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1. The aim of this paragraph is to discuss about the advantage of the Internet in modern society

2. The aim of this paragraph is to discuss about the two negative effects of the Internet in the life

3. The aim of this paragraph is to discuss about the reason for Internet addiction

4. The aim of this paragraph is to discuss about the resolving addiction to the Internet

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We are excited and proud to share that Sarah Patel has been honored as our Outstanding team member! As Marketing Specialist, Sarah Patel has made significant contributions to the development of our company in the past six years. She has-> has gained a  lot of achievements. Firstly, she successfully led training sessions because he-> she is a responsible employee and inspires-> không đồng nhất về thì (vì ở trên em sử dụng thì quá khứ mà?)-> inspired new members regularly -> có thể gộp lại giải thích cho đỡ dài dòng nhé-> Firstly, with her strong inspiration and responsibility, she successfully led the training sessions. Secondly, she has achieved a fifteen percent increase in monthly sales because she is hard - working and promoting innovation. Besides, she is an intelligent man-> she thì sao lại là "man" nhỉ-> specialist so he-> she implements an effective customer feedback system. -> câu này diễn đạt nó lủng củng -> Besides, thanks to her intelligence, she has implemented an effective customer feedback system, which is one of our pride. Congratulations to Sarah Patel on this well-deserved recognition!-> câu này hơi informal, em cân nhắc viết lại cấu trúc khác (có thể sử dụng cấu trúc giống Best employee of the year nhé)

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We are writing to let you know about an upcoming training session on workplace safety. The training session will take place in Conference Room A on Thursday, April 2nd, from 9:00 AM to 11:00 AM. There are three objectives for the training session. Firstly, employees can learn how to respond to emergencies such as minor injuries, stroke,...-> mình không sử dụng "..." trong văn viết nhé-> such as minor injuries or strokes. This is the most important aim which we hope employees are taught-> cái này là bịa hơi xa nha vì mình không có căn cứ cụ thể để nói nó là "the most important"->, which is considered one of the most important aim we want to instruct in the workplace. Secondly, learning practical tips to prevent workplace accidents is essential too-> từ này informal-> is equally essential. In addition, participants will gain practical tips to prevent workplace accidents and maintain a safe environment. Besides, it also aims to help employees recognize the importance of safety protocols for personal and team's well-being. Thank you for your cooperation.-> vì sự kiện chưa diễn ra nên mình có thể thêm câu "We hope to see you on this important training session. Thank you for your cooperation"

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We have some great news to share with you regarding-> sau regarding là 1 cụm từ thôi chứ không phải 1 câu nha -> Sarah Patel's recognition as Sarah Patel has been honored as our Outstanding team member! As our Marketing Specialist with six years of experience, Sarah has made significant contributions to the development of our company. Leading by example, she led training sessions for new members, helping them learn quickly and feel confident in their jobs. Additionally, she achieved a fifteen percent-> 15% (số trên 10 thì em viết số nhé) increase in monthly sales through her creative-> with her innovative marketing ideas. Furthermore, she-> thêm từ nối-> she also implemented a customer feedback system that improved our service quality. In conclusion, Sarah is a hardworking, talented, and inspiring employee. Join us-> Please join us in extending our heartfelt congratulations to Sarah Patel for this well-deserved award-> cũng không hẳn là award mà!!-> recognition!

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This announcement is regarding an upcoming training session on workplace safety for all department members. The session will take place on Thursday, April 2nd, from 9:00 AM to 11:00 AM in Conference Room A. Firstly-> For the session, firstly, the training will help everyone learn how to respond to emergencies effectively-> có thể mở rộng thêm ý-> , which might prepare employees with real-life skills in urgent situations . Secondly, participants will gain practical tips to prevent workplace accidents-> mở rộng thêm, such as:.... Moreover, the session will emphasize the importance of safety protocols for both personal and team well-being. In addition-> Finally sẽ hợp lý hơn vì mình mở đầu bằng "Firstly", employees will have the chance to ask questions and share experiences related to safety. Therefore, this training is essential for creating a safer and more responsible work environment. We appreciate your attention to this matter.

