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The structure of your paragraphs are good. You have used a topic sentence to describe what you are discussing in your writing. Can you see in the third paragraph whether you have used a topic sentence or not?

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The structure of your paragraphs are good. You have used a topic sentence to describe what you are discussing in your writing. Can you see in the third paragraph whether you have used a topic sentence or not?

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The structure of paragraph - Cats threatening the balance of nature is a bit confused.

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The structure of paragraph - Cats threatening the balance of nature is a bit confused.

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Good use of paragraphs to structure your different thoughts.

Nice use of persuasive language to try to get your point across. Very emotive.

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The level of emotive language is too extreme. Possibly aim to use a wider range of persusive techniques.

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An important strategy in presenting an argument is remaining impartial. To understand how fact and opinion matter in expressing an idea see https://www.vocabulary.com/articles/chooseyourwords/objective-subjective/

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He/she met the success criteria.  She/he has good paragraph structure and persuasive language is evident.

Teacher could guide the student to read the document and look for repetition of ideas and what other information could be replaced by that.

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Good use of paragraph structure. Each paragraph explores a supporting point to your argument, and has a clear topic sentence.

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Good use of paragraph structure. Each paragraph explores a supporting point to your argument, and has a clear topic sentence.

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A range of language features are used, including emotive language for persuasive effect.
A variety of sentences are used.

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Your use of persuasive language features is certainly effective as you have used emotive language which will create a strong response from the audience.

There is some repetition across the paragraphs for example 'neutered'. The last paragraph needs to be more than one sentence and the word 'because' is not a sentence starter.

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Use more variety in your sentence starters, rather than repeatedly starting with They. ....

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Beate and Reidunn

Paragraphs and the structure of the paragraphs are used effectively. The introductory paragraph sets the tone and direction of the letter to the editor clearly.