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Having lived in a capital city my whole life I decided to make this list :) I hope you enjoy my ramblings about city life, and if you do make sure to check out my other videos ;) you can also follow me on twitter : https://twitter.com/mayteoomreyes tumblr : http://mayteoomreyes.tumblr.com google+ : https://plus.google.com/u/0/112424772898611785519/posts pintrest : http://www.pinterest.com/maytepicks/ instagram : http://instagram.com/maytepicks facebook : https://www.facebook.com/mtryt

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Living in New York City: The Documentary

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Made it for my film class in two weeks, hate it or love it leave some feedback

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Hi:) Ich muss ein Englisch Aufsatzt über das Leben in einer Großstadt schreiben. Also die Vorteile und Nachteile aufzählen. Findet ihr bei meinem Text hier irgendwelchen GRAMMATIKALISCHEN Fehler? Verbesserungsviorschläge? Ichh weiß das hier ist keine Hausaufgabnhilfe, aber es sind ja auch keine Hausaufgaben:)

*First of all I would like to say, that I think, that the life in a city is better and more interesting, as in a city are many activities to occupy your time, for example you can go in a disco,cinema or you can go shopping as well. However in cities it's very noisy, but for those people who wants to relax at a calm place, they can go in a park, where they can read a book on a bench or they can go in a library. They also could meet friends in a café or restaurant. In addition in a city you have countless job opportunities, as many companies and shops are situated there. Nevertheless the cost-of-living in a city is higher than in the countryside. I think that's an important disadvantage, which you should know. Especially the rent or the food is more expensive in the city. Furthermore cities are polluted and there is a high rate of crime. Therefore many parents want their kids grow up in the countryside. But a city people have the best chance to work and study, because there are good universities to choose from a big city. Because of this aspect I want to live in a big city later. On the other hand I think a big disadvantage is that a city is really crowed with cars especially in the rush hours. Many people try to go by bus metro to work to avoid the traffic jams, but mostly the transportation are unreliable an you come late to work. In conclusion I think the life in a city is better, mainly because of the job opportunities and the activities. As well I think, that the advantages prevails the disadvantages. *
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2 Antworten

von Antwort AstridDerPu
Community-Experte für Englisch 01.03.2015, 19:33 151

First of all Komma I would like to say kein Komma that I think kein Komma (---) life in a city is better and more interesting, as in a city Hier fehlt etwas. are many activities to occupy your time, for example you can go in a disco or a cinema or you can go shopping as well. However Komma in cities ( Ortsangaben besser ans Satzende) it's very noisy, but (---) people who want(---) to relax at a calm place, (---) can go in a park, where they can read a book on a bench or (---) (---) in a library. They also (Position) could meet friends in a café or Hier fehlt etwas. restaurant. In addition Komma

in a city (s.o.) you have countless job opportunities, as many companies and shops are situated there. Nevertheless Komma the cost-of-living in a city is higher than in the countryside. I think that's an important disadvantage, ( which) you should know. Especially (---) rent and (---) food is more expensive in the city. Furthermore Komma cities are polluted and there is a high rate of crime. Therefore many parents want their kids Hier fehlt eine Präposition. grow up in the countryside. But (---) city people have the best chance to work and study kein Komma because there are good universities to choose from Hier fehlt eine Präposition. a big city. Because of this aspect Komma I want to live in a big city later. On the other hand Komma I think a big disadvantage is that a city is really crowed with cars Komma especially in (---) rush hours. Many people try to go to work by bus Hier fehlt etwas.

metro to avoid to work traffic jams, but mostly (---) transportation are unreliable an you come late to work (Ausdruck). In conclusion Komma I think (---) life in a city is better, mainly because of the job opportunities and the activities. As well (kein Satzanfang) I think kein Komma that the advantages prevails (Wort) the disadvantages.

Kurzformen wie it's usw. sollten in der Schriftsprache nicht verwendet werden.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu

von Antwort pedrolio
01.03.2015, 18:26 614

occupy nicht mit time verwenden

However it is very noisy in cities

people who want to relax

parents want their kids to grow up

city people würde ich nicht schreiben - the inhabitants of a city würde ich schreibe

crowed with cars,...

the transport

gute bindewörter aber die satzstellungen im text sind eher deutsch als englisch gestellt (; schau den text lieber nochmal durch...

lg peter

Auch interessant

Was möchtest Du wissen?