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1. B: about

2. C: look for: tìm kiếm

3. D: interested in: quan tâm đến

4. B: realised

5. B: more

6. C: shares

7. A: kinds

8. B: because

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1. B: show

2. C: every

3. D: system

4. B: called

5. A: discovered

6. C: over

7. B: from

8. A: consist

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1. The Internet has brought us many-> convenience không đếm được nên không dùng many -> bỏ significant conveniens-> convenience and applications in work and life.

2. The internet has negative impacted-> negatively impacted (tính từ Trạng từ + động từ) our health and cognition-> cognitive function.

3. The Internet has negatively impacted our health and awerenness. What is the cause of this?-> trong topic sentence mình sẽ không đặt câu hỏi nhá -> Internet addiction has become common due to several reasons that draw people into spending too much time online

4. The Internet has negatively impacted so we should a solution for it. -> câu này làm chưa tốt vì chưa làm rõ được specific area, mình giải quyết ở level nào? cá nhân hay chính phủ? -> Dealing with internet addiction involves taking steps to encourage healthy online habits and balance in life

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2c

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7a

8b

E3:

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2c

3d

4b

5a

6c

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1. The Internet plays an important role in our daily lives-> life by-> through improving communication and providing access to knowledge.

2. The Internet has several negative effects that users should be aware of. -> câu này chưa tốt vì chưa thu hẹp được phạm vi về negative effects -> The Internet has several negative effects in terms of mental health and misleading that users should be aware of.

3. The Internet's easy accessibility and engaging content can lead to addiction. -> câu này em phải nói rõ hơn về cause -> Internet addiction has become common due to several reasons that draw people into spending too much time online

4. There are several effective ways to prevent and manage Internet addiction.

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Exercise 2:

1. B (about + N: về người/cái gì)

2. C (look for: tìm kiếm)

3. D (interested in: thích, quan tâm)

4. B

5. B (more adj than => so sánh hơn)

6. C

7. A (kinds of + N)

8. B

Exercise 3:

1. B

2. C (every + N số ít)

3. D

4. C

5. A

6. C (for over + khoảng thời gian)

7. A (from A to B => loại B

before + SV => loại C

between A and B => loại D)

8. A (consists of: gồm có)

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1. The Internet improves communication and provides information, making it an essential part of modern society.

2. The potential harms of the Internet for user's health and society. -> Mình phải viết thành 1 câu đầy đủ chủ ngữ - động từ - tân ngữ nha em -> The Internet, however, can pose potential risks to user's health and society

3. The Internet is easily accessible and full of engaging content, the difficulty of control how much time they spend online.-> câu này đang bị sai ngữ pháp vì không bao giờ có 2 câu đầy đủ chủ vị lại ngăn cách bởi dấu phảy -> em viết lại nhé

4. A solution to Internet addiction is to create schedules, set limits, and provide support programs.

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2C

3D

4B

5B

6C

7A

8B

Exercise 3

1A

2C

3D

4B

5A

6C

7B

8A

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Exercise 2: Develop each of the following ideas using at least two strategies

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Exercise 2: Develop each of the following ideas using at least two strategies

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1. Fast-food addiction is partly caused by its accessibility. According to recent studies, the number of fast-food outlets has increased dramatically in both urban and rural areas, making it easier for people to satisfy their cravings anytime. For instance, many fast-food chains are open 24 hours a day and are located on -> in almost every street corner, so people tend to choose them over healthier options simply because they are quick and convenient -> cost (giá rẻ).

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3. Fast-food addiction can lead to serious health issues.

- Fast-food contains too much fat, sugar and salt which can lead to obesity, high pressure blood-> high blood pressure and diabetes.

A, B and C / A or B/ A and B

- Fast-food lack essential nutrients such as fiber, vitamins, minerals, so people who eat it regularly may feel tired, weak and have poor digestion system.

-> option nữa (option 3)

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Another feasible solution to fast - food addiction is to regulate food marketing. In the past, all marketing and sales activities were sold -> widely public outside and they were not controlled safely. Meanwhile, today, consumers are increasingly considering the importance of choosing clean and safe food and local authorities are also increasingly tightening the production of fast food with poor quality and content through street stores. For example, the Food Safety Department has very strict regulations on the nutrition and harmful content of consumers' health, especially fast food.

