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Dear Teacher Pan, How's everything?

I hope you're doing great, and summer is treating you well.

I'm in New York City, in The USA. This is a photo I took of the bustling area of Times Square. It is often called the crossroads of the world. Nearly 500,000 visitors every day, and even around a million tourists are visiting on New Year's Eve. It is also one of the most popular tourist destinations in the world. Located in the Downtown of New York City. The city never sleeps and is always crowded with people. You can also see countless lights that are decorating the tall building. As you know, I'm learning English at the moment. I'm taking a two-year English course here, so I hope my English will improve in these two years. The teachers here are friendly and always care about their students. And the classes are so fantastic, and we also watch English documentary films and read novels.

The weather is nice at the moment, but it's usually cold most of the time.

With lots of love,

Kaung Myat Naing

The email is well-written, Ryan. Thank you for writing an email to me.

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Hello Ma Khaing,

I miss you, I'm doing fine.I wish you were at Ngwe Saung with me , picking up seashells along the shore.

I'm thinking about you .You like the seafood. There're many seafood at there.Everday I eat seafood, crabs and prawns.They're delicious and fresh. I think that is a little expensive for me .The weather is fine. I went to the beach with my family when my brother come back who lives so far from my house.Next time come along with me. We swim in the morning and evening however we take a rest in bungalow all afternoon. While I and my brother are swimming in the evening, my mother and my dad are walking along the shore. I've learnt a lot from this visit.I'll bring back a nice seashell necklace for young and your sister.

Yours,

Khin

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Dear Phay and May,

I hope you all are well and happy.

Don’t worry about me. I’m OK in South Korea.

Did you know that your golden son’s workplace was moved from Busan to Seoul? It was not as hot as Busan. The people in the city were are very simple and had have systematic lifestyles. (it's always true - use Present simple) As soon as we reached Seoul, me and my partner looked for an apartment to live. In the evening, we visited

N Seoul Tower, a symbol of Seoul, which is located on Namsan Hill, the highest place in Seoul. The sky was very clear and it was a full moon day. We stayed there up to 10:00 PM. These tower allowed us to see a really beautiful sunset and created an attractive moon at that night. I thought that the moon was a little bigger than that in Myanmar. Since I was born on the full moon day, it could bring back my old memories, about my childhood friends, my homeland and give a chance to remember happy pieces with both of you. This is the reason why I sent this email.

May God bless you with mental well-being!

Yours lovely,

Kaung Htet

The email is well-written, Kaung Htet!

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Dear Dad and Mom,

I hope you both are doing well. I'm also doing fine here. It was a little difficult to live in Thanlyin at first, but everything is going smoothly now.

I'm doing well in my university, and I've made a lot of friends now. I've also become with my friends with people from the hostel. Most of them are from different townships, so we understand how it feels to be away from our parents and support each other. On holidays, we go to Kyaik-Khauk Pagoda and even go shopping together at Thanlyin Myoma Market. So, we have a great time during the holidays. I'm also focusing on my studies, so please rest assured, Dad and Mom. This is a picture I took with my project paper friends at my university. It's raining a lot here. Is the weather in Daik-U good? Please give me a call when you have free time.

I'm writing this letter to make both of you are happy and to reassure you that I'm well. Take care of your health. Even though I'm busy, I always miss you, Dad and Mom.

Lots of love,

Your loving daughter,

Jue Thaw Zin

The email is well-written, Jue.

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Dear Phay and May,

I hope you all are well and happy.

Don’t worry about me. I’m OK in South Korea.

Did you know that your golden son’s workplace was moved from Busan to Seoul? It’s not as hot as Busan. The city is very crowded but the residents have very systematic lifestyles. As soon as I reached Seoul, me and my partner looked for an apartment to live. In the evening, in order to see a really beautiful sunset and to be relaxed, we visited N Seoul Tower, a symbol of Seoul, which is located on Namsan Hill, the highest place in Seoul. These tower is more famous for viewing night scenes with the moon. Fortunately, it was a full moon day and the sky was very clear. We stayed there until 10:00 PM to meet the attractive moon. I thought that it was a little bigger than that in Myanmar. Whenever I see the moon,it can bring back my old memories, about my childhood friends, my homeland and can lead to remember happy pieces with both of you. This was the reason why I sent this email.

May God bless you with mental well-being!

Yours lovely,

Kaung Htet

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Dear Mom and Dad,

I hope you’re both doing well and staying healthy. Thank you so much for always supporting me and taking care of me, I’m truly grateful, Mom.

I want to let you know that I’ve settled in Incheon, South Korea, and have started my home interior design course. I really enjoy this program, and I’m excited to learn more every day. And also I will attend the Korean Language class next week. I’ve made some friends in my class, and we’re all from different countries, which makes the experience even more interesting.

Everything is going well here. The weather here in Incheon has been quite pleasant. My friends and I usually go out on Friday nights. I have a comfortable place to stay and enough to eat, so please don’t worry about me. I’m doing this not only for myself, but also for our future. I want to make you proud and support our family someday.

How is everything at home? I miss you all dearly and think of you often. Please give my love to my son, too. I hope he’s doing great as well. Please let me know how you’re doing when you have a moment.

With love,

Your daughter,

ThyThu Aye Tin

The email is well-written, Thu Thu.

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Dear, Hazel

How's it going? Are you having a good time in Japan?

Here are some photo of my learning about my makeup. We're all different cities ‌and they're all very friendly. This's my makeup graduation photo. I was pretty happy at that time. I thought, I finally made my dream do come true. Makeup is one of my favorite thing to do every day. It makes me feel confident and happy. So, I really try it every day and I have decided that I will try until I succeed. It I was very tired when I learned the makeup class. I didn't understand about makeup products. If I couldn't do it, I was scared and worries. But, I'm tried the best and even though I was tried, I didn't give up. I believe I got certificate because of my result of effort.I'm thinking of starting an online makeup course. I think it will be fine ‌and I will try to succeed.

I trust you will reply if you see you my letter. I remember you because I haven't seen you in for a long time. I hope to see you again.

Yours loving friend,

Nora

The email is about the make-up class. Well-written, Nora.

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Dear bestie,

How are you? Are you having a good time in London? I quit my job as receptionist about four months ago, and now I’ve moved back to my dad’s hometown. It’s a small town surrounded by the nature, located in the countryside of Myanmar. Here is a photo of a place where I am living. I usually go for a walk with my dog every evening. The neighbors here are very friendly too and I am really enjoying the atmosphere here. How about you? Is everything going smooth with your college life? I’d like to hear about it. Let’s catch up when you’re back in Myanmar.

Take care,

Nang Phaung Kham

The email is well-written, Nang.

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Hi, Berry,

How are you? I hope you’re doing great. I’ve been thinking about you lately. It’s been a long time since we met up and I really miss hanging out like we used to. Things here have been pretty the same, nothing changed much. I moved to the new school and met a lot of new friends. They are good people and really nice to me. I recently studied Chinese. It’s very interesting and a bit easy for me. But I have one problem in learning Chinese. I can’t memorize the word. They are so complexing confusing. Thankfully, my Chinese teacher is very good and so patient. heard you had visited Pwin Oo Lwin last year I’d love to hear all the things you’ve been up to during your trip. Let’s plan a call or even a visit soon. It’d be so nice to catch up properly.

Take care of yourself and write back when you get the chance.

Khant

The email is well-written, Khant.

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Who you're writing to?

How’s it going?Are you having a great time in Yangon?

I’m studying General English online course at IH. We’re all from different places.I enjoy studying at IH because The teacher and friends are very kind,friendly and gorgeous.I’m taking seven-months English course here,so I hope to improve English during these seven-months.How is your GED course?Hope you are trying hard and ready for getting sit GED real test!

See you back next year.

Love,

Yoon

The email is well-written, Shwe Yie.

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Hi Emily,

How are things? I hope everything is going well with you.

I’m studying at University of California in Los Angeles now. The weather is warm and sunny most of the time. I’ve started exploring different cultures and trying new foods here. I’ve also made a few International friends and we sometimes hang out on the weekends. Lately, I’ve been missing Myanmar, so I’ve been cooking and eating Myanmar food myself. I also visited Vegas last week. It took about five hours to drive from LA to Vegas. I had a great time in Vegas! The city was full of lights, energy, and excitement. I’m sending you some photos of the beautiful places in Vegas.

Hope to hear from you soon. Miss you!

Love,

Nyein Hsu.

The email is well-written, Nyein Hsu.

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Dear Ma Kyuu,

How are you? I hope both of you are in good health. I'm fine and all of the other person people in my family are fine too. Now, I'm waiting the grade-12 exam result. The day for the exam result coming out is near day by day. I am so excited. What about you? Are you ok in Japan? You leaved left from Myanmar is about 4years right? I miss you so much. Please take care and don't be sick. And rewrite back an email back to me.

Your lovely neighbour sister,

Kay Kay

The email is well-written, Kay.

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Dear Par and Mar,

I hope you're both doing well. I just wanted to share some updates about my life and how things are going here.

Now that it's May, My University is start open and also I have decided to join English course because I really want to improve my English speaking skills. I'm trying to study hard in all my classes so I can improve my lifestyle and become more mature, step by step. Also I have one exciting news , recently I got a job as a teacher at a private primary school. It's a big responsibility so I need to manage my time carefully. Some days are feel me tried I feel tired some days , but whenever I feel exhausted I remind how bless i am to have parents like you. I want to feel proud of me because I truly want to be a good daughter.

Please don't worry about me. I will keep doing my best to make you both proud.

Take care of yourselves and stay healthy. I want both of you live long, happy life without stress.

Love to all,

Your daughter Phyu Sin Thant

The email is well-written, Phyu Sin.

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Dear lovely brother,

How's everything going? Are you having a good time in Singapore? I finished my Grade 11 final exam on April 10. It was really stressful week, but I did very well. I even got a Distinction. Now, I'm waiting to start my final year of high school. I'm very excited because I'll be graduating in March next year. I've decided to take Nursing Science as my major. Now I'm studying Italian. It's difficult, but I find it fun and really enjoy studying it. Next month is my birthday, so I'm planning to celebrate with my friends. Here's a photo of them. I really enjoy my school days because of them. They complete me in many ways.

I miss you so much and I really hope you can come to my graduation ceremony.

May Allah bless you always.

Take care and love you,

Your little sister,

Cho Zin Thet

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I hope you are all well, safe, and healthy.

Please don’t worry about me, Daddy and Mommy — I’m doing fine in Yangon.

Last weekend, I paid a fee for my new class. I think it is more difficult than now.I always stay in my room and hardly ever go outside. You know I don’t enjoy going out.I go outside with my roommate once a week. Sometimes I ordered her to buy things I need.They are all very friendly, kind, and helpful to me. I’m lucky to stay with them.At the beginning of next month, I have to attend a new class, and I will try to get the UK Diploma.Thank you so much, Daddy and Mommy, for always supporting me.I love you so much and I always miss you.