Hi:) Ich muss ein Englisch Aufsatzt über das Leben in einer Großstadt schreiben. Also die Vorteile und Nachteile aufzählen. Findet ihr bei meinem Text hier irgendwelchen GRAMMATIKALISCHEN Fehler? Verbesserungsviorschläge? Ichh weiß das hier ist keine Hausaufgabnhilfe, aber es sind ja auch keine Hausaufgaben:)

*First of all I would like to say, that I think, that the life in a city is better and more interesting, as in a city are many activities to occupy your time, for example you can go in a disco,cinema or you can go shopping as well. However in cities it's very noisy, but for those people who wants to relax at a calm place, they can go in a park, where they can read a book on a bench or they can go in a library. They also could meet friends in a café or restaurant. In addition in a city you have countless job opportunities, as many companies and shops are situated there. Nevertheless the cost-of-living in a city is higher than in the countryside. I think that's an important disadvantage, which you should know. Especially the rent or the food is more expensive in the city. Furthermore cities are polluted and there is a high rate of crime. Therefore many parents want their kids grow up in the countryside. But a city people have the best chance to work and study, because there are good universities to choose from a big city. Because of this aspect I want to live in a big city later. On the other hand I think a big disadvantage is that a city is really crowed with cars especially in the rush hours. Many people try to go by bus metro to work to avoid the traffic jams, but mostly the transportation are unreliable an you come late to work. In conclusion I think the life in a city is better, mainly because of the job opportunities and the activities. As well I think, that the advantages prevails the disadvantages. *
... komplette Frage anzeigen

von Antwort AstridDerPu
Community-Experte für Englisch 01.03.2015, 19:33 151

First of all Komma I would like to say kein Komma that I think kein Komma (---) life in a city is better and more interesting, as in a city Hier fehlt etwas. are many activities to occupy your time, for example you can go in a disco or a cinema or you can go shopping as well. However Komma in cities ( Ortsangaben besser ans Satzende) it's very noisy, but (---) people who want(---) to relax at a calm place, (---) can go in a park, where they can read a book on a bench or (---) (---) in a library. They also (Position) could meet friends in a café or Hier fehlt etwas. restaurant. In addition Komma

in a city (s.o.) you have countless job opportunities, as many companies and shops are situated there. Nevertheless Komma the cost-of-living in a city is higher than in the countryside. I think that's an important disadvantage, ( which) you should know. Especially (---) rent and (---) food is more expensive in the city. Furthermore Komma cities are polluted and there is a high rate of crime. Therefore many parents want their kids Hier fehlt eine Präposition. grow up in the countryside. But (---) city people have the best chance to work and study kein Komma because there are good universities to choose from Hier fehlt eine Präposition. a big city. Because of this aspect Komma I want to live in a big city later. On the other hand Komma I think a big disadvantage is that a city is really crowed with cars Komma especially in (---) rush hours. Many people try to go to work by bus Hier fehlt etwas.

metro to avoid to work traffic jams, but mostly (---) transportation are unreliable an you come late to work (Ausdruck). In conclusion Komma I think (---) life in a city is better, mainly because of the job opportunities and the activities. As well (kein Satzanfang) I think kein Komma that the advantages prevails (Wort) the disadvantages.

Kurzformen wie it's usw. sollten in der Schriftsprache nicht verwendet werden.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu

von Antwort pedrolio
01.03.2015, 18:26 614

occupy nicht mit time verwenden

However it is very noisy in cities

people who want to relax

parents want their kids to grow up

city people würde ich nicht schreiben - the inhabitants of a city würde ich schreibe

crowed with cars,...

the transport

gute bindewörter aber die satzstellungen im text sind eher deutsch als englisch gestellt (; schau den text lieber nochmal durch...

lg peter

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Englisch Text. Life in a big city - KORREKTUREN

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First of all Komma I would like to say kein Komma that I think kein Komma (---) life in a city is better and more interesting, as in a city Hier fehlt etwas. are many activities to occupy your time,...

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Do you prefer living in the city or the countryside?