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2. Fast-food addiction can be attributed to its addictive ingredient.

Most of fast-food contain of fat, sugar and salt, which signal to brain's reward system and create a sense of pleasure similar to cause -> caused by addictive substances. Furthermore, chemical additives are specifically designed to make food more appealing and difficult to resist. As a result, these ingredients play a major role in fostering dependence, leading to unhealthy eating habits and long-term health problems.

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Exercise 2: Develop each of the following ideas using at least two strategies.

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Exercise 2: Develop each of the following ideas using at least two strategies.

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4. A practical solution to fast-food addiction is to promote nutritional literacy and healthy eating habits. In fact, many people continue to eat fast food regularly, since they are unaware of how harmful it can be to their health. By teaching individuals about nutrition-> mình nghĩ sử dụng từ "teaching" ở đây chưa hợp lý lắm vì teaching là giảng dạy (vậy ai giảng dạy?) -> providing individuals essential nutritional knowledge, they can better understand what their bodies need and how to make healthier choices. For instance, schools and workplaces can provide short courses or campaigns that show people how to prepare simple, nutritious meals at home instead of relying on fast-food. Such education helps people build long-term healthy habits and reduce their dependence on instant foods.

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Exercise 4: Write a paragraph for each of the following topic sentences.

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Exercise 4: Write a paragraph for each of the following topic sentences.

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1. There are several factors leading to fast-food addiction. One major reason is the accessibility of fast-food, as it can be found almost-> từ này dùng cho văn viết đang bị informal-> virtually everywhere, from shopping malls to school areas. People often-> thêm từ nối chỉ kết quả -> As a result, busy people often choose these meals, since they are faster and more convenient than cooking at home. Another factor is marketing, which strongly influences consumers-> consumers' behaviors, especially young people. For example, Advertisements that show delicious-looking burgers and drinks make fast-food seem irresistible. In addition, many fast-food products contain addictive ingredients such as sugar and fat, which make customers crave them more and more. Some people even attribute their eating habits to stress or busy lifestyles that leave little time for preparing healthy meals.-> mình thấy hơi thừa vì ý này na ná ý 1 rùi, em bỏ nha All these factors together make fast-food addiction a growing-> concerning problem that requires practical solutions, such as improving nutritional literacy and encouraging healthier choices.-> ở đây em kết chung chung thôi, k mở rộng thêm ý nữa tránh để người ta hiểu lầm là bài chưa hoàn thành -> that requires pratical solutions coming from both individuals and the government

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3. The solution to fast-food addiction require thoughtful strategies and concerted efforts.

The solutions to fast-food addiction require thoughtful strategies and concerted efforts from everyone. Firstly, the best solution is personal education-> personal education about nutrition. Food knowledge is knowing-> food knowledge làm sao mà know (biết) được em :) -> a program that shows what is good or bad for the body. For example, we can learn to read food labels to the the sugar or fat amount-> to examine the level of toxic ingredients such as sugar or far. This better knowledge helps people make smart-> smarter choices instead of eating fast-food. Secondly, goverment-> the government shoul-> typo -> should control advertising by limits the amount of fast-food children see, which reduces their want-> diễn đạt lòng vòng -> fast-food advertisments, especially implement restriction for young viewers to reduce their craving . Thirdly, we should focus on providing healthy options. For instance, schools can ofer-> offer cooking classes to to-> to teach students how to make simple and good meals. There are three solutions to fast-food addiction, which have many important in my opinion-> trong bài viết thì em tránh sử dụng ngôi thứ nhất để tránh chủ quan nhé -> which play an important role in daily life

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Exercise 2: Develop each of the following ideas using at least two strategies

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Exercise 2: Develop each of the following ideas using at least two strategies