The weather in Yangon is hot, but sometimes it rains.How is the weather there?Under the place where I live Near my flat/ apartment, there are many Indian food shops and fruit shops.I want to try eating Indian food and wearing their traditional dresses because all the Indian ladies are so beautiful.In the next three months, I will come back home and bring good news — or maybe within one month, I’ll bring good news about a job.

Have a good day Daddy and Mommy.

See you at home in three months!

Your lovely daughter,

Thae Ei

The email is well-written, Thae Ei.

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Hey buddy! how is going?I hope you will be ok and enjoy in Japan.But new country and new place so you will be face with struggle for that don’t be afraid and don’t be weak.I’m still at our native town.As you know I’m waiting my G12 result.I’m hoping that I also go out form our country at the end of next year.Now i’m learning English .It’s going well and slowly improving.We still gathering in our friend Doe Ni’s house at holidays Sat and Sun.We are nothing change Nothing has changed a lot yet.I also believe that we will reunited.This photo is when we travelled with bikes to Mount Popa with bikes.This photo has a lot of memories.Well take care of your health,we’ll be fine.

The eamil is well-written, Aung Chan.

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Dear Elli ,

How is going ? It is been a while since we last talked, so I wanted to send share you some of my experiences.

I’m doing pretty well ,and settling into a good rhythm in Munich . There is always something interesting going on . One of the coolest things is the giant indoor slides at the Technical University of Munich. It is actually meant to help students get from the top floor to the ground floor faster . It is so fun . I think this makes my struggle university life a bit more exciting.

Right now, I’m diving into sustainability and built environment , and it is a mix of science and art . There is so much to take in, but I’m enjoying the challenge and starting to feel like I’m making real progress.

How is everything with you? I’d love to hear what you have been . I hope you are in good mood and your dream will come true soon .

Take care ,

Your lovely friend Htet Aung

The email is well-written. No correction to be made.

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Hey! My girl...

How's everything?.... Are you having a good time there? Here are some photos of me. We're all from different places, so we usually speak English when we're together because we can't speak in French well. Anyway l'm having a great time here, and times flies. There are a lot of bakery bakeries and we sometimes all go out at club together. What's Mexico like? Send me some images! See you back at university next 2 months.

Lamin

The email is well-written, Lamin.

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Dear Mercy,

How's it going? Are you having a great time in Thailand? Here are our memorable photos. I live in Yangon for my education. And I get some good new friends. They are really kind of me. I am studying English at IH Yangon - Mandalay. I think you'll know this language school. In next three, I have GED exam. So I am really trying hard now. I wish you can come back your hometown in next year. I want to go to Smart Island with you. Anyway, I have a wonderful time here. I hope you are studying very well. Take care of yourself. I always pray for you.

GOD bless you.

Your love,

Joyce.

The email is well-written, Yee Mon.

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How is it going?What are you doing these days?I think that we haven’t talked since we finished our final exam.Do you know I remember our school memories almost every day.This is a photo that we consulted for our future university.Yesterday,I found this photo and I remembered you instantly.I hear that this university is very clean, wide, peaceful and strict rule.If I have the chance to study at this university,I will do it with you and we can create so many happy things.By the way,I am studying English courses at the moment.I got some friendly new friends.I hope that you are also learning some courses.At first,it is difficult to say English in our class.Now ,I have adjusted to it.Did you go anywhere this summer? For me, I relaxed in my native town during this summer.If I come to Yangon during these days,I will come to you and talk freely.This is all for now as I don’t want to waste your beneficial valuable time.Please convey my warm regards to your family.

With best wishes.

Truly,

Aung Bhone.

The email is well-written, Aung Bhone.

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Dear Dad and Mom,
I hope you both are feeling happy and healthy these days. As for me, I’ve been busy with my dance competition. I’m staying with the members of my dance crew. They are really nice to me and take care of me because I’m the youngest in the group. As soon as we wake up, we go straight to the dance studio to practice. We stop practicing at lunchtime and quickly eat lunch before going to another studio. Yangon city is so big that going between places takes a long time. It’s a bit difficult for me when we take the bus because it’s not only too hot but also very crowded. Every time I eat something here, I miss home. The foods are expensive and not as good as Mom’s cooking. Although I’m struggling a little with everything, the people here help me find solutions. I feel like the happiest little girl when celebrities come to support our competition.
I think I’ve said enough for now. I’ll tell you the rest when we meet in person. Please take good care of yourselves and know that I’m always thinking of you both. I love you so much.
Your lovely daughter,
Kaw Kaw

The email is well-written, Mya Moe.

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Dear mom and dad ,

I have been a way from home for a long time . I know it’s the first time to stay far from home now I’m alright with my new place . For me it’s a quiet place to study but the internet connection isn’t good enough to study online. Sometimes I miss all of you and my old place. On the evening I walk around like I used to be at there . The view is so beautiful and peaceful to heal my mind from mental stress. This’s the photo of the view from my room . I’m alright mom and dad. I miss you a lot.

With love ,

Your daughter Hnin Ei

The email is well-written, Hnin Ei.

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Dear Mary,

How's everything going? I have got a lot of cousins. We went to zoo together and having fun. I saw deers at zoo. They look so beautiful and big. I loved them a lot . After watching animals I have got some ice cream to eat. How about your study in Thailand University? Do you study well? Hope you have good health and eat well sister. I missed you a lot. I hope you come back to Myanmar after your study. May God be with you and bless you . I love you sister.

Your lovely,

Esther

The email is well-written, Esther.

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January 15, 2025

Hello! I'm excited to share something new. Last month, I started my first makeup class at "Makeup Surri". When I first decided to join, I was a little excited but also very happy because I always wanted to learn professional makeup artist.

On the first day, I walked into the makeup classroom , and I saw many different makeup products and brushes. I was amazing! Our teacher, Tr. Surri was very kind and welcoming. She started explained explaining the important of good makeup products before applying any makeup. This was new information for me, so I listened carefully and actively.

We learned about different types of foundation, concealer and other makeup products. We first learned how to use them, and then we had to practice on ourselves. It was fun and excited exciting to so much. I talked to my classmates a lot of during the practical session. We shared tips and helped each other.

I felt more confident after the first few lessons. Now I understand how how to use eyeshadow, eyeliner and mascara correctly. I'm pretty enjoy this makeup class because I felt like I learned a valuable skill.

So,if you think about taking a makeup class, I recommend it. It's a great way to learn things and feel good about yourself.

The blog is well-written, Nora. For the linking words, I see only "and" and "because"... Anyway, the blog is good to read and informative.

6.5/10

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2.6.2025

(First day of doing something new)

The first day of doing something new was learning how to play guitar.I joined at my school Promise International Adacemy in 2024-2025.When I learned the first time,l felt so excited and happy.I had met a lot of talented people and they're so kind and patience.They showed me how to hold the keys, When I don't know how to hold the keys and how to read the notes.and I make friend with them and learned guitar happily.When we finish joined the guitar program.We were become became a good teammates and we were sometimes played the cover song and played at our school program. We were become best friends.

For a blog, it's a bit short, Esther. Try to express your feelings kinda details in blogs, dear.

5.5/10

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Exploring Universal Studios in Singapore.

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Exploring Universal Studios in Singapore.

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Friday, December 20

I am thinking about writing a blog about my last holiday to Singapore. I had so many things to write about, but I wrote about my experiences from when I visited Universal Studios.

Exploring Universal Studios in Singapore with my cousins was an unforgettable experience. From the moment we entered, the excitement was contagious. We started with thrilling rides like the roller coaster, Transformers, and Jurassic Park adventures, which made us scream and laugh together. The themed zones, such as Ancient Egypt and Hollywood, were beautifully designed, making us feel like we were in a movie. We also enjoyed watching live shows and meeting our favorite characters, which added pleasure to our day. Sharing delicious snacks and taking pictures created lasting memories. Spending the day at Universal Studios with my cousins brought us closer and filled us with joy. It was a perfect blend of fun, adventure, and family bonding. I can't wait to go back again!

The blog is well-written, Ryan. Sentences are with high accuracy in grammar and advanced. Content is great and the flow of the blog is also great, making readers easy to understand. Well-done.

7.5/10

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Date: May 29, 2024

Today, I want to share about my memorable trip to Bagan. This journey brought me peace and a lot of knowledge.

Last year, I went to Bagan with my family when my school was on holiday. I was really excited because I had never been there before. I was amazed by the grandeur of the temples spread across the plains. It was a bit hot, but the sky was clear and beautiful.

As soon as we arrived, we explored the temples by e-bikes and visited famous pagodas like Shwezigon, Pyathetgyi, Shwesandaw and Bupaya. Watching the sunset from a temple was an unforgettable memory. The orange sky blending with the serene temples was truly breathtaking.

Throughout my trip, I spoke with local vendors. Their friendliness and hospitality especially their smiles made me love Bagan even more. We bought some souvenirs from a local vendor who told me interesting stories about temples.

This Bagan trip was truly a valuable experience for me. The magnificent ancient heritage, natural beauty and the warmth of the locals refreshed me. So, I highly recommend Bagan to anyone who loves to travel.

I hope everyone can visit Bagan and create unforgettable memories.

The blog is well-written, Jue. Linking words are correctly used.

7.5/10

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I'm writing a blog about a new place I visited recently. This was my first time going abroad. Last month, I went to Thailand. It was a memorable trip. It was a short flight, but I felt airsick because I had never ridden an airplane flown (past participle of "fly")/ travelled by plane before. The view from the plane was spectacular. When I got off the plane, my friend came to pick me up. While I was in Bangkok, I stayed at my friend’s house. The place was close to the train station, so it was easy to travel around. I visited many places in Bangkok with my friend. She was really friendly, kind, and sweet. When she went to work, I also visited places near her house. Her neighbors were friendly and kind. I stayed there for about one week. I visited The Grand Palace, Wat Pho, and Chatuchak Market — one of the biggest markets in the world. I enjoyed Bangkok because there were many famous places to see. It was a great experience. I will always remember the kindness of the people, the delicious food, and the beautiful places I visited. I’m already looking forward to my next journey abroad!

The content is great and linking words are well-used, Thae Ei. But all sentences are written in one paragraph?

It'd be better if sentences are divided into different paragraphs.

7/10

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Sharing my experience of joining a Yoga class

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I’m grateful for the opportunity to share my experience of joining a yoga class. I’d love to talk share (it's writing, not speaking) about how I felt while attending the class and what I learned about myself. In 2022, I joined an online class from Yoga Land, which included around 40 people in each session. The teachers were brilliant and skilled in their teaching techniques. They closely monitored each student and guided us on how to adjust our positions and listen to our bodies.

Through the class, I learned the importance of meditation, flexibility, stretching, and relaxation. These practices helped me become more aware of both my body and mind. Even though I wasn’t able to attend regularly, I still learned a lot from the sessions I joined. Now, I can practice yoga by myself with proper technique.

