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the organization of the topics are nice, very detailed. I think just speaking up would make this better.

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I think your presentation and idea was very clear and made a lot of sense, very detailed and knew exactly what you wanted to do and great job presenting your voices. I think you should add more pictures next time .

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I really loved these slides, deeply and thoroughly explained. the only thing I can say needs to be fixed was the amount of words on the page.

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you had a nice idea and nice looking slide. I think that you should just work on elaborating as well as looking at the audience more often.

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nice detailed presentation, I really like the idea. in the future I think you should work on projecting your voice :)

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I really liked you guys idea. By drawing more peoples attention you used a hobby that many people enjoy so it encourges them. The thing you could improve on is reading the screen a little less.

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Your presentation was very organized since it had a lot of important information. The only thing I would say you should improve on is speaking a bit louder because it was hard to hear at some points

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Just projecting your voice, speaking up would be a lot better, not saying you guys did a bad job. If you guys had more energy your presentation would've exceeded all the other slides in my opinion. Not than my groups' though

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Slides were very appealing to the audience, well put together slides and having a design contest was a great way for people to actually participate in something like and then rewarding someone who wins is the best way to get people's attention

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Excellent presentation, only thing was bullet points. Other than that you all presented great

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Very well organized and prepared to answer questions

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Just have more eye contact with the audience that is it

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I really like this idea, I think this would draw even more people to the garden. Maybe have a slide where you give examples of how to draw attention to the mural.

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I really like this idea. I think that you guys really know what you want your outcome to be. My only peice of advice is that you should add a picture into the slideshow of where outside the school the mueral will go

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you had a very thurough presentation and i think that you made it clear why a logo is important. i think that y'all could have taken a bit less time on some slides.

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I think your slides were great, you used color and images very well. maybe have a slide where you draw every point you hit back into one call to action? that would tie everything together really well!

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The slides were extremely well researched and well backed by evidence, you gave achievable steps to your action plan. Maybe have less words

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One thing you guys did well is explaining the slides really well and getting really into depth and exlaining what you guys are going to do and i really like that what,why,how. One thing u can better is talking more about some slides

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I think that you brought a very important aspect of the green improvement here at crls. the only thing that i think you could have improved is making the slides  have bullet points

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I thought your presentation was really good and well thought out. It made a lot of sense. maybe if you take this further really have a good crowd presence.

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One things you guys did well u communicated with the audience and asking questions while presenting. One thing you guys can go well next time his add more images

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I think your slides were very well organized and thought out and the information you provided was very interesting. My only suggestion would be to elaborate more on your explanations and not read directly off your slides.

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One thing u guys did well is talking really well about what you guys are going to do showing prove of the emails. One thing you guys could do better is less words on some slides

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Your presentation was very good and you guys projected your voices well. The only thing I would say you should improve is adding more decoration because it was very bland.

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I think your slides were very good, organized, and had a lot of information. My only feedback would be to include less words and more pictures on your slides and to not read off your slides

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The mural idea was very interesting and I liked the visuals on the slides. The presentation was good as well. In terms of improvement, you could consider cutting down on words on the slides and reading off of them less.

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your slides were very interesting and you also did good on getting the information out. On some slides there was a little to much writing were you sometimes read off the slides

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This was a really cool idea! I liked your plans, but I would have appreciated a bit more about logistics

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I liked how you had a clear plan on how to apply for the grants to get the mural funded. Something that could be improved on would be to project your voices a bit louder.

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I think your presentation was very clear and included a lot of detail. I loved all of the information you provided, but my only feedback is to be more concise in some of your explanations

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Your slides looked incredible and it was amazing to see that you had already taken initiative in creating flyers and securing funding. I would love to see more community involvement in the thought process and involvement of different populations.

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Explained the idea very well and didn't read off the slides. Great job overall. In terms of room for improvement, maybe you could go a little more in depth about how the system would work.

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your presentation was very well organized and clear. You guys did a great job just sort of speaking about your topic and not just reading off your slides. One thing you could possibly improve on is maybe a little more color on your slides but really the presentation was very good.

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very well researched, great slides. something you could work on is projecting your voice + writing bullets

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idea was very interesting and presentation was good. Could maybe cut down on some words on the slides, but other than that it seemed good.

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Slides looked clean and visually appealing. Very detailed and explained well.