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The solutions to fast-food addiction are numerous, requiring both knowledge and habit changes. One primary solution is to promote nutritional literacy. Indeed, better knowledge -> better knowledge of nutrition helps people truly understand the harmful ingredients-> effects of certain ingredients in fast food, like too much sugar and bad fat. For example, teaching students to read food labels and check for salt levels makes them choose healthier alternatives over unhealthy options. Another significant solution is establishing healthy eating habits early on-> sai ngữ pháp -> from early life phases. It is clear that replacing the habit of buying fast food with new routines can reduce the addiction over time. For instance, parents can plan to cook meals at home four times a week to make home-cooked food the new default choice. In summary, fast-food addiction is influenced by various solutions, promoting nutritional literacy and healthy eating habits-> thiếu từ nối, sai logic "sao nghiện ff lại bị ảnh hưởng bởi nhiều giải pháp? ;) -> In summary, ff addiction is influenced by various factors, requiring solutions from both individual and governmental levels

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Exercise 2: Choose A (True) or B (False) for each statement - Trang 51

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Exercise 2: Choose A (True) or B (False) for each statement - Trang 51

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1B 2A 3B 4A 5B

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4. A practical solution to fast-food addiction is to develop knowledge about nutrition and start healthy eating habits. Indeed, people who follow a healthy diet and is learned->học là nội động từ nên không có bị động em nha -> gain adequate knowledge about nutrition, have a lower rate of obesity than others, because fast-food is never include-> might never be included in their daily menu. A notable instance is David Goggins, he -> run-on sentence ->. He used to weigh over 300 pounds, but through healthy eating-> diets and intense exercise, he lost more than 100 pounds in just three months to pass the Navy SEAL Training. This shows that understanding nutrition can lead to long-term positive change.

-> mình thấy cái ví dụ về ông David Goggins vẫn chưa rõ về việc ông ý tìm hiểu về chế độ ăn và vì vậy giảm được cân (vì ý trước của em đang viết là phải có kiến thức về dinh dưỡng mà đúng không?)

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e7 : Viết lại câu sang tiếng anh

1. Fast-food addiction may cause many serious health problems.

2. Identifying the cause of fast-food addiction is an improtant step to slove the problem.

3. Fast-food access management needs to be word choice implemented to reduce dependence on this type of food.

4. Easy access to fast-food is creating a major health problem.

5. Promotions about fast food causes higher consumptions among consumers.

6. Control of food advertising may reduce attractiveness of fast food for consumers.

7. Addiction in fast-food may make comsumers more dependent.

8. The most practical solution is to change people's eating habits and choose healthier food.

9. Understanding nutrition helps people make wiser decisions for daily food consumption.

E4: Chọn 1 trong 3 cách để diễn đạt

My choice: Fast food addiction can lead to serious health issues.

Fast food addiction can cause serious health problems. First, fast food has high fat, sugar, and salt, so people who eat it often can gain weight and become obese. For example, many young people eat fast food every day and quickly gain weight. Also, fast food lacks vitamins and minerals, so the body becomes weak and tired. As a result, people may develop diseases like heart disease or diabetes. For instance, someone who eats fried chicken and burgers too often may have high blood pressure and low energy.

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1. fast-food addiction can cause a lot of serious health problems

2. Identify the causes of fast-food addiction is an important step to solve the problem.

3. The management of access to fast food needs to be considered to reduce dependence on this food.

4. The easy access to fast food is creating a serious health problem.

5. Advertising unhealthy food can contribute to fast food addiction.

6. Controlling food advertising can reduce the attractiveness of fast food to consumers.

7. Addictive ingredients in fast food can make to consumer dependence.

8. The most practical solution is to change eating habits and choose healthier foods.

9. Understanding nutrition helps people make smarter eating decisions

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2A

3B

4A

5B

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2. The disadvantages of a traditional classroom setting compared to online learning are numerous. One primary disadvantage of a traditional classroom setting is its lack of flexibility. This is because students have to attend classes with fixed times-> a fixed schedule and locations. For example, working students may find it difficult to balance their jobs with strict class schedules. Another significant disadvantage of traditional classroom is the limited use of technology. It is clear that traditional classrooms rely heavily on face-to-face interaction, which may not provide access to digital resources or online materials that support independent study. For instance, in online learning, students can easily review recorded lectures and access a variety of multimedia tools, which help them learn more efficiently than in a traditional classroom. In summary, while online learning offers flexibility, it also present-> presents significant challenges, such as decreased social interaction and technological limitation.

rigid: cứng ngắc

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Toipic 2: the disadvantages of a traditional classroom 

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Topic sentence: traditional classroom

Sup1 idea :

Topic: Traditional classroom

Sup1: lack of flexibility

Explanation: does not allow student to comfortably choose the time or places for learning, requiring them to present in class at fixed times.