In conclusion, if I have free time in the future, I would love to join the class again.

Content is good and linking words are well-used, Thu Thu.

Good job!

6.5/10

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Have you ever felt so tired that you just wanted to run away to the mountains? ⛰️ That’s exactly what we did after a tough dance competition.

Last year, I went on a trip to Shan State with my dance group members. After a complicated and tiring dance competition, we decided to relax both our bodies and minds. So, I recommended visiting Kalaw because it’s very close to my hometown, Aungban, and it’s the most relaxing and peaceful town I’ve ever seen 🌳.

We traveled travelled there by coach 🚐, and it was really fun 🎶. It was definitely worth taking them to Kalaw because they were amazed and enjoyed the impressive views along the mountain roads. As soon as we arrived at Kalaw Villa, they told me they already felt relaxed because of the view and the cool weather 🏞️.

The next day, we went to Byike Mountain and took a dance video 🎥 on the famous railway track 🛤️. Then, we visited an orange garden 🍊 and picked a lot of sweet oranges. For lunch, we went to Café Kalaw ☕🍽️, which is famous for its delicious food and calm atmosphere. After resting there for a while, we continued to Kalaw View Point to arrive in time for the sunset.

The road to Kalaw View Point was very rough, and we felt sick and almost vomited. However, as soon as we arrived, we forgot to breathe for a moment. The sunset view was the most gorgeous view I’ve ever seen 🌄. The sickness from the ride was blown away by the fresh, cool breeze 🌬️. The majestic mountain ranges ⛰️, the narrow path along the top of the mountain, and the sun slowly setting behind the mountains made life feel truly worth living✨. We drank warm milk and peacefully enjoyed the sunset without saying a word.

The next day, we climbed Ohsi Mountain to see the sea of clouds ☁️⛰️. We were lucky to see both a breathtaking sunrise and sunset 🌄. Afterwards, we had breakfast at Kalaw market 🍜, enjoying delicious and affordable Shan traditional food. The gentle, polite, and warm-hearted residents 🌸 made us feel so welcomed and relaxed as we talked and shopped around Kalaw Market 🛍️.

Later, we visited the Kalaw clock tower 🕰️, train station 🚉, and park 🌳. We also rode horses 🐎 at the entrance of Kalaw. It was my first time and really exciting 🎉. At night, we returned to the villa and made a campfire 🔥 with BBQ 🍢 and drinks 🍹. The atmosphere was filled with laughter and warmth 🌠. We shared memories of the struggles and joys from the competition.

We went to bed very late that night 🌙, and the next day we headed back to Yangon 🚌 to restart our dance careers. After the trip, we felt recharged and ready to face new challenges in our dance journey✨.

This is a real blog. Even emojis are well-used. The content is great and the sturcture is compact. Linking words are well-used. Very well-done, Mya Moe.

7.5/10

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It’d be great to share the experience of working in a hotel as a receptionist. It was my first job since I graduated. The hotel was located in Tachileik City, Shan State, Myanmar. I still remember my first day at work. I felt both nervous and excited to begin my journey. The front desk was bright and clean which helped me relax a little. As soon as I stepped in, my supervisor welcomed with a warm smile. I was ready to learn how the system worked. Throughout the day, I learned many things such as how to manage phone calls, assist the guests and handle different problems. My colleagues were friendly and helpful especially one of my seniors. She was the one who taught me how to communicate with the guests and people, since I am an introvert. Thanks to her guidance, my communication skills improved a lot. She was intelligent and kind-hearted. She inspired me a lot. By looking at her, I was motivated a lot to work harder and become a professional in the hospitality industry. Those moments were very precious to me. To any teenagers who want to work but are afraid to get out of their comfort zone, I would say: just try it. The beginning might be scary but you might really end up enjoy it just like I did.

Your experience of first job is well-written. But it'd be better if you wrote in different paragraphs. Grammar accuracy is strong.

6/10

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During my vacation, I took a day trip to Mount Popa. It was one of the best parts of my trip.

Mount Popa is about an hour’s drive from Bagan. It is an old volcano with a tall rock in the middle. On top of this rock is a beautiful monastery with golden roofs. The place is very special to local people. They believe it is the home of spirits called nat.

When we arrived, the view was amazing. The rock looked so high, with the monastery shining at the top. To get there, we had to climb 777 steps. It was a long way up. On the stairs, there were many monkeys. You have to be careful cause (this is okay to use in informal writing but in formal ones, it's always better to use "because") they like to grab food.

The climb was a little tiring, but the views were worth it. At the top, we could see far across the land, green fields, small villages, and mountains in the distance. The temple was full of colorful statues and places where people prayed and gave offerings.

After spending some time at the top, we walked back down and had some tea and snacks nearby. It felt good to relax after the climb.

As a Myanmar citizen, visiting Mount Popa is always a meaningful experience. It connects us to our history, beliefs, and traditions. Each time I go, I feel proud of our culture and happy to share it with others. If you have not been there yet, I truly recommend making the trip.

The blog is short to the point but still informative and expressive. Linking words are well-used. Well-done, Khant.

7/10

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Last month,I went to Yangon to say goodbye to my sister because she was going abroad to study.While I was there,I stayed at my cousin brother’s house. It was a really enjoyable trip but I am little sad.I felt very comfortable,happy and had a lot of fun. I saw my niece,cousins and sister-in-law.I haven’t seen them long time ago. We did many activities together.We visited the zoo, playground,pagoda and garden and then we went shopping and played cards at home then we celebrated my sister-in-law’s birthday. It was very special and memorable time.

Thanks

Yoon

It's a bit short for a blog so you couldn't include details.

6/10

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A Birthday to Remember: My Unforgettable Journey to Bagan

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A Birthday to Remember: My Unforgettable Journey to Bagan

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Last December, I celebrated my birthday in one of the most magical places I’ve ever been- Bangan. It was more than just a trip, it became one of the most unforgettable memories of my life. I had arranged to meet my best friend and we spent the day exploring the ancient city together. We rode around on e-bikes between temples and golden fields. We laughed, explored, and took lots of photos, trying to capture the beauty around us.

One of the highlights of the day was when we reached a high point and saw the view of Bagan. I was absolutely amazed. The sunset in Bagan was my favorite part of the trip. We climbed up to a high place to see it. The sky slowly changed from blue to orange, pink, and gold. The temples looked beautiful in the evening light. Everything was quiet and peaceful. I felt very happy and calm. It was one of the best sunsets in my life.

Along the way, I also talked to some travelers and local shopkeepers. Their smiles, their stories, and their kindness made the experience even more special.

Looking back, this trip wasn’t just about a birthday- it’s was wonder and peace. Bagan gave me a memory I’ll carry forever.

What a beautiful blog, Nyein Hsu. After reading your blog, how happy you were and how memorable the trip was for you. Great job!

7.5/10

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Last month, we visited Maw Bi with my church youth group for a camp. To others, it may have seemed like a simple trip, but for me, it was a very special experience. We traveled together in one big car with all the youth members. On the way, we talked, laughed, shared stories, and even sang songs together. Normally, I don’t enjoy long car rides, but this time I didn’t feel bored at all they made the trip fun and joyful.

When we arrived at the camp, we ate together and listened to our pastor, who taught us many important things about life and God’s ways. His words gave us strength and refreshed our minds and spirits. After lunch, we played games and spent time in fellowship. Everyone was happy and full of energy.One of the best parts of the trip was visiting a farm with our youth leader. The air was so fresh, and the view was truly beautiful. Being in nature helped reduce my stress and made me feel peaceful. We took many group photos to keep the happy memories. One of my friends, who is very good at taking pictures, took many nice photos of me with the natural background. I really like those photos that she took for me.

I truly enjoyed this weekend trip with my church youth group. We made so many wonderful memories together, and I will never forget it.

The blog is well-written, Phyu Sin. It's well-paragraphed and linking words are correctly used. Ideas are connected to each other as well. Good job!

7/10

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Hello my lovely viewers!

In this blog, I will share my pilgrimage to Kyaik Htee Yoe Pagoda in on my last Thadingyut holiday.

It was my first experience to go to an unfamiliar place with my school partners on in the last year of school life. I was also excited because I made a leadership was the leader for my traveling group. Before starting we set off, our headmistress called meetings, gave trainings training sessions for three days and she also asked the things to put in our backpacks. She applied strict rules and decisions, so she could control all her 150 students. We rent 3 coaches and 2 minibuses to take us there. And here we go.

We set off our journey at 5am. Along the way, we sang loudly and danced happily.At 7am, I noticed that our vehicle’s direction was temporarily changed to the largest Buddha’s image. It is on the Three Pagodas Mount, Kyaikhto city and on the way to Kyaik Htee Yoe Pagoda. It was just an image but one incredible thing is that the height of the image is 255.5 ft and the largest Sitting Gautama in the world. One hour later there, we continued our journey. We got to the mountain camp at 11am. All the groups of our school moved quickly to board passenger truck because it was a sunny day.

When we arrived at the mountain, all groups are were directed by a manager from a guesthouse that gives a free night for every student. And then, we unpacked our backpacks for a while and had our lunch. After that, our headmistress gave a freedom to travel around the other places for about 3 hours. I lead my group to Kyaik Htee Yoe Market, Crow’s Mouth(CM), Moke Soe Taung(MST), etc. At CM, we threw gold coins into the mouth and if we got, we would prayed.

When we got to MST, we lost our mines on beautiful hills and landscapes with heliports. We shouted aloud to relax ourselves and came back to the guesthouse. As soon as we reached, we took a bath and had our dinner. At 7pm, I offered a set of golden robe as a representative of our group. We also spent time until 10pm by taking group photos, drinking tea and walking under cool temperature. The whole day was a present from God. If I had a chance, I would like to repeat my journey again and again.

Let me stop my long blog here.Have a great day and Good night everyone.Bye.

Such an exciting and enjoyable journey, Kaung Htet. Vocubulary words in Unit-2 and linking words are well-used. Just be careful with some collocations and grammar accuracy, dear.

6.5/10

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Monday, May 26

Last month, I felt really down and I was downhearted as I lost my football game. In that moment ,I was thinking about how can I deal with this emotional pain. So I got a an idea that is to visit peaceful place and to calm down my feelings.

So I decided to go my grandparents’ village as I haven’t seen them in a long time.So I went there with my cousin. We went there by motorcycle. Along the road, it had there were many beautiful viewpoints like beautiful rice fields,many toddy palm trees and some farmers who was plowing their fields. It is also near the Rakhine Roma Mountain range so I also felt the beauty of those mountains but I also heard the sound of gunfire.It was terrible.

When I arrived there, I rushed straight to my grandfather’s house and ran to hug him.And my grandfather asked,“Do you want to eat first or take a walk around the village?”.So I went around the village.In the middle of the village, the children were playing and my cousin asked to play with them. We also played some different games and we enjoyed a lot.After that we went to the stream and also swam together with them.And we went to the palm forest and drank some palm sap.

