seems you are talking in present --> like in decided, it sounded as decide.
Pronunciation: came, saw, wave, realized, carries...

...a wave carried me to the sand

I stayed aside with my father.

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Corrections:
Where's the script????

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Hello! I’m Carlota.

I’m going to explain three stories that happened to me when I was little.

1: When my sister and I were little girls, when we were bored, we took the big laundry basket and got inside. We use to transform a car, we had a nice moment, but we broke it, and my mum was very angry 😡. And my sister and I were very scared 😰😵.

2: I used to go to the park and one day I was in the park, on the slide, and I thought of a magnific idea: I went headfirst. So I scratched all my face, and I was crying a lot. Then I went to the doctor and he gave me a cream for my face.

I was very bad 😣😢. But I learned my mistake.

3: This day was the worst.

While my mother was busy, my sister and I come to mind did the manicure💅. At first we made a “tent”, then we took three or four marker pens and we started painting our nails. We were very silent because we were very concentrated, so my mother was surprised because my sister and I used to make noise, so my mother went to the sofa and she discovered us and she was very surprised 😲🙆while my sister and I were laughing 😂.

The funny thing is that it wasn't removed. Finally it took only a week to leave.

Goodbye!!

Corrections:
We used to transform it into a car, we had a nice moment,
Be careful with pronunciation like in bored, scared, busy, mind...
...and I thought of a magnificent idea: I...
I was in the park, on the slide, --> slide????
But I learned from my mistake.
It came to my sister and mine's mind doing the manicure💅.
At first,
Finally,
...that it could not be removed.

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Long time ago, when I was a little girl, I used to believe everything that people told me, and here is the story that made me change.

I remember, I was like 2 or 3 years old, my parents and I were eating in a restaurant on the beach, I was bored, so I went with my friends to play with the sand, she made fake food out of sand, when I was that age, I used to believe everything, and I was so innocent, so I eat it, suddenly I start crying, because it tasted horrible, and my mom was so scared, so my dad help me.

The second story talks about when I was five years old, I used to be so scared of animals, when I was that age.

My uncles took me to the zoo, I was playing with my cousin, we were making weird faces to the monkeys, we used to do those things when we were kids, and suddenly a big monkey hit the zoo glass. We start screaming and crying, we run away to my uncles.

The last story is for me the worst, I was like 10 years old, I was on the beach on vacation with my friend Elsa, her sister, and our parents.

My dad and I were playing in the water, and the rest were sunbathing, suddenly a wave covered them, the clothes, all…

It was funny because it didn't happen to me, but sad, because I didn't have a towel to dry myself.

Goodbye!

-Aina-

Corrections:
Nice accent but watch out with words like took and water if you are using an American accent...
Please stress verbs in past tense otherwise it is difficult to understand in which tense you are talking --> for instance in tasted it, it sounded like taste it instead.
I started... not I start in Present Simple.
I was playing with my cousin, we were making weird faces at the monkeys...
I was so innocent, so I ate it...

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Hello my name is Dylan and I’m going to talk about my little story...

When I was 6 years old I broke my Nintendo and at that moment I was very scared because I didn't want to imagine what my parents would do with me, but I put on my Einstein mode and I followed one strategy to save myself and I hid my Nintendo in my closet. My heart beat very fast because only my mom was in the house. I went to the living room to watch the TV when my mom asked me: Son, what are you doing here?Weren't you with your nintendo? My brain was frozen at that moment 🥶 so I say: No mom, I'm bored with the nintendo (😬Very nervous😬) later my mom say: Hmmm It’s ok, and this is the good ending. :D

But days later they found my Nintendo and it did not have a happy ending. D:

Corrections:
Where's your audio???

...so I sai: No mom, I'm bored with my Nintendo.
...later my mom said:

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Hi!! my named is Edgar, this is my story

Since I was little, I have been going to a town in Valencia called Benifairó de los Valles.

There it is typical in the town festivals to do bulls and many other activities. . On one occasion one day when the bull entered the street where we have the house, it is a very small street and if they enter it is difficult for them to get the bull out, so the only thing they can do is bring the cows to accompany him to the plaza. But that day, the bull and the cows didn’t want to get out of there. In the end they were there for so long that …… they poo. It smelled bad!!!!!!!!

Corrections:
Where's your audio????
Hi!! my name is Edgar and this is my story:
There are typical festivals in the town such as bulls in the street and many other activities.
for so long that... they pooped.

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STORY DRAFT

Hello! My name is Ismael and this is my story:

When I was a little boy in concrete at 9 years old, I went to Portaventura.

I used to go to Portaventura every year.

I had to get up early because the park opens at 9:00 a.m and it takes almost 2 hours to arrive.

The trip was very boring as I couldn't entertain myself with anything. I was playing with my parents, we were playing “I see, I see what do you see.”

10 minuts later so I tried to sleep and I did. When I woke up we were already entering the park.

I was very excited and happy because we had gone on Halloween.

It was very scary and spooky on that day there were a lot of people.

We felt like going on a ride that was very crowded. Me and my dad went to the atraccion while my mom and sister didn't want to ride, so they went to get their faces painted at a booth.

We waited for almost an hour until it was our turn. I was very disappointed because I couldn't ride for a few centimeters. Now I reach the allowed height.A few minutes later my father came up with an idea. The idea was for me to wear my flip flops with my dad's slippers and that made me grow about 5 centimeters.

We got in line again, and when it was our turn to go in they let us in, as they had changed people and didn't notice.

That day was great!

And that's my story. Bye bye.