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I think your slides were very clear, organized, and included great detail. One thing I think you could improve on is to limit the number of words on your slides and replace them with pictures or make the text bigger

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Your mural design is such a great initiative, I would love to see it happen. The connection to climate change and our community was also very powerful. Next time, I wish you could elaborate on how you will secure funding with the grant.

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One thing you guys did well is maintaining a good paste in presenting One thing you guys could work on his going more in dept into some slides that i feel didn't get spoken about longer

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i liked the diagram you guys made and how detailed your slides were. something you could work on is the transition on who's talking + writing bullets

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You guys did great, the idea seemed pretty well thought out and clear. A few slides at the end felt like the were repeating previous slides, though.

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well researched, a lot of images and not too much information on each slide to be overwhelming, one thing to improve on could be to look more at the audience

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I thought the design sketch was really well made and added a lot to your presentation on rain water harvesting. Something that could be improved on would be to have more details on the steps you will take to make it happen.

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Your presentation was very well organized and I love the idea a mural. I like how you though about exactly what materials you will need and where the mural will be.

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The presentation was very pretty and was well researched. The only thing I would tell you to improve on is figuring out who's gonna speak for which slides.

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Spoke well and didn't rush through the slides. Good presentation overall, and I liked the idea. Could maybe add some more decoration to slides.

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I thought the topic was really interesting, your slides were very informative and told us action steps that were very achievable. maybe talk a little louder!

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I think your slides were very good and your presentation was interesting overall. One thing I think could be improved is to elaborate on some of your explanations to make everything much clearer.

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Your slides were very well made and had a lot of great details on different types of pollinators. One thing that could be improved on is to read off the slides a bit less.

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Your slides were very helpful to visualize what exactly you guys were planning on doing. The diagram was really good

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Your plan seemed really well researched, and the design was very clear. To improve on: knowing what you're going to say for each slide, I would have also liked a bit more clarity on how it reduces Co2 emissions.

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your topic was very interesting and well researched, your slides were very detailed and well done, one thing to improve on could be volume and looking more at the audience

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Great presentation! I loved the drawing and the creativity you utilized for your design. Additionally, I thought your research was very thorough and y'all worked well together on. I do wish you had added more colors or fonts to your slide to captivate the audience though.

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The topic was explained well and I love the idea of a seed library.

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you all did an amazing job presenting today and your slides had lots of powerful information on them. writing bullets could be something that you could improve on

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Your presentation was really well organized and visually put together very nicely.  I also thought you guys did a great job explaining the thought behind the competition and why it matters.  One thing to possibly improve on was there was one slide towards the beginning where I think the title did not fully match what you talked about but that is the only note

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you presented your topic really well, and you both looked at the audience more than at the board, one thing to improve on could be more images

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The pacing was really easy to follow and the slides were very clear. The only thing I would say you should improve on is projecting your voice because it was difficult to hear at some points

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I loved your presentation! Your slides were so cute and I learned a lot about interpersonal and community ways of planting. One small thing I think you could improve on is being able to transition between who is talking.

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Your topic was really interesting and I loved the ideas you guys came up with. I think your reasons for why the seeds would be helpful could be expanded on- growing your own food good for pollinators (not just the plant) and also for food insecurity etc.

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You guys had good pacing and spoke clearly. Potential room for improvement could be adding more visuals to the slides.

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i think that you presented very well and your slides were concise. i think that you could have formed a connection with the audience(watering plants at home...).

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There were many great details on the slides and the speaking was very clear. One thing that could be improved on is deciding in advance who is speaking for which slide.

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i liked the creativity that your presentation had with the plants and things like that. one thing you could improve on is explaining your slides a bit more bc i was confused on some of them

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Well researched and the diagram was helpful to visualize what the water system would look like.

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one thing you did well was explaining each slide thoroughly. Something you should improve next time is to increase the volume when speaking

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Your topic was very well researched and thorough, you guys did great! My advice would be to write bullet points so you don't read off the screen.

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i liked how you both went in depth about certain things in your presentation and had great professionalism. one thing you could improve on is projecting your voice

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One thing they did well was speaking clearly and not directly from the slides. One thing that could be improved on would be to add more photos to each slide.

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There was a lot of detail and the information was explained well.

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I think that the content of your presentation was very valuable but i think that you could have shown some examples of gardens that are not doing well because they don't have thease good crops

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I absolutely loved your presentation I learned so much! Your slides were very cohesive and minimalist. Additionally you spoke very clearly and traded turns seamlessly. One small thing I think you could improve on was being more expressive and loud during your presentation.