At the afternoon,we came back to my grandfather’s house and had our lunch with various curries.I also love the taste of these curries and these also made me feel the flavors of rural life.After having our lunch,we also ate some traditional snacks and we slept for a while.At In the evening, I said goodbye to my grandfather’s house and we left.

I think I went to old road but I felt new feelings and it also make made me forget my bad mood and I also get some experiences and many lessons. It was also an unforgettable memory.

The blog is well-written, Aung Bhone. Parts of story are well-connected and linking words are correctly used.

7/10

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Subject: Heartfelt Thanks – Myanmar Earthquake Relief Effort

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Subject: Heartfelt Thanks – Myanmar Earthquake Relief Effort

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Dear Supporters,

I hope you're doing well. I wanted to reach out and personally thank you for your support during one of the most heartbreaking times for us — the earthquake in Myanmar on March 28, 2025. It was a tragic day that took many lives and left entire communities with nothing. Like so many others, our team lost everything. But with your help, we were still able to come together and do something good . We managed 10,000,000 kyats to donate clean water, instant noodles, dry cakes, canned food, and other basic supplies to those who needed them most.

We raised the money through a local fundraising campaign. Everyone gave what they could — small businesses, neighbors, friends, even students. We also held a simple bake sale and an online awareness event to spread the word and gather more support. It was moving to see people come together with such compassion.

All the funds we collected were donated to Local Charity ( which helps people door to door in Sagaing Township ) a group working directly in the hardest-hit areas. They're using the money to provide emergency food, clean drinking water, and hygiene kits to families struggling to survive. It’s a long road to recovery, but every little bit is helping people get through the days.

Thank you once again for standing with us. Your kindness meant the world when we needed it most. We’ll keep you posted on how things go and let you know about future events where we can continue this important work.

With deep gratitude,

Hnin Ei Khaing

( Youth’s Team )

The email follows the sample structure well, Hnin Ei.

7/10

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A donation to  Khine Hnin Wai's Foundation.

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A donation to  Khine Hnin Wai's Foundation.

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Dear Supporters,

We would like to thank you for your generous contributions and support. Thanks to your kindness, our team has successfully raised a total of 40 lakhs to Khine Hnin Wai Foundation. This supports those affected by the recent powerful earthquake in Myanmar.

Our team worked hard to raise these funds through various activities, including charity events, playing a football match for earthquake relief, online campaigns, and community fundraising drives. With the help of volunteers and local partners, we were able to reach many people and inspire them to contribute to this important work.

Khine Hnin Wai Foundation uses the money to provide essential aid such as food, clean water, temporary shelter, and medical supplies to earthquake victims. We are committed to helping rebuild homes and restore livelihoods, ensuring that affected families receive the support they need to recover and thrive.

Once again, thank you for your generosity and compassion. We look forward to your continued support in our upcoming events, which we will announce soon. Together, we can make a lasting difference in the lives of those impacted by the powerful earthquake.

Respectfully,

Kaung Myat Naing (and team)

Event Planning and Management Manager

The email follows the sample structure well. What's better is that you wrote the email based on your real experience.

7.5/10

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Thank You for Your Support – Donation to Ko Puu Tuu and Borders Charity

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Thank You for Your Support – Donation to Ko Puu Tuu and Borders Charity

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Dear Supporters,

I would like to express my heartfelt thanks for your incredible support. With your generous help, I was able to raise 20 lakhs to support victims of the devastating earthquake that struck Myanmar on March 28, 2025. I’m proud to share that the full amount has been donated to Ko Puu Tuu and Borders, a grassroots charity actively working on the ground to deliver critical relief.

Although I wasn’t able to personally travel to the affected areas, I played a role in coordinating donations both offline and online. My fundraising began at the grassroots level. I reached out personally to close friends and neighbors—going door-to-door to explain the cause and collect donations. Many gave generously, showing deep compassion for those affected. At the same time, I turned to social media, sharing posts widely to request online support. I organized online fundraising drives through platforms like Facebook and KPay, making it easy for people across the country—and even abroad—to contribute. This combination of local action and digital outreach allowed me to raise funds quickly and effectively.

Ko Puu Tuu and Borders is a local charity known for its commitment to helping elderly people in need—particularly those who are sick, abandoned, or living without family. In times of crisis, like the recent earthquake, they quickly pivot to emergency response. What sets them apart is their hands-on approach: they personally travel to the hardest-hit areas, deliver emergency supplies, and ensure aid is used responsibly and reaches those who need it most.

Thank you once again for your incredible kindness. Your generosity has truly made a difference in people’s lives. I will keep you updated on future activities, and I hope you’ll continue to stand with me in upcoming efforts to support those in need.

Warm regards,

Jue Thaw Zin

The email follows the structure well. Great job!

7.5/10

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Hello everyone,

Nice to meet you again.

In last month, our team could perform many activities under Greenpeace because of a large amount of raising money (nearly 50 lakhs) you all have already donated.

And for the question “How did we raise money?”, let me introduce our most effective movements on that days.First, I managed my guys to go around the city by putting charity boxes with our leaflets in public areas and activated to give some time and attend to our lecture that would hold on mid-May. We also printed our team logo “Greenwild” on every 2500 MMK T-shirt and if you bought one, you would also get a coupon, which could be used as a free entrance at the lecture. On that day, we also sold 100 fresh breads (bread is uncountable. If you wanna make it countable, you may use "bread sticks") back, which are greatly donated from “U Win Bread Company”. U Win’s donation could help us as a part of raising money and could attract more consumers to buy it because they were very delicious.So, we would like to say “Thank you” again.

Greenpeace uses the money to protect wildlife’s natural habitats, stop illegal hunting, and raise awareness about the threats related with global warming due to human activities. By protecting the environment, Greenpeace also helps ensure the survival of endangered species. As a message, I’m really proud to say “We all are humans” and we all are responsible for maintaining, protecting and caring about the nature and non-living things for our generations in the future. So “Be Green” everyone!

That’s all. We will post possible datas (data is uncountable) for the next part on our official website. You can contact our email or mobile and ask for more donations as usual.

Kaung Htet (and team)

Greenpeace Financial Supervisor

The eamil strictly follows the structure. Well-done, Kaung Htet.

7/10

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Thank You For Helping Us Raise £1000 for Charity 

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Thank You For Helping Us Raise £1000 for Charity 

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Dear Friends and Supporters,

I want to say thank you to everyone who helped us raise money for charity at our school. Your support, time, and generosity meant so much to us, and we couldn’t have done it without you.

Together, we raised an incredible £1,000. We are so grateful for every donation and all the encouragement we received along the way.

To raise the money, my friends and I made a bake sale and a charity concert at school. It was hard work, but we had so much fun and it brought our community closer together.

The money will go to Oxfam, a charity that helps fight poverty and provide essential aid around the world. Your donation will help families get clean water, food, and education. Thank you again for being part of this wonderful cause.

Best wishes,
Khant

The email follows the given structure. But in the last paragraph, what about the information about next events?

7/10

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Hello everyone,

Thank you very much for your help during the earthquake in Myanmar. Your support was very kind and helpful. It was very difficult time but your kindness and support gave us hope. We've successfully raised 4,000,000 MMK.

Most of you know one of the ways we raised money because UNHCR organization donated 1,500,000 MMK.

But we just like to know about the different things we did. We received 1,000,000 MMK from a donation on our sidewalk everyday and we also received 2,500,000 MMK from other donors.

We uses the money to important places. This money will be donated the earthquake refugees. We will also donated food and medicines. UNHCR a charity that helps people around Earthquake-prone area. They give food, water, shelter and safety to people in need. They also help children go to school and give support to families.

We're proud of that we did together. Thank you again for help. we hope to have another charity event soon and we hope you will join again.

Best wishes,

Nora

Youth charity group

The email follows the sample structure well.

7/10

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Hello everyone,

We’d like to say thank you for your kindness and support. Over the past three weeks, we worked together to raise money for FAO in Myanmar. We collected over 3 million kyats to help farmers and families in need.

Every Friday, we sold snacks and handmade items in front of our office. Some of you bought a lot of snacks and items to support the cause. On Saturdays, many of you joined by giving 1,000 kyats to wear something comfortable to work. Thank you.

FAO (Food and Agriculture Organization) is a United Nations agency that works to improve nutrition and promote sustainable agriculture around the world. In Myanmar, FAO supports farmers by helping them grow more food, improve food quality, and protect natural resources like soil and water.

Once again, thank you for your help. We’ll be planning another event soon—stay tuned!

Best regards,

Thae Ei

Human Resources Manager

The email follows the sample structure well.

7/10

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Dear supporters,

I want to say thank you for supporting and your help, our team raised 20 lakhs and we truly appreciate your help and encouragement.
To raise the money, we cooked and sold Ma La Xiang Guo and some soda drinks. Many university students and teachers came to buy and support our event. It was a great success, and we enjoyed working together as a team.
The money will be given to a charity that helps orphans with their education. It will be used to buy books, school supplies, uniforms, and help with school fees, so the children can continue learning and have a better future.
Thank you once again for your support. We are planning another event soon and hope you can join us again. We will keep you updated.

Best regards,

Phyu Sin

The email follows the sample structure well, Phyu Sin! Nice job!

7/10

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Hello everyone,

We would like to express our gratitude to all those who cooperated and provided assistance during the earthquake disaster.We raised money about 18,000,000 kyats (180 lakhs) and also donated it to the victims of earthquake disaster successfully.

Most of the people have already known that our volunteer group actively participated in village development, funeral, and social affairs.Each individual contributed as much as they could in the amount of money, clothings, and other items that we were able to raise 18,000,000 kyats and a large amount of donations.The reason we were able to raise this much is because everyone actively participated by going to the donation site themselves, making contributions in person, and also taking part in many of the related activities.

The philanthropic organization known as ‘Shwe Myittar’ delivered the donations including money, clothing, food supplies, pure water bottles, and medicines to the people of Mandalay and Sagaing Region that affected by the earthquake disaster.We have also carried out many other problems that most people are unable to undertake.For example, we take seriously ill patients, pregnant women, and other types of patients to the hospital using an ambulance.We also provide support by taking back dead persons from the hospital to their homes, and from their homes to the cremation site, and assist with the cremation process as well.In this way, our group assists with village development, funeral affairs, and various other matters, earning merit while joyfully providing help as a charitable organization.

In summary, our group has been able to sustain itself and carry out charitable work like this thanks to the collective support and contributions of money and manpower from the community.We are proud and grateful for your assistance and thank you all. We hope everyone will continue to join together and help in future endeavors as well.

Aung Bhone (and team)

S.M.T RESCUE

The email follows the structure well. Great job, Aung Bhone!

