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Intro In life there will be times were you don't have somebody to be there for you like a friend or somebody who you can trust. In the book The one great gnome by Jeff dinardo  The character Sarah learns that friends won't always be there for you. The text shows this when The character Sarah had to leave her best friend. And then the character Sarah had to leave her new friend that she met at the new house. And when Sarah did not have a friend that was alive.

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In the book the one great gnome the character Sarah learns that friends wont always be for you. She learns this when she had to leave her best friend. Sarah moved to her new house and she was having a dream about her and her and her best friend. "Sarah was having a dream and it was a good one she was walking arm in arm with her best friend lily". She was in her new house and she probably missed her friend and was not to happy about moving.   "This was not her bedroom in the apartment where she lived " She new that she moved yesterday but she was not used to this house that much.  . "The room was different it was big bare filled with boxes".She noticed now that she is in a new house and all these thoughts are making her miss her home. "lily loved books and loved to read as much as Sarah did". That shows how she had a good connection with her friend lily.

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In the book the one great gnome the character Sarah learns that friends wont always be there for you. She learns this when she had to leave her new friend that she met Vesper. "May the moon and stars be with you" That is her new friend that she met about to leave and he had to go and try and save his family back home if he was able to make it in time."Wait there must be something That I can do to help. So she knows that she needed to help and she did not want to lose her friend already. "Sarah felt awful she had just met her new friend and now he was gone". Sarah is getting a little futerated a little bit because now she was going to have to start from square one again with no friend.

Support 3: In the book the one great gnome the character sarah learns that friends wont be with you for ever.

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Thesis In the book the one great gnome the character Sarah learns that friends wont always be there for you.
Supports: When she has to leave her friend and her home.

Quotes: "Sarah was having a dream and it was a good one she was walking arm in arm with her best friend lily". " This was not her bedroom in the apartment where she lived ".  The room was different it was big bare and filled with boxes"

Summary of quotes: Those quotes tell us that she had to leave her friend and they were really best friend because they walked arm in arm and it told us how she woke up in like a new room and it was not her apartment and how she did not really like it.

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Thesis In the book the one great gnome The character Sarah learns that friends wont always be there for you.

Support: She had to leave her gnome best friend and her human best friend.

Quotes: "May the moon and stars be with you" Wait" "There must be something that I can do to help. " Sarah felt awful she had just met her new friend and now he was gone".
Summary of how it machches: Readers see that Sarah is having to leave his friend and she is saying thing like "wait" to try and make him stay and now she had like a good connection and she new something was wrong so she wanted to help.

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THE ONE GREAT GNOME.
Thesis:The character Sarah learns Friends wont always be there with you.

1. She had to leave her real best friend.
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2. Having to leave her gnome best friend.

3. Not having a friend that is alive

The character learns friends wont always be there for you."Sarah felt awful she had just met her new friend and now he was gone There must be something I can do to help".

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The charaters show hard working they show this When.
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The charters show they are hard working when they they make a little soccer field for them to train on. Another way they show this is when they win they game that they were invited to. One of the last ways they show this is when they have to play on a wet surface.
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The characters show hard work when they build there mini soccer field. The characters where in need of a place to play so they had to make there own place so they helped each other collect wood.  They had no where else to put it so they put it on water by them selves. And then they had to paint it so it can be more like a real soccer field and put goal postes. While they where train the ball went into the water a lot and they would too.Then they finally made it to the quarterfinals.
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In the story the character vester said " May the moon and the stars be with you" and then he left. Another detail is "she felt awful she had just met her new friend now he was gone.

That shows the character sarah views the gnome as a friend a did not want him to go and sicne she moved her she did not have a friend until now. she was going to leave her home and her perents would be looking for her.

This shows that sometimes you will get friends and they will go and you will have to sacrifice to get them back.

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"Hard is useless"?

Panyee Football Club

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Introduction
Many people think that hard working is useless and it is just a waste of time. but in the panea football team they show hard work, by building the pitch win the tournament, and when they have to play on a wet surface.
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The panea football club show hard working when they build the pitch. The characters were in need of a place to play so they had to make there own place so they helped each other collect wood. They had no where else to put it so the put it on water by them selves. And then they then they had paint it so it can be more like a soccer field and they put goal posts. while they where training the ball went in the water a lot and they would too. Then they finally made it to the quarterfinals.     2nd mini story/background paragraphs
The panea football club show hard working when they take home a trophy. . They were training for a while on there football field they made now they were accepted into the quarterfinals. When they arrived they were really neavers and had thoughts they were not good enough. They also had bigger land which now would be easier for them because they did not have problems with the ball going in the water. But those thoughts changed when they started to play and the characters were doing very well. The game was even easier because they were using smaller goal posts and when they got to the game the posts were big compared to what they were using. At the end of the game the won and made it to semifinals they were pr acting on wood and were having there struggles such as the ball going into the water now they were beating these people who probably had grass. That is another way they showed hard work.
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The panea football club show hard work when they have to play on a wet surface. So they had just won the quaterfinals now they were playing against another football team and it was raining at first they realized that this team was better then the other one. And then they were starting to lose hope  and then they took off there shoes and went back to play and now the were improving the score was 2-0 and at the second half it was 2-2 and now things were going good. And then at the last minute when it was about to be a tie or they would win the other team scored . But the fact that they came this far from using wood to the semifinals that is pretty good.
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The panea football team learned that if you work hard anything can be possible when they show hard working they were able to accomplish anything and they were just kids so that shows that hard work pays of.

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The video teaches that if you work together you can achieve anything. One part of the video is when they were helping each other take wood and and build it on to the water.

Another part is when they are on there little boat and different people are moving on different boats with things in them.

And most of all is when they build the soccer field.

The characters are determined one way they showed that is when they were playing soccer they went and took of there shoes and kept on trying even thought they did not win.

Another way was they went looking for things and they even if they did not see something they would keep on going.
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And the most of all is when they won the first game and they came from and island with not alot  of space and they still achevied there dream.