Example: on bad weather days or personal work so cannot go to school.

sup2 idea :

Topic: Traditional classroom

Sup2: limit reviewing lectures

explanation: Can't review lectures when students don't understand

example: When students need knowledge to review and have questions to ask the lecturer, they do not remember the knowledge to ask.

Conclusion

Topic : traditional classroom

context: in today's digital age

sup1: lack of flexibility

sup2: limit reviewing lectures

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2. The disadvantages of a traditional classroom setting are numerous. One primary disadvantage of a traditional classroom setting is the uniform learning pace. This is because teachers must instruct at a general speed, which often causes advanced students feel-> to feel bored and less skilled students to fall behind quickly. For example, a student who finishes lessons fast might just have to sit and wait while the rest of the class is still working on an easy task or a student who needs more help is quickly rushed to a new lesson even though they haven't really understood. -> câu dài quá T.T

Another significant disadvantage of the traditional classroom is the lack of personalization in the content. It is clear that since everyone must study the exact same materials, there is often little opportunity for students to develop unique-> other skills. For instance, a teacher give-> gives a long lecture while a student who learns best by building doesn't get a chance to move or touch anything to truly understand the lesson-> diễn đạt tối nghĩa, cần cụ thể hơn. In summary, the traditional classroom setting can lead to serious consequences today, such as the uniform learning pace and the lack of personalization in the content

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1. Write a paragraph of at least 100 words about the solutions to air pollution in big cities

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1. Write a paragraph of at least 100 words about the solutions to air pollution in big cities

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The solutions to air pollution in big cities require thoughtful strategies and concerted efforts. Firstly, reducing traffic congestion is a feasible approach [to alleviating -> to alleviating the problem of] air pollution in big cities. This solution involves governments [building good infrastructures for vehicles to commute such as building lanes for public transport, banning individual transport on some days of the week -> improving transportation infrastructure, such as constructing dedicated lanes for public transport and restricting the use of private vehicles on certain days of the week]. For instance, in Hanoi, the Cat Linh - Ha Dong [high - speed rail -> metro line] reduces traffic jams along its route because people choose it instead of motorbikes, [which help -> helping to] decrease exhaust emissions from vehicles. Another practical solution to this problem is a [government - sponsored awareness - campaign -> government-sponsored awareness campaign], especially through audiovisual means such as infomercials. An effective advertising campaign could warn [of -> about] the dangers of air pollution in big cities and thus discourage the public from [getting involved in such activities -> engaging in polluting activities], or encourage them to be more responsible in their actions and choices. In summary, air pollution in big cities can be addressed by implementing solutions such as reducing traffic congestion and raising public awareness through campaigns.

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2.D

3.B

4.C

5.B

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2. Write a paragraph of at least 100 words about the disadvantages of a traditional classroom setting compared to online learning (REWRITE)

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2. Write a paragraph of at least 100 words about the disadvantages of a traditional classroom setting compared to online learning (REWRITE)

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The disadvantages of a traditional classroom setting compared to online learning are numerous. One primary disadvantage of a traditional classroom setting is its lack of flexibility. This is because students have to attend classes with a fixed schedule and locations, which can be inconvenient for those who live far away or have other responsibilities. For example, working students may find it difficult to balance their jobs with rigid class schedules-> có thể làm tốt hơn bằng cách đưa ra cho mình một ví dụ cụ thể hơn nha (để tránh lặp ý trước). Another significant disadvantage of traditional classrooms is the limited use of technology. It is clear that traditional classrooms rely heavily on face-to-face interaction, which may not provide access to digital resources or online materials that support independent study. For instance, in online learning, students can easily review recorded lectures and use digital tools to study more efficiently. In summary, a traditional classroom can lead to serious consequences in today’s digital age, such as lack of flexibility and the limited use of technology.

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1. Write a paragraph of at least 100 words about the causes of traffic congestion in big cities.