7/10

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Hello everyone,

I’m writing to say a huge thank you to everyone who donated to our Taunggyi Youth Organization. Your support has made a real difference to people affected by natural disasters. We raised over 40 lakhs.

We held a charity concert and an online donation campaign. Through these efforts, we raised over 40 lakhs, which we used to buy food, clean water, warm clothes, and basic medicine for the affected communities.

The money was delivered directly to villages around Inlay that were hit the hardest. Many people are still struggling to recover, but your generosity brought hope and relief to them. Some of the funds were also used to help build temporary shelters.

We’re planning more events.If you would like to join us or share your ideas, please get in touch. Once again, thank you so much for your kindness, support, and trust in us.

Nyein Hsu (and team)

Admin

The email follows the sample structure well. Good job, Nyein Hsu!

7/10

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My Dear Supporters,

We'd like to say thank you for your support and help. After 5mounths, we've successfully raised 50,000,000 MMK because of your donation.

Most people know our team raised money for activity is advertised on the social media and advertised with celebrities. Another way is we joined with local businesses and then made campaigns and events. The event is running event, and many people joined this event. From there we raised money.

Our team used money for flood victims. We donation donated food, water, clothes, medicine, and money. We focus on physical need after flood including cleanup and, rebuilding effort. We know our actions are still need??? We will continue to work as much as better as we can.

Thank again for all of your help and donation. Please look out and join our next events.

Kay Sin (and team)

Warm Heart Manager

The email follows the sample one. Just be careful with grammar accuracy.

6.5/10

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"Thank You for Being a Light in Their Darkest Hours"

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Hello everyone,

We are truly grateful for your generous donations and kind support for our organization, A Lin Thit, which was specially founded to help the areas affected by the recent earthquake. Thanks to your big hearts and compassion, we proudly raised 50 lakhs to aid those in need.

We raised this amount in various meaningful ways through the ideas and efforts of our members. We organized public busking events, where we performed motivational songs for the affected people. Before each performance, we shared the purpose of our fundraiser and explained how the donations would be used. The public responded warmly, gathering around us, enjoying the music, and contributing generously. In addition to busking, we carried out door-to-door fundraising. We visited homes one by one, explaining the struggles and urgent needs of people living in dangerous zones. After hearing these stories, many people were deeply moved and willingly opened their hearts to help. We also reached out through social media and our followers showed their support by donating online. Every single contribution, big or small, made a significant difference.

With the funds raised, we formed two teams and traveled to Sagaing and Inlay. Our members went to the affected areas, ensuring that the aid reached those who truly needed it. We helped clear debris, rescued people trapped in dangerous places, provided food, shelter, and medical treatment, and donated essential medicines. In Inlay, we even traveled by boat to reach remote villages carrying necessary supplies, where people rarely receive help. We listened to the local residents to understand their most urgent needs. Beyond providing physical help and necessities, we also offered comfort, warm words, and heartfelt encouragement. In difficult times like these, sometimes a warm hug or a kind conversation can become a small safe space for someone to heal, even if just for a moment.

None of this would have been possible without your kindness and generosity. Your support allowed us to do these precious and meaningful acts of humanity. Thank you, from the bottom of our hearts, for standing with us. We’ll continue our mission to help those in need, and we hope you’ll join us again for our future charity projects. Stay tuned. We can keep making a difference.

With gratitude,
Mya Moe Aein
A Lin Thit Charity Team

The eamil follows the sample structure. It's well-written, Mya Moe.

7/10

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Hello everyone

First of all I would like to thank you to my friends.If they weren’t not here there is no way to happen our charity group.Last 2years ago, me and my friends joined a charity group(Na Ga Gyit) in our town that help to the homeless . We raised to charity group with our pocket money I think it about 5lakhs and We also raised worked/ contributed as volunteers.

We also post on social media for danation (spelling?)

We went to places where it’s really needed.

And we made an event like food lottery every Sunday. We sold one ticket for 1 thousand.

Our charity group(Na Ga Gyit) used donated money for homeless.People who need healthcare we provide medicines.For the homeless grandparents we built a tent so they could live.We also provide them with food. Na Ga Gyit gp clean garbish in the town. They clean up the trash in the streams and ditches

Thank you all for your help guys.If we get back together I still want to continue doing charity work.

Aung Chan Pyae(and team)

The email follows the given structure. Please be more careful with spelling and grammar accuracy, dear.

6.5/10

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Dear everyone who support our charity,

We’d like to thank you all for your support. This month we’ve raised £1000 for Oxfam at school.

We raised the money by selling cakes, orange juices and clothes that our class donated. This achievement wouldn’t have been possible without everyone's support.

Oxfam will use these funds to provide health products for orphans and support orphanages around the country. Many orphans go through difficult times but still grow up strong. Seeing the struggles of orphans can make us more grateful our own family, home and support.

Thanks again for all your help. We hope you’ll continue to support our charity in the future.

Warm regards,

Nang Phaung Kham(and friends)

The email follows the given structure. It's well-written, Nang.

But you may share detailed info of different activities to raise fund in the 2nd paragraph.

6.5/10

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Hello everyone,

Firstly, we'd like to thank for your donation and support to us. We need a fund and food for the children for Aye Mya Myitta foundation.

Secondly, most of you know one of the ways we need food, clothes and education for the children because during the war in my country. But we'd like to let you know about the different things we did. we sold the cakes, coffee and snacks to increase the budgets income.

Another thing is that Aye Mya Myitta foundation uses the money to protect important cultural and children life. This includes places like the ancient places for examples King 101 mount and Nattaluu that is important things, it includes ancient pagodas and ancient people. We'd like to show the children because it's important things how to keep our traditions and cultural in the future and we want to know their life.

Thanks again for all your help. Please do not forget our next program and check your mails.

Lamin (and team)

Aye Mya Myitta Directors

The email follows the sample structure. You may describe different ways of raising fund in more details - it's the 2nd paragraph.

7/10

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Hello everyone,

We want to say a big thank you to everyone who helped and supported our school charity fundraiser. With your help, we were able to raise £1,000 for a charity . We’re so grateful for your kindness .

To raise the money, we organised a bake sale, a sponsored fun run . Lots of students, teachers, and families took part, and we were so happy to see everyone getting involved and having fun while supporting a good cause.

Our team was made up of five students who all worked together to plan and run the events. We spent time after school preparing, and we all felt proud to be part of something that will make a real difference. It was a great experience to help others and work as a team.

Once again, thank you so much for your support. The money we raised will go to a charity that supports local families in need.

Best wishes,

Htet Aung and team

( Finance Department Volunteer )

The email follows the sample structure.Well-done, Htet Aung!

7/10

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Hello bestie,

How are you doing? I hope everything’s going great with your work as a guide — you’re already amazing at teaching!

Are you free this Friday evening? I’m planning to have a hotpot at my place and invite my best friends over. If you’re free, I’d love for you to come too! It’ll be around 5 o'clock.

We’ve already prepared lots of ingredients for the hotpot, but if there’s anything special you’d like to have, feel free to bring it along!

I’m really looking forward to seeing you! 🫶

Your bestie,

Kaw Kaw💕

The invitation email is well-used.

Phrases for invitation nicely used, dear!

7/10

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Join Us for a New Year’s Eve Celebration!

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Join Us for a New Year’s Eve Celebration!

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Date: 31 December

Time: 8 PM until late

Place: Clark St, Brooklyn, NY 11201, USA

Dear Friends and Colleagues,

How's everything with you? Hope you all are great and have a nice day. I'm excited to invite you to our New Year's Eve Party this weekend. We'll have a wonderful spread of food, snacks, drinks, and desserts to enjoy throughout the evening. Feel free to dress in semi-formal attire to add a touch of sparkle to the night. We'll also have some fun games and activities planned to keep the celebration lively and memorable.

Please let me know if you can make it. Looking forward to ringing in the new year together!

All the best,

Kaung Myat Naing

The invitation email is well-written and short to the point, Ryan. Phrases for invitation are well-used. You even mentioned date, time and place separately, which is great.

7/10

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Hello Ellie,

Long time no see. How are you doing? I haven’t seen you for three years. From the end of the university, everything is changing day by day. My happiest moments stopped right there and now let me go back and restore our memories with you again.

Are you doing anything on Sunday? Would you like to come around for dinner? I found a nice place to hold a party. Actually, that is my uncle’s garden on Bagan Road in town. So, we all are under the word “FREE.” It’ll be a big reunion. All university students are going to attend and we will also exchange our gifts to each other. Would you like to bring a random gift? Party time is around 7pm. Don’t miss this chance, Ellie. I’m waiting for you.

We all are planning to sing and dance on that day.

I already know that you have a good talent at playing guitar. So, I am looking forward to hearing yours lyrics.

Best wishes,

Kaung Htet

The inviation email is very well-written, Kaung Htet! Language of inviatation is well-used! Gread job, dear!

8/10

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Hello Poe,

How are things? I hope your badminton tournament went well and that the atmosphere was great!

Do you have any plans for Sunday evening? We’re celebrating our mart’s 2nd anniversary with my family, staff, and a few friends you know. We’re planning some games and lucky draws. Would you like to join us? It would be great to see you!

We’ll have cocktails, BBQ, and some appetizers. Could you bring some fruits for the party?

Best bestie,

Thu Thu

The invitation email is well-written.

Phrases for invitation are nicely and correctly used.

7/10

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Hi Berry,

How are you? I hope everything is going well with you. It’s been such a long time since we all met.

I’m planning a friends reunion next month and I really hope you can come. It would be so great to catch up and see everyone again.

We’ll meet at a Chinese restaurant. I’ll share the exact date and place soon. Let’s enjoy some good food and fun conversations.

If you can, please bring any old photos or memories you'd like to share. It'll make the reunion even more special.

Take care,
Khant

The invitation email is well-written, Khant!

Phrases for invitation are well-used.

7/10

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Dear Sis,

Long time no see, How are you? I haven’t seen you for 3months. I hope everything is going well for you and you are enjoying your time in Korea. I miss you so much!

I want to ask if you are free next year.We are planning a special celebration in Bkk for daddy’s birthday and family dinner then we’re going to do some sightseeing and shopping together.It would be wonderful if you could join us.

We’re planning to bring birthday presents for daddy. If you’re able to come,would you also like to bring birthday presents too?

It would be lovely to see you.

Best wishes,

Yoon

The invitation email is well-written.

Phrases for invitation are nicely and correctly used.

7/10

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Hi Nway,

How have you been? It’s been such a long time since we finished university _ I really miss those fun days and the times we spent together!

Are you free this Saturday evening? I’m planning a small dinner with a few close friends, and I’d really love for you to join us. It’ll be a great chance to catch up and share what we’ve been up to.

We’ll meet at the little restaurant we always used to go to during our university days. Let’s say 6:30 p.m. this Saturday? Just a few of us _ relaxed and cozy.

No need to bring anything _ just come as you are and bring your smile!