Corrections:
When I was a little boy concretely at 9 years old, I went to Portaventura.
The trip was very boring as I couldn't entertain myself with anything. I was playing with my parents, we were playing "I spy with my little eye".
10 minutes later or so I tried to sleep and I did it.
My dad and I went to the atractions while my mom and sister didn't want to ride,

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Hello I'm Enia and I'm going to explain us my story.

When I was 9 years old I used to watch TV every friday afternoon with my younger brother.  While I was watching TV someone knocked upon the door. I opened the door and I saw a box made of cardboard.

I called my brother and we noticed something in the box was moving. We couldn’t call my mom because she was having a shower but  we were very curious to guess what was in the box.

We opened the box and found… a little puppy!!!

Finally, our parents explained to us the dog was ours and she came from Malaga. Noa (the puppy)  was the daughter of the dog of my parents' cousin.

I didn’t believe it, I was wanting a dog for 5 years.

I was very happy!!

This is all... goodbye!

Enia --

Corrections:
Hello, I'm Enia and I'm going to explain my story to you.
I used to watch TV every Friday...
...was the daughter of my parents' cousin's dog.

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This is my story

When I was 6 my parents, my friend Miriam and I went to Menorca. There we were going to the sea, and we saw one  jellyfish named jelly. A few moments later, we went to eat at a theme park. We rode on the shambala, in Dragoncan and in stampede, and we saw two tenegers with a slush like there was a lot of wind. The slush fell on top of a man who worked there, and the man threw them out, and we laughed a lot because it was so funny.
It was incredible. We were there that day in the theme park.
We had a great time together.

Corrections:
There, as we were going to the sea,
Spelling!!! Shambala, Dragon Khan, teenagers...
with a slush like there was a lot of wind.  --> I do not understand this...

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Hello my name is Míriam and now I am going to tell you a story.

When I was 10 years old I went to Italy with: my mom, my dad, my brother and my friend Lucía. We went especially to Rome and Florence. In Roma we went to the Square of Spain, the pantheon, the Colisseum, etc. In Florence we visited the museum of Michelangelo's David statue and when we were visiting the tower of Pisa my brother got lost. We were worried and we decided to look for my brother. After 10 minutes we found him and we came back to the hotel. Except for that problem, we had a nice summer holiday.

And this is my story, bye! :))

Corrections:
Spelling!!!
We went especially to Rome and Florence.
The Colisseum.
...the museum of Michelangelo's David statue.
Piazza di Spagna or Square of Spain.
the tower of Pisa.
we had a nice summer holiday.

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Hi, my name is Valeria and a tell you when I broke two theet.

When I was little I loved to scare my parents, then one day we were in the Vilamarina and my parents went to the bathroom at that moment I took the opportunity to hide behind the door, when my father was in the sink I was hiding-me well and looking that he did not see me, when opened the door I yelled at him and in shock I closed the door,  and it caused two baby teeth to fall out.

When my mom saw me, she’s scared and she cleaned my mouth, later cleaned my mouth, they took me to the dentist in case I had broken a tooth, the dentist only said that my paddles had split and that my lip had split  and I went to eat ice-cream.

Corrections:
I broke two teeth.
When my mom saw me, she was scared.

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Hello! I’m Ainhoa Marinheiro!

I am going to tell you an anecdote from when I was younger.

I usually have a glass of milk with sugar for breakfast.

Some years ago, I used to spend a week with my family in Andorra to ski.

One day during our winter holidays, at breakfast my mum prepared me a glass of milk as usual.

When I tasted it, it was disgusting!!! I couldn’t drink it!!!

I told my mother, but as I used to be very complaining, she didn’t believe me and she made me drink it.

I wanted to vomit!!!

When my brother tasted his glass of milk, he also said that it was disgusting.

Then my mother tasted the milk and while we were drinking, she screamed at us to stop drinking.

She had gotten confused and put salt into the milk instead of sugar!!!

I WILL NEVER FORGET IT!!!

Corrections:
Very nice accent and intonation, but watch out in words like: used, usual, tasted, disgusting, gotten...

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Hello my name is Arnau and today I was talking about my history.

Nine years ago I was in my house in Viladecans. When I was a little kid I used to sit on the couch with my family. And I was thirsty. My mother going to the kitchen and wears orange juice. I ordered a straw. I grabbed the straw and drinked the juice. When I'm bored I grab the straw and put it on my nose and inhale the orange juice. The juice leaves for the nose.

Corrections:
Where's your audio????
Hello, my name is Arnau and today I am talking about my history.
My mother went to the kitchen and came back with some orange juice.
I asked her for a straw.

I grabbed the straw and drank the juice.
When I got bored I grabbed the straw and put it on my nose and I started inhaling the orange juice. The juice then was leaking through the nose.

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Hello my name is Daniel and I'm handsome but today I won't to talk about these, today I will talk about one day of almost dying😱, START!

Eleven years ago i have 2 years old and i was in the house of my aunt, in the mountain🏡, i was paying in the floor, near of a fireplace🔥😱, and my mom was happy playing with my brother, and when i looked the fire i be disappointed for the light💡 of the fire and i goed to him i was about to die☠ but my mom has take me just before die ☺ and when she saved me struck my head in the floor and i was sadly because my head hurt 😭 and i started to cry very much.

Bye Bye

c:

Corrections:
Where's your audio????
Spelling!!! and Past!!!
I'm handsome but today I won't talk about this,
I will talk about one day I was about to die.
I was 2 years old and I was at my aunt's house,
I was playing on the floor, near a fireplace.
and my mom was happily playing with my brother,
and when I looked at the fire I was attracted by the light...
and I went straight to it and I was about to die💡
but my mom took me just before I died.
and I was sad because my head hurt 😭 and I started to cry very much.