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1. Write a paragraph of at least 100 words about the causes of traffic congestion in big cities.

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The causes of traffic congestion in big cities are numerous. One primary cause of this trend is the rapid increase in the number of private vehicles. Indeed, as people’s incomes rise, more citizens can afford cars and motorbikes, [which overcrowd the roads → leading to overcrowded roads]. For example, in cities like Hanoi, millions of motorbikes [move through → travel along] narrow streets every day, causing serious traffic jams. Another significant cause is the lack of strict traffic [law → law] enforcement. It is clear that when drivers ignore rules such as stopping at red lights or parking in the wrong [places → areas], the roads become chaotic. For instance, in many big cities, [some → many] motorbike riders run red lights during rush hours, blocking intersections and making congestion even worse. In summary, traffic congestion in big cities is influenced by various causes, such as the overuse of private vehicles and the poor enforcement of traffic laws.

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Exercise 1:

1. collaboration

2. flexibility

3. customization

4. assessment

5. adaptability

6. feedback

7. accessibility

8. discipline

9. resources

10. interaction

11. socialization

12. autonomy

13. distraction

14. convenience

15. Curriculum

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Exercise 2: Translate the following sentences into English.

1. The school curriculum is designed to provide students with a systematic learning experience across various subjects.

2. Teachers often give constructive feedback to help students enhance their understanding of complex concepts.

3. Collaborative projects encourage students to work together, fostering teamwork and communication skills.

4. The convenience of online resources allows students to access information from anywhere with an internet connection.

5. Homeschooling provides families with the autonomy to meet their children’s individual needs and interests.

6. Distractions in the classroom, such as noise, can interrupt students’ focus and attention.

7. Standardized testing is an objective way to assess students’ knowledge and skills.

8. On the other hand, standardized tests may not accurately reflect the diverse skills, abilities, and knowledge of students.

9. Students who struggle with discipline may find it difficult to stay focused in a traditional classroom environment.

10. Adaptable teaching methods are essential to meet the diverse learning styles and preferences of students.

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1.e 2.g 3.f 4.m 5.s 6.d 7.h 8.r 9.l 10.k 11.o 12.j 13.b 14.c 15.p 16.a 17.q 18.n 19.i

Exercise 4:

a. Congestion

b. infrastructure

c. emissions

d. urbanization

e. commute

f. Overpopulation

g. ecosystem

h. smog

i. Surveillance

j. Inequality

k. Public transit

l. traffic management

m. Urban development

n. Green spaces

o. Carpooling

p. pedestrian-friendly

q. Public health

r. Law enforcement

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4.1 Education

Ex1:

1.  collaboration

2.  flexibility

3. customization

4. assessment

5. adaptability

6. feedback

7. accessibility

8. discipline

9. resources

10.  interaction

11. socialization

12. autonomy

13. distractions

14. convenience

15. Extracurricular

e2:

1. Curriculum in school designed to provides for students systematic learning experiences in different subjects

2. Teachers usually give contractive feedback that help students improve understanding about complex concepts

3. Collaborative projects encourage students work each other, foster teamwork and communication skills

4. Convenience of online resources allow students to access information from anywhere with an Internet connection

5. Homeschooling provides for families autonomy  to meet their children’s individual needs and preferences.

6. Distractions in the classroom, example noise, may disrupt students’ concentration and attention

7. Standardized testing is an objective way to  assess students’ knowledge and skills

8. On the other hands, standardized tests may not accurately reflect students’ skills, ability and knowledge

9. Student who struggle with discipline may have difficulty  in concentrating  in  traditional classroom setting

10. Adaptive teaching methods are essential to accommodate students’ diverse learning styles and interests

4.2 City life issues

a - 16

b - 13

c - 14

d - 6

e - 1

f - 19

g - 2

h - 7

i - 3

j - 12

k - 10

l - 9

m - 4

n - 18

o - 11

p - 15

q - 17

r - 8

s - 5

Ex4:

1. congestion

2. infrastructure

3. emissions

4. urbanization

5. commute

6. overpopulation

7. ecosystem

8. smog

9. surveillance

10. Inequality

11. public trasit

12. traffic management

13. urban development

14. green space

15. carpooling

16. pedestrian - friendly

17. public health

18. law enforcement.