Hope you can make it. I’d be so happy to see you again!

Take care and let me know,

Jue

Language of invitation is correctly used, Jue. Very well-done!

8/10

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Hello Nay Chi,

How are things? I hope you are doing great and your family are healthy. We last saw each other around the middle of last year and we had a lot of fun when we're together in Mandalay.

Sister, I wanted to let you know that I'm having a birthday party on August 15th. So, I hope for you to come. I invited a few of my friends too and the party with be at my house. I have planning a lot of fun. In the morning of my birthday party, we will start with some snacks and drinks. We will stay all the day and going to do something fun. I have planned a few fun games. Later in the evening, we will cut the birthday cake and have dinner together.

I hope you to come on my birthday party. If you don't come, I will be angry. So see you on my birthday party. Don't forget to bring you birthday present for me. Haha!! I'm joking. See you soon.

With love,

Nora

The invitation email is well-written.

Language of invitation is nicely and correctly used.

7/10

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Hi Hein Ko and Chan Chan,

How have you both been? We hope everything is going great!

We’re organizing a small picnic this weekend and would love for you to come. It will be held at Green Park on Saturday at 10:00 a.m. We’ll be meeting near the large fountain in the middle of the park, so it should be easy to find us.

We’re planning to bring some snacks, play games, and just enjoy the outdoors together. It’s a great chance to relax, catch up, and have some fun with friends.

Please bring something simple to share like chips, drinks, or fruit and don’t forget a mat or blanket to sit on. You can also bring a frisbee, ball, or any games you like.

Let us know if you’re able to come. We’re really looking forward to seeing you!

Warm wishes,

Aung Bhone

The invitation email is well-written.

Language of invitation is nicely and correctly used.

7/10

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Hi Eden,

How are you? I hope everything is going well with you!

I’m happy to tell you that we’re going to have a family BBQ this Sunday at 6 pm at our house. I really hope you can come!

We will have tasty food, cold drinks, and a lot of fun. It’s a great chance for us to meet, talk, and enjoy time together. Everyone is bringing something, so if you want to bring your favorite food, feel free to do it!

I’m really looking forward to seeing you there!

Take care,

Nyein Hsu.

The invitation email is well-written.

Language of invitation is correctly used.

7/10

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Hi Phoe Tote,

How is going?Are you in the pink? It been a long time we haven’t seen each other. The last time we met was when we went to Kalaw. So what are you doing now? You told me you will go to the Japan. Is it ok to study Japanese now?

I would like to say are you free at Sunday? We are having a gathering party at my house. I will also invite our friends from KBZ private school. We don’t haven't met each other for a long time right? We will also make campfire and some barbecue like chicken roaster and also play guitar.We will make campfire so if you don’t want to go home you can sleep my house.Other friends will sleep my house.We will be happy if you come. We will met at my house at 4 pm on Sunday. If you come,come to my house.

Everyone will bring some drinks. You could bring some drinks if you want to. I’ve already planned everything else.Take care bro.

Yours best friend,

Paung Paung

The inviation email is well-written, dear. But for the language of invitaion, please review Unit-4D - Writing skills, dear.

6.5/10

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Hi Kim,

I'm having a small friends gathering party at my house this weekend, and I'd love for you to come. It will be a fun time to relax, chat, and enjoy some good food together!

Everyone is bringing something for the hot pot. Could you please bring some noodles and mushrooms to add to it? We're planning to enjoy hot pot together.

Hope to see you there!

Love,

Phyu Sin

The invitation email short to the point but well-written.

Language of invitation is nicely and correctly used.

7/10

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Hi Tanner,

How is going? We haven't seen long time ago for a long time. I hope you are in pink of health 🩷. How about your job and everything is ok?

Are you free this Sunday? I have a party in on this Sunday. I want to invite you. In party we will play games 🎮, play guitar 🎸 and sing 🎶, drink 🍷 and eat. The last one is I pretty sure you like it. That's we held campfire and make barbecue.

Everyone is bringing something. You have a guitar, right? I've a guitar but I need more. So you bring your guitar, that's ok 😁. Alright, we meet at the party on Sunday. Bye.

Your lovely friend,

Kay Kay

Please pay more attention to grammar accuracy, Kay Kay!

6/10

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Hello bestie,

How's everything? I hope everything's ok. How's your job? This is just to say that we're having a dinner at the end of this month.

Are you free on Sunday evening? I'm planning to have a big meal and wine and invite my friends. People are going to arrive around 6 o'clock. Everyone's bringing fruit for the dinner. Do you think you could bring something?

It would be lovely to see you and have a chance to chat then I'm planning to have an amazing one that is I'm inviting a tarot teacher to ask our future life and love.

Best wishes,

Lamin

The invitation email is well-written.

Language of invitation is nicely and correctly used.

7/10

PS : I'm also interested in tarot cards.

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Dear Myat ,

How are you? We haven’t seen each other for two years! After the 2023 Thingyan Festival, you went to Yangon. I hope you’re happy, doing well, and enjoying your job.

Are you doing anything on Friday evening? That day is my birthday, and I’d love to see you.Would you like to come? I’ve only invited a few close friends. People will start arriving around 4 o’clock. We’re going to have dinner and drink some wine. Everyone is bringing something . Do you think you could bring something too?

It would be lovely to see you and have a chance to catch up.

Best wishes,

Thae Ei

The invitation email is well-written.

Language of invitation is nicely and correctly used.

7/10

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to apply for the job of receptionist at the May King Hotel, which I saw on a job advert.

I’m a ticket seller at Eusight Airport. You can find me at section C, role no.8.

I have to sell about fifty air tickets per day. Mostly, I’m free after 3 PM because the ticket limit is normally filled by phone bookings. And the airline I served takes a break at weekends. So, I think this job is the most suitable for me and there would be perfect conversation with guests since I used to (used to" is used to talk about past habits) speak English to communicate with foreigners every day. Hotels are more quiet than airports. So, my daily stress can be released easily by sitting at the reception.

I attach a copy of my CV.

Could you please send me more information about the pay and details about writing test I should need (should or need - use only one) to prepare?

Yours faithfully,

Kaung Htet

The application follows the structure well.

7/10

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Application for Part-Time Document Controller Position

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Application for Part-Time Document Controller Position

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Dear Hiring Manager,

I am writing to apply for the job of part-time document controller position at your successful company, which you advertised on the Jobsearch.com website.

I am a graduate of the University of San Francisco, and I am available to work from next month.

I am eager to contribute to your company, as I believe it offers a valuable opportunity to further develop my skills. I have four years of experience in documentation.

I am available to work in the evenings and some weekends, as required. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss how I can support your company's documentation and provide excellent service to your clients and partners.

Thank you for considering my application. Kindly refer to my attached CV for a summary of my employment background.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

Kaung Myat Naing

(619) 555-2749

The application follows the structure well, Ryan.

7.5/10

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of receptionist at your hotel, as advertised online.

I am currently working as a cashier at Cosco on the day shift.

I am very interested in this opportunity because I enjoy communicating with people from different backgrounds and cultures. I believe working at your hotel would be a great chance for me to further develop my communication and customer service skills.

I have two years of experience in marketing and management, which I believe would be valuable in a hospitality environment.

Attached is a copy of my CV, which includes details of my current employment.

I would be grateful if you could provide me with more information about the salary, working hours, and further details about your hotel.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Thu Thu

The application follows the structure well, Thu Thu.

8/10

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Application for Part-Time Receptionist Position

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for the part-time receptionist position at your hotel, which I saw advertised on Jobsearch.com.

I have recently graduated from university and am now looking for an opportunity to gain work experience. Although I do not have any previous job experience, I am a fast learner and always do my best to complete any task responsibly. I speak and write English well, and I enjoy helping people and working as part of a team.

I am especially interested in this job because I would like to learn how a hotel operates and improve my communication skills by interacting with guests from different countries. I am available to work in the evenings and on weekends, as required.

I have attached my CV for your review. Please let me know if you need any additional information.

If possible, I would be grateful if you could also share more details about the expected working hours, key responsibilities, and salary range for this position.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Jue Thaw Zin

The application follows the structure well.

Great job, Jue!

7.5/10

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for the part-time receptionist position at your hotel, which I saw on Jobsearch.com.

I graduated??? from university in 2025 (this year or the past) , and I am now ready to start working.

Although I don't have work experience yet, I'm interested to learn new things on the job. I am currently studying an Accounting course and have already completed the intermediate level. I can speak and write English well. I am very interested in this job. I believe I can do it well because I am a quick learner, creative thinker, hardworking, and a good team player. I will do my best in this role.

I have attached a copy of my CV.

Could you please send me more information about the pay, working hours, and work location?

I look forward hearing good news from you.

Yours faithfully,

Thae Ei

The application follows the structure well, Thae Ei!

7/10

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of receptionist at your hotel, which you advertised on LinkedIn.

I am currently a third-year English student at university, and I am available to start working from next term. to work starting from next term.

This role would be a great opportunity for me to use and improve my communication and customer service skills. I have experience working as a front office staff member at a private school, where I developed strong teamwork and customer service abilities. I also have good soft skills, which help me communicate well with people and solve problems effectively.

I attach a copy of my CV, with details of my past employment.

Could you please send me more information about the pay, working hours, and any training provided?

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Nyein Hsu Pan

The application follows the structure well, Nyein Hsu.

7/10

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Dear Sir,

I am writing to apply for the job of teacher at an international summer camp for children, which you advertised online.

I am graduated from university and looking for new job. I am available to work from next term.

The job at your international summer camp for children is very exciting for me. I hope that job will give me new skills and new experience. I can speak English well and I am really good at speak English with the children. I have good connection with children and then I have experience working with children. When I am was in the first year, I worked as a babysitter. So, I have many experiences. I'm an active person; I can help organise activities and trips.

I attach a copy of my CV, with details or my past employment.

If that's okay, could you please send me information about working hours, pay and details about the job.

I hope, I'm hearing a good new with you.

I look forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours faithfully,

Kay Sin

The application follows the structure well.

6.5/10

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm writing to apply for the job of tour guide for English speaking tourists.

I'm Level-5 for general English class at International House Yangon, and my speaking is pretty good.

I live in Mandalay and I know many places very well. I also speak English well. I think I can help visitors enjoy their time while stay here. I like meeting new people and talking to them. I'm friendly and helpful. I enjoy visit new place around the city and showing people interesting place in Mandalay.

I attach a copy of my CV, and I wait your reply for confirm the job.

Could you please send me information about work receipt and salary for job and also more details about your programme?

Thank you for reading my application form. I look forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully,

Nora

The application follows the structure well, Nora.

7/10

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Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to apply for the part time receptionist your hotel,which I saw advertised on job search.com.

I am currently a student at International House Yangon-Mandalay. I am studying General English.I can speak and write English well and I enjoy meeting people from different places and countries. I am available in the evening and on weekends, I am interested in this job because I would like to get experience in hospitality and improve my communication skills.

