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Despite it the TT flowing, there are some cases of using the wrong word or awkward phrases 😔

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try and read back in your head to give the most fluent in english answers

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There were some words/expressions that could’ve fit better with the register

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In the commentary questions give examples of translations you considered using and why you didn’t use them.

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Use more than just one example from the ST in the first commentary question

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Double check the tense of the ST before translating

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Sometimes the expressions are translated directly and this leads to calque

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Great examples given of formal register in the ST, but also include examples of how you replicated this in the TT

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Having ST tenses reflect the ones used in TT.

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wish - to re-read work at the end and see if everything makes sense in English, maybe be more flexible when translating to avoid awkward expressions

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Although there are many really good collocations in the translation, some phrases could benefit from a more appropriate choice of words to best suit the register of the text as well as the target language.

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To be careful with certain expressions in the translation as some of them could have been translated with more fluidity

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Sometimes there are meaning distortions that alter the flow 

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Sometimes there are meaning distortions that alter the flow 

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The translation flowed very well however to achieve this, many words were added which were not in the original text which distorted the meaning slightly.