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Ex1: 1. Write a paragraph of at least 100 words about the causes of traffic congestion in big cities.

The causes of traffic congestion in big cities are many. One main cause is overpopulation-> rapid urbanization/population growth. Urban areas attract many workers and students to live, work, and study, so the population becomes very crowded. For example, in some inner-city areas with many universities, the number of students increases, and traffic becomes very busy during rush hours. Another important cause is the rise in personal-> private vehicles. Nowadays, many people have their own motorbikes or cars to travel to work and school. For instance, most students use personal vehicles to go to school, and this makes the traffic worse-> mình cần em làm rõ hơn traffic worse như nào nhá. In conclusion, traffic congestion in big cities happens because of reasons like overpopulation and the increase in personal vehicles.

e2: Write a paragraph of at least 100 words about the solutions to air pollution in big cities.

The solution to air pollution in big cities require thoughtful strategies and concerted efforts. Firstly, reducing the use of personal vehicles is an effective way to lower air pollution-> lower air pollution level/reduce the level of air pollution. CẦN TỪ NỐI The government and environmental companies should make plans to replace gasoline cars with electric cars to protect the environment. For example, in 2025, the government will test-> không hợp nghĩa -> implement a ban on gasoline cars in inner-city areas and replace them with electric cars. Another practical solution is to raise public awareness through government-sponsored campaigns, especially by using TV programs and infomercials. These programs can warn people about the dangers of air pollution and encourage them to act more responsibly. In conclusion, air pollution can be reduced by limiting the use of personal vehicles and raising public awareness

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 Write a paragraph of at least 100 words about the causes of traffic congestion in big cities.

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 Write a paragraph of at least 100 words about the causes of traffic congestion in big cities.

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Traffic congestion is a big problem in many large cities. One main cause is that more and more people buy personal cars and motorbikes instead of using public transport. It makes the roads very crowded, especially during rush hours. Another reason is that the public transportation system in many cities is not good enough, so people do not want to use it. In addition, poor road design and traffic lights that are not well controlled can also make the situation worse. Sometimes, road construction or traffic accidents cause long delays. Overall, traffic jams happen because cities grow too fast while the transport system cannot keep up.

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We are writing to let you know about an organizing a seminar-> organizing a seminar/ a seminar on healthy eating habits for residents. The organizing will take place in Main Hall, which-> which is also known as Community Center, on Saturday, October 24th, from 10:00 AM to 12:00 PM. There are four objectives for the organizing. Firstly, residents discover the benefits of a balances-> balanced diet to protect yourself-> themselves through meals-> diễn đạt chưa ổn -> to equip themselves with more valuable nutrition-related knowledge. Secondly, learning simple, affordable meal preparation tips is equally essential-> có thể cân nhắc giải thích ngắn gọn xem tại sao lại "equally essential". Thirdly, it also aims to help residents understand how nutrition impacts energy levels and mood. Moreover, you can get answers to common healthy eating questions from a professional nutritionist. We hope to see you on this important organizing seminar. Thank you for your cooperation.

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Were-> We are writing to let you know about my-> our local community center is organizing on-> a seminar on health-> healthy eating habits for residents. The time and location of the workshop is on Saturday, October 24th, from 10:00 AM to 12: 00 PM at the Main Hall ( Community Center ). When cooming here, people will learn and discover the benefits of a balanced diet; thereby, improving the application of-> applicating tips on family meals in a simple and economical way. Moreover, people will understand how nutrition impacts energy levels and mood as-> and get answers to common healthy eating questions from a professional nutritionist. We wish you all the best in your endeavors.-> câu này chưa hợp lý nha, vì đây là thông báo về 1 buổi toạ đàm nên mình nghĩ em nên sử dụng những câu để cảm ơn hoặc khuyến khích họ tham gia

Task 2: Write a paragraph about the causes of lack of sleep among adults.