I have attached my Cv with information about my background.Please let me know if you need anything else.

Could you please send me information about the pay,working hours and more details.

Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Yoon

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of Chinese teacher at Bee International School, which I saw advertised on social media.

I am currently a final-year student at Dagon University and am available to start working.

This job would be a great opportunity for me to communicate with people and gain more experience in teaching students. I already have experience teaching children at the primary level, and I believe I can patiently and effectively teach your students.

I attach a copy of my CV, which includes my past work experience.

Could you please send me more information about the salary and working hours?

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,
Phyu Sin Thant

The application follows the structure well, Phyu Sin.

7/10

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Job Application for Part-time Receptionist

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Dear Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I am interested in the part-time receptionist position at your hotel.

I am currently a first-year student majoring in Hospitality, and my class schedule is free in the evenings. Therefore, I am available to work at your hotel during evenings and weekends.

As a Hospitality student, I already have a basic knowledge of hotel operations and services, so I will be able to adjust quickly without struggling from the start. I enjoy welcoming guests and providing the services they need. My friends often tell me I am very friendly and approachable. In addition, I have strong English skills. I received the highest-level certificate from International House online classes. It helped me develop excellent speaking and writing abilities. I also have good communication skills, and I believe every guest who visits your hotel will be satisfied with my service.

I have attached a copy of my CV, which includes details of my previous achievements.

I would appreciate it if you could kindly provide more information about the part-time position, including the pay and working hours.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Kaw Kaw (Use real name as this is the job application email)

The application follows the structure well.

Good job!

7/10

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for the part-time receptionist position at your hotel, as advertised on Jobsearch.com.

Currently, I am a university student studying English, and I am looking for a part-time job that allows me to use and improve my language skills. I have strong communication skills and am comfortable speaking and writing in English.

I am particularly interested in this job because I enjoy meeting new people from different cultures, and I believe I can help your guests feel welcome and comfortable. I am friendly, polite, and organised, which I believe are important qualities for a receptionist. I also have basic computer skills and can handle phone calls, emails, and bookings efficiently. Working in a hotel environment would give me valuable experience in customer service and help me grow professionally.

I have attached my CV and a reference letter from my college English teacher. Please let me know if you need any more information.

Could you please let me know more details about the working hours and specific duties involved in the role? I would also appreciate any information about training or support provided for new staff.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards,

Aung Bhone

The application follows the structure well.

Nice job, Aung Bhone!

8/10

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Dear Sir,

I’m writing to apply for the job of part-time receptionist at Hotel.I saw at the online.

I’m waiting for the Grade-12 results so I have free time and available to work.

I need experience for work so receptionist job is good for me.I really like part time job because I’m still learning the English from the online class.Now I aslo doing apprenticeship at Eco resort.So I’ve a little experience about the Hotel.I’m not perfect I need more training.I would like to join yours Hotel team.I’ve fully confidence confident that I can do it.I can’t talk speak English fluently but I’m still learning and I hope work will teach me.

I’ve already sent my CV at your Hotel office and Email.

Could you let me know more information of about job and salaries.More details information of about the training.

I’ll be waiting for good news from you!

Your faithfully

Aung Chan Pyae

The application follows the structure well.

6.5/10

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Advising my student on improving his English writing skills

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Advising my student on improving his English writing skills

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Hi Aung Aung,

Thanks for messaging me! I'm so glad you asked for my input.

I remember how anxious I felt about writing when I was learning English. Even though I knew plenty of words and grammar rules, putting them together seemed so hard. Now, I approach writing with much more confidence. Here are some tips that helped me along the way.

First of all, don't worry about making mistakes. Try to write regularly, even if it's just a few sentences each day. This will help you build confidence and improve gradually.

Secondly, read a variety of English materials like books, novels, articles, or blogs. This will expose you to new vocabulary and different writing styles and techniques. For example, while reading articles, you should note down unfamiliar words in your notebook and look them up in a dictionary. Moreover, you need to consistently study these new words and grammar rules and then actively apply them in your writing.

Next, make time for extra writing practice outside of class hours. You can join the English writing classes, such as International House Yangon-Mandalay, British Council, and Wall Street English. They will teach you using the simplest methods and a student-centered approach with various writing formats. For instance, they'll assign homework and provide feedback on your writing. I truly believe this will effectively improve your English writing skills.

I hope you find this helpful, and don't hesitate to ask me after class next week.

All the best,

Kaung Myat Naing

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Hi Yupar,

Thanks for your message.I am glad that you wrote to me for advice.I remember when I was learning English,I felt a big nervous about speaking. I knew vocabulary and grammar but I was scared of making pronunciation mistakes when I talk.Over time with practise,I became more confident and now I enjoying speaking.I’d like to share some tips with you that helped me.

First of all,don’t be afraid of making mistakes, most people will understand what you mean and won’t notice small errors.

Secondly, the best way to improve your speaking is to practise as much as you can.Please use every opportunity to speak. For example, try speaking only in English during in class or with your friends.You should repeat new words and grammar at home to remember.

Next,You should join speaking club or conversation groups,such as chat groups in the school library or study centre.These are usually free and then You should practise online. For instance,there are websites where you can talk to people from other countries and practice speaking with them and then You should watch videos on social media.

I hope this will help you, Please come and talk to me if you have more questions.

Best wishes,

Yoon

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Hello Everyone,

We’d like to thank you all for your support and kindness during our recent fundraising campaign to help flood-affected villages.We have successfully collected a generous amount of donations.

Many of you donated money,clothes,food.We also held charity market where we sold handmade items and snacks. Some team members created an online donation page and shared it on social media to raise. Thanks to all these efforts, we were able to support several villages in need.

The villages we helped were seriously affected heavy flooding.Many families lost their homes, food supplies and belongings.With your help, we provided clean drinking water,dry food,blankets and other basic items.Your donations made a real difference in their lives and helped them recover more quickly.

Thank you again for your help and generosity.Please stay connected for our next project to help more people in need.

Yoon and team

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Hope you’re doing well! I just wanted to check in and see how things have been going with you lately.

I’m organising a fun activity this weekend and I’d love for you to join me. We’re going to Maungmagan beach on Saturday morning at 8 Am . It should be a lot of fun!

The pick up point is Engyin’s House as usual . We have plan to swim at the beach in the morning . After that we will go to the KTV and will have very enjoyable moment singing and dancing together. Finally , we will go back to the sea shore and we will start our beach party . Don't worry about not getting back on time to your home . We will go back to Dawei at 5:00 pm and will sing your favourite song of “ Don’t say goodbye , I wanna cry “ by Soe Paing  on the way of home .

Make sure to bring your gas stove and also spare mini gas cylinder to make BBQ . I will be happy if you bring some of pork ribs and seafood sauce . The others will buy fish,prawn , squid and octopus at Maungmagun Market. Let me know if you can make it!

I greatly look forward to reconnecting with you at the beach party.

Cheers,
Htet Aung

The invitation email is well-written, Htet Aung.

Phrases for invitation are nicely used.

7/10

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Hello Sevim,

I’m very proud of your regular writing assignments and asking for my ideas.

I assume that you already know about language skills and pairs like “listening and speaking”and “reading and writing.” So, reading and writing go hand in hand.

Firstly, you should start with reading books. For example, short stories or cartoons with effective illustrations and don’t read long articles to avoid spending more time and meeting complicated words. When you read it, you need to read each word in each speech bubble carefully and make predictions for unknown words by looking illustrations. From that words can take place in your heart.

Secondly, remember that the way to improve your writing skill is by thinking and applying the words’ usages in your daily life repeatedly. For instance, if they are verbs, you need to create similar activities and think their meanings at the same time. This way can help you to recall the first letter of the meanings and you can continue.

Next, write emails as much as you can. I know you always make a phone call with your family every day. You need to take turns sending emails with phone calls. When you write it, please make sure you’re using correct grammar patterns, spellings and punctuation marks.

Finally, you can join a Facebook page with its group such as “Foreign Backup.” They usually give a topic for writing assignment on their group. You can also submit your own writing and they will give a feedback. They monthly choose and give awards to only three winners who have the highest scores. I think you can find a good way by competing with others.

I hope these instructions will suggest you to get your destination successfully.

Best wishes,

Mr. Kaung Htet

The email to give advice on improving writing is well-written, Kaung Htet.

7/10

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Tips to Improve Your English Writing Skills

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Tips to Improve Your English Writing Skills

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Hi Mie Mie,

Thanks for your email. I'm really happy to hear that you want to improve your writing skills.

When I first started learning English, I also found writing very difficult. I didn’t know how to start a paragraph or how to explain my ideas clearly. But over time, I learned some helpful techniques that I’d love to share with you.

First of all, try to write something every day. It doesn’t have to be long - even a few sentences can help. For example, you could write about what you did that day or describe a place you like. Secondly, read in English as much as you can. Reading helps you learn different writing styles, and you’ll see how writers' express ideas using good grammar and vocabulary. You can start with short texts such as short stories, news articles, or even simple blog posts. Thirdly, consider joining a writing class in person or online. For instance, in our school, we sometimes have extra writing sessions where students can practice and ask questions.

Next, don’t be afraid to ask others for feedback. When I was learning, I gave my writing to my teachers and friends to check - that’s how I improved. Finally, be patient with yourself. Writing takes time and effort. It’s okay to make mistakes - that's how we all learn.

Keep going! I believe you can do it. Let me know if you want me to check something you’ve written.

Best wishes,

Jue Thaw Zin

The email to give advice on improving writing is well-written, Jue.

7/10

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Job Application for working with children

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Job Application for working with children

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Dear Sir /Madam,

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to apply for the position at your international summer camp for children aged 7–12, as advertised in Jobsearch.com.

Currently, I am working as a part-time teacher at a private primary school, where I help teaching art and science lessons, supervise activities, and support students in the classroom. I also volunteer at Buddhist Sunday School ,also called Dhamma school , where I organize group activities and games . I am studying child psychology and helping in data collection with the research of “ healing through architecture for ADHD and trauma in children .

I am very interested in this job because I enjoy working with children and I’m passionate about helping them learn through fun and meaningful experiences. The opportunity to work at a summer camp while practising English in an international environment sounds exciting and rewarding.

I have attached my CV, which includes details of my education and experience with children, as well as a recommendation letter from the head of primary school .

Could you please send me more information about the camp dates, location, and accommodation? I would also like to know if training is provided before the camp begins.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards,

Htet Aung

The application follows the structure well.

Great job, Htet Aung!

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Dear Ko Pay Lwar ,

Thank you for your message. I’m really glad to hear that you’re feeling confident with your reading, listening and speaking . As for your writing, it’s completely normal to feel a bit nervous.

