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Makana's writing was the fire

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The main idea of their story was about him and his bike.

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The story was amazing! I like the part where river describes the moment when she's petting the dog. The story was so good, I thought that a professional writer couldn't do better. So, 10/10.

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it's ok to walk away when you are upset, I think.

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that he tumbled  a lot when he wiped out

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nathans writing was great.

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it was a good story! :D

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I like the lesson learned, but its a good story.

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be careful on 4th of July because you might get burned

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I liked his dialogue

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GREAT STORY :D

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Grandma, she was a sweet grandma always spending time with Teah

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I think Wangari's story was great.

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The main idea was going somewhere special for Christmas.

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dude. omg. so good.

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That Talulah described herself and her story perfectly and I could imagine it well.

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I think some punctuation was a bit wrong (Capitalism, quotation marks, a few mistakes)

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That letting out your inner child could lead to fun

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Very nice !

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Thier story was about her friends and her.

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Try use more smooth transition and check spelling .

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Yours was super cool and sounded fun!

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If you like Halloween then you should go to Salem!

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Beau's story was so good it was very descriptive It shows how it can be sad to travel from place to place. I don't see anything to improve.

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Beau's story was so good it was very descriptive It shows how it can be sad to travel from place to place. I don't see anything to improve.

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My partners story was great and fun but there were some parts to be improved.

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I like the most how she chose one story and stuck with it the entire time and just kept adding more about what happened the whole time.

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She had some typos and did not highlight all her dialogue yet.

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Her main idea was she flew to a different place to go to a competition.

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Reylyn was a nice girl who was entering a competition.

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I like how he wants to be a fire dancer

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something engradeble

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She has so many details and why she loves Christmas.

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THAT SHE LOVES CHRISTMAS/ she also has a Minin ausie and I LOVE them to.

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The main character was in a bad mood because she was mad that she could not put up the Christmas decorations.

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WOW!

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What I like most about this story is him riding go karts

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The main idea about this story about go karts 

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Elias's writing was fire

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The Heart of the story/when he arrived at practice

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That she was able to make friends so fast.

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she is a very nice person and very respectful.

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What I like about lris story is that she put a lot of good thing it just amazing 

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I love how Milly described how the characters in her story looked 

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this story was really good the author really expressed emotion well

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that the main character figures out he can open a coconut by himself 

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I loved her story it has lots of emotion.

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I love how she acted very mature and strong(:

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The main idea was to be yourself and don't let others effect you!

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The description of the main character is confident!

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The story was awesome he described it like I was really there it had a lot of detail

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i like how he wrote about the cars that he wrote.

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his story was amazing he had great dialog he got to the point at the end with no comments from me

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i am a military child too and i understand how it feels to leave something you love

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its ok to learn new things meet new people 

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the story was so good and detailed! loved it, it was amazing 

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the story was so good and detailed! loved it, it was amazing 

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Beau's story was so good it was very descriptive. It shows how it can be sad to travel from place to place. I don't see anything to improve.

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The thing I liked most about his story was that it shows how life can be ever changing and you have to go with the flow. 

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The main idea of his story was travelling from Washington to Hawaii. 

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Beau was the main character, he was brave. 

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it was very cool and your story just comes to mind and I can picture it .

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it was very cool and your story just comes to mind and I can picture it .

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was super fun to read

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its about a scripion and its about a brother and sister relationship 

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I think that Kira's story was great I was able to picture it in my head and also I love mango trees :>

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The main idea was about them becoming curious about the scorpion on their mango tree.

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They had a lot of detailed, her expression in what she was writing I hope she goes back to Salem because she absolutely loved it.

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To always go to Salem because she loved it, not to mention Halloween.

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His was super good and suspenseful.....

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I like how it is kind of funny and suspenseful.

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The main idea of the story is that he never wants to stay home again!

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Jax did not have a main idea or lesson in his story.

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Kira's story was amazing she used dialog perfectly I like how she used show don't tell words to tell her story

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that she loves her neighborhood no matter what

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It was amazing!

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Just because their friends cancelled their skating rink hangout doesn't mean that they couldn't learn how to skate.

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amazing! It had good descriptive words

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It was great but maybe make the text a little bigger?

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Her story was so descriptive and emotional and overall perfect.

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Mily, her mom, her dad, Hannah, Chou Chou, Nigel, and Cotton.

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Lucas's writing was great.

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The part where he finally lands the trick.

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really great story luke

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i love how he added great emotion to the story

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The character and his family cares about Lily and takes care of her.

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The cover was very beach and vaction style.Very nice

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it is good to try new things, and you can make new friends 

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nice, funny, not afraid to try new things  

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I didn't get to read most of them but sure they are all amazing!

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I shall not share but all I will say....  gourdy :)

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I like how much effort they put into their stories