The causes of lack of sleep among adults are numerrous. One primary causes-> cause of slepp-> sleep deprivation among adults is lazy-> the laziness to exercise. Indeed, adults often do not have time to exercise in the morning due to work and study, so they consider exercise unnecessary. Therefore, they do not have the mental comfort to start a new day-> hơi lủng củng -> As a result, they may not feel mentally refreshed to start a new day. For example, many young people today often do not like to exercise and often they consider it something only for old-> older people. Another significant cause is work overload. It is clear that nowadays, work is very stressful, making people have no time to relax and rest, so their spirit is not comfortable, easily leading to overload-> word choice + off-topic -> they often feel mentally exhausted, which easily leads to sleep deficiency. For instance, young people often stay up all night to meet dealine-> deadlines, so they don't-> do not (KHÔNG VIẾT TẮT) have a seet-> set sleep schedule and have trouble sleeping-> sleep troubles. In summary, lack of sleep among adults is influenced by various causes.

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The causes of lack of sleep among adults are numerous. One primary cause of lack of sleep among adults is poor eating habits. Indeed, nowadays, instead of choosing healthy meals with plenty of vegetables, adults regularly eat fast food and sugary drinks, which can contain a lot of artificial ingredients like salt and sugar. Therefore, it disrupts balanced digestion, which directly causes insomnia. Another significant cause is job pressure. It is clear that adults have to work long hours to meet deadlines or earn enough money to support their families. They also worry about saving for the future or losing their jobs. For example, an office worker might stay up late every night to finish reports or answer emails from clients. In summary, the lack of sleep among adults is influenced by various factors.

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This announcement is regarding an upcoming seminar on healthy eating habits organized by our local community center. The session will occur-> take place (sẽ hay hơn)  on Saturday, October 24th, from 10:00 AM to 12:00 PM in the Main Hall of the Community Center. For the session, firstly,-> During the session participants will first discover the benefits of a balanced diet and learn how it supports overall health. Secondly, the seminar will provide simple and affordable meal preparation tips for everyday life, such as using basic ingredients to create healthy dishes, planning weekly menus and reducing food waste while saving time and money. Moreover, attendees will understand how nutrition affects energy levels and mood. For instance, they will find out how fruits, vegetables and whole grains can boost energy and improve mood throughout the day. Finally, a professional nutritionist will be present to answer common questions about healthy eating. Therefore, this seminar is a great opportunity to improve your lifestyle and well-being. We appreciate your attention to this matter -> We encourage all residents to join and make the most of this opportunity

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The causes of lack of sleep among adults are numerous. One primary cause of this trend is work-related stress. Indeed, many adults have demanding jobs that require long hours or create anxiety, making it difficult for them -> for adults to relax and fall asleep. For example, office workers -> many office workers who face tight deadlines often stay up late to finish their tasks or worry about their performance. Another significant cause is unhealthy lifestyle habits. It is clear that drinking too much coffee or eating heavy meals late at night can disturb -> disrupt people’s sleep. For instance, many adults drink coffee in the evening to stay awake for work, but this habit keeps their bodies alert and prevents deep rest -> deep sleep. In summary, lack of sleep among adults is influenced by various causes, such as work stress and unhealthy daily habits.

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As a valued member of our team, we wanted to inform you that the seminar on healthy eating habits for residents-> we would like to inform you about an upcoming seminar on healthy eating habits for residents. The seminar will be held on Saturday, October 24th, from 10:00 AM to 12:00 AM-> PM at the Main Hall of the Community Center. In this event, we talk about discover -> During this event, participants will discover the benefits of a balanced diet and learn simple, affordable meal preparation diet tips. In addition, the professional nutritionist will provide to understand how nutrition impacts energy levels and mood and get answers to common healthy eating questions-> a professional nutritionist will explain how nutrition affects energy levels and mood and answer common questions about healthy eating. Let's make this seminar a success together.

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Task 2:

Nowaday-> Nowadays, AI or named Artificial Intelligence is-> AI, or Artificial Intelligence, has become more and more popular in-> around the world. Beside-> Besides the undeniable advantages, there are also some disadvantages. For instance, AI may show-> provide wrong information, user will check it to ensure knowledge is not distorted-> so users need to double-check to ensure the information is accurate. Next, many jobs can be replaced by machine-> machines, which causes many people to be laid off., it cause many people is lay off. there for-> Therefore, we should use AI wisely and make sure humans still control important areas of life