I want to share my experiences when I was practicing in productive skills . As you know , I am shy to speak out and mostly no idea in writing . When I was taking a level test ,reading and listening skills were B1 plus ,simultaneously writing and speaking skills were A2. I feel depressed and then I found myself that I was weak in productive skills . So , I made a deliberate practice ,then I spoke and wrote as I can .

First of all, write a little everyday . Consistency is the most important in every practice. Try to keep a short diary in English. You can feel some fun in writing 5 to10 sentences each day about what you did or how you feel can make a big difference over time.Secondly, don’t worry about mistakes and focus on expressing your ideas clearly. You can always check grammar and spelling later. The more you write, the more confident you’ll become.Thirdly ,read short texts like emails, blog posts, or articles and try copying parts of them by hand. This helps you notice grammar and vocabulary patterns. Reading is input skill and believe that the more you read , the more productive skills in all of your ideas .

Next , you can also practice using online tools . Use grammar checkers like Grammarly or the built-in tools in Word or Google Docs to help you see and learn from your mistakes. Now, you can explore many Ai checkers and use some of them . Never forget you deserve the benefits of developing technology. Finally , get feedback. If possible, don’t hesitate to ask a teacher, tutor, or friend to read your writing and give you tips. Even short feedback can be very helpful . After all of that ,if you think you don’t have enough skills , attend either the intermediate writing class or advanced writing class according the result of your level test . If so ,you can practice systematically and get feedback from your instructor. And then , you will be well qualified in writing.

You’re already doing something great by reaching out and wanting to improve. Keep going , progress takes time, but you’ll get there!

Best wishes,

Htet Aung

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Hi Thune,

Thanks for your message. I'm glad to hear that you want to improve your writing skill.

When I started learning English, I was afraid to speak with other people, and I didn't know how to use grammar or how to make sentences. That's why I realized that I needed to improve my writing skills and become more confident. Here are some ideas I've learned about English:

First of all, you should learn new vocabulary. For example, every day you should learn at least 10 new words and practice using them in sentences. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Believe in yourself.

Secondly, read simple English books.

If you have free time, you should always read a book to practice your writing and reading skills. For instance , it's a good idea to read children's stories because they are simple and easy to understand. You should start with short stories and try rewriting what you read.

Next, join a writing group or online class. Writing with others gives you support, ideas, and motivation to keep going instead of practicing alone. Teachers will explain how to write correctly and will also check your writing.

Finally, get feedback from your teacher or friends. Others can see your mistakes and help you improve. For instance , after you finish writing, you can check it using apps such as ChatGPT, Duolingo, or Quillbot.You should try writing about your daily life every day without fail.

I hope some of my ideas are helpful for you. Don't worry about making mistakes  they help you improve your skills.Nobody is perfect. I believe you can do it very well. Keep going, Thune!

Best wishes,

Thae Ei

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Hi Chloe,

Thanks for your message! I’m really glad you asked me how to improve your writing.

When I first started writing in English, I often felt unsure and made lots of mistakes. But over time, I found some simple methods that helped me become more confident. Here are some tips I’d like to share with you:

First of all, don’t worry too much about grammar at the beginning. Just focus on writing regularly. For example, you could write comments on social media in English or reply to posts in English on your account.

Secondly, read more in English. This will help you understand sentence structure and improve your vocabulary. For instance, you can read song lyrics, subtitles while watching English shows, or even recipes and instructions.

Next, try to use new words in your own writing. You can keep a vocabulary notebook with useful expressions such as “I believe that,” “it depends on,” and “the main reason is.” These will help you write more clearly and naturally.

Finally, don’t be shy to share your writing with others. Ask your teacher or a friend to check it. They can help correct your mistakes and give useful advice.

I hope this helps you! I can know how frustrating it might be at times especially when progress seems slow. But remember every little step counts. Keep practising, and you’ll see big improvements soon.

Best wishes,

Nyein Hsu

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Hi Sevim,

Thank you for your message. I’m happy you asked me for my advice.

When I started learning to write in English, it was difficult. I made many mistakes. But I practiced a lot, and now I feel more confident. Here are some ideas to help you:

First of all, don’t worry if you make mistakes. It’s normal. You will get better step by step.

Next, plan your ideas before you write. Write a few words or sentences to help you know what to say.

Also, ask a friend or classmate to check your grammar. They can help you fix your mistakes.

For example, after you write something, give it to your friend to read and correct.

Finally, read simple English texts every day. This will help you learn new words and good sentence structure.

I hope this helps you. Good luck with your writing.

Best wishes,

Khant

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Hi Lisa,

Thank you for your email. I'm glad that you wrote to me for ideas.

I remember when I was learning English, I felt embarrassed about written. I understand you want to improve your writing skills in English. That's a great goal and I'm happy to help you. I have some more ideas to help you writing skills.

First of all, you need to collect vocabulary. If you see a new word, write it in your note book. Ty to write the meaning in your own language and also an example sentence in English. This way is important your vocabulary skills.

Secondly, reading is very important. For example, when you read books, short stories or English Journal, you learn how to good writing looks and try to read every day. Choose easy books or stories as you like. This helps you see how to write sentence correctly.

Next, focus on learning grammar, such as sentence structure, verb tenses and pronunciation. You don't need to be perfect, but you leaning basic grammar rules help you write better. Use simple grammar book or online exercise for practice. Finally, always practice your writing. For instance, you can write a letter for your friend or teachers and you can ask them some questions. This's help you understand and improve your writing in English.

I hope this helps you and please tell free to talk to me after class next week.

Best wishes,

Nora

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Hi Sevim,

Thanks for your message. I’m really happy that you asked for advice about improving your writing. When I first started writing in English, I also found it difficult, but with practice and the right strategies, I got better. I’d love to share some tips that worked for me.

First of all,read often from different sources. Reading helps you understand how good writing works. For example, try reading novels, articles, and even short stories to learn new vocabulary and sentence structures.Secondly,practice writing every day. The more you write, the better you’ll become. Such as keeping a short daily journal or writing small paragraphs on topics you enjoy.

Next,Get feedback and learn from it . Don’t be afraid to let others read your work.You should ask another student or your teacher to check your grammar and spelling. They can help you notice mistakes you might not see yourself. For instance, if a teacher or friend gives you corrections, take time to understand and learn from them.The last one is to study new vocabulary and practice to remember them.The more vocabulary you get,the better to use them in your writing.This keeps your writing interesting. For example, instead of always using “nice,” you could try “wonderful,” “pleasant,” depending on what you’re describing.

I hope these tips can help you to improve your writing skills. You can also ask me some suggestions as you know.

Best wishes,

Aung Bhone(Cambridge English professor)

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Dear John,

I hope this message finds you well.

As your English professor, I’d like to share some practical suggestions to help you improve your writing skills effectively.

First of all, read a lot of “Academics writing and reference from that”. Reading exposes you to different writing styles, vocabulary, and sentence structures, which naturally helps you become a better writer.

Secondly, work on enriching your vocabulary. Try to learn new words regularly and pay attention to how they are used in context.

Next, develop small daily habits that support your writing such as journaling, summarizing articles, or writing short reflections. These small steps build consistency and confidence.

Then, take the new words you’ve learned and reconstruct them into your own original sentences. Using new vocabulary actively is key to mastering it.

Also, never underestimate the importance of grammar. Strong grammar skills are essential for clear, professional, and accurate writing.

Finally, revise your work. Review your writing with a critical eye to improve grammar, structure, and clarity.

Improving writing is a gradual process, but with dedication and the right habits, you’ll see steady progress. Keep going, and don’t hesitate to reach out if you need any feedback or support.

Warm regards,

Sara

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Hello Sevim,

I’m really grateful that you’re trying to improve your writing skills and asking me for ideas.

First of all, I want you to pay good attention to grammar, because even a small mistake can change the meaning and confuse the reader. Clear and correct grammar makes your writing stronger and shows that you have a high standard in writing. When I was trying to improve my writing, I always took time to check my grammar carefully. I also made notes and tried to remember the mistakes I made, which is why I rarely make simple grammar mistakes now. So, try to check your grammar by yourself first, or ask a friend to help check for mistakes.

Secondly, learn useful linking words and try to use them naturally in your writing. Linking words help your writing flow better and feel smoother, which makes it more interesting to read. They also help your writing sound more professional. Try learning a few new linking words every day and practice using them in at least ten sentences.

Next, stay consistent with your practice. Try writing essays or short paragraphs on different topics every day. This will also help you get familiar with new vocabulary from a variety of topics.

Finally, always make a note of your mistakes and try to avoid them in the future. It’s normal to make mistakes while learning, but if you don’t remember them or pay attention, you’ll likely repeat them. So, whenever you practice, write down your mistakes and review them before you start writing something new.

These ideas have worked for many students, and I hope they will work for you too. I’m always happy to answer your questions, so feel free to ask me anytime.

Best wishes,
Mya Moe Aein

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Hi Sevim,

Thanks for your message. I’m happy to share some ideas to help you improve your writing in English.
When I was learning writing, I didn’t know grammar rules and had no idea how to write. I didn’t have enough knowledge and I was always worried about making mistakes. I didn’t believe in myself and I cared too much about what other people thought. That’s why I felt I wasn’t good at writing, and I had no confidence to write. But over time, I found some ways to get better, and I’d like to share them with you.

First, try to keep a daily journal. You can write a few sentences each day about your day or your feelings. Don’t worry if it’s not perfect. Just keep writing. The more you write, the more confident you will become.

Secondly, read short English stories or articles. This will help you see how English is used. You will learn sentence structure, grammar, and new words by reading more.

Next, ask a teacher or a friend to check your writing. It’s okay to make mistakes. They can help you correct them and give you useful feedback.

I hope these ideas help you. Writing takes time and practice, so don’t give up. Just believe in yourself and take small steps every day.

Best wishes,

Phyu Sin

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Tips to Improve Your English Writing Skills

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Dear Gracy,

Thank you for your massage. I’m glad that you wrote to me for ideas.

I remember when I was learning English, I really for writing skill. I practiced every day. I made endless grammar mistakes. And I learned from my many mistakes. Don’t be worried to make mistake. Now my writing skill is better than the previous time.

First at all, reading is important for writing. Read widely can expose yourself to diverse writing styles and learn how different authors express ideas. For example, if you want to writing an essay, you need to read about essay. And analyze what you read. Pay attention to sentence structures, vocabularies and overall organizations. Secondly, you should practice writing regularly. Even short writing sessions can improve your skills such as short stories, essays and letters.

Next, prepare a writing structure such as main idea or important information. Outlines help organize your thoughts and you can write easier. Good writing needs to have a logical structure to make sense to a reader. Outlining your writing is the best way to keep your writing on track. Finally, Grammar is very important because it improves the quality of your writing. Always proof-read your writing twice. The first time, look for general mistakes and the second time look for mistakes with the particular grammar point.

I hope my advices help you, and please feel free to ask to me when you have some problems. So, I’ll give some good ideas for you.

Best wishes,

